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Sorry for late, as request!



[General]
  1. Metadata is fine since IamKwaN and Lokidoki tell to me in Discord and chat!
[Collab Easy]
  1. 00:45:297 (3,4,5,1) - Why this snap is diffrecent than others?
[Polka's Normal]
  1. 00:11:062 (2,4) - Bad overlap
[Mirash's Hard]
  1. 00:02:944 (1,2,3,4) - I'm disagree with this. Why you stack 00:03:474 (4)? It's totally uncomfortable
  2. 00:53:768 (2,5) - Bad overlap
  3. 00:56:591 (2,5) - Blanket is look bad
  4. 00:59:944 - Are you sure to not add something here? Or 01:00:121 (1)?
  5. 01:02:238 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - OK, I totally disagree with this. This flow is too hard for hard diff and the newbies feel it's really confused and can't pass it
  6. 01:07:532 (4) - I not sure with this rhythm, why you not used same rhythm like 01:18:474 (3,4,1,2)?
  7. 01:11:415 (1,3) - Here too, bad overlap
  8. 01:13:532 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same like 01:02:238 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
  9. 01:28:356 (7) - Hmm, trap? OK
[nyu's Light Insane]
  1. 00:04:709 (2,3) - Blanket in tail?
  2. 00:50:591 (4,5) - Blanket is look bad
  3. 01:01:885 (4) - Hmm? I think it's look weird for me, how about CTRL+J, CTRL+H, and CTRL+G and you fix it the position?
  4. 01:04:708 (4) - ^
  5. 01:31:885 (1) - This snap is look diffrecent than 01:31:532 (2,3,4,5)
[Insane]
  1. I think your diff has a problem with "bad" overlap, like 00:03:297 (2,3) - 00:11:415 (1,2) - 00:17:062 (1,2) - 00:19:885 (1,2) - 00:22:709 (1,2) - and many. I stopped here because the big problem in overlap, but overall, I think it's fine

No KDS if my mod is not fixed all!

Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Lokidoki

MadHypnofrog wrote:

hey, m4m

easy
00:46:003 (4,5) - smth happened with ds there not anymore i believe
00:53:415 (2) - not the best idea to use a repeat here cause the music still goes 1-2-1-2 and 00:53:768 - should definitely be clickable i was following the guitar sound

who the hell puts u in sayonara apparently, Mel does lol
k I don't really like this stuff 00:32:591 (1,2) - but it seems like you used it all over so it should be fine well, technically, it represents that the music gets less intense, so the rhythm get a bit more simple and the spacing is lowered
00:50:591 (4) - this one is a bit too big compared to the rest of the section spacing wise yes, but between the objects and how spaced 00:50:062 (2,3,4) - it is alright
00:58:356 (2,3,4) - ugh, this spacing isn't a good idea at all cause 2-3 and 3-4 are visually the same but stand for different gaps in the timeline. stacking (2) and (3) would help. applies to 00:59:238 (1,2) - as well tbh i don't really see the problem, a lot of maps nowadays do that, and this has to to have at least some kind of gimmick, i know this is a shitty excuse, but i'd like to keep that as it is
01:00:121 (3) - idk I'd do a slider ther einstead to emphasize that whistle yeah, i've been told that, but i'm representing the cymbal sound here, not the whistle
01:01:532 (3) - the ds on this one is too low, though the vocals are the same i just don't want to ruin the flow, it seems fine to me actually,
spacing it too much is uncomfortable to play if i keep the same pattern

01:07:885 (1) - and this one is a bit too overkill, basically a fullscreen jump on a new vocal line that's not even that important if you listen closely, there is a stronger guitar sound on it
01:12:826 (3) - ^^ well, i explained it up there as well
01:14:062 (4,5) - tf is this ds? makes literally no sense to not space (5) there i've explained that so many times before tho, (5) is reversing the flow here, so to not overspace (5,6) i decided to give (5) a lower spacing

decent set overall, gl!

