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u's - Angelic Angel (Movie Edit) [CatchTheBeat]

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celerih
Had a quick IRC about the Cup and Salad diffs

IRC stuffs
2018-02-16 13:36 Xetopia: I want to know, this stuff is rankble or not
2018-02-16 13:36 Xetopia: Hello :>
2018-02-16 13:36 Xetopia: Can u testplay my map? cup and salad
2018-02-16 13:36 celerih: I'm about to leave actually :(
2018-02-16 13:36 celerih: got some shopping to do, if you catch me online later tho ask and I think I'll have the time
2018-02-16 13:37 celerih: what's the map?
2018-02-16 13:37 Xetopia: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/588051
2018-02-16 13:38 Xetopia: oh, okay, np
2018-02-16 13:38 celerih: actually my brother can wait I can playtest these real quick ;)
2018-02-16 13:38 celerih: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1257039 u's - Angelic Angel (Movie Edit) [Cup]] <CatchTheBeat>
2018-02-16 13:40 Xetopia: xd, okay, thanks <3
2018-02-16 13:41 celerih: there are a few rhythm I think can be improved on
2018-02-16 13:42 celerih: here 00:23:197 (2,3,4,5) - instead of that try https://celerih.s-ul.eu/p102j47d
2018-02-16 13:42 celerih: it follows both drums and vocals more accuratly
2018-02-16 13:43 celerih: and here you could have it a slider like on 00:29:009 (2) - so there's some consistency between the two
2018-02-16 13:44 Xetopia: okay, changed
2018-02-16 13:45 celerih: also can you give this an angle 00:26:759 (4) - all the 1/2 slider have it
2018-02-16 13:45 celerih: or at least most
2018-02-16 13:45 celerih: quick question why is tick rate 2 use
2018-02-16 13:46 celerih: if you have a reason for it you can keep it, but otherwise I'd advise against in in lower diffs
2018-02-16 13:47 Xetopia: idk, I think it helps make a good shape of slider
2018-02-16 13:48 celerih: ookay yeah testing with tr1 it's particularly bad on this map
2018-02-16 13:48 Xetopia: k, no problem
2018-02-16 13:48 celerih: one last thing I'll mention on the cup is 01:20:947 (3,1) - this distance is too large, with the antiflow for a cup
2018-02-16 13:51 Xetopia: k, then i'll make less distance
2018-02-16 13:52 celerih: now onto the salad!
2018-02-16 13:53 Xetopia: owo
2018-02-16 13:53 celerih: the distances on your dashes for the first section of your salad need some more work, the distance on 00:10:447 (4,1) - works really well, so I'd have the same distance on 00:01:259 (4,1) - 00:04:446 (5,1) - 00:05:759 (3,1) -
2018-02-16 13:53 celerih: to make it easier for ppl to know when there is a dash
2018-02-16 13:56 celerih: this section here 00:21:322 (7,1,2) - is too difficult for a salad, as it has a lot of movement right after the other
2018-02-16 13:56 celerih: dash into anti-flow reverse into another dash is really harsh for a salad player
2018-02-16 13:57 celerih: to fix this, I think the best way of going about it is to flip 00:21:697 (1) - to remove the anti-flow the make the dash on 00:22:447 (2,1) - instead of 00:21:697 (1,2) -
2018-02-16 13:57 celerih: so there's more leniency on the player
2018-02-16 13:57 celerih: plus 00:22:634 (1) - is on a stronger sound
2018-02-16 13:57 celerih: so a dash to it works really well
2018-02-16 13:58 Xetopia: oohhhh, reaaaaaally works well
2018-02-16 13:58 Xetopia: thanks
2018-02-16 13:58 Xetopia: LOL
2018-02-16 13:59 celerih: yay
2018-02-16 13:59 celerih: :D
2018-02-16 13:59 Xetopia: ecksdee
2018-02-16 14:01 celerih: distances here 01:11:197 (2,3,4,1) - are pretty hard to tell if they are supposed to be dashes or not. Making them all dashes would be too hard, so try and make it more obvious which are dashes and which are walks
2018-02-16 14:03 celerih: there's a few more things here and there but I actually have to go now so I'll just mention one last thing
2018-02-16 14:03 celerih: the Base SV being 1.75 makes this a pretty difficult salad because even some walks require a decently good timing
2018-02-16 14:04 celerih: I know it's a hard thing to change after the map being done and all, but if possible think about maybe reducing to like 1.55
2018-02-16 14:04 celerih: that would already help the diff a lot imo
2018-02-16 14:04 Xetopia: i'll try this thing
2018-02-16 14:04 celerih: good luck with this map
2018-02-16 14:04 celerih: !
2018-02-16 14:05 Xetopia: thanks <3
2018-02-16 14:05 Xetopia: :D
2018-02-16 14:05 celerih: np (:
2018-02-16 14:05 celerih: okay bye
2018-02-16 14:05 Xetopia: bye o/
2018-02-16 14:05 celerih: I'll post irc so there's a trace of what was changed
F D Flourite
Sorry but my mod will be still pending for a while because of my incoming exams. The last one is on Feb 20. Hopefully I can get time to mod the whole mapset after that day.
Sorceress
Didn't manage to get round to this on the weekend so apologies for that


