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ClariS - SHIORI -TV size mix-

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beiv
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 марта 2018 г. at 20:50:40

Artist: ClariS
Title: SHIORI -TV size mix-
Source: 終物語
Tags: bakemonogatari monogatari owarimonogatari ougi oshino kanbara araragi ending Djulus m3gB3g
BPM: 176
Filesize: 5932kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Djulus' Hard (3,23 stars, 253 notes)
  2. Easy (1,48 stars, 120 notes)
  3. Insane (4,19 stars, 283 notes)
  4. Inspiration (5,19 stars, 342 notes)
  5. m3gB3g's Normal (1,89 stars, 120 notes)
Download: ClariS - SHIORI -TV size mix-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy - Me
Normal - m3gB3g
Hard - Djulus
Insane - Me
Extra - Me
Djulus
0_o
Azinlen
Хеллоу.
General
мб другой бг?
Easy
00:15:600 - хех, по инструментику товарищ не идём... (старт слайдер тута)
01:27:532 - мб по вокалу начать
Normal
00:11:339 (1,2) - мб так, а дальше додумаешь сам https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9451488 (бад флоу товарищ)
01:27:532 (2,3) - мб так всё таки во всех дифах сделать
Djulus' Hard
00:00:430 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9451444
00:01:793 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9451448
00:02:475 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9451452
00:57:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - я бы чисто слайдерами заделал
01:03:498 - мб тут лучше слайдер закончить
01:27:532 - мб по вокалу начать
Insane
01:27:532 - го ноту тхере
Найс диффа, мне нравится
Inspiration
00:13:043 (2) - замапь нотами по вокалу, лучше будет
01:00:430 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - музыка утихла товарищ, куда такие джампы ТОВАРИЩ !!!
01:03:157 - куда KIAI пропал?
01:27:532 - го ноту тхере
Topic Starter
beiv
спасибо за мод
Ensi
IRC Russian (Djulus' Hard. Good maps. There are remarks on design.)
15:25 _Ensi_: карта какая?
15:28 *Djulus is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1412591 ClariS - SHIORI -TV size mix-]
15:28 Djulus: вотт
15:37 _Ensi_: 00:01:452 (4,4) - блакнет поправь
15:37 _Ensi_: 00:14:066 (1,2) - ^
15:37 Djulus: и так норм вроде
15:37 _Ensi_: Нэт
15:37 Djulus: не заметно же
15:37 _Ensi_: приебутся все равно
15:38 _Ensi_: 00:17:986 (3,3) - я думаю не надо тут оверлапить. Чуть пониже опусти слайдер
15:38 Djulus: ладно ладно
15:38 _Ensi_: 00:28:895 (7,1) - тут тоже не ровно
15:39 Djulus: а так опустил
15:39 Djulus: кк
15:40 _Ensi_: смотри 00:40:998 (4,1) - я думаю лучше сделать вот так https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9451639 00:40:998 (4,1,2) - ибо 00:39:975 (1,1) - мне не нрав, а так как ты там идёшь покругу.. почему бы и тут так не сделать?
15:41 _Ensi_: 00:42:702 (1,2) - поровнее ото дырка посередине аж глаза мозолит
15:41 Djulus: хм
15:42 _Ensi_: 00:45:089 (4,1) - вроде и не заметно. Но надо подправить
15:43 _Ensi_: 00:46:452 (4,1) - ^
15:43 Djulus: ттак это же красивый флоу
15:43 _Ensi_: не ровный блакнет \o/
15:44 Djulus: ух эти бланкеты блин
15:44 _Ensi_: а вот тут ты поленился 00:49:520 (1,2,3,1) -
15:45 _Ensi_: 00:50:032 (2) - CTRL+G и как нить так https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9451667
15:45 Djulus: не
15:45 Djulus: по вокалу идет
15:45 _Ensi_: будет поинтересней смотрется
15:45 Djulus: т.е инструментал
15:46 _Ensi_: 00:52:816 (2,3,4) - а такго вот ну ненадо в хардах ставить
15:46 _Ensi_: по покалу поставь
15:47 _Ensi_: как нить так например 00:52:759 (2,3,4) -
15:47 _Ensi_: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9451684
15:48 _Ensi_: 01:00:089 (6,2) - вилкой в глаза :D Лучше блакнетом поставь + спейсингу 01:00:430 (1,2) - тут же 2 сильных бита
15:49 _Ensi_: как нить так https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9451700 но тоже смотри сам
15:49 Djulus: 00:52:816 (2,3,4) - это же 1/3 тройка так что норм вроде
15:50 Djulus: 01:00:089 (6,2) - а вот в игре не заметно ваще
15:50 Djulus: 01:00:430 (1,2) - по инструменталу
15:50 _Ensi_: 01:04:180 (3) - x:193 y:146
15:51 _Ensi_: так то да но ты ж маппаешь вокал. Зачем ты резко лезеш в инструментал
15:51 _Ensi_: а потом снова в вокал
15:51 _Ensi_: это как в мороженку горчицу добавить
15:52 Djulus: да это же очевидно
15:52 Djulus: приятно играть вроде
15:52 _Ensi_: а я уж думал у тебя все стаки ровными будут 01:11:680 (2,4,5) -
15:53 Djulus: ох лол
15:53 _Ensi_: ну и собстна это тоже выйдет кривым после фикса 01:13:555 (2,3,4) -
15:53 Djulus: фиксед
15:53 _Ensi_: 01:17:134 (2,3) - блак
15:53 Djulus: кк
15:54 Djulus: бланкетыыыы
15:54 _Ensi_: мб переработаешь тут 01:20:032 (2,3,4,1) -
15:55 Djulus: да не, изи проходить
15:55 _Ensi_: не очень красиво
15:56 _Ensi_: я думаю лучше пусти их в левую сторону 01:18:839 (3,4,1) - и сделай далее покрасивее и все пучком будет
15:56 Djulus: зато играемо
15:57 _Ensi_: ото у тебя весь экшон происходит на правой стороне, а про левую ты забыл
15:58 Djulus: да всё ок
16:01 _Ensi_: так ну могу кое что предложить в этом моменте
16:02 _Ensi_: [https://puu.sh/yd3SD.osu test]
16:02 Djulus: да не, если меня поругают за это фиксну, а так лучше так оставить
16:02 _Ensi_: все равно чекни
16:03 Djulus: так мое сохранение удалится
16:03 _Ensi_: не
16:03 _Ensi_: новыю диффу
16:03 Djulus: а ну ща чекну, если название поменял
16:03 _Ensi_: я поменял
16:03 _Ensi_: у
16:03 _Ensi_: и да 01:27:532 (4) - начни лучше отсюда
16:04 _Ensi_: 01:27:532-
16:04 _Ensi_: 01:27:532 -
16:04 Djulus: 01:18:839 (3,4) - резко меняется флоу
16:04 Djulus: 01:19:520 (1,2) - и это кажется странным
16:04 _Ensi_: так конец можно и поизвращаться
16:05 _Ensi_: тем более идёт нарастание вокала все дела
16:05 Djulus: 01:27:020 (2,3) - я лучше удалю
16:05 Djulus: т.к фолловлю инструментал
16:05 _Ensi_: а я думаю лучше оставь тут вокал
Djulus

