[A R M I N]
01:25:357 (8,1) - this stream corner here doesn't look good. Do something like this instead? https://i.gyazo.com/e642ce207db7de3428b ... 41312b.jpg
[Extra]
00:56:713 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this feels like you're following the melody, but then now 00:59:266 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1) - feels like it's following the background guitar. imo follow the melody all the way through.
00:59:904 (3,4) - doesn't look pretty tbh, i have no suggestions so u can ignore this if u want.
01:23:521 (2) - the drop in rhythm density feels a little off; there are piano sounds u can still follow.
01:26:872 (2,3,1) - nitpicky here: could make into a perfect triangle for aesthetics. or if you want emphasis on that last note, could make it farther at around x490 y30. Cuz right now it looks at little underwhelming for being a really strong last note.
[Sotarks' Expert]
00:00:543 (1,2,3,4) - Can you check over this pattern? It doesn't seem like you copy+pasted & rotated cleanly.
00:06:925 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - really like this patter, but i wonder why you didn't do it at 00:12:032 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - . The usage of the pattern overlap really stands out for that particular part of the music. I would prefer you use that pattern overlap again at the 2nd instance.
00:42:830 (6,7) - Would prefer if the spacing here was more emphasized.
00:53:042 (6,7) - ^
01:27:191 (4) - soft-finish here?
[Shira's Insane]
Would rather have NC at 00:02:617 (4) or 00:02:457 (3) rather than 00:01:500 (1) - (like the higher diffs). Nothing special at 00:01:500 (1) - for an NC
00:04:213 (1,2) - these repeat sliders doesn't follow the percussion here very well, & tbh neither do 00:04:851 (3,4,5,6,7) - as well.
00:41:394 (1,2,3,4) - these 3/4 --> 1/2 slider rhythm suggests that you're trying to follow the vocals, but it's 1/2 beat late. All it's following here are just drum and snares. You did it correctly at 00:51:447 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -
00:43:947 (1,2,3,4) - ehh I wouldn't do the 3/4 slider thing here. I would just make it unique to the vocals at 00:41:234 - and 00:51:447 - . Otherwise it would feel overused.
01:01:819 (1,2,3,4) - why did you suddenly stopped following the melody here?
01:05:808 (2,4,6) - this line and spacing between each circle isn't perfect.
01:05:649 (1,3,5) - ^ also it should also be parallel to the 2,4,6. (copy pasta it)
01:09:000 (4,5) - spacing is relatively a bit too big here.
[Rocket's Hard]
00:02:617 (6,1) - kinda big spacing for a hard. The really low SV is a big reason for this.
00:05:649 (1) - should make into a repeat slider like you did at 00:08:202 (1) - for consistency (plus the sharp angle slider looks out of place).
00:08:043 - Don't see any reason to leave this beat blank. Should make 00:07:883 (4) - a slider just to keep up with the beat
00:12:032 (1,2) - similar reason as above, should just make the rhythm like 00:06:925 (1,2) -
00:14:745 - Another beat skipped for no reason, especially when the music starts to become more intense here.
00:20:968 (1) - why is there a random 3/2 repeat slider here?
00:27:191 (4,1) - spacing imo is a bit too high here. Happens at other places like at 00:29:425 (4,5) - 00:31:021 (4,1) - 00:31:979 (3,1) - 00:32:777 (2,3) - etc etc.
00:28:308 (4,1) - should have higher spacing to emphasize the downbeat on the white tick.
00:29:425 (4,5) - Not sure why there's big spacing here. 00:29:904 (1) - should have been the note that is emphasized.
01:17:138 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - cool pattern, but not appropriate in a Hard diff imo.
The spacing (emphasis) in many parts in this diff is what you normally see in Insane diffs, not in Hard. Also spacing at some parts of the song seem inappropriate (some have been pointed out above).
[Lafayla's Advanced]
00:16:340 - In this slow section, it looks like you're following the beats. Should make 00:16:340 - clickable if that's the case.