[
General
]
  1. Background: Try this copy. Higher res and smaller file size
  2. Combo Colours: Sinnyi's Rain and Angel have different combo colours to the other difficulties. Nothing wrong with that but wanted to point it out in case it's not intentional
[
Cup
]
  1. 00:05:197 (3,4) - 00:05:197 (3) - Doesn't end on anything strong here and the strong sound at 00:05:759 - is left unmapped. I'd suggest replacing both 00:05:197 (3,4) - with something like this instead. Simpler timeline is easier to follow, hits the important sounds and with not having a note at 00:05:947 - it helps emphasise 00:06:134 (1) - more
  2. 00:14:384 (6,1) - There's no real emphasis on 00:14:572 (1) - because of the lack of movement and there's no direction change between 00:14:572 (1,2) - with hurts emphasis on these notes aswell. Because of 00:14:384 (6) - has to be so close it limits what you can do here. I'd recommend to move 00:14:384 (6) - back to the white tick at 00:14:197 - and then rework the pattern to have more spacing emphasis on 00:14:572 (1,2) -
  3. 00:45:322 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Consider using some smaller distances here for this part of the song. It's a calm section so it would help create contrast with the rest of the song by using smaller distances
  4. 01:05:009 (5,6) - Could up the distance here a little for a bit more emphasis. Try moving 01:05:009 (5) - to around x:446
  5. 01:40:634 (3,1) - This spinner starts too quickly after 01:40:634 (3) - , there's needs to be atleast a 1/1 gap between the two at this BPM in a Cup. You could either start the spinner later at 01:41:009 - or just remove 01:40:634 (3) - and start the spinner there instead
[
Salad
]
  1. 00:10:072 (1,2) - This distance is quite high and a bit ambiguous. Considering this is followed by a dash to 00:10:822 (1) - which is a stronger sound I'd reduce the distance of 00:10:072 (1,2) - into something more comfortable to walk
  2. 01:04:072 (3,4,1,2,3) - I'd say this pattern is too complex for a Salad. It's got a lot of dashes and even antiflow/direction changes. I'd recommend to really simplify the movement of this. Try deleting 01:04:447 (4,1,2,3) - and then copy paste 01:03:322 (1,2,3) - at 01:04:634 - and Ctrl+H it and then move to about x:144
  3. 01:40:634 (3,1) - Just like in the Cup the spinner starts too quickly after 01:40:634 (3) -, needs to be 1/1 gap
  4. 01:49:634 (1) - I feel like this should be a slider extending to 01:50:009 - as you do for most of these guitar sounds
[
Platter
]
  1. 00:01:447 (5,1) - Bit of a big distance to have just after a hyperdash. Considering this is they very start of the song and there's only drums here I'd suggest removing the hyper between 00:01:259 (4,5) - and just having a regular dash instead
  2. 01:05:759 (4,5) - Consider moving these to about x:264. The current distance between 01:05:384 (3,4) - is a little high for after a hyperdash and by moving 01:05:759 (4,5) - further right it both reduces that distance and increases the distance of 01:05:947 (5,1) - which helps to emphasise the start of the kiai more
  3. 01:54:322 - I really like the way you mapped this little outro
[
Sinnyi's Rain
]
  1. 00:56:384 (3,4,5) - Don't like how you have to hold dash to hit this, it's not a technique used anywhere else in the map. Personally I'd rather it was just walkable but it's no big issue
  2. 00:56:759 (6,7,8) - Uneven spacing on this doesn't look aesthetically too great when it's placed just after the evenly spaced triplet 00:56:384 (3,4,5) -
[
Angel
]
  1. 00:03:040 (4,1) - 1/4 antiflow hyper seems a bit too strong for this. Softer slider movement like a c shape would feel more appropriate
  2. 00:40:447 (1) - I think a 1/1 slider and a circle on the red tick after would be a better fit than this repeater. There's really not anything at 00:40:634 - to support a full note
  3. 00:50:384 (3,4) - The lack of movement here is unexpected. It would help to make this a slider instead as it's easier for the player to follow the slider trail and it would still play pretty much the same
  4. 01:58:822 (1) - This slider misses all the guitar sounds. Looks like this should be starting at 01:59:009 -

