nice quote desu ~Ichigaki wrote:
Kehidupan yang dipenuhi serpihan kenangan ini tak lekang dari anugerah-Nya yang selalu ada untuk setiap penghuni dunia fana.
nice quote desu ~Ichigaki wrote:
Kehidupan yang dipenuhi serpihan kenangan ini tak lekang dari anugerah-Nya yang selalu ada untuk setiap penghuni dunia fana.
DoNotMess wrote:
M4M
00:29:414 (29414|1) - ghost // Nggak sih, kedengaran ko
00:40:915 - sini +2 ada suara // Okay, missed
00:46:332 - bagian sini bkin trill ato jack aja mnurut gw // Pretty good option
01:38:497 (98497|0,98552|1,98608|2,98663|3,98997|0,99052|1,99108|2,99163|3,99663|0,99719|1,99775|2) - gw gk ngerti 1/6 nya buat apa. kick nya 1/4 smua, suara static nya? // Iya, static ww
01:48:997 (108997|3) - remove? gda beda ama sbelumnya // menurutku di situ lebih ada tekanan sih, jadi keep aja
01:50:330 (110330|3) - ^ // ^
01:58:330 (118330|3,118372|2,118413|1,118455|0) - ? // piano static (?), jelas
02:15:997 (135997|2,136052|1,136108|0) - 1/4 disini // static 1/6
02:19:663 (139663|3,139663|2,139663|0) - mungkin 1 remove aja. bukan crash // okk
02:30:997 (150997|1,150997|0,150997|3,151330|1,151330|0,151330|2) - jdiin 2 note aja, gda kick // okk
02:44:997 (164997|0) - 02:45:330 - ln nya hrusnya disini berhenti / oh ya, sip sip
03:36:913 (216913|0) - ghost? // nope, masih suara lanjutan
04:09:161 - +3 buat bedain ama suara sblumnya // nggak perlu sih ._.
05:17:237 - snare
05:19:820 (319820|0) - ilangin aja 05:19:987 (319987|2,319987|1,320154|2,320154|0) - bedain ama suara ini // sama sih ._.
06:20:878 - missing // kk
06:57:103 (417103|1,417103|0,417178|2,417178|3,417290|1,417290|0,417403|2,417403|3,417478|0,417478|1,417590|3,417590|2,417703|0,417703|1) - awkward.. mnding 1 instrumen aja disini drpd dipaksain polyrhythm , jack 12 34 34 12 34 34 // kk
07:36:628 (456628|0,456628|1,456703|2,456703|3) - ghost... // obviously have sound
07:44:278 (464278|0) - ghost // no, kedengaran
07:44:353 - 1/6 / no, ngikut piano
07:57:703 - stream aja sih mnurut gw buat emphasis transitionnya // no
10:42:401 - bkin ln di kolom 4? // ok
really fun map, tp bnyk ghost note, gw cuman point out yg bner" kliatan doang yg lain unsure.. // instrument yang dipake xi mesti banyak wkwk, sering nutup, padahal ada.
goodluck! // Thanks!