KittyAdventure wrote:

[Collab Easy]
  1. 00:45:297 (3,4,5,1) - Why this snap is diffrecent than others? yea, i dunno what happened here
[Insane]
  1. I think your diff has a problem with "bad" overlap, like 00:03:297 (2,3) - 00:11:415 (1,2) - 00:17:062 (1,2) - 00:19:885 (1,2) - 00:22:709 (1,2) - and many. I stopped here because the big problem in overlap, but overall, I think it's fine i don't find it bad, they're still readable and they are presented in a strict pattern
[/notice]
Thank you for the mods
_DT3

Yamicchi wrote:

Hi M4M from #modreqs :3
[Easy]
• 00:17:415 (4,5) - I would make these a reverse slider like 00:06:122 (4) - because (5) is not such a strong beat to be clickable here I made the second half of my first part intentionally a bit more harder rhythm-wise to make the contrast to the next part more visible and it fits imo

MadHypnofrog wrote:

hey, m4m

easy
00:05:062 (2,3) - idk about this kind of flow in easies, for me it seems a bit too harsh This angle is fine tho, it's the same as the rest pretty much e.g. 01:05:768 (4,5,1) -
00:11:415 (1) - remove NC, 00:05:768 (3) - doesn't have one Why is this there
01:17:062 (4) - higher ds yet again Yep
01:21:650 (2) - ^^ This is a .01 difference
Thanks for the mods and sorry for the delay!

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Asaiga
good luck
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Topic Starter
Lokidoki

Asaiga wrote:

good luck
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Title:Good-bye, Ms. Floral Thief
TitleUnicode:さようなら、花泥棒さん
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thxa lot
Lully

Jabba wrote:

unsnapped sliderends, check aimod w
OD7.5 maybe? cause hard has OD7 as well

00:02:238 (3) - two circles pls did the same for the others so its fine
00:12:121 (3,4) - blanket
00:28:356 (5) - not having a NC on this downbeat seems weird cause later you NC this 00:29:768 (1) - , even though you can map it as 1/2+circle and NC the circle, so I'd nc the downbeat just to be consistent i focus ncing vocals and i changed patterns so its ok
01:01:885 (4) - why the flow change? the lyrics are the same on those four
01:04:708 (4) - ^
01:31:885 (1) - y u no space song ends myspace

KittyAdventure wrote:

[nyu's Light Insane]
  1. 00:04:709 (2,3) - Blanket in tail?
  2. 00:50:591 (4,5) - Blanket is look bad
  3. 01:01:885 (4) - Hmm? I think it's look weird for me, how about CTRL+J, CTRL+H, and CTRL+G and you fix it the position?
  4. 01:04:708 (4) - ^
  5. 01:31:885 (1) - This snap is look diffrecent than 01:31:532 (2,3,4,5) already explained

No KDS if my mod is not fixed all!

Good Luck~
no reply means fixed


hello im late
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Rin Desu
hellow :D

Easy

00:17:415 (4,5) - why is here no repeat?
00:20:238 (4) - and why is here a repeat xD thats kinda inconstent u should check that parts again
00:26:238 (4,1) - blanket
00:49:532 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - what are u representing with these?
00:52:356 (1,2) - that repeats feel rly random
00:49:532 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - in this parts i dont get your hitsounds, recheck them pls the feel random

Normal

00:26:944 (1) - that shape , why xD?
00:53:062 (1) - u should do first round than that intense slider, it makes more sense to do them before the chorus
so change 00:49:532 (1,2,3,1,2) - with 00:54:121 (2,3,1,2,3) -
01:28:356 (3,1) - blanket

Hard

01:22:709 (1,2,3,4) - any reason for this random looking pattern :D?
01:28:003 - add circle
01:28:709 - here too
01:05:062 (1) - this is much more intense maybe change shapes with 01:02:944 (3) -

Light Insane

00:49:180 (4,1) - blanket
cause of this parts 01:14:944 (1,2,3,4) - u should consider change the drumroll sound to a silent one

Insane

i have one big concern about this diff.
00:26:944 (1,2,3,4,1) - till 00:58:003 (1,2) - feel like the part before and i dont think this reflects the song good. im fine with the other parts and find them comprehensibly.But this part has the same flow and rhythm as the part before while the music is changed alot. when u turn off the music and listen to your map u notice no difference between that parts at all ;/

for example this sliderend 00:26:944 (1) - is a strong sound
00:28:356 (1) - here to

00:05:415 (4,1,2,3) - in comprehension to 00:11:944 (2,3,4) - 00:17:591 (2,3,4) - ,... this is random, infact its the same melodie.

good luck :)
Asaiga

Rin Desu wrote:

Hard

01:22:709 (1,2,3,4) - any reason for this random looking pattern :D? to make it play more interesting
01:28:003 - add circle follow vocal
01:28:709 - here too same
01:05:062 (1) - this is much more intense maybe change shapes with 01:02:944 (3) - I don't see the necessity
thanks
Topic Starter
Lokidoki