Following up on that, it feels weird to suddenly start following vocals at 00:23:043 (1,2,3) - and start skipping the beats like at 00:23:521 - and 00:24:798 -
00:37:564 (5) - 00:40:117 (5) - 00:47:777 (5) - 00:50:330 (5) - these 1/1 repeat sliders lowers the rhythm/clicking density when it shouldn't imo. I suggest making the rhythm like this (viewed at 00:37:564 - ): https://i.gyazo.com/09024354792aa9deef8 ... b1acd6.jpg
00:41:234 (1,2,3,4) - ^ similar reason above, these sliders alone make the rhythm really weak. maybe add some circles in between those sliders.
00:51:447 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:14:585 (1) - Should be just a 1/1 slider instead of 1/2 repeat. You can make 01:15:223 (3) - a 1/2 repeat instead.
01:23:202 (1,2,3) - should try to follow the vocals since it's more prominent than the piano. Also you ended up following the vocals at 01:24:798 - anyways
01:17:138 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try this rhythm instead, your current rhythm just feels weird IMO: https://i.gyazo.com/df4b911426e7b52a34e ... 2d0221.jpg
[Shogun's Normal]
00:20:968 (1) - you've been following those 3/2 beats, but this slider breaks that consistency.
^following up on that, it would be a 3/2 repeat slider spam, so if you decide to change this, you can alternate between a 3/2 repeat slider and 3/2 slider + circle.
00:31:021 (6,1,2,3,4) - I suggest making into this rhythm instead? (viewed at 00:32:138 - ): https://i.gyazo.com/380491a8c37469e719b ... e25863.jpg
01:19:372 (5) - just make into a circle tbh
[Renumi's Easy]
00:05:011 (4) - nothing wrong with making this a 1/1 slider. Should try not to introduce 1/2 rhythms in Easy if possible. Would make it more beginner friendly.
00:14:585 (3) - ^
00:06:925 (3) - IMO I wouldn't put a red anchor in these short sliders because it makes the sliders look really clumpy looking. If you're going to use them, at least put the red anchor more in the middle of the slider. Applies to all instances throughout the diff.
00:18:415 (1) - IMO avoid putting red anchors near the sliderhead/tail. It looks better like this imo: https://i.gyazo.com/fb48d86c80950681d53 ... 92f4aa.jpg
00:15:862 (1) - same^
Have fun.
01:25:357 (8,1) - this stream corner here doesn't look good. Do something like this instead? https://i.gyazo.com/e642ce207db7de3428b ... 41312b.jpg
[Extra]
00:56:713 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this feels like you're following the melody, but then now 00:59:266 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1) - feels like it's following the background guitar. imo follow the melody all the way through.
00:59:904 (3,4) - doesn't look pretty tbh, i have no suggestions so u can ignore this if u want.
01:23:521 (2) - the drop in rhythm density feels a little off; there are piano sounds u can still follow.
01:26:872 (2,3,1) - nitpicky here: could make into a perfect triangle for aesthetics. or if you want emphasis on that last note, could make it farther at around x490 y30. Cuz right now it looks at little underwhelming for being a really strong last note.
[Sotarks' Expert]
00:00:543 (1,2,3,4) - Can you check over this pattern? It doesn't seem like you copy+pasted & rotated cleanly.
00:06:925 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - really like this patter, but i wonder why you didn't do it at 00:12:032 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - . The usage of the pattern overlap really stands out for that particular part of the music. I would prefer you use that pattern overlap again at the 2nd instance.
00:42:830 (6,7) - Would prefer if the spacing here was more emphasized.
00:53:042 (6,7) - ^
01:27:191 (4) - soft-finish here?
[Shira's Insane]
Would rather have NC at 00:02:617 (4) or 00:02:457 (3) rather than 00:01:500 (1) - (like the higher diffs). Nothing special at 00:01:500 (1) - for an NC
00:04:213 (1,2) - these repeat sliders doesn't follow the percussion here very well, & tbh neither do 00:04:851 (3,4,5,6,7) - as well.
- example rhythm of what I would have used for this: https://i.gyazo.com/3bd7daaa71df8f111d4 ... b24006.jpg
- https://puu.sh/yTJff/d3ca0bb08a.mp4
00:41:394 (1,2,3,4) - these 3/4 --> 1/2 slider rhythm suggests that you're trying to follow the vocals, but it's 1/2 beat late. All it's following here are just drum and snares. You did it correctly at 00:51:447 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -
00:43:947 (1,2,3,4) - ehh I wouldn't do the 3/4 slider thing here. I would just make it unique to the vocals at 00:41:234 - and 00:51:447 - . Otherwise it would feel overused.