Adot wrote:
hey ichi o/fastmodinschoolsoridikit
- 00:41:832 - kasih triple note. similiar ama 00:40:082 - 00:40:499 - 00:40:749 - dst // I'd rather to keep anyway, nggak terlalu masalah menurutku
- 01:14:832 (74832|1) - dijadiin LN 1/2 buat layer suara bell nya? // Nope, mending biasa aja. Anyway aku nambahin note di 01:14:748 -
- 01:56:580 (116580|0,116580|2,116580|3) - jadiin dobel aja. dropnya lemah. agak weird kalo jadi tiga // Iya juga sih, oke
- 02:13:830 - sama kek yg pertama? kalo di apply sih // Yang pertama nggak, jadinya nggak juga
- 04:03:385 (243385|3,243412|2) - wut is dis. doesnt make sense. 04:03:385 (243385|3) - dihapus aja apa kalo ga dipindah snapnya // Itu aku ngikut dua-duanya (main rhythm 1/3 sama hithat 1/4), imo sih kalo dimainin nggak terlalu nampak juga
- 04:30:714 (270714|0,270742|1) - ^ sama // ^
- 04:49:156 - triple juga bro. ngikutin suara kick yg di sini 04:48:823 - juga // Oke
- 05:33:320 (333320|3) - gak dipanjangin aja ngikutin synth? sekalian aja. // Sip sip
- 05:37:986 (337986|1,337986|3,338069|2,338153|0,338153|3,338153|1) - seharusnya di sini patternya urut single dobel triple. 05:37:986 - di sini gak ada drop bass. jadi seharusnya 05:37:986 (337986|3,337986|1,338069|2) - ini dobel triplenya kebalik. sori kalo gamudeng gabisa kirim ss,, inet ccd // Got it, paham kok
- 05:46:735 (346735|0) - 05:47:818 (347818|2) - hapus bruh biar transisi ke jumptrill selanjutnya ena // Will change later
sori dikit. gak worth buat 10 menit. // I appreciate it. Thank you
Thank you!Tofu1222 wrote:
Hi Ichi owo
[Serpihan Dunia]Just some random mods. Sorry for this short. Anyway I really hope this masterpiece to get ranked! Good Luck!
- Suggested Double Notes for Chord at the beginning part: 00:02:381 (2381|0) - 00:03:329 (3329|3) - 00:04:308 (4308|1) - 00:05:251 (5251|3) - 00:06:201 (6201|2) - 00:14:100 (14100|3) - 00:16:221 (16221|0) - added all of these
- 00:20:665 (20665|0,20665|3) - I blieve double notes should not be placed here cuz no stronger sounds appear. Rather u need double for these 00:19:999 - 00:20:332 - I'm layering both the piano and the electronic sound anyway
- 00:27:664 - better triple like 00:26:831 - cuz multiple piano sounds mix together surely
- 04:34:824 (274824|3,275047|3,275269|3) - it is obvious that these three sounds are different pitches so maybe put LNs in different columns according to the pitches seems nice
- 04:53:822 - u need a LN here too like 04:53:489 (293489|0,293572|2,293656|1,293739|3) - well added
- 06:11:103 - miss a note added too
Also, Star for you!
Thanks!!!Arzenvald wrote:
mashallah di lanjut ternyata gan
00:19:999 (19999|0,20040|1,20082|2,20123|3,20165|1) - 00:20:332 (20332|3,20373|0,20415|1,20457|2,20498|3) - burstnya rada vague, mungkin klo menurut RC skrg bisa jadi unrankable, tapi fit somehow D: // wwww, biarin aja dah
02:05:497 (125497|2) - 02:05:663 (125663|3) - possibly ghost, also klo di remove lebih sensible // removed
02:26:163 (146163|3) - remove, anchor (dan low beat) // removed
02:59:497 (179497|3) - add di 3 gk terlalu overkill *runs* // boljug sih wkwkwkwkwkwk
03:30:663 (210663|2,210705|0,210747|1,210788|2,210830|3) - etc. kyk di atas // okay
03:58:996 (238996|0,239162|0,239329|0,239496|0,239662|0,239829|0,239996|0,240162|0) - imba anchor sama kol. 2 & 3 // dah dibenerin
04:21:826 (261826|1,261826|0,261882|3,261882|2,261938|1,261938|0,261993|2,261993|3) - why double tho D: // dah diganti juga nih, seru sih sebenere :>
05:47:818 (347818|1,347818|0,347902|3,347902|2) - double jack for intensity pls https://puu.sh/wLSBt/bd2288d4c4.png biar pp nya gk bisa di mash // nice there!
06:48:853 - missing // ada apaan ya?
