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Dixie Flatline feat. Megurine Luka - Just Be Friends

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年3月3日 at 22:38:11

Artist: Dixie Flatline feat. Megurine Luka
Title: Just Be Friends
Tags: 三重の人 mienohito EXIT TUNES PRESENTS Vocaloanthems(ボカロアンセムズ) feat.初音ミク Vocaloanthems Hatsune Miku 初音ミク -Project DIVA- 2nd Suzuki_1112 Ellyu
BPM: 128
Filesize: 7431kb
Play Time: 05:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Best Friend (4.17 stars, 819 notes)
Download: Dixie Flatline feat. Megurine Luka - Just Be Friends
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一点也不棒

mp3 edit by 1112 &Ellyu
Ellyu
[那你他妈很棒哦]
  1. 00:31:600 (1,2) - 跟后面一样改成折返吧。
  2. 01:02:772 (4) - 总觉得低bpm4叠在3尾巴上好玩且好看
  3. 01:05:819 (1) - 01:09:569 (1) - 把最后一次折返用一个圈代替会好玩很多,或者说你折返三次是故意的?有点不合曲。
  4. 01:06:639 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 蜜汁绕圈,flow有点无聊
  5. 01:16:834 (1,2) - 往左移一点,6和1的间距太小了
  6. 01:57:850 (8,9,10) - 这里间距不等是故意的还是怎么的,这种小变距略丑
  7. 02:09:686 (1) - 这个转盘结束在02:11:444 - 会比较好,因为在02:11:444 - 这里鼓音已经明显出来了,随便加四个circle还是什么的应该不难
  8. 02:28:319 (1,2,3,4) - 02:30:194 (1,2,3,4) - 跟第一段保持一致都nc吧
  9. 02:39:569 (1,2) - 1/2能不能放大些,跟02:38:397 (3,4) - 看起来都没区别了,用缩圈特难读
  10. 03:11:209 (1,2) - 没叠好
  11. 03:48:474 (4,1) - 少转了九十度,或者说少了个三连
  12. 03:53:631 (2) - nc
  13. 第三段副歌怎么没1/6了?
  14. 04:16:365 (6,7) - 这个叠起来没移动太难受了,弄个小三角或者直线多好
  15. 04:47:537 (3,4,5) - 自己叠自己叠太多了,跟整个谱面整体结构和氛围相去甚远
  16. 最后转盘越看越瞎,然后转盘尾你忘静音了
combo color没换,再加上暗绿色bg,这色调搭配看得我真难受。
-Atri-
niubi
Fushimi Rio
00:05:819 (2) - NC
00:12:850 (5) - 这听着像个五连 或者三连接note啥的
00:26:678 (2) - 其实我觉得ctrl+g舒服
00:59:256 (5) - NC
01:01:131 (5) - NC
01:14:022 (4) - 应该是二连吧
03:30:506 (4) - 最好不用滑条 容易按两下导致后面那个note早按
03:33:710 (5) - 这咋没上面那个梗了
04:11:678 (6,7) - 这么搞7其实挺强的 但是这里7没啥声音 我觉得6拉长到7这好点
Otosaka-Yu
还不飞?草你妈的
Mafumafu
Cute song!

[Best friend]
00:45:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Considering to adjusting this into a more apparent 2+2+2+2 or 2+2+4 patterns as per the vocals.
01:09:569 (1) - It is recommended to take this apart because 01:10:037 is strong enough for a slider head too!
01:30:428 (2) - Pretty overmapped. 03:00:428 (2) - Same
01:31:365 (5,1) - Considering an overlap like 01:32:772 (3,4) - .
01:43:787 (3,4) - Such a large spacing plays weird and abrupt amongst a series of spacings like 01:43:084 (5,1) -
01:49:881 (4,5,6,7) - Why suddenly four such sliders? It bursts the rhythm intensity without suitable reasons imo.
03:08:631 (1,2,3) - I would sincerely request to keep the spacings consistent across 03:08:631 (1,2,3) - and 03:09:569 (4,5,6,7) - .
03:30:506 (4) - This might cause potential readability issues for the current layout looks pretty like two circles.
03:31:131 (1,2) - These are not snapped. Also the stack of 03:31:014 (7,1) - prevents player from reading the reverse arrow clearly, which is definitely not allowed as per current ranking criteria.
03:40:037 (1) - 1/1 downbeats start to appear on this section so better map them out too.
03:50:819 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2) - Unnecessary and irrational difficulty spikes here. Strongly recommend to nerf them.
04:47:186 (2) - Not snapped. I'd like to recommend overlooking it just like 04:50:819 (1) - .
04:52:225 (4,5) - Place 4 in the middle? Better aesthetics. https://puu.sh/yFlLz/7b8aa785fb.png