01:01:819 (1,2,3,4) - why did you suddenly stopped following the melody here?
01:05:808 (2,4,6) - this line and spacing between each circle isn't perfect.
01:05:649 (1,3,5) - ^ also it should also be parallel to the 2,4,6. (copy pasta it)
01:09:000 (4,5) - spacing is relatively a bit too big here.
[Rocket's Hard]
00:02:617 (6,1) - kinda big spacing for a hard. The really low SV is a big reason for this.
00:05:649 (1) - should make into a repeat slider like you did at 00:08:202 (1) - for consistency (plus the sharp angle slider looks out of place).
00:08:043 - Don't see any reason to leave this beat blank. Should make 00:07:883 (4) - a slider just to keep up with the beat
00:12:032 (1,2) - similar reason as above, should just make the rhythm like 00:06:925 (1,2) -
00:14:745 - Another beat skipped for no reason, especially when the music starts to become more intense here.
00:20:968 (1) - why is there a random 3/2 repeat slider here?
00:27:191 (4,1) - spacing imo is a bit too high here. Happens at other places like at 00:29:425 (4,5) - 00:31:021 (4,1) - 00:31:979 (3,1) - 00:32:777 (2,3) - etc etc.
00:28:308 (4,1) - should have higher spacing to emphasize the downbeat on the white tick.
00:29:425 (4,5) - Not sure why there's big spacing here. 00:29:904 (1) - should have been the note that is emphasized.
01:17:138 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - cool pattern, but not appropriate in a Hard diff imo.
The spacing (emphasis) in many parts in this diff is what you normally see in Insane diffs, not in Hard. Also spacing at some parts of the song seem inappropriate (some have been pointed out above).
[Lafayla's Advanced]
00:16:340 - In this slow section, it looks like you're following the beats. Should make 00:16:340 - clickable if that's the case.
Following up on that, it feels weird to suddenly start following vocals at 00:23:043 (1,2,3) - and start skipping the beats like at 00:23:521 - and 00:24:798 -
00:37:564 (5) - 00:40:117 (5) - 00:47:777 (5) - 00:50:330 (5) - these 1/1 repeat sliders lowers the rhythm/clicking density when it shouldn't imo. I suggest making the rhythm like this (viewed at 00:37:564 - ): https://i.gyazo.com/09024354792aa9deef8 ... b1acd6.jpg
00:41:234 (1,2,3,4) - ^ similar reason above, these sliders alone make the rhythm really weak. maybe add some circles in between those sliders.
00:51:447 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:14:585 (1) - Should be just a 1/1 slider instead of 1/2 repeat. You can make 01:15:223 (3) - a 1/2 repeat instead.
01:23:202 (1,2,3) - should try to follow the vocals since it's more prominent than the piano. Also you ended up following the vocals at 01:24:798 - anyways
01:17:138 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try this rhythm instead, your current rhythm just feels weird IMO: https://i.gyazo.com/df4b911426e7b52a34e ... 2d0221.jpg
[Shogun's Normal]
00:20:968 (1) - you've been following those 3/2 beats, but this slider breaks that consistency.
^following up on that, it would be a 3/2 repeat slider spam, so if you decide to change this, you can alternate between a 3/2 repeat slider and 3/2 slider + circle.
00:31:021 (6,1,2,3,4) - I suggest making into this rhythm instead? (viewed at 00:32:138 - ): https://i.gyazo.com/380491a8c37469e719b ... e25863.jpg
01:19:372 (5) - just make into a circle tbh
[Renumi's Easy]
00:05:011 (4) - nothing wrong with making this a 1/1 slider. Should try not to introduce 1/2 rhythms in Easy if possible. Would make it more beginner friendly.
00:14:585 (3) - ^
00:06:925 (3) - IMO I wouldn't put a red anchor in these short sliders because it makes the sliders look really clumpy looking. If you're going to use them, at least put the red anchor more in the middle of the slider. Applies to all instances throughout the diff.
00:18:415 (1) - IMO avoid putting red anchors near the sliderhead/tail. It looks better like this imo: https://i.gyazo.com/fb48d86c80950681d53 ... 92f4aa.jpg
00:15:862 (1) - same^
Have fun.