Rin Desu wrote:

hellow :D

Easy


00:49:532 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - what are u representing with these? strong guitar sounds
00:52:356 (1,2) - that repeats feel rly random in what way? it seems pretty reasonable, i just changed the rhythm a bit, which is normal
00:49:532 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - in this parts i dont get your hitsounds, recheck them pls the feel random they are on strong drum sounds tho


Insane

i have one big concern about this diff.
00:26:944 (1,2,3,4,1) - till 00:58:003 (1,2) - feel like the part before and i dont think this reflects the song good. im fine with the other parts and find them comprehensibly.But this part has the same flow and rhythm as the part before while the music is changed alot. when u turn off the music and listen to your map u notice no difference between that parts at all ;/ the song really slows down here, so it feels natural that it doesn't only lower the ds, but also simplifies the rhythm.

for example this sliderend 00:26:944 (1) - is a strong sound
00:28:356 (1) - here to

00:05:415 (4,1,2,3) - in comprehension to 00:11:944 (2,3,4) - 00:17:591 (2,3,4) - ,... this is random, infact its the same melodie. yeah,
reamapped that


good luck :)
_DT3
I can't check in game rn but since I can see that it's the same thing as in Yamicchi's post, see my elaboration there
Also @Lokidoki: You have permission to fix the blanket xd
polka

Jabba wrote:

normal
uh so overall the diff is good but I don't think it fits the spread, it's basically 1/1 spam, just like easy (with easy having some more sliders and 2/1s), whilst hard already has 1/4s and 8 1/2s in a row. consider buffing this diff by adding more 1/2 rhythms :arrow: Gimmick ouo/
also AR5 OD5 to fit the spread better :arrow: That so high for normal what
00:15:650 (1) - this is not perfectly symmetrical pls :arrow: It wasnt supposed to be
01:07:885 (3,4) - blanket :arrow: It is?
yeah good diff but should be buffed, else you'll need another diff inbetween this and hard :arrow: the spread is fine geez
@Kitty Adventure: What makes it bad? It looks fine to me.

Rin Desu wrote:

Normal

00:26:944 (1) - that shape , why xD? :arrow: Why what? It pairs with 00:25:532 (3) - .
00:53:062 (1) - u should do first round than that intense slider, it makes more sense to do them before the chorus :arrow: I'm confused I picked that shape to map the guitar.?
so change 00:49:532 (1,2,3,1,2) - with 00:54:121 (2,3,1,2,3) - :arrow: Ahhhhh i think what I have works aight
01:28:356 (3,1) - blanket :arrow: It is
No changes! Thank you all!!
Lully

Rin Desu wrote:

hellow :D


Light Insane

00:49:180 (4,1) - blanket y
cause of this parts 01:14:944 (1,2,3,4) - u should consider change the drumroll sound to a silent one no need mapping vocals
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Nao Tomori
[sayonara]
00:03:827 (4,5) - would b better to delete 3 imo, theres nothing there.

00:08:591 (1,2,3,4) - dunno i think following the high pitched thing is better here cuz its so dense. like ctrl g on this is nice

00:13:532 (3,4,1,2) - overall seems a bit to high spacing

00:36:474 (4,1) - blanket ..

00:40:709 (4,1) - d

00:53:415 (4) - 2 circles pls

overall u should vary your rhythms a bit more lol this is just the exact same over and over kinda boring

01:00:121 (3) - think a long slider with a whistle n the body could be really cute here actually

01:08:591 (3,4) - think 1/1 slider + circle works better here cuz then the clicks are on vocals. and then 01:09:297 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can change the rhythm here to follow the vocals too, like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9263033 would follow the vocals much more closely.

01:11:768 (5,1) - not a quint? the drums are pretty clear plus nice for buildup.

01:14:062 (4,5) - weirdly low spacing

01:21:121 (4,5) - ctrl g rhythm plz

01:27:297 (4,1) - the vocal changes dramatically here, please follow it

yea i think you should change up your rhythms to follow the main melodies more since atm its kinda just metronome type

[nyu]
00:01:533 (1,2) - silence?
00:02:238 (3) - 2 clicks plz

00:03:650 (4) - the slider end is so much stronger than the head.. like i get you're following the whistles but this sounds really weird

00:07:003 (4) - tbh dont like these notes, the intro isn't that intense that you need overmapping 1/2 to keep the intensity correct..

seems like you kinda ignore slider leniency in some of your patterns, like 00:10:003 (1,2) - the spacing here is really freaking small, and its basically played like a 1/1 gap cuz the slider goes in the same direction. same 00:13:180 (2,3) - or 00:19:885 (1,2) -

basically i think you should space them out some more so that both the head and the tail have importance cuz atm its only the head

you also need some rhythm variation.. just copy pasting the same rhythm for 30 seconds is so boring...