07:17:053 (437053|3,437353|0) - remove ae, kyknya di 2 beat ini gk perlu pake double dulu, biar ada build up ke 07:17:653 (437653|3,437953|0) - // boljug lagi nih, sip sip
07:18:778 (438778|2) - remove, buat emphasize piano di sekitarnya // removed
10:15:701 (615701|3) - remove, anchor (dan emphasize next beat) // removed
Rido wrote:
mod berdatangan~ jangan berharap banyak2 ea chia- 00:20:915 (20915|3,20998|2,21082|1) - jadiin trill 2 3 2, biar bisa bedain mana efek bssst (burst) sama piano (1/4) // meh ini gue malah kepikiran buat ganti pattern sebelumnya, tapi bagian pianonya aku jadiin trill sih
- 00:30:498 - mungkin dari sini bisa dikasih tambahan note di tiap 1/2, buat emphasize piano yg juga ke emphasize di bagian ini // iya sih, dulu fokus 1/2nya doang dan gue pikir LN aja cukup. gue nemu pattern yang enak sekarang.
- 00:58:998 (58998|3,59082|2,59165|3,59165|1,59248|2,59332|1) - inconsistent sama ini 01:12:332 (72332|2,72415|1,72415|3,72498|2,72582|1,72665|3,72665|2) - padahal menurutku pattern drumnya sama // untuk ini aku udah nemu pattern yang cocok, juga disamakan ke nada serupa setelahnya
- 01:32:330 - tambah note di 1 biar konsisten sama part berikutnya 01:33:163 (93163|1,93163|0,93163|2,93830|1,93830|0,93830|3) - // daripada ditambah, mending aku jadiin 2 semua
- 02:12:913 - 02:13:080 - sengaja dikosingin? // imo emang kosong wkwkwk
- 03:26:497 - kyknya ini jg hrs dikasih 1/4 ln, soalnya ada suara lonceng juga // sure
- 03:37:163 - ^ // sure
- 03:42:497 - ^ (tp yg ini minor sih soalnya nanti flownya jelek) //ya, ini gausah
- 04:31:742 (271742|2) - remove? // buat apa toh dihapus? aku ngerasa pas kok itu
- 08:22:678 (502678|1,502828|1) - ghost note // mungkin yang note pertama aja yang ghost note, setelahnya masih kedengeran
Thank you fellows, have my kudos.TheNewBungping wrote:
10 mins of awesomeness // thank you!
1|2|3|4Serpihan DuniaFirst off - https://puu.sh/zf78f/1ac97d3882.jpg
00:04:308 - move note here from 3 to 1 for balance // pretty much good
00:16:221 (16221|2) - move this note from 3 to 4 for PR and also pls consider changing it to LN and end it at 00:19:762 - (on 1/8 snap) // that's a nice idea
00:30:498 - , 00:30:664 - , 00:30:831 - , 00:30:998 - , 00:31:164 - , 00:31:331 - , 00:31:498 - I suggest adding another note because there's 2 octaves playing for piano here. // added as the prior mod above
00:39:999 - add a note on 3 for consistency with 00:38:665 -
02:11:997 - ^ // nice catch, same as above
04:22:826 - add a "Clap" hitsound here // added there
06:51:328 - a piano sound here, suggestion to add it // i'm gonna leave it like what it is now ww
1/2/3/4
355891,612.244897959184,4,2,1,30,1,0
356503,625,4,2,1,30,1,0
356971,1000,4,2,1,30,1,0
357471,967.741935483871,4,2,1,30,1,0
357954,666.666666666667,4,2,1,30,1,0
358287,612.244897959184,4,2,1,30,1,0
358899,594.059405940594,4,2,1,30,1,0
360681,612.244897959184,4,2,1,30,1,0
362211,576.923076923077,4,2,1,30,1,0
362787,652.173913043478,4,2,1,30,1,0
363113,588.235294117647,4,2,1,30,1,0
_VianK_ wrote:
hai kak '-')/
M4M dari thread1/2/3/4
dunia yang pecah
00:02:381 (2381|0) - suara whistle nya ngapain sih....? hapus aja sama suara suara yang ada whistle nya // ok
00:10:537 - kayak nya ada suara deh // aku dulu dengernya cuma 6 note, ternyata kedengeran 7 wkwk
00:14:100 (14100|2) - same problem // ada apa emangnya?