Azinlen wrote:

Хеллоу.
Djulus' Hard
00:00:430 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9451444 мне не нравится( и плохо играется
00:01:793 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9451448 ^
00:02:475 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9451452 ^
00:57:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - я бы чисто слайдерами заделал ну как бы это не 1/4 тройки и они совсем не сложно их проходить а наоборот
01:03:498 - мб тут лучше слайдер закончить не
01:27:532 - мб по вокалу начать по инструменталу лучше
апдейт
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Topic Starter
beiv

Azinlen wrote:

Хеллоу.
Easy
00:15:600 - хех, по инструментику товарищ не идём... (старт слайдер тута)
01:27:532 - мб по вокалу начать
Normal
00:11:339 (1,2) - мб так, а дальше додумаешь сам https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9451488 (бад флоу товарищ)
01:27:532 (2,3) - мб так всё таки во всех дифах сделать
Inspiration
00:13:043 (2) - замапь нотами по вокалу, лучше будет
01:00:430 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - музыка утихла товарищ, куда такие джампы ТОВАРИЩ !!!
01:03:157 - куда KIAI пропал?
01:27:532 - го ноту тхере
обновил
m3gB3g
NM+GD~

Общее
*БГ покруче плз
*Цвета комбо поярче. Сливаются с чёрным фоном.
*меня в тэги добавь

Чэпчэки

*Поставь ар4 