00:28:356 - tbh constant 1/2 isn't that good here. the song is obviously calmer but your rhythm density is the same. try to remove some, map a less dense layer. not every sound needs an object on it.

00:59:062 (3) - ee just put a circle on the red tick lol

01:07:180 (3,4) - 2 1/2 sliders works better here with the vocals

01:10:003 (3,4,1,2) - try to follow the vocals a bit better here too

01:20:944 (2,3) - ^

01:28:532 (2,3) - ctrl g ?


a lot of the kiai patterns look a bit awkward visually. like 01:06:474 (1,2,3) - the spacing between 1 and 3 is tiny, and the follow points dont really lead into 3 so it looks meh imo

01:14:238 (3,4,5,1) - same here, the 4-5 thing looks weird cuz 5 is angled the opposite way, and 5-1 visual spacing is fucked

a lot of your other patterns have the same issue with randomly off visual spacing so they look kinda disorganized


[asaiga]
00:08:944 (2) - looks weird cuz its curved so much lo

yea i think 00:30:213 - this area should be nerfed a bit, it's basically constant 1/2 gaps but you could undermap it a bit more to make more contrast

also for the love of god make a direction change this is literally 15 seconds of going in a clockwise circle

asaiga cutest former mentee

[polka]
u need more rhythm variation in the intro its boring

01:27:297 (2) - this sounds like ass cuz of the vocal being on the offbeat

ye think the top diffs need work in rhythming patterning.. good luck
Topic Starter
Lokidoki

Naotoshi wrote:

[sayonara]
overall u should vary your rhythms a bit more lol this is just the exact same over and over kinda boring
yea i think you should change up your rhythms to follow the main melodies more since atm its kinda just metronome type
diff remapped, all suggestions have been taken into account
thanks a lot, Nao
Asaiga
Almost forgot I made a gd for this set xd

Naotoshi wrote:

[asaiga]
00:08:944 (2) - looks weird cuz its curved so much lo made it less curve :D

yea i think 00:30:213 - this area should be nerfed a bit, it's basically constant 1/2 gaps but you could undermap it a bit more to make more contrast

also for the love of god make a direction change this is literally 15 seconds of going in a clockwise circle improved this part's rhythm & patterns :oops:

asaiga cutest former mentee
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polka
@nao its like 20 seconds theyll be ok

i think it sounds fine can you explain
Asaiga
i think spread is fine, are you pushing it forward?
Topic Starter
Lokidoki
yeah, gonna start finding bns now
Mafumafu
M4M as requested.

[General]
Why you have so many usernames in tags?

[Polka's Normal]
Raise AR by 0.5 for balance

[Hard]
00:10:003 (1) - This sharp curved slider looks really odd amongst your smooth sliders and flows.

00:23:062 (2,2,3) - Please avoid this slight overlap.

00:36:121 This should be mapped out as well.

00:46:709 (1,2,3,1) - Rhythm here is a bit off-vocal, recommend: https://puu.sh/zydhT/483af510f1.png

01:05:062 (1,2,3,4,5) - Questionable rhythm here. 01:05:591 is ignored, and 01:05:768 (2,3,4,5) - four singletaps are creating a difficulty spike here. I'd recommend such rhythm: https://puu.sh/zydr8/b22f120670.png

01:10:356 (4,5) - Same reason for difficulty spike above, try changing them into a slider. 01:21:650 (4,5) - Same.

01:14:062 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Generally placement here is a bit uncomfortable. 01:14:238 (3,1) - weird blanket. 01:14:944 (1,3) - off-blanket

01:17:062 (2,3,4) - Try a 1/1 slider here. vocal on 3 is not strong enough for singletaps.

[Sayonara]
00:37:709 (4,5) - I think that the spacing here is oddly enlarged between these two notes. 5 is not that strong to deserve that.

01:00:121 (3) - I do expect this to be a slider since the sound here is extended.

01:02:238 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 01:13:532 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Should be nerf'ed for sure. They are imbalanced large as to spacing compared to any other spacing within this diff.

01:31:797 (8) - Weird slider here. Keep the stream here too.