00:20:221 (20221|2,20276|1) - hapus, trus adain note bagian situ soalnya disitu 1/4 // oh nggak, ini imo jelas 1/6, justru ga cocok kalo pake 1/4
00:38:499 (38499|0,38499|2,38499|3,38665|3,38749|1,38749|0,38749|2,38832|3,38999|0,38999|3,38999|2) - rearrange dikit aje, buat ngehindari stack // loh ini mah sengaja
01:00:248 - napa nggak di cover? suaranya sama kayak yang ini 01:00:082 (60082|3) - // terlalu kecil suaranya, ga di map juga ga masalah
03:29:330 (209330|0,209330|2,209497|3,209497|1,209663|3,209663|2,209830|1,209830|2) - untuk bagian yang kayak gini w liat semua nya ke arah kiri, trus patternnya juga rada monoton, tolong dong kak variasiin dikit // karena nadanya makin kecil, makanya ke arah kiri semua. also itu udah bervariasi patternnya
03:30:830 (210830|3,210886|1,210941|0,210997|3) - 1/4 snap 03:31:163 (211163|0) - add 1 (jadiin 2) 03:31:219 (211219|3,211274|2,211330|0,211386|1,211441|2) - 1/4 snap
// itu semua bzz bzznya aku ambil 1/8, trus setelahnya itu rata-rata 1/6 kecuali 03:31:163 - (baru sadar kalo cuma 1/2), also 03:31:580 - ternyata 1/8 sampe 03:31:663 -
03:31:997 (211997|2,211997|1) - ini ngapain 2 note? satu aja gih.... soalnya suaranya mirip ama 03:32:330 (212330|2) - tapi ini cuman 1 note // ya ini aku jadiin satu note aja deh, beda sendiri juga. aku dengernya ini hampir sama kaya 1/2 note sebelum dan sesudahnya sih, tapi yaudah lah
03:34:497 (214497|3) - mantap ini dikasih LN ampe 03:35:830 - sama juga buat bagian - bagian lainnya // ga cocok
dah itu aja...sorry ya // mmkay, thanks
Maxus wrote:
[Butiran Debu]
00:08:122 (8122|1) - this note felt awkward, its supposed to be at 00:08:143 - , try look at 00:08:143 - // lmao, definitely missed this
00:20:665 (20665|3,20721|1,20776|2) - Try 2-3-4 here? felt the pattern will overall flow better // yeah, that's nice
00:30:998 - Felt the pattern will accentuate the pitch better if you do https://puu.sh/zhbjN/c6d441e476.png instead. // perfect
00:49:415 (49415|2,49498|0) - Personally prefer to be at col 1 and col 3 instead here coz the current shield pattern kinda out of place. // yeah, okay
00:58:887 (58887|2,58943|1) - Isn't the snap supposed to be 1/8? i heard 3 sound coming instead of 2 here. // sorry, but i heard 2 note instead
01:26:248 - think you should add note here, quite obvious sound here. well, rearranged
01:33:163 - should add another note here, cause you also make double+LN at 01:30:497 - // ah i missed this
02:11:163 (131163|3,131247|2,131330|1,131413|0,131497|2,131497|3,131580|1,131663|0,131663|3,131747|2,131830|1,131830|3,131830|0) - Prefer if you actually Ctrl+H here, since you mirror between 02:09:330 - and 02:10:663 - , i figure this one should too , otherwise being the same pattern as 02:09:830 - makes it doesn't blend well with the piano pitch which is already different. // yeah agree with that, seems i forgot to change this one earlier lmao
02:23:830 - Should be double cause have same sound as 02:22:830 - // okay
03:00:997 - Should be double note here if follow consistency at 03:03:663 - and 03:06:330 - // okay
03:20:663 - think you can do small LN pattern like you did at 03:25:997 - // i got it
03:26:330 - This pattern should be different with 03:25:997 - due to quite distinct pitch differences here, try https://puu.sh/zhfZl/fcdb79852e.png //not a fan with that pattern, rearranged instead
03:30:663 - Felt the snap around here is really weird ._. , for instances, 03:30:997 - should be at same snap as 03:30:663 - , and 03:31:497 - have 1/8 again here, if i try to do the snap, i will do it like https://puu.sh/zhgtQ/43a7cd2684.png , you can try confirm with others, but i'm positive with this snap. // i did the exact timing except 03:31:247 (211247|3) - because i don't hear any sound there.
