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00:04:200 (4) - imo this slider could look better
00:09:600 (6,7,8,9) - rearrange this to smth like http://prntscr.com/g5kneu looks better imo, could so something similar in next patterns (which are not really.. patterns? xD)
aesthetics at 00:27:726 (4,5,6,7,10) - could be improved, like this for example http://prntscr.com/g5ks7l
00:12:150 (6) - Don't like how this plays after that stream, either make this into 2 circles or put the slider at the end of the stream like http://prntscr.com/g5ko3x
00:16:626 (2,3) - kind don't like the flow of this because 00:16:626 (2) - shape, yeah, kickslider plays as circles but this is kinda weird tho
00:19:176 (3) - why not make this a stream? this reverse is kinda meh, while playing you expect more a stream than this + would make more sense with 00:19:776 (5,6,7,8) - since both have same sound
00:23:376 (4) - this should be a circle, I don't hear anything at 00:23:451 - to be filled with the kickslders, would play better if it was a single circle
00:28:476 (8,9,10) - spacing between these should be equal because the have the same sound
00:29:826 (4,5) - too much spacing, compare it to 00:28:476 (8,9) - as an example, why is the spacing at 00:29:676 (3,4) - MORE than the other part? if the sounds at 00:29:676 (3,4) - are not as strong/loud than the others? kinda doesn't make sense
00:30:276 (6,7,8,9) - same here, why are these jumps so big if the sound on them are quiet
00:37:326 (5,1,2) - spacing here is reaaally confusing, 00:37:326 (5,1) - this looks like 1/4 because the change of spacing (shorther then the rest), imo this whole slow section is lack of consistency on spacing which makes it hard to read, mostly when you use kicksliders
00:37:926 (4,6) - any reason why these have more spacing? I kinda understand why you used more on 00:37:926 (4) - since it has a different sound, but the rest are like the same, 00:38:376 (7,8,9) - pitch goes higher on these 3 but I don't see any change in spacing
00:39:876 (3,4) - same, confusing spacing, ok, I can see you overlap them when it's 1/1, but this is still confusing, maybe play with NC's to make it better
00:41:076 (8,9) - here for example, try to ignore sliderbody and overlap is as it was a single circle, that would help it
00:50:376 (5,6) - should have more spacing
01:16:476 (3,4,5) - maybe make them reverses? I see you take care of small things before but not this time, why?
01:18:726 (4,5,6) - reason behind overlaps on 1/1 being confusing it's because of this 01:18:726 (4,5,6) - spacing it's the same as 1/1
01:23:076 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hand made stream? kinda looks ugly (maybe this is intentional?)
01:25:776 (1,2) - why is spacing here too short? break consistency with 01:24:726 (2,2) - also, the sound on 01:25:926 (2) - it's stronger/louder than 01:24:726 (2,2) - so why is it spacing less than the others? doesn't make sense to me
01:32:526 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - awkward flow, peoeple will play this trying to snap every double, and it being wide angle, makes it awkward to play
01:33:201 (9,6,2) - spacing on these doesn't make sense, 01:33:051 (8,9) - and 01:33:726 (5,6) - has different spacing, feels like too random, but then 01:34:176 (1,2) - spacing it's shorter when it's beat it's louder
01:36:726 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - and now here the spacing and smh flow keeps the same as everything before, but the song it's quite more intense at 01:36:726 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - visuals and spacing it's the same, even tho the song changes a lot :l
01:34:176 (1,2,3) - 01:38:376 (1,2,3) - both parts sounds the same, but they play different, you used linear spacing on 01:38:376 (1,2) - which you also used in 01:37:251 (10,11) - 01:33:051 (8,9) - etc... but the sound at 01:38:376 (1,2) - its not the same, which should be mapped differently, the flow it's different at 01:34:176 (1,2) - but then you used linear... also spacing it's different, try to keep consistency as using the same kind of flow and spacing for the same kind of sounds but make it different in different sections of the song, that would help the player to difference sections between each rythm
01:43:626 (10,1,2) - try to make these equal on spacing, 01:43:776 (1,3) - are reverses, but remember they plays as single circles, in this case just move 01:43:776 (1) -
01:49:176 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this looks exactly the same as 01:50:451 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - but both sounds are quite different, this again doesn't make sense to me, if the song changes, map should change too in order to reflect those differences, but... everything looks like the same at this point (from 01:32:376 - )
01:56:451 (1,2,3,4,5) - feels undermapped tbh
02:06:613 (4,5,10,11) - any reason of stacking these? and no stacking 02:08:713 (4,5) - 02:09:613 (10,11) - ??? stacking them again on 02:10:813 (4,5) - but not on 02:11:713 (10,11) - break consistency
02:20:215 (10,12) - this is confusing since both slidershapes looks like the same but they have different timing, one it's 1/2 and the other it´s 1/4, so.. when playing you might think that the second one it's also 1/2 + there's thay "WOOO" on 02:20:440 (11,12) - so why mapping it the same way?
02:43:315 (4) - should be a single circle, breaks consistency. eg you used kickslider on 02:43:315 (4) - but also on 02:44:515 (6) - but both sounds r quite different
02:44:365 (5,6,7) - awkward flow too, take care of that, and... if you used such awkward flow to emphasize certain sound, try to make it consistent, 02:45:415 (5,6,7) - again here you have the same thing with a better flow and.. without a kickslider 02:45:565 (6) -
02:49:915 (9,10,1) - shouldn't these have more spacing ? just like you did on 02:47:665 (7,8,9,10,1) -
02:52:165 (1,3) - shouldn't be stacked, the song doesn't do that back and forth thing, 02:52:165 (1,3) - beats are different, in this case I recommend smth like.. stack 02:52:165 (1,2) - instead because both have same sound
03:04:165 (4,5) - take care of this, is not... 1/6? wait.. is this.. 1/12 or smth? it sounds like 1/4 to me.. and according to aimod, there's something messed up there http://prntscr.com/g5ljj9
03:24:499 (9,1) - this spacing looks more like 1/6 than 1/4 which ruins the change of spacing on 03:24:874 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - to make it looks like 1/6
03:59:814 (4,5) - maybe nc on 04:00:114 (5) - to make the difference on rythm? this being 1/1 but looks like 1/2
04:15:114 (1,2,3,4,5) - all these have toooo much spacing considering their timing
04:22:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same shape used on 1/4 streams, less spacing doesn't really help it to make it looks like 1/6 since you have a lot of spacing variety on 1/4..
04:24:714 (2,3,4) - awkward flow
04:25:014 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - why all this plays the same, you should increase spacing by each pattern just like song does, increase it's intensity
04:28:764 (5) - http://prntscr.com/g5lmle could blank better
some streams in the last section could look and play better, this for example 04:56:373 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - looks terrible, imo.. it fits the song in some way but idk, are the streams ugly on purpose?
also try to take care of aesthetics of the map, try to use similar patterns for similar parts of the song being different for different parts, but same in where music is the same, the map looks messy, but I hope this mod helps with that
GL
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