Hope this helps!
Topic Starter
Xetopia

Sorcerer wrote:

Didn't manage to get round to this on the weekend so apologies for that


[
General
]
  1. Background: Try this copy. Higher res and smaller file size - thanks owo
  2. Combo Colours: Sinnyi's Rain and Angel have different combo colours to the other difficulties. Nothing wrong with that but wanted to point it out in case it's not intentional - then ill take combo colours from std ranked set?
[
Cup
]
  1. 00:05:197 (3,4) - 00:05:197 (3) - Doesn't end on anything strong here and the strong sound at 00:05:759 - is left unmapped. I'd suggest replacing both 00:05:197 (3,4) - with something like this instead. Simpler timeline is easier to follow, hits the important sounds and with not having a note at 00:05:947 - it helps emphasise 00:06:134 (1) - more - i agree, done
  2. 00:14:384 (6,1) - There's no real emphasis on 00:14:572 (1) - because of the lack of movement and there's no direction change between 00:14:572 (1,2) - with hurts emphasis on these notes aswell. Because of 00:14:384 (6) - has to be so close it limits what you can do here. I'd recommend to move 00:14:384 (6) - back to the white tick at 00:14:197 - and then rework the pattern to have more spacing emphasis on 00:14:572 (1,2) - - k, reworked pattern
  3. 00:45:322 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Consider using some smaller distances here for this part of the song. It's a calm section so it would help create contrast with the rest of the song by using smaller distances - okay, redused distances in this part
  4. 01:05:009 (5,6) - Could up the distance here a little for a bit more emphasis. Try moving 01:05:009 (5) - to around x:446 - okay
  5. 01:40:634 (3,1) - This spinner starts too quickly after 01:40:634 (3) - , there's needs to be atleast a 1/1 gap between the two at this BPM in a Cup. You could either start the spinner later at 01:41:009 - or just remove 01:40:634 (3) - and start the spinner there instead - k made start the spinner at 01:41:009 -
[
Salad
]
  1. 00:10:072 (1,2) - This distance is quite high and a bit ambiguous. Considering this is followed by a dash to 00:10:822 (1) - which is a stronger sound I'd reduce the distance of 00:10:072 (1,2) - into something more comfortable to walk - done
  2. 01:04:072 (3,4,1,2,3) - I'd say this pattern is too complex for a Salad. It's got a lot of dashes and even antiflow/direction changes. I'd recommend to really simplify the movement of this. Try deleting 01:04:447 (4,1,2,3) - and then copy paste 01:03:322 (1,2,3) - at 01:04:634 - and Ctrl+H it and then move to about x:144 - :ok_hand:
  3. 01:40:634 (3,1) - Just like in the Cup the spinner starts too quickly after 01:40:634 (3) -, needs to be 1/1 gap - fixed
  4. 01:49:634 (1) - I feel like this should be a slider extending to 01:50:009 - as you do for most of these guitar sounds - done
[
Platter
]
  1. 00:01:447 (5,1) - Bit of a big distance to have just after a hyperdash. Considering this is they very start of the song and there's only drums here I'd suggest removing the hyper between 00:01:259 (4,5) - and just having a regular dash instead - done
  2. 01:05:759 (4,5) - Consider moving these to about x:264. The current distance between 01:05:384 (3,4) - is a little high for after a hyperdash and by moving 01:05:759 (4,5) - further right it both reduces that distance and increases the distance of 01:05:947 (5,1) - which helps to emphasise the start of the kiai more - looks really good, done <3
  3. 01:54:322 - I really like the way you mapped this little outro - thx <3
[
Angel
]
  1. 00:03:040 (4,1) - 1/4 antiflow hyper seems a bit too strong for this. Softer slider movement like a c shape would feel more appropriate - fixed
  2. 00:40:447 (1) - I think a 1/1 slider and a circle on the red tick after would be a better fit than this repeater. There's really not anything at 00:40:634 - to support a full note - done
  3. 00:50:384 (3,4) - The lack of movement here is unexpected. It would help to make this a slider instead as it's easier for the player to follow the slider trail and it would still play pretty much the same - youre right, done
  4. 01:58:822 (1) - This slider misses all the guitar sounds. Looks like this should be starting at 01:59:009 - - youre right. fixed

