Hi, M4M from #modreqs (my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/702734/#osu/1486899 )
01:05:189 (6,7,8,1,2) - This is a weird angle which feels really uncomfortable and messy to play.
01:30:221 (5,6,1,2) - Direction changes too randomly. Consider choosing a clearer one (for example, ctrl+h & ctrl+j on 01:30:316 (6) - to improve the flow)
01:42:164 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - I don't understand the reason why you decided to make a triple and right after that a 5-tap burst. I think it would be easier to read and it would even fit the rhythm in a more propper way.
02:28:788 (1,2,3) - I really like this kind of patterns. They are really original imo and they fit the song greatly!
02:40:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Weird angle and weird to play
02:53:724 (4,5) - ctrl+h to improve the flow?
02:57:355 (5,6,7) - I would replace these circles with a back-and-forth slider in order to make a triple (easier to read than 6 notes because of the XzxzxZ thing, instead of XzxzX or XzxzxzX. I hope you understand this part ).
03:16:176 (3) - NC here and make DS larger
03:32:992 (4,5) - DS = 1,21x maybe?
04:09:679 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is very difficult to read. 04:09:679 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this movement is clockwise, so you should consider making the rest of the pattern on that same direction so players don't get confused.
Overall, a great map. You have made a great work! I think you should care more about its playability, even though most of the patterns are correct.
01:05:189 (6,7,8,1,2) - This is a weird angle which feels really uncomfortable and messy to play.
01:30:221 (5,6,1,2) - Direction changes too randomly. Consider choosing a clearer one (for example, ctrl+h & ctrl+j on 01:30:316 (6) - to improve the flow)
01:42:164 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - I don't understand the reason why you decided to make a triple and right after that a 5-tap burst. I think it would be easier to read and it would even fit the rhythm in a more propper way.
02:28:788 (1,2,3) - I really like this kind of patterns. They are really original imo and they fit the song greatly!
02:40:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Weird angle and weird to play
02:53:724 (4,5) - ctrl+h to improve the flow?
02:57:355 (5,6,7) - I would replace these circles with a back-and-forth slider in order to make a triple (easier to read than 6 notes because of the XzxzxZ thing, instead of XzxzX or XzxzxzX. I hope you understand this part ).
03:16:176 (3) - NC here and make DS larger
03:32:992 (4,5) - DS = 1,21x maybe?
04:09:679 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is very difficult to read. 04:09:679 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this movement is clockwise, so you should consider making the rest of the pattern on that same direction so players don't get confused.
Overall, a great map. You have made a great work! I think you should care more about its playability, even though most of the patterns are correct.