05:46:818 - I really prefer if you change how the LN placement every pitch changes, like this place and 05:47:818 - . like https://puu.sh/zhh1c/031876feed.png , it will makes the instrument more emphasized. // changed
05:55:891 - Isn't this supposed to be timed? (i mean, need additional red line), I think it needs it, try https://puu.sh/zhiSs/4e8151b473.png , or you can copy paste directly to the notepad:355891,612.244897959184,4,2,1,30,1,0
356503,625,4,2,1,30,1,0
356971,1000,4,2,1,30,1,0
357471,967.741935483871,4,2,1,30,1,0
357954,666.666666666667,4,2,1,30,1,0
358287,612.244897959184,4,2,1,30,1,0
358899,594.059405940594,4,2,1,30,1,0
360681,612.244897959184,4,2,1,30,1,0
362211,576.923076923077,4,2,1,30,1,0
362787,652.173913043478,4,2,1,30,1,0
363113,588.235294117647,4,2,1,30,1,0
// added those timings
06:54:028 - not sure if the small LN is intended or not, it feels come out of nowhere. // yeah it's intended, i heard whooping sound there, so it's fun to add a LN there
09:14:880 - Intended not get the timing? seems awkward this one suddenly not timed. // added the timing
09:24:351 (564351|0,564401|1) - I will make this 2-1 instead to make the change from 1/8 to 1/6 more apparent. // well that's nice
09:32:501 - This is a very good place to have 0,80x SV here, the moment immediately emphasized when having a bit slower SV. // sounds great
09:33:701 - if you do above, do 0,85x SV here.
09:46:001 (586001|3) - really recommend move this to col 2, so that there's break between minijack at 09:45:776 - and OH trill at 09:46:151 - // moved
09:50:651 (590651|0) - Will appreciate if this got moved to col 4, because it's too easy to stumbled here while this is already at minute 9, and its not really nice make players choked here. // moved
Really nice map here, it's nice getting marathon that keep things interesting for 10 minute , even 5 minute is quite rare already.
Call me back~
updated!Maxus wrote:
just a bit more , about wrong snap problem
08:50:868 (530868|1) - this one should be at 08:50:910 -
09:05:214 (545214|0) - same, should be at 09:05:248 -
10:22:601 - It's 1/8 piano i think? it should be like https://puu.sh/zj57B/fcab4585c5.png
THANKS!Maxus wrote:
Good luck here!
you can use online translator, it already got the meaning imoqqqant wrote:
tfw indo in the description cant read
translation pls?
DE-CADE wrote:
06:04:598 - Unsnapped Timing Line
nothing else, according to your current timing
06:03:113 - Mnurut w ini bpmnya 101 bkan 102 dan bpm100nya snap di 06:04:895 ,pattern setelah timing ini klo mnurut gw sih agak telat.
also soft-hitnormal pls wkwkwk, old style banget.. probably u get this hs feedback issue lmao
should find someone who capable to check those timing too
Tofu1222 wrote:
4K:1|2|3|4
[Serpihan Dunia]
- 01:12:578 (72578|3) - I feel this seems like a ghost note. I'd prefer you delete it and use double on 01:12:495 - to emphasize the presented drum, which also resembles the previous rhythms like from 01:10:328 - | I think I'll keep it that way, the flow is kinda nice
- 01:23:161 - Same as 01:12:495 - | same reason as above
- 01:38:549 (98549|1,98598|2) - I think they are wrongly snapped. Should be on 01:38:577 - and 01:38:619 - in 1/8, but also on 01:38:619 - it is not a drum but a slash sound so I guess for consistency of mapping to drums, you can simply map 01:38:577 - on this spot in all only if you want. | Will also keep this, i think it's not a must to always follow the drum for some part like this.
