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should be fixed now, hitsounder sent me fixed files• 00:48:660 (3,1) - maybe use smaller spacing? because the new rhythm choice here is a bit unexpected
• 00:54:775 (9,1) - The corner + nc should be on the downbeat because thats where exaggeration is needed. same at 00:55:348 (6,1,2,1) - , it all seems 1/4 beat too late
fixed 00:54:775 (1) - and about 00:55:348 (7) - i dont know if i really want to make another corner change. it would be 2 flow changes withing 3 circles which is a bit too much in "post-intro" - i tihnk its smarter to save this special tricky pattern for the kiais. imo the current pattern with that one fix fits perfect to the background sounds in the song.• 01:08:533 (2,3) - Sounds like it would be better as a kick slider or something, the beat on 01:08:629 - is quiet
• 01:29:934 (2,3,4,5,6) - The different angle of the stream and slider make this pattern look uneven. can you round the stream with the slider more or something?
its hard to explain why i think that this fits perfectly. it is obvious that i intended to do this kind of pattern, the vocal for 01:30:316 (6) - suddenly stops in intensity and pitch comapred to the 4 circles before which represent much intenser vocal with higher pitch. So i try to emphasize the change in the vocal with "a stop" for the cursor movement, you dont follow the direction the circles flow to, you stop the cursormovement and make a small movement down and then back which emphasizes the loss of intensity in the vocals. I hope you understand what i mean ><. Like i feel the music stops and so should the cursor moving for that small time-interval• 01:38:342 (7) - nc here instead? downbeat
yes fixed in all kiais• 01:45:030 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I see what you're trying to do here with the corners on strong beats, but the jaggedness of this stream makes it difficult and uncomfortable to aim. would suggest you do this more subtly
i agree with that, its actually the only pattern of the total 3 I do miss on while testplaying. I use only one "zick-zack" and then continue with more linear slightly circular flow, so its easier to read• 01:48:660 - dont you usually add a stream corner or something here to these vocals?
either slight stream corner or a movement change which is the case here, in the middle of this whole stream the movement gets horizontally flipped which is enough to emphasize the vocal smoothly mo• 02:08:533 (4,1) - space these more because its a 1/2 beat gap instead of 1/4 beat
• 02:25:157 (4,5) - suggest removing this triple, the beats here are too quiet to notice. same at 02:31:272 (3,4) -
hmm i think its personal thing. Like i agree that its almost not noticeable with a circle on it but when i remove the triple i still slightly hear it in the song so i rather wnana keep them• 02:28:597 (4,5,1) - space these evenly? looks like an error
its the same thing i did at 04:07:960 (4,5,1) - , though, i changed it exactly that way so it looks intended and not like an error• 02:32:609 (1,2,3) - I would suggest starting this triple at 02:32:800 - because the drums are louder there
think i got what you mean, changed• 02:55:730 (9,1) - try starting this slower stream on either the red or white tick around it, it just feels weird where it is now
did white tick• 03:13:883 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this overlap plays weird and looks kind of forced
• 03:43:979 (4,1,2) - 03:44:361 (4,1,2) - These overlaps dont play very well at all because of the angles you have to hit at 03:43:883 (3,4,1) - and 03:44:265 (3,4,1) - respectfully
i agree that its really hard to a) read and b) aim aswell. i nerfed the first angle it is way more comfortable now. But i still want to keep the special angle for 03:44:361 (4,1) - because on circle (1) is a very special sound that the other white ticks do not offer. in conclusion i think pattern is much more comfortable now • 04:18:851 (7) - again, nc here for downbeat?
• 04:26:495 (1,2,3) - this would play better if you flipped it
like this i want it to really stand out because this smaller DS stream is in a very different section. if i make that circular thing you suggested then it would look too much being part of the stream before which I definetely want to avoid.• 04:40:539 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - The concept here is fine, the aesthetics of the pattern look pretty random though
made the pattern more organized 04:40:922 (2,1,2,3,1) - being parallel and in a structured grid