think i promised to have a check a while ago
[General]
the white combo color which is 255/255/255 in rgb is a no, it affects to ranking criteria due to how it looks bad in kiais, make it slightly darker.
would have spaces on each side of * in the romanised title because it's how we romanize things?
also the negative offset thats at -694 doesn't really make any sense so maybe snap to the next measure 00:00:824 -
00:22:193 - removing this timing makes more sense, I don't think there's any bpm change in music especially the timing line only changes 2 bpm which is quite unnoticeable anyway.
00:55:890 - the timing line here is unnecessary, 00:54:179 - still goes very accurately to both the drums and the vocals.
00:56:871 - make this bpm 135 so the spinner will end at where the vocal stops and somehow sound plays here.
[buhei]
00:08:230 (4,5,1) - you could do the linear triplet with 00:07:470 (5,6,1) - so it will work better with the flow, and 00:08:419 (1,2,3,4) - could make more sense too because they're linear as well
00:11:078 (5) - this looks like you accidentally placed on the slider head since you didn't use this kind of stream jumps in the rest of the diff that makes it weird
a few of the largest jumps still feel like overdone for pp lol
[Insane]
00:10:888 (4,5) - don't know if I pointed out this before but could separate the circle from the slider because you just space out these in anywhere else? like 00:06:331 (7,8) -. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9441476 to fit the pattern doing 00:10:888 (4) - looking similar with 00:10:318 (2) - makes a lot sense
00:22:593 (5,6,7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9441493 something like this one can be better to match with the jumps afterwards 00:23:785 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spreading out increasingly to fit more, is to express the spacing getting smaller in 00:20:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and getting increadibly larger in 00:23:785 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -.
00:43:721 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - drum samples sound nice for these
00:52:645 (1) - uh would use the same slider with 00:51:886 (1) - visually otherwise this looks lol
i think u could use a polish on 1/4 sliders a bit like i told you before
[Hard]
00:20:571 - maybe use slower sv for these parts? the sliders play way too fast for the very slower vocals lol
00:37:645 (2) - either remove this or avoid stacking 3 notes because it represents something not what it deserves
only the ending can be hard for players, sightreading the circles feels painful when the insane has full sliders there
[Normal]
the spacing is unnecessarily large overall, as the sv in this diff is quite high already would decrease the spacing at least so would play actually better.
00:26:063 (2) - what's the point of using different spacing
00:30:430 (2) - just move this onto the path where the slider goes, how the currently plays like not really great due to the flow is quite forced. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9441684
nc here is also kinda random just stick to every 2 measure
[Easy]
00:06:900 (1,2) - something wrong is going on, the overlap is already quite bad plus the rhythm made the spacing completely broken
00:07:280 - clap
00:08:799 - clap
00:10:318 - clap
00:11:837 - clap
00:13:356 - clap
00:17:533 (1) - remove nc?? inconsistent with the rest
00:25:683 (2) - spacing
00:55:893 (3) - could do clean up this section because 00:55:048 (2) - only this feels out of place atm which doesn't relate to the other sliders, maybe do a ctrl+j and a triangle with the sliders
[General]
the white combo color which is 255/255/255 in rgb is a no, it affects to ranking criteria due to how it looks bad in kiais, make it slightly darker.
would have spaces on each side of * in the romanised title because it's how we romanize things?
also the negative offset thats at -694 doesn't really make any sense so maybe snap to the next measure 00:00:824 -
00:22:193 - removing this timing makes more sense, I don't think there's any bpm change in music especially the timing line only changes 2 bpm which is quite unnoticeable anyway.
00:55:890 - the timing line here is unnecessary, 00:54:179 - still goes very accurately to both the drums and the vocals.
00:56:871 - make this bpm 135 so the spinner will end at where the vocal stops and somehow sound plays here.
[buhei]
00:08:230 (4,5,1) - you could do the linear triplet with 00:07:470 (5,6,1) - so it will work better with the flow, and 00:08:419 (1,2,3,4) - could make more sense too because they're linear as well
00:11:078 (5) - this looks like you accidentally placed on the slider head since you didn't use this kind of stream jumps in the rest of the diff that makes it weird
a few of the largest jumps still feel like overdone for pp lol
[Insane]
00:10:888 (4,5) - don't know if I pointed out this before but could separate the circle from the slider because you just space out these in anywhere else? like 00:06:331 (7,8) -. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9441476 to fit the pattern doing 00:10:888 (4) - looking similar with 00:10:318 (2) - makes a lot sense
00:22:593 (5,6,7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9441493 something like this one can be better to match with the jumps afterwards 00:23:785 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spreading out increasingly to fit more, is to express the spacing getting smaller in 00:20:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and getting increadibly larger in 00:23:785 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -.
00:43:721 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - drum samples sound nice for these
00:52:645 (1) - uh would use the same slider with 00:51:886 (1) - visually otherwise this looks lol
i think u could use a polish on 1/4 sliders a bit like i told you before
[Hard]
00:20:571 - maybe use slower sv for these parts? the sliders play way too fast for the very slower vocals lol
00:37:645 (2) - either remove this or avoid stacking 3 notes because it represents something not what it deserves
only the ending can be hard for players, sightreading the circles feels painful when the insane has full sliders there
[Normal]
the spacing is unnecessarily large overall, as the sv in this diff is quite high already would decrease the spacing at least so would play actually better.
00:26:063 (2) - what's the point of using different spacing
00:30:430 (2) - just move this onto the path where the slider goes, how the currently plays like not really great due to the flow is quite forced. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9441684
nc here is also kinda random just stick to every 2 measure
[Easy]
00:06:900 (1,2) - something wrong is going on, the overlap is already quite bad plus the rhythm made the spacing completely broken
00:07:280 - clap
00:08:799 - clap
00:10:318 - clap
00:11:837 - clap
00:13:356 - clap
00:17:533 (1) - remove nc?? inconsistent with the rest
00:25:683 (2) - spacing
00:55:893 (3) - could do clean up this section because 00:55:048 (2) - only this feels out of place atm which doesn't relate to the other sliders, maybe do a ctrl+j and a triangle with the sliders