Call me back when you think it is ready.
Topic Starter
Lokidoki

Regraz wrote:

[General]
Why you have so many usernames in tags? prev gder, now fixed

[Sayonara]
00:37:709 (4,5) - I think that the spacing here is oddly enlarged between these two notes. 5 is not that strong to deserve that. tbh, it has visual consistency with 00:37:532 (3,4) - , so it should be fine

01:00:121 (3) - I do expect this to be a slider since the sound here is extended. sure

01:02:238 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 01:13:532 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Should be nerf'ed for sure. They are imbalanced large as to spacing compared to any other spacing within this diff. well, the song is calm up until this part and i wanted to represent the intense guitar sounds which is also not present before this part. i'll keep the jumps for now, but i'll also increase spacing in other parts for less contrast

01:31:797 (8) - Weird slider here. Keep the stream here too. okay
Asaiga

Regraz wrote:

[Hard]
00:10:003 (1) - This sharp curved slider looks really odd amongst your smooth sliders and flows. fixed shapee

00:23:062 (2,2,3) - Please avoid this slight overlap. okay

00:36:121 This should be mapped out as well. fixed rhythm here

00:46:709 (1,2,3,1) - Rhythm here is a bit off-vocal, recommend: https://puu.sh/zydhT/483af510f1.png fixed in a different way

01:05:062 (1,2,3,4,5) - Questionable rhythm here. 01:05:591 is ignored, and 01:05:768 (2,3,4,5) - four singletaps are creating a difficulty spike here. I'd recommend such rhythm: https://puu.sh/zydr8/b22f120670.png || 01:05:591 - this is too faint. Normal is 2.02* and Insane is 4.49* so Hard should be something more towards Insane diff that's what I think. If you don't like it I can always change but keep for now.

01:10:356 (4,5) - Same reason for difficulty spike above, try changing them into a slider. 01:21:650 (4,5) - Same. Same

01:14:062 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Generally placement here is a bit uncomfortable. 01:14:238 (3,1) - weird blanket. 01:14:944 (1,3) - off-blanket I don't intend to make blankets there and the flow is fine

01:17:062 (2,3,4) - Try a 1/1 slider here. vocal on 3 is not strong enough for singletaps. ok

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Title:Good-bye, Ms. Floral Thief
TitleUnicode:さようなら、花泥棒さん
Artist:sana
ArtistUnicode:鎖那
Creator:Lokidoki
Version:Asaiga's Hard
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Tags:sayounara hanadoroubou san mel vocaloid cover hatsune miku flower _dt3 turtle polkamocha veridian asaiga (un)sentimental spica
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ACOMG
Hi there :)

[Insane]
Found some place where you can emphasize more (to reflect better the song and make the diff more interesting!)
Word highlighted are some lyrics I think you may want to emphasize

00:34:356 So re da ke de shiawase

00:45:650 So re da ke de shiawase

00:53:591 Mata yu me o

01:27:297 Uso o tsuku toki kimi wa

Some other opinions

Generally speaking, I find the hitsound volume too low. I cannot gain enough feedback during playing. Suggest to increase to at least 60%

00:59:944 (1,2) Are these two 1/4 notes necessary? If you want to slow down here, then removing these two notes would be a good idea

01:00:827 (1) A little bit weird to me. Not expecting the slider to overlap. Would be better if put somewhere above the slider tail?

01:23:415 (1) Slider direction a little bit weird again. Why is it antiparallel to the stream direction?

01:29:062 Why Kiai here? The chrous ends alreay.

Hope this map get ranked soon

Sana! :) :) :)
Topic Starter
Lokidoki

ACOMG wrote:

Hi there :)

[Insane]
Found some place where you can emphasize more (to reflect better the song and make the diff more interesting!)
Word highlighted are some lyrics I think you may want to emphasize

00:34:356 So re da ke de shiawase

00:45:650 So re da ke de shiawase

i used different rhythm in both, that's good enough

00:53:591 Mata yu me o

01:27:297 Uso o tsuku toki kimi wa

no need to emphasize

Some other opinions

Generally speaking, I find the hitsound volume too low. I cannot gain enough feedback during playing. Suggest to increase to at least 60%

00:59:944 (1,2) Are these two 1/4 notes necessary? If you want to slow down here, then removing these two notes would be a good ideauhm, there are cymbal sounds, which are the only ones audible at that section of the music, so they are pretty important