Hope this helps!
Thanks for mod <3
Sanyi

Sorcerer wrote:

[
Sinnyi's Rain
]
  1. 00:56:384 (3,4,5) - Don't like how you have to hold dash to hit this, it's not a technique used anywhere else in the map. Personally I'd rather it was just walkable but it's no big issue
  2. 00:56:759 (6,7,8) - Uneven spacing on this doesn't look aesthetically too great when it's placed just after the evenly spaced triplet 00:56:384 (3,4,5) - I swear I really hate this spot in the song/map, did change it up multiple times by now. Hopefully it is better now.
Thanks for modding!

Sinnyi's Rain
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Title:Angelic Angel (Movie Edit)
TitleUnicode:Angelic Angel (Movie Edit)
Artist:u's
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Creator:Xetopia
Version:Sinnyi's Rain
Source:ラブライブ! The School Idol Movie
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Ascendance
Hihi, sorry for being so late. Just to let you know I haven't forgot about this set, gonna post here. Some miscommunication between myself and sorcerer made us confused as to which BN would be here first, so it's actually me now. Gonna placeholder here since I have easter holiday, but I should mod monday or tuesday <:
Ascendance
Helloooooooooooooooooooooooo

[
General
]

  1. Difficulty Spread : - The AR in Sinnyi's Rain should really be increased to 9 or the top diff should be reduced to 9. The spread changes randomly and it doesn't really fit tbh.
    - Why is the top diff CS4.6? Please reduce it to 4.2 or something, this creates such a big gap, including the above point.
  2. Background Size : Good
  3. Unsnapped objects : Good
  4. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : Good
  5. Metadata Issues : Source please
  6. Timeline Issues :
  7. Combo Colors : Not a big fan of the combo colors. They really stand out against the background of the map. I'd change them to something more pastel-y like the background suggests.
  8. Unused Hitsounds : Good
  9. Hitsounds Issues : Good
  10. Unused Files / Other : Good

[
Cup
]

General



  1. 00:14:947 (4,1) - The distance is pretty far here despite being a weaker sound. I'd suggest reducing this distance a bit
  2. 00:23:009 (2,3) - You're missing the strong vocal at 00:23:384 - here, I feel like you should drag this to 00:23:197 - for a better rhythm
  3. 00:52:259 (3,4,1) - Right facing flow into an immediate long distance to the left that's also antiflow is really not recommended in a difficulty like this.
  4. 00:57:884 (2) - Not sure why this is a repeat slider, you've just done a circle normally for structure like this
  5. 01:14:009 (2) - seems a tiny bit dense, maybe remove the repeat?

