ave;new feat. Saori Sakura - Call My Dears · forum

fumis

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fumis 2010-12-30T11:53:01+00:00

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Hinacle

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Topic Starter

Hinacle 2010-12-31T18:56:20+00:00

Thank you for star~

KSHR

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KSHR 2010-12-31T23:40:36+00:00

modding

[Overall]

SPOILER

- フォルダ内のosbファイルを削除してください
- EasyとHardのstar ratingの差が大きいのでNormalを作ってもいいかもしれません
- Preview Point(黄色い線のやつ)は01:24:131だと思います
- Artist: ave;new feat.Sakura Saori
　Title:Call My Dears
　Tags:全て削除
↑
※アンダーバーではなく、半角スペースを使ってください
※EasyとHardでSourceが違うので統一してください(Period)

全体的にspacingがバラバラな印象がありました
EasyとNormalは特にspacingが大事なdifなので注意して配置してみてください

[Easy]

SPOILER

- grid levelが２のせいでspacingがやりにくいと思うので３にすることをお薦めします
- Easyにしてはスライダーが早すぎます。Slider Velocityを低くしてください。
　また、0.5倍速を使う必要はないように思いました。
　(スライダーは全体的に0.5倍速の時くらいのスピードでいいと思います。Slider Velocity設定時の参考にしてください)

01:06:824(1)---start=01:07:285, end=01:09:131
　↑をするとき、01:09:131のnoteを削除してください
01:21:824(1)---start=01:22:055, end=01:23:901
　↑をするとき、01:23:901のnoteを削除してください
01:25:747---kiai timeここからだと思います(Hardも)
01:55:285---end=01:57:131
01:57:247---kiai timeここで終わりだと思います(Hardも)
02:29:208(1,2,3)---枠の外にはみ出ないように直してください
02:41:439---kiai timeここからだと思います(Hardも)

[Hard]

SPOILER

- 0.5倍速を使う必要はないように思います

00:20:670(8)---new combo
00:21:824(1)---remove new combo
00:37:747---end=00:39:362にして00:39:593~00:41:439にsupinnerを入れると
　　修正前よりも曲と合って綺麗な感じがすると思います
01:01:978(4)---new combo
01:19:978(8)---new combo
01:21:824(1)---start=01:22:055
　　前の同じメロディ(01:07:285~)と合わせて置いた方が綺麗なため
01:38:670(7)---new combo
01:55:978(1)---start=01:53:439 end=01:57:131
　　他の同じメロディと合わせた方が綺麗なため
02:11:901(1)---remove new combo
02:13:516(6)---new combo
02:46:747(7)---^
02:54:016(6)---^
03:33:131(6)---^
03:40:516(6)---^
03:42:362---kiai timeここからだと思います

このforumに書ききれなかったこととかあるので
チャット頂ければ嬉しいです('∀`)　　starヽ(*´∀｀)ノ★

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2011-01-01T06:49:36+00:00

>KSHR

Thank you for star~

指摘ありがとうございます。
ホームページの音がならなくなりました＞＜

So_Ra

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So_Ra 2011-01-01T13:14:07+00:00

good

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2011-01-02T10:05:17+00:00

>So_Ra

Thank you for star~

Hushu_old

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Hushu_old 2011-01-02T23:19:03+00:00

The custom hitsounds of rain pouring down on plastic is not of my favorites to say, and it does not match the song :< Normal sound choices of osu! should be added instead in some places... Also, use Distance Snap, missing it when playing in some some places~
It is a great choice and the patterns are nice and everything sounds to be on beat! *Star*
Aha and,.. maybe just Avenew not ave;new?

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2011-01-03T03:42:09+00:00

>Hushu

Thank you for star~

Waiting a little because it will mend in the future

murasa433

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murasa433 2011-01-03T16:33:52+00:00

Star~

Revolver_old

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Revolver_old 2011-01-03T17:11:39+00:00

Good!

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2011-01-04T08:20:52+00:00

>murasa433

>Revolver

Thank you for star~!!

