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you should actually look at pishifat's video for more tips in mapping, or u could actually learn it urself by looking at other's map somewhere. or just play more until u can understand why before trying to map something new that u've learned. that should work how u improve ur mapping style
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- those diffs aren't from touhou series or somewhere else from a game. just name the diffs normally, such as Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane,
Extra, Extreme, Kotowaru - Xtreme diffname is rly funny tbh. should be "Extreme" there
- 00:16:852 - 00:30:310 - 00:39:282 - 00:46:291 - 01:21:899 - these kiais aren't rly necessary tbh. both of them are a build up part from "daga kotowaru",
but not the last one that should be something a bit easier to play with as an outro
- interesting, following vocals... but u should know that there are some notes that deserves to click from such emphasize vocal there, such as 00:05:637 - 00:14:609 - 01:10:684 - and so on
- ok, so let's see... there are some lack of NCs going on here that doesn't make any sense for such emphasize, for example 00:01:011 (1) - should be 00:01:151 (2) - , 00:06:758 (4) - , 00:11:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - playing around the NC should be this http://puu.sh/yeAKo/8bdbd3de36.jpg , and so on
- the main confusing part and something that doesn't make any sense are why are there such slider speed changes so sudden, despite i couldn't feel which one deserves it or not for a song like this, like 00:15:730 (1,2) - , 00:16:852 (2) - , 00:26:945 (1) - , 00:28:067 (2) - , 00:29:188 (2) - , and so on? you could just map it normally without that slider speed change so suddenly, like this for example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9468983
- usually for NCs, you would NC it somewhere that emphasize the note perfectly, like after 4 notes or 3, by the instruments in repetitive way, or from a vocal
- 00:05:076 (3) - i don't totally recommend u to overlap with 00:04:515 (1) - on making extras tbh for ur mapping level, including 00:17:973 (1,3) - , 00:32:693 (7,8,9,10) - , 00:43:207 (5,7) - , and so on
- 00:03:394 (1,2,3) - 00:11:525 (3,4,1) - and other straight line flow - i find the flow a bit funny to play and u missed such emphasize beat there to play around with the spacing
- 00:04:095 (6,7,8) - this is such a weird flow in such wide angle with a low spacing after from (6)
- 00:10:263 (6,7,8,1) - uh, copy pasting this didn't make any sense for me to understand why, but u should try to follow a vocal there instead, like http://puu.sh/yeBxK/f89f6badf0.jpg but map with sth else rather than copy pasting it
- 00:13:207 (1,2) - 00:14:188 (4,5,1) - i'd find it awkward to play such rhythm with stacks on it tbh. i'd prefer moving the note somewhere else than stacking it
- 00:14:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the spacing is way too sudden, despite that it isn't a build up or kiai part here
- 00:17:413 (3,4,5,6) - aw come on. u can do better than that. try this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9469232
- 00:19:095 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - stacking play with misplaced NC here are quite a problem to play with tbh. try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/yeBFQ/abf3c9d5f9.jpg
- 00:24:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - judging by readability, this might be a bit trouble some to play with
- 00:25:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it doesn't suit so well for following a vocal for me imo. try this instead http://puu.sh/yeBJt/720ced614f.jpg
- 00:30:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is quite bothersome for me, skipping 2 notes for such build up part here, including the rhythm and sudden movement to move our cursor around. u can try this here for example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9469295
- 00:36:758 (1,2,3,4) - a sudden stack from 00:36:899 (2,3) - makes it harder to play with normally for some players. gonna move (3) around somewhere
- 00:37:459 (6,7,1,2) - hmmm... this isn't good enough... here http://puu.sh/yeBTe/8d4fd63c7d.jpg
- 00:39:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try something else different like 00:17:413 (3,4,5,6) -
- 00:40:403 (1,2,3,4) - funny flow and awkward to play with tbh
- 00:44:609 (1,2) - what were u even up to making this...?
- 00:46:291 (1) - the most important build up from "daga kotowaru", but u decided to make a slider art instead, unlike the others that u did. pretty inconsistent, isn't it?
- 00:47:132 - ah, judging by the NCs here, i don't think this would work the way as it is tbh. following such vocal is the easy part by telling where it emphasize it, like 00:49:375 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - should be http://puu.sh/yeC41/59b267eb81.jpg , 00:48:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - should be the same as 00:47:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , and so on. should apply for 00:51:618 - and the rests as well
- 00:56:104 - u didn't do anything like these, but 1/2 spams, which is a good thing. but what about this hmmm...? it's quite poor for me tbh
- 00:58:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - what were u trying to follow here from those blue ticks?
- 01:03:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - go with this rhythm http://puu.sh/yeCo1/47212abc30.jpg
- 01:05:076 - i don't think i have to mention it again, since i told u about it from the first place. but please don't be a lazy mapper since i saw that u did copy pasting it and changing its position there
- 01:21:899 - there aren't any beats here to hear, but u did a hitsound here. u better remove them tbh
- 01:23:020 (1) - this spinner is rly useless to follow such echo voice for me tbh due to how rly weak it is
- overlap sliders and notes around again
- NCs again
- following such vocal emphasize again
- copy paste again at 01:05:076 - from 00:00:030 - =_=*
- that slow slider again
- 00:44:609 (1) - this again
- 00:18:254 (2,3,4,5) - where is this even coming from...?
- 00:19:095 (8) - ctrl+g it will make the flow more better unlike the awkward one from the current
- 00:47:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this flow is way too awkward to play with with such pattern and symmetry here
- 01:02:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - from Kotowaru diff, i didn't see a stream here there, but this one's available on this diff only. weird... plus, 01:03:184 (6) - should be a note, instead of 1/4 slider at the blue tick. it's rly confusing
- 01:21:899 - the "hitsound" thing again
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- NCs again
- 00:06:758 (5,6) - i'd blanket this
- 00:09:282 (2) - i wouldn't recommend curving it like this for a flow tbh. straight the slider or curve for circular flow instead
- 00:11:805 (2) - 00:12:646 (4) - 00:13:207 (1) - 00:17:413 (3) - and the rests too
- 00:28:067 (1,1) - i wouldn't set NCs there tbh
- 00:40:403 (1) - u could actually use 1/2 slider reverse here by a vocal here
- 00:42:086 (4,1,2) - this would be the most annoying part for some beginners, knowing that u copy pasted 00:42:086 (4) - and ctrl + g it, including not blanketed and how awkward the flow is
- 00:47:132 (1) - i'd separate this to somewhere tbh rather than stacking, as it should be emphasize with its downbeat than stacking it
- 01:05:076 - i see that u did another copy paste again here from 00:00:030 -
- 01:21:899 - hitsounds, please
- NCs are a big problem to follow what it is trying to emphasize
- rhythm play and its flow
- pattern wise
- copy paste isn't a good idea due to the same rhythm there as it is in repetitive way
- emphasize spacing
- and more
you should actually look at pishifat's video for more tips in mapping, or u could actually learn it urself by looking at other's map somewhere. or just play more until u can understand why before trying to map something new that u've learned. that should work how u improve ur mapping style
gl