[
Salad
]

General



  1. Please try to go through and make some dashes more visually clear. Some dashes like 00:08:384 (2,1) - are noticeably increased distance-wise but are easily walkable. I won't point them all out though, so please try to do it yourself
  2. 00:11:759 (3,1) - Strong sound, add a dash maybe?
  3. 00:14:572 (4,5,1) - Shouldn't all be dashes here, maybe increase 00:14:572 (4,5) - and reduce the distance between 00:14:947 (5,1) - .
  4. 00:20:572 (3,1) - I don't feel this should be a dash, it's not that strong. Maybe reduce this?
  5. 00:38:572 (3,1) - Increase dash distance here
  6. 00:47:197 (2,3) - Doesn't feel like this needs a dash, reduce this?
  7. Kiai suffers from the same issue I listed in my first point. Please fix it <:

[
Platter
]

General



  1. 00:14:384 (4,5,6) - This is pretty much an antiflow HDash and is therefore unrankable. The HDash moves to the right and then immediately the player needs to make a large leftwards jump, which fits the definition of antiflow, so it'll need to be changed.
  2. The difficulty is nice but there's way too many hyperdashes here and almost no normal dashes. Please try to swap out some of the HDashes for regular dashes in places where the stuff isn't that strong.

[
Rain
]

General



  1. 00:07:447 (5,6,7,8,9) - Please remove the 1/8 here, if you listen closely, the 1/8 doesn't even exist. Just leave it as 1/4.
  2. 00:58:634 (4,1) - Seems really squished here, try moving 00:59:009 (1) - to x:210 and then doing something like this maybe?
  3. 01:41:947 - I'd consider making this a 1/2 slider so that way you can get a nice HDash to 01:42:322 (1) -

[
Angel
]

General



  1. 00:03:040 (4) - Overmapped 1/4, delete this :o
  2. 00:06:697 (3,4) - Dunno if you need an HDash between here, I'd rather see one between 00:06:884 (4,5) -
  3. 00:07:259 (6) - Overmapped 1/4, delete the blue tick
  4. 00:11:572 (3,4) - Why's there an HDash between here? There's nothing extraordinary about that sound
  5. 00:12:134 (1) - No need to extend this to 1/4, reduce to the red tick for a 1/2 dash
  6. 00:13:259 (4) - Maybe reduce the distance to and from this note and make a dash between 00:13:447 (5,6) - ?
  7. 00:28:634 (2,3) - I'd ctrl+g this rhythm the vocal should be played as a slider, not a circle.
  8. 00:38:947 (1) - Please make this a C-Curve, this plays so bad :(
  9. 01:44:947 (6,7) - Why are these 1/4 hypers, there doesn't even feel like there's 1/4 sounds there lol
  10. 01:47:947 (4,5) - As above
  11. 01:52:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - This should 100% be a 1/1 slider, there's no 1/4 at all lol
  12. This diff has some pretty serious overmapping issues, please take a deeper look and try to fix some of them yourself.

Call me after you've made the appropriate fixes.
Xinnoh

Ascendance wrote:

[
Rain
]

General



  1. 00:07:447 (5,6,7,8,9) - Please remove the 1/8 here, if you listen closely, the 1/8 doesn't even exist. Just leave it as 1/4. ya
  2. 01:41:947 - I'd consider making this a 1/2 slider so that way you can get a nice HDash to 01:42:322 (1) - 1/1 dashes are cute since the player has to hold dash for longer
Sanyi

Ascendance wrote:

Helloooooooooooooooooooooooo

[
General
]