Cuuuuri

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Cuuuuri 2011-01-04T14:44:21+00:00

Hi(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
[General]
* Delete osb in the folder. after full submission

SPOILER

[Hard/hit object nazi mod]

00:22:747 (6) - 1grid down
00:23:439 (2) - x240 y245
00:23:901 (3) - x178 y310
00:24:362 (4) - x118 y243
00:28:978 (3) - 1grid right
00:29:208 (4) - 2grid down
00:38:670 (9,10,11) - 1grid left
01:04:055 (3) - 1 grid up
01:04:747 (7) - 1grid up & left
01:04:978 (8) - 1grid left
01:05:208 (9) - 1grid down & left
01:06:131 (2) - x256 y192
01:10:978 (6) - bad slider. ad new object
Ex

01:16:978 (2) - x84 y188
01:17:439 (3) - x157 y201
01:17:901 (4) - x220 y186
02:13:516 (1,2,3,4) - random jump..
02:20:901 (2) - 1grid up
02:21:824 (6,7) - ^
02:22:978 (3) - ^
02:37:055 (7) - 1grid left
02:43:516 (9) - bad slider. ad new object
Ex (10) x232 y84

03:29:901 (2) - 1grid right

[Totally] u can be further Improvement

I like this song & map fight!

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2011-01-04T16:43:48+00:00

>Qrool

Thank you for star and modding!!

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

senaya

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senaya 2011-01-06T12:20:44+00:00

Hello! Just had stop by to play this awesome song

Just some suggestions here.

[General]
Custom sounds are a bit loud for me. Maybe lower them down a bit?

[Easy]
01:01:747 (6) - new combo?
02:27:593 (5) - ^
02:44:208 (6,7) - is this spacing ok?

[Hard]
All good.

Good luck

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2011-01-06T13:09:53+00:00

senaya wrote:
Hello! Just had stop by to play this awesome song
Just some suggestions here.

[General]
Custom sounds are a bit loud for me. Maybe lower them down a bit?

[Easy]
01:01:747 (6) - new combo?
02:27:593 (5) - ^
02:44:208 (6,7) - is this spacing ok?

[Hard]
senaya wrote:
Hello! Just had stop by to play this awesome song
Just some suggestions here.

[General]
Custom sounds are a bit loud for me. Maybe lower them down a bit?

[Easy]
01:01:747 (6) - new combo?
02:27:593 (5) - ^
02:44:208 (6,7) - is this spacing ok?

[Hard]
All good.

Good luck

>senaya

Thank you for mod.star~!!

Andrea

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Andrea 2011-01-06T14:37:35+00:00

Deleted the other copy due to a submission mistake

vincerio

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vincerio 2011-01-06T16:06:06+00:00

love the song~

*star*

Hinacle

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Topic Starter

Hinacle 2011-01-06T16:14:59+00:00

osuplayer111 wrote:
Deleted the other copy due to a submission mistake

>osuplayer111

I am sorry. Thank you for deleting it.

>vincerio

Thank you for star~!!

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2011-01-07T05:51:46+00:00

こにゃにゃちわ( ´・∀・)

[General]
悪くはないんですが、カスタムクラップを改善したほうがいいかもしれません。

[Hard]
01:16:978 (2,3) - 前のスライダーの終点に始点を重ねてください。
01:33:131 (1) - 01:36:362 (4)までのカスタムクラップに少し違和感を感じました。
01:43:401 (4) - もう少し離してみては？
02:12:131 (8) - spasing
02:17:901 (2) - ^
02:41:439 (4) - new combo ?
02:48:824 (2) - 02:52:055 (4)まで01:33:131 (1)と同じです。
03:27:362 (x) - add note ?

[Easy]
good~

すたー！

S o r d a

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S o r d a 2011-01-07T07:57:08+00:00

yokatta~

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2011-01-07T08:28:06+00:00

>MeLLoN

Thank you for mod,star~!!

カスタムクラップ直しました！

>S o r d a

Thank you for star~!!

miss_dior