- 02:30:576 - 02:31:076 - Dunno but you can possibly catch the drum sounds if you want. | would be weird for the current pattern
- 02:51:909 - 02:52:409 - Same suggestion as 02:30:576 - 02:31:076 - | same as above
everything that weren't answered are applied
Will complete further later. | I'll wait for it
Tofu1222 wrote:
4K:1|2|3|4
[Serpihan Dunia]
- 03:31:430 (211430|2,211764|1) - I don't really hear why there is a difference in snaps of these two notes from others. Shouldn't they be on 1/6? | okay, changed this part
- 03:35:930 (215930|1,216430|2) - So do they. I don't really feel any difference to put them in 1/16 instead of 1/6. | same as above
- 03:47:409 - The sound here is essentially the same as 03:46:076 - , so I suggest reverting the double into single. changed this also
- 04:02:243 (242243|2,242930|1) - Shouldn't they be on 1/6? 04:03:264 (243264|3) - Same. | yeah right
- 04:02:604 - Add note for the melody. | sure
- 04:03:076 - Add note for the bass. | sure
- 04:11:096 (251096|1) - Same thing regarding 1/6. | ok
- 04:21:928 (261928|2) - 04:30:594 (270594|1) - 04:33:259 (273259|0) - 04:33:926 (273926|0) - 04:34:592 (274592|3) - 04:35:259 (275259|3) - 04:36:259 (276259|1) - 04:36:592 (276592|2) - 04:37:592 (277592|1,277759|1,277926|1,278092|1) - 04:41:925 (281925|3,282092|1) - 04:42:592 (282592|1) - 04:45:759 (285759|1) - 04:46:925 (286925|1) - ^ | idk why i keep getting this unsnapped thing lol, thank goodness you point it all
- 04:51:591 (291591|1) - Even though this is wrongly snapped, I'd rather suggest you delete this as to focus more on drums as you only catch this sound as melody, which would mislead the players. | i think i'll just make it in 1/3
- 04:58:696 (298696|2) - Should be on 04:58:710 - for the main melody. | ok
- 04:59:863 (299863|3,299863|2,299926|0,299926|1,300030|0,300092|1) - Should all be on 1/6. | ok
- 05:03:362 (303362|1) - 05:11:592 (311592|1,311696|2) - 05:12:696 (312696|1,312758|2) - 05:35:321 (335321|3,335425|1,335529|2,335592|1,335696|3,335758|2) - 05:39:924 (339924|1,340028|2,340257|1,340361|2,340590|2,340694|3,340924|2,341028|1) - 05:45:153 (345153|2,345257|3,345361|2) - ^ | ok
- 05:57:473 (357473|2) - More accurate on 05:57:448 - , 1/12. | ok
- 06:30:300 (390300|2,390600|2,390900|2) - 06:35:700 (395700|0) - 06:56:400 (416400|1) - 07:00:900 (420900|1) - 07:13:200 (433200|2) - 1/6 | ok
- 07:16:894 (436894|2,436931|3,436969|1,437006|0,437044|2,437119|3,437194|1,437231|0,437269|3,437306|2,437344|1,437419|3,437494|0,437531|1,437569|3,437606|2,437644|0,437719|1,437794|3,437831|2,437869|0,437906|1,437944|3) - The whole snaps are wrong. They should all be 1/6 instead of 1/8, like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12068324 | ok, but changed a little bit different
- 07:21:169 (441169|3) - 07:22:819 (442819|2) - Ghost notes. | I do agree for the first one, i definitely hear sounds on 07:22:819
- 07:24:469 - Miss a note. | ok
- 07:53:099 (473099|3,473099|2,473099|0,473699|0,473699|3,473699|1) - Should be snapped to 1/6. | ok
- 07:54:393 - 07:54:468 - You miss two melody sounds. | ok
- 07:55:293 - 07:55:368 - 07:55:443 - 07:55:518 - Some more melodic sounds to be caught. Though they are fainter than the others, they are still quite noticeable. | ok