  1. Difficulty Spread : - The AR in Sinnyi's Rain should really be increased to 9 or the top diff should be reduced to 9. The spread changes randomly and it doesn't really fit tbh.
    - Why is the top diff CS4.6? Please reduce it to 4.2 or something, this creates such a big gap, including the above point.
    Will talk to Xetopia about AR and CS
  2. Metadata Issues : Source please Is this ok: http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/otonokizaka/release.html#cd57
  3. Combo Colors : Not a big fan of the combo colors. They really stand out against the background of the map. I'd change them to something more pastel-y like the background suggests. Up to Xetopia I guess, will assist them if needed

[
Rain
]

General



  1. 00:58:634 (4,1) - Seems really squished here, try moving 00:59:009 (1) - to x:210 and then doing something like this maybe? applied
I changed the AR (and OD) to 8.8 for now, 9 is a bit high for this Rain imo

Thanks for modding!

Sinnyi's Rain
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Angelic Angel (Movie Edit)
Artist:u's
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Version:Sinnyi's Rain
Source:ラブライブ! The School Idol Movie
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Topic Starter
Xetopia

Ascendance wrote:

Helloooooooooooooooooooooooo

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  1. Difficulty Spread : - The AR in Sinnyi's Rain should really be increased to 9 or the top diff should be reduced to 9. The spread changes randomly and it doesn't really fit tbh.
    - Why is the top diff CS4.6? Please reduce it to 4.2 or something, this creates such a big gap, including the above point.
    - cs 4.4, ar 9.2
  2. Background Size : Good
  3. Unsnapped objects : Good
  4. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : Good
  5. Metadata Issues : Source please http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/otonokizak ... .html#cd57
  6. Timeline Issues :
  7. Combo Colors : Not a big fan of the combo colors. They really stand out against the background of the map. I'd change them to something more pastel-y like the background suggests. - reworked combocolors
  8. Unused Hitsounds : Good
  9. Hitsounds Issues : Good
  10. Unused Files / Other : Good

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General



  1. 00:14:947 (4,1) - The distance is pretty far here despite being a weaker sound. I'd suggest reducing this distance a bit - fixed
  2. 00:23:009 (2,3) - You're missing the strong vocal at 00:23:384 - here, I feel like you should drag this to 00:23:197 - for a better rhythm - alright, done
  3. 00:52:259 (3,4,1) - Right facing flow into an immediate long distance to the left that's also antiflow is really not recommended in a difficulty like this. - ok, i made 1/1 reverse on left side
  4. 00:57:884 (2) - Not sure why this is a repeat slider, you've just done a circle normally for structure like this - removed repeat, and made 1/1 slider
  5. 01:14:009 (2) - seems a tiny bit dense, maybe remove the repeat? - but then we're missing strong sound at 01:14:009 (2) -

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Salad
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General



  1. Please try to go through and make some dashes more visually clear. Some dashes like 00:08:384 (2,1) - are noticeably increased distance-wise but are easily walkable. I won't point them all out though, so please try to do it yourself
  2. 00:11:759 (3,1) - Strong sound, add a dash maybe? - okay? moved to x224
  3. 00:14:572 (4,5,1) - Shouldn't all be dashes here, maybe increase 00:14:572 (4,5) - and reduce the distance between 00:14:947 (5,1) - . alright, donee
  4. 00:20:572 (3,1) - I don't feel this should be a dash, it's not that strong. Maybe reduce this? ok
  5. 00:38:572 (3,1) - Increase dash distance here - ok
  6. 00:47:197 (2,3) - Doesn't feel like this needs a dash, reduce this? - yep
  7. Kiai suffers from the same issue I listed in my first point. Please fix it <: - ok owo

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Platter
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General



  1. 00:14:384 (4,5,6) - This is pretty much an antiflow HDash and is therefore unrankable. The HDash moves to the right and then immediately the player needs to make a large leftwards jump, which fits the definition of antiflow, so it'll need to be changed. - Fixed i guess
  2. The difficulty is nice but there's way too many hyperdashes here and almost no normal dashes. Please try to swap out some of the HDashes for regular dashes in places where the stuff isn't that strong[/b] - ww ok, made less hdashes