Your current draining time is 4:59:532, which is not rankable. And you have already overdone the spinner extention. The actual draning time of this song is even shorter.
Fushimi Rio
我说什么来着
Shiratori
00:32:537 (1) - 后面节奏我觉得应该和00:31:600 (1,2) - 保持一致
01:06:287 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 一直在绕圈不太好吧
01:09:569 (1,2) - 重音踩circle 然后折返滑条
01:20:350 - 我认为这里开始才是kiai 而且这段节奏也有点稀疏
02:48:709 (1) - 缩短1/2然后在原来的位置加个circle
03:05:115 - 这里clickable?
03:45:194 (1,2,3,4) - 求你摆正
04:03:944 (2,3,4) - 我认为这仨音比1重 缩一下1-2的ds比较好

就这些
Topic Starter
z1085684963

Ellyu wrote:

[那你他妈很棒哦]
  1. 00:31:600 (1,2) - 跟后面一样改成折返吧。感觉不行
  2. 01:02:772 (4) - 总觉得低bpm4叠在3尾巴上好玩且好看感觉不行
  3. 01:05:819 (1) - 01:09:569 (1) - 把最后一次折返用一个圈代替会好玩很多,或者说你折返三次是故意的?有点不合曲。
  4. 01:06:639 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 蜜汁绕圈,flow有点无聊
  5. 01:16:834 (1,2) - 往左移一点,6和1的间距太小了我觉得可以
  6. 01:57:850 (8,9,10) - 这里间距不等是故意的还是怎么的,这种小变距略丑
  7. 02:09:686 (1) - 这个转盘结束在02:11:444 - 会比较好,因为在02:11:444 - 这里鼓音已经明显出来了,随便加四个circle还是什么的应该不难
  8. 02:28:319 (1,2,3,4) - 02:30:194 (1,2,3,4) - 跟第一段保持一致都nc吧ok
  9. 02:39:569 (1,2) - 1/2能不能放大些,跟02:38:397 (3,4) - 看起来都没区别了,用缩圈特难读ok
  10. 03:11:209 (1,2) - 没叠好ok
  11. 03:48:474 (4,1) - 少转了九十度,或者说少了个三连
  12. 03:53:631 (2) - ncok
  13. 第三段副歌怎么没1/6了?
  14. 04:16:365 (6,7) - 这个叠起来没移动太难受了,弄个小三角或者直线多好
  15. 04:47:537 (3,4,5) - 自己叠自己叠太多了,跟整个谱面整体结构和氛围相去甚远
  16. 最后转盘越看越瞎,然后转盘尾你忘静音了
combo color没换,再加上暗绿色bg,这色调搭配看得我真难受。

Fushimi Rio wrote:

00:05:819 (2) - NC
00:12:850 (5) - 这听着像个五连 或者三连接note啥的
00:26:678 (2) - 其实我觉得ctrl+g舒服
00:59:256 (5) - NC
01:01:131 (5) - NC
01:14:022 (4) - 应该是二连吧
03:30:506 (4) - 最好不用滑条 容易按两下导致后面那个note早按
03:33:710 (5) - 这咋没上面那个梗了
04:11:678 (6,7) - 这么搞7其实挺强的 但是这里7没啥声音 我觉得6拉长到7这好点

Regraz wrote:

Cute song!

