Blocko wrote:

hi there uhh i kinda forgot about your black and white map you asked me to mod so uhh heres a mod

you should probably change the diff names to something better and something that at least relates to the song though

[four key]
00:38:895 - Snap kinda conflicts with the 7K diff, might wanna check that out. // fixed

01:11:707 (71707|1,72020|0,72332|2) - You could extend these to 1/1 LNs to highlight those synths. // tasty, ok

01:37:176 (97176|2,97176|3) - Following the way you patterned out this section, shouldn't this be a single note? // the kicks that has 1/1 distance from snare has doubles, and the 1/2 distance only 1 note, but emphasized by anchor, dunno whether the odd is a good idea

02:28:895 - to 02:31:395 - Feels a bit left hand biased. You could balance this out by moving 02:29:363 (149363|0) - and 02:30:613 (150613|0) - to 4. // done

03:16:395 (196395|3) - Move to 3 to avoid that long 5-note anchor. // the anchor was intended tho, but either way fixed

04:07:332 (247332|1) - Move to 3 again to avoid anchoring. // ok

04:25:848 (265848|2,265926|0,266004|2,266082|1,266160|2,266238|3) - Rearrange to 1|3|2|3|2|3 to avoid that somewhat long trill at the right side.

04:33:113 (273113|2) - Move to 4 for anchor avoidance.

[seven key]
00:30:457 (30457|5,30613|2) - Are you following the reverse cymbal here? I initially thought you were going for the vocal, so this was a bit confusing. // yea, its somehow contrast enough to be layered

00:40:242 (40242|2,40301|0) - Sounds more like a 1/12 triplet grace if I'm hearing that correctly.

00:45:340 (45340|2) - Can't really seem to hear a sound that supports this. Also, move 00:45:379 (45379|4) - down to 00:45:359 - to follow the piano.

01:53:270 - This part could use more notes for that drum.

02:17:723 (137723|4) - I'm not really hearing a sound there.

02:53:895 - to 02:56:238 - Part seems to be a bit heavy on the left hand. You could move 02:54:363 (174363|2,174441|1) - to 4,5 and move 02:55:301 (175301|1) - to 5 to alleviate that and to make a slightly broken stair pattern.

02:56:629 (176629|6,176707|6) - Idk, I'm not really feeling this mini-jack. This feels like an unexpected pattern that completely contradicts the flow this map has, and it's uncomfortable to transition after on the right hand. It'd be better if you could rearrange it to something like 04:42:801 - so it highlights the kick and also makes the overall pattern much better to play.

03:11:395 - Feels alright for right hand but really biased on the left. It's really tricky to do trills using the ring/index finger and thumb.
I'd suggest using this pattern to create some hand balance with the patterns. It's not as concrete as it previously was, but at least it makes it easier for the left hand to play through. // rearranged with my own pattern, symmetrical but somehow with more aesthetic C:

03:52:645 - I think it'd be neat if this pattern can be the exact mirror pattern of 03:51:395 - just for asymmetry and also to accentuate the piano chords.

04:44:363 (284363|4) - Turn this into two 1/4 LNs for that piano.

Pretty fun map. Good luck!

YaHao wrote:

Mod why not
[The 4K one]
00:07:645 (7645|0) - smh feels this Ln should start at 00:07:488 - // i caught reversed cymbal here, gud addition uwu
00:19:520 - add a new LN here? as you can hear the changing pitch on the main sound // added, in 7K too
00:29:441 - img make it more evil // hhh
01:05:926 (65926|2,66082|3) - arent they same pitch? // ok
01:52:801 - hmm... these two are the same pitch 01:52:801 (112801|3,112879|0) - , so jacking these two 01:52:879 (112879|0,112957|0) - plays kinda weird imo // ooo ok
02:56:551 - same here // done
03:32:332 (212332|0,212332|1,212488|2,212488|3) - same col pls ;w; // intended tho :^) moved anyway

qqqant wrote:

map sucks, bg also sucks

Pachiru wrote:

qqqant wrote:

map sucks, bg also sucks

No need to be rude like this-

Arzenvald wrote:

its a meme lol
qqqant lemme borrow some keysound for reference pls

Kawawa wrote:

Sorry! as an old request. and I did not see 4K. // no problem

[7K]
01:28:895 - to 01:33:895 - This part is too weak.
I recommend you to add some notes more. I can actually feel the climax of the song but the note density is reversed.
It was not impressed me at all how it goes feel climax // i made more anchor without adding more density instead, can add some more density but i want to make some identity about simpler map, with lesser note density, at least for mediocre player like me haha

01:57:645 (117645|6,117801|6,117957|6,118113|6,118270|6,118426|6,118582|6,118738|6) - was annoying.
01:58:426 (118426|6) - move to 5 and 01:58:504 (118504|4) - move to 6. It would be better. (Column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7)

02:07:645 - Same thing with above. // there's a tick sound i try to mimick with that anchored stair, i think its a common pattern that rarely used so i go with that pattern, moved some notes in 01:58:582 - instead to reduce the anchor

02:21:395 - It is intended for the next kick structure but kinda so weird by sudden empty rhythm.
so I think you can improve this anyway.
// yeah, it was intended. i want to 'emphasize' the kick that stands out more, because after 02:18:895 - i can hear that the other instrument slowly fading out into percussion, arranged some notes anyway

02:47:020 (167020|6,167020|0,167098|1,167098|5,167176|4,167176|2,167254|1,167254|5,167332|6,167332|0,167410|1,167410|5,167488|2,167488|4,167566|1,167566|5,167645|0) -
I really don't get it of this meaning. I mean it is not suitable for me as an expression for this place.
I actually became a double stream but It does not have that weight and I don't know how the trill stairs feel as a player. // should i raise the pattern difficulty / spikiness in here?


03:01:395 - to 03:07:645 - To be honest, I don't get it why this part should be harder density.
this part is kinda calm from last climax 02:57:645 -
The LNs and note density with patterns you used in this part are too heavy than the part's mood.

03:11:395 - to 03:12:645 - obviously not good. The pattern did not exactly mean that a kind of expression.

04:18:895 - Same thing with 01:28:895 - too weak.

Last burst LNs are depend on each skills. so I'm fine but some are annoying.
04:59:363 (299363|3,299520|2,299676|1,299754|3,299832|0,299910|3,299988|0) -
05:02:801 (302801|6,302879|5,302957|4,302957|6) -
// fixed, least anchor-y & bracket-y on both part!

I considered the rhythm that how feel as a player and the relationship of climax density with surrounding structure.
I think it will be subjective but It's valid a quite. when the map revived I hope it helpful.