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Angel
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General



  1. 00:03:040 (4) - Overmapped 1/4, delete this :o - haa ok
  2. 00:06:697 (3,4) - Dunno if you need an HDash between here, I'd rather see one between 00:06:884 (4,5) - - owo looks cute ;D
  3. 00:07:259 (6) - Overmapped 1/4, delete the blue tick - ok w
  4. 00:11:572 (3,4) - Why's there an HDash between here? There's nothing extraordinary about that sound - removed hdash
  5. 00:12:134 (1) - No need to extend this to 1/4, reduce to the red tick for a 1/2 dash - okie
  6. 00:13:259 (4) - Maybe reduce the distance to and from this note and make a dash between 00:13:447 (5,6) - ?
  7. 00:28:634 (2,3) - I'd ctrl+g this rhythm the vocal should be played as a slider, not a circle. - reworked pattern
  8. 00:38:947 (1) - Please make this a C-Curve, this plays so bad :( - OK
  9. 01:44:947 (6,7) - Why are these 1/4 hypers, there doesn't even feel like there's 1/4 sounds there lol - removed this shiet
  10. 01:47:947 (4,5) - As above - ^
  11. 01:52:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - This should 100% be a 1/1 slider, there's no 1/4 at all lol - HAHAHHA LOL, fixed
  12. This diff has some pretty serious overmapping issues, please take a deeper look and try to fix some of them yourself. - reworked some patterns and removed overmapped moments

Call me after you've made the appropriate fixes.
Ascendance
Top diff:

  1. 00:07:447 (3) - unsnapped
  2. 00:07:728 (4,1) - why is this distance so far now? please reduce it
  3. You missed my suggestion at 00:13:072 -, try something like this to give 1 some more emphasis.
  4. 00:39:040 (6,8) - Overmapped, delete these
  5. 01:00:322 (1) - unsnapped
  6. 01:26:009 (2,3) - shouldn't the hdash be to the strong vocal downbeat on 01:26:384 -
Topic Starter
Xetopia

Ascendance wrote:

Top diff:

  1. 00:07:447 (3) - unsnapped - fixed
  2. 00:07:728 (4,1) - why is this distance so far now? please reduce it - k
  3. You missed my suggestion at 00:13:072 -, try something like this to give 1 some more emphasis. - oh lol,
    sorry. Done
  4. 00:39:040 (6,8) - Overmapped, delete these - :ok_hand:
  5. 01:00:322 (1) - unsnapped - fixed
  6. 01:26:009 (2,3) - shouldn't the hdash be to the strong vocal downbeat on 01:26:384 - fixed
Thanks. Updated
Ascendance
Alright, looking good!
Fu Xuan
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Xinnoh
uwu
Sanyi
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-Hex-
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Kimitakari
Давай, ещё чуть чуть.
Nanachii
uwo
Sorceress
OwO

Recheck man here to recheck! Literally just two points on the cup

[Cup]
  1. 01:16:634 (1,2,3) - This spacing is a bit high, would lower to around 1.40x ds across this at most
  2. 01:54:322 (1) - Possible to move this to x:256 to lower the distance?
Topic Starter
Xetopia

Sorcerer wrote:

OwO

Recheck man here to recheck! Literally just two points on the cup

[Cup]
  1. 01:16:634 (1,2,3) - This spacing is a bit high, would lower to around 1.40x ds across this at most - ok
  2. 01:54:322 (1) - Possible to move this to x:256 to lower the distance? - np done
Thanks <3 And haaaa made minor changes in platter. Updated!
Sorceress
UwU
Topic Starter
Xetopia
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Shirokane Rinko
Конгратулейшон
I knew what u can do it
Fu Xuan
Grats owo
Topic Starter
Xetopia

-Aqua wrote:

Grats owo
Thanks uwu
Yumeno Himiko
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