[Best friend]
00:45:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Considering to adjusting this into a more apparent 2+2+2+2 or 2+2+4 patterns as per the vocals.
01:09:569 (1) - It is recommended to take this apart because 01:10:037 is strong enough for a slider head too!
01:30:428 (2) - Pretty overmapped. 03:00:428 (2) - Same
01:31:365 (5,1) - Considering an overlap like 01:32:772 (3,4) - .
01:43:787 (3,4) - Such a large spacing plays weird and abrupt amongst a series of spacings like 01:43:084 (5,1) -
01:49:881 (4,5,6,7) - Why suddenly four such sliders? It bursts the rhythm intensity without suitable reasons imo.
03:08:631 (1,2,3) - I would sincerely request to keep the spacings consistent across 03:08:631 (1,2,3) - and 03:09:569 (4,5,6,7) - .
03:30:506 (4) - This might cause potential readability issues for the current layout looks pretty like two circles.
03:31:131 (1,2) - These are not snapped. Also the stack of 03:31:014 (7,1) - prevents player from reading the reverse arrow clearly, which is definitely not allowed as per current ranking criteria.
03:40:037 (1) - 1/1 downbeats start to appear on this section so better map them out too.
03:50:819 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2) - Unnecessary and irrational difficulty spikes here. Strongly recommend to nerf them.
04:47:186 (2) - Not snapped. I'd like to recommend overlooking it just like 04:50:819 (1) - .
04:52:225 (4,5) - Place 4 in the middle? Better aesthetics. https://puu.sh/yFlLz/7b8aa785fb.png

Your current draining time is 4:59:532, which is not rankable. And you have already overdone the spinner extention. The actual draning time of this song is even shorter.
yf_bmp
无关紧要的我就不说了
所以我下面说的mod建议都改了

Regraz wrote:


Your current draining time is 4:59:532, which is not rankable. And you have already overdone the spinner extention. The actual draning time of this song is even shorter.
这个是大问题 你不解决是没法继续的

音效不行 肯定不可以
00:37:459 (8,9) - 00:38:396 (2,3) - 很丑的
01:23:006 (2,3,4) - 音乐里没有1/6 是1/8
01:30:428 (2) - 这个是1/8
02:03:006 (4) - nc
02:09:686 (1) - 偷懒嫌疑很大
02:20:819 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里比较弱智,不管从玩的角度还是看的角度 看这里的就比较好02:28:319 (1,2) -
02:53:006 (2,3,4) - 同理
03:00:428 (2) - 1/8
03:30:506 (4,5) - 这是1/8
03:31:131 (1,2) - 1/8
03:52:694 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 没有必要全nc
04:54:569 (1) - 为什么突然下了个智障normal
Otosaka-Yu
你 居然不 写m p3 help by我真是 太 可恶了!111!!!!!!!!OVQ
Mafumafu
最后bpm好像变了,需要加个红线
Topic Starter
z1085684963

Regraz wrote:

最后bpm好像变了,需要加个红线
算是改好了
Mafumafu
Metadata?
Hitsound略显单薄
AR稍微加个0.1 0.2吧
HP5,后面有一段节奏很稀疏,HR很容易死
00:19:217 (5,6,7) - 这三个突然间距变大,需要NC
01:25:623 (2,3,4) - 折返滑条吧,都是圈圈有点overemphasize
02:45:115 (5) - 跟下vocal? https://puu.sh/zcA5T/41ac3b7646.png
02:55:623 (2,3) - 合并成滑条?
03:02:576 (7,1,2) - 突然间距变这么大有点不好
03:17:576 (1,2,3) - ^
03:33:123 (4) - 看起来太像两个note了 换个摆放吧
03:33:748 (1) - 不行 箭头看不到
03:56:248 (1) - 遮挡太严重
04:50:506 (4) - 这个滑条开头太弱了 04:49:686 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段的节奏还需要改一下
04:52:498 (4,1) - 这两个之间加点什么吧 就像前面那些,跟一下vocal。
call me back
Topic Starter
z1085684963

