fieryrage wrote:
monarch
- 00:06:105 (1) - not really a big fan of skipping a snare here, I'd make this a 1/4 slider and add a circle on the white tick; it still keeps the pausing feeling that I think you're going for here agreed, unskipped
- 00:07:119 (1,2) - not perfectly parallel xd agreed, made paralell
- 00:31:443 (1,2,3,4) - these would flow a lot better as just stacks imo, either that or a bit reduced spacing since it's kinda sudden as it is rn agreed, made stacked
- 01:12:795 (5,6) - would just make this a repeat instead to keep consistent rhythmagreed, made repeat
JeZag wrote:
monarch insane
00:49:281 (1) - could be me, but this wavy slider seems better with less wave Agreed, made less wave
kunka wrote:
Monarch's Insane
- 00:03:369 (6,7,8) - Pursuit of Aesthetic placement. example https://puu.sh/z20KZ.jpg Changed somewhat with this in mind
- 00:18:470 (1,2) - It's the only stack in quiet part. Because the rhythm and the sound are not changed, it is recommended to remove the stack with a focus on consistency than the stack. Altered note placement
- 00:55:362 (8) - Perfect blanket x54y279 problem here is deciding which note to blanket, i chose the middle note and dont see much issue when doing this relative to choosing other notes
- 00:58:504 - Because there is no note, it sounds very weak. add circle? decreased spacing
Yasaija 714 wrote:
Monarch's Insane
- 00:03:065 (4) - It is better to add NC in order to make the change in rhythm easier to understand agreed, nc'd
- 00:29:416 (5,1) - In a quiet part I think this is a very big jump changed spacing around, bottom point becomes irrelevant
00:29:416 (5) - How about trying to Ctrl+G this?
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