- 08:06:993 (486993|3) - I really feel that this sound ends 08:07:293 - here. The extending sounds are from a new one, which does not belong to this LN. | ok
- 08:12:299 (492299|3,492299|0,492299|2,492899|2,492899|1,492899|3) - 1/6 | ok
- 08:13:593 - 08:13:668 - 08:14:493 - 08:14:568 - 08:14:643 - 08:14:718 - Same missing melodies as above. | ok
- 08:22:693 (502693|2,502799|1) - They do not snap to anything here. If you wanna catch the light kick, notes should be on 08:22:743 - and 08:22:818 - . If only melody, the just on 08:22:743 - . | I changed this a little bit different
- 08:27:843 - 08:27:993 - According to the rhythms you preferred later, you should have notes for melodies here. | ok
- 09:31:071 - You forget a kick here. | ok
- 09:39:994 - 09:40:069 - 09:40:894 - 09:40:969 - 09:41:044 - 09:41:119 - Same missing melodies as pointed before. | ok
- 09:59:194 - 09:59:269 - 10:00:094 - 10:00:169 - 10:00:244 - 10:00:319 - ^ | ok
- 10:05:269 - This note does not map to any drum and also rhythmically does not fit with your later patterns. After changing this I think you can also make 10:05:419 (605419|1) - into double with some rearrangements.
- 10:20:394 - 10:20:694 - 10:20:994 - 10:21:294 - 10:21:594 - Just a suggestion, but you can make doubles for these newly appeared kicks, which would show the progression of this part. | ok
- 10:22:631 (622631|1,622669|2,622706|3,622744|0,622781|1,622819|2,622894|0) - Again, entirely wrong snaps. Should be mapped to 1/6 all the way and have no note on 10:22:894 - | ok
- 10:30:244 (630244|0,630319|1) - 10:30:694 (630694|3,630769|2) - Ghost notes for real. | ok
- 10:30:919 - Need a note for melody. | ok
- 10:35:569 - 10:35:719 - 10:35:869 - Some minor melodies that are worth catching. | ok
Finally finished. Good luck!
Tofu1222 wrote:
4K:1|2|3|4
[Serpihan Dunia]
- 01:12:578 (72578|3) - You may need a W just like 01:23:245 - .
- 02:16:076 (136076|1,136576|1) - Feel that these two notes should not be there as only 1/6 is present. I'm pretty sure it does exist, but feels weird now after you said that lol
- 02:54:659 (174659|0) - How about moving it to col4 for balance? (Mentioned last time but I think you forgot to fix this.) yeah sure
- 07:18:044 (438044|2) - Need a W here.
- 07:24:469 (444469|1) - W
- 08:27:693 - Some pattern suggestions from here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12078320 It avoids stacks and also flows well. Cool, re-arranged for this section
- 09:31:071 (571071|1) - W
- 09:59:194 - I'd suggest a pattern like this here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12078303 It prevents unnecessary long stacks and also make sure that the first and second one having the same pattern, as what you did for previous cases. Yeah, re-arranged the other one too just to make it balance. Actually this one is good suggestion
- 10:22:744 (622744|3,622844|1) - W
- 10:31:444 (631444|2) - This note is too faint to be caught here, and actually without it for me the rhythms here go even better. Yeah, i guess so
Make sure that you recheck hitsounds because for some notes you added you forgot the hitsounds on them.
Tofu1222 wrote:
Great fix. Just this one you forget to
01:12:578 (72578|3) - You may need a W just like 01:23:245 - .
After this will qualify~
v1 timeqqqant wrote:
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