01:00:827 (1) A little bit weird to me. Not expecting the slider to overlap. Would be better if put somewhere above the slider tail? it's readable, so should be fine

01:23:415 (1) Slider direction a little bit weird again. Why is it antiparallel to the stream direction? with the stream, people have enough time to recover their aim, so it's playable

01:29:062 Why Kiai here? The chrous ends alreay. personal preference

Hope this map get ranked soon

Sana! :) :) :)
polka
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Mafumafu
[Sayonara]
01:00:121 (1,1) - Sorry but I think the the complete overlap is too confusing.

call me back when you fixed this
Topic Starter
Lokidoki

Regraz wrote:

[Sayonara]
01:00:121 (1,1) - Sorry but I think the the complete overlap is too confusing.

call me back when you fixed this
fixed, should be readable now
Mafumafu
sana >w<
Aurele
hi!

Easy
Hitsounds are not consistent in this difficulty. They tend to change from one part to another. I am recommending you to go over them again to make sure they are consistent.
We can see who mapped what and that triggers me a little. I believe if you go over some patterns, you can try to make the angles more sharp and the flow more straight. Doing so will make the whole difficulty balanced. I will come back to recheck these and suggests more in my recheck.
There is no hitsounds starting 01:02:944 (4) - until the end.

  1. I would like this difficulty to emphasize the whistles at the beginning of the song. To do so, you will need to add whistles to:
    00:01:533 (1) - Head and Tail
    00:02:591 (2) - Circle
    00:02:944 (3) - Head and Tail + The slider track. Do not add a whistle to the reverse arrow.
  2. From 00:04:356 (1) - to 00:14:591 (4) - The clap hitsounds are used inconsistently VS 00:15:650 (1) - 00:26:238 (4) - That are used every measure. Make sure to make these hitsounds consistent.
  3. 00:11:415 (1) - Delete the new combo as it is breaking the consistency.
Polka's Normal
  1. 00:43:532 (4) - Change this finish for a clap and add a finish to the head of 00:43:885 (1) - .
  2. 00:51:650 (1) - This new combo is unnecessary and it breaks the consistency. Might as well delete it.
Fun difficulty!

Asaiga's Hard
  1. 01:00:827 (1) - If you want this slider to match 01:01:532 (3) - and 01:03:650 (1,3) - , add a Soft Sampleset to it!
  2. 01:11:415 (1,2,3,4) - Considering the flow of the previous objects, it would make more sense if (2,4) were reversed. If you do this, I'd recommend stacking 01:12:121 (1) - with 01:11:591 (2) - to create a smooth jump/transition.
Sayonara
Hitsounds might not be a forte. I can see there is many inconsistencies and some objects aren't greatly emphasized neither.
  1. As said on the Easy difficulty, it would be awesome if you emphasize the whistles from the song with the whistle hitsounds. Add a whistle to:
    00:01:533 (1,2,1,2,3) - Circles
    00:02:944 (1) - Head and Tail + Slider track. Do not add a whistle to the reverse arrow.
  2. 00:04:356 (1) - Add a finish to the head of this slider to emphasize the cymbal sound here
  3. 00:10:003 (1) - same here
  4. 00:15:650 (1) - same here
  5. 00:21:297 (1) - same here
  6. 00:26:591 (7) - Delete the finish at the tail of this slider and add a finish to the head of 00:26:944 (1) - . Same reason as below.
  7. 00:28:003 (4) - Is the drum sampleset useful here? it feels out of place and it wasn't used before.
  8. 00:35:944 (2,4) - Delete the finish hitsounds here, they don't emphasize a strong part of the song.
  9. 00:37:885 (5,1) - Same thing as mentioned on 00:26:591 (7) -
  10. 00:39:297 (4) - The soft sample-set is not needed, considering the next hitsounds.
There is some work to do here..

Here's what I have for now. Please consider looking through all the difficulty again and polish the patterns even more.
Asaiga

Gabe wrote:

Asaiga's Hard
  1. 01:00:827 (1) - If you want this slider to match 01:01:532 (3) - and 01:03:650 (1,3) - , add a Soft Sampleset to it! Done
  2. 01:11:415 (1,2,3,4) - Considering the flow of the previous objects, it would make more sense if (2,4) were reversed. If you do this, I'd recommend stacking 01:12:121 (1) - with 01:11:591 (2) - to create a smooth jump/transition. The anti-flow here serves a purpose to build up for the next kiai. I can change if it's a problem but I don't see it

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Secretpipe
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sana is kewl
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