I kind of feel that it would've been better if you mapped the LNs in the intro with PR but I guess it is up to your tastes.
i'm trying to map this song with o2jam notechart styles tho00:23:267 (23267|1,23991|2,23991|0,24094|0) - I personally found this way too painful given the intensity of this part. Holding with my middle finger while jacking with my ring doesn't feel all that comfortable imo. Maybe you can try moving the jack and LN to another column?
ok, i move the LN to the 7th column00:27:818 - ~ 00:28:232 - The SV here is overall a slowdown of around 0.94x, which isn't very sightreadable. One solution will be to remove the 1x and replace the 1.75x with a 2.5x, or alternatively you can increase the 0.5 to 0.75 and remove the 1x. You seemed to have done it right on 01:14:163 -
both of them are nice, but i choose the first solution tho.00:29:991 (29991|5,30198|5,30405|5,30612|5,30818|5) -, 00:30:922 (30922|4,31129|4,31336|4,31543|4,31750|4,31956|4) -, 00:35:267 (35267|3,35474|3,35681|3,35887|3,36094|3) - I feel that long anchors like these, especially in a stamina demanding patterns like chordstreams, are better if avoided. Fixing them shouldn't be hard, I think.
ok00:30:094 (30094|1,30198|0,30301|1,30405|0) - Also, this little trill separated from the chordstream feels weird to hit.
ok00:31:129 (31129|4,31232|5,31336|4,31439|5,31543|4,31646|5,31750|4) - And trills like these mixed among the chordstream gets pretty painful. You can try moving 00:31:646 (31646|5,31750|4,31853|3) - these notes 1 column right and 00:31:956 (31956|4) - this note 1 column left.
ok00:34:232 (34232|2,34336|1,34439|2,34543|1,34646|2,34750|1,34853|2,34956|1,35060|2,35163|1) - Ouch. This really makes this part hard on my left hand. Maybe you can try something like
this? It still keeps 00:34:646 (34646|2,34646|4,34646|0,34750|1,34750|5,34750|3,34853|4,34853|6,34853|2) - this pattern thing thing that you used for the 1/4 ran ran ru.
okThere are more long trills and anchors in the chordstream but hopefully you can pick them out yourself (if not you can just call me back here to help you find them.)
01:07:956 - ~ 01:12:922 - I personally find this part somewhat underwhelming compared to what the song feels like but I guess that's subjective.
convert them to mini LNs or LN walls perhaps xD. i don't think so tho.01:12:922 - ~ 01:14:163 - The SVs here make a pretty big slowdown of 0.675x. I think it'll be better if you changed the values to make them more sightreadable. Perhaps you can try changing the 1.25x into 1.9x, 0.1x into 0.75x, or just change the 0.1x to 0.5x and 1.25x to 1.5x.
okLN walls ahead can't say much about those ;w;