Regraz wrote:

Metadata?就这样吧,也没啥好写的
Hitsound略显单薄这mp3就美酒
AR稍微加个0.1 0.2吧ok
HP5,后面有一段节奏很稀疏,HR很容易死ok
00:19:217 (5,6,7) - 这三个突然间距变大,需要NCok
01:25:623 (2,3,4) - 折返滑条吧,都是圈圈有点overemphasize感觉没事
02:45:115 (5) - 跟下vocal? https://puu.sh/zcA5T/41ac3b7646.png 没看懂
02:55:623 (2,3) - 合并成滑条?合并不了啊大哥
03:02:576 (7,1,2) - 突然间距变这么大有点不好我觉得ok
03:17:576 (1,2,3) - ^
03:33:123 (4) - 看起来太像两个note了 换个摆放吧不会啊
03:33:748 (1) - 不行 箭头看不到哪来的箭头
03:56:248 (1) - 遮挡太严重我觉得ojbk
04:50:506 (4) - 这个滑条开头太弱了 04:49:686 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段的节奏还需要改一下还行吧我感觉
04:52:498 (4,1) - 这两个之间加点什么吧 就像前面那些,跟一下vocal。^
call me back
Mafumafu
MP3换了之后 drain time 好像又不够了

我觉得我上面写的问题都需要解决一下(音效那个无所谓,现在很少有人抠音效了),不然可能要多保重了。
Topic Starter
z1085684963
改了改了,drain time也够了
Mafumafu
MP3不行 现在最多spinner能延伸到 04:58:426 往后基本听不到了 必须要改MP3

02:53:113 (2,3,4) - overemphasized,折返滑条

03:00:066 (7,1,2) - 03:15:066 (1,2,3) - 间距变大太突兀,需要nerf

03:30:613 (4) - 看起来太像两个note了 需要变换一下间距

03:31:238 (1,2) - 似乎是1/8

03:53:738 (1) - 这种遮挡肯定不行

04:47:996 (4) - 这个滑条开头太弱了 需要改

Call me back when problems above are solved.

Metadata source?
Topic Starter
z1085684963

Regraz wrote:

MP3不行 现在最多spinner能延伸到 04:58:426 往后基本听不到了 必须要改MP3

02:53:113 (2,3,4) - overemphasized,折返滑条

03:00:066 (7,1,2) - 03:15:066 (1,2,3) - 间距变大太突兀,需要nerf

03:30:613 (4) - 看起来太像两个note了 需要变换一下间距

03:31:238 (1,2) - 似乎是1/8

03:53:738 (1) - 这种遮挡肯定不行

04:47:996 (4) - 这个滑条开头太弱了 需要改

Call me back when problems above are solved.

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all ready
Mafumafu
Have a try!
anna apple
UndeadCapulet
UndeadCapulet
can you add some combo colours pretty please

03:56:775 - feels weird w/out the 1/6burst here imo
Topic Starter
z1085684963

UndeadCapulet wrote:

can you add some combo colours pretty please ok

03:56:775 - feels weird w/out the 1/6burst here imo I think it's OK. <3
UndeadCapulet
qualified!
Topic Starter
z1085684963
8-)
Nao Tomori
elluy should be changed to ellyu in tags!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- Frontier -
all japanese words in tags should have romanised words too
Kibbleru
if it gets dq'd to fix tags.

00:20:916 - im not sure why this part is kiai'd
Xinnoh
use the heart not the flame icon
Fycho
Let's fix the tags, also don't forget to check other stuffs mentioned in th thread.
Topic Starter
z1085684963

Kibbleru wrote:

if it gets dq'd to fix tags.

00:20:916 - im not sure why this part is kiai'd
Because I want to kiai :o

Naotoshi wrote:

elluy should be changed to ellyu in tags!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok

- Frontier - wrote:

all japanese words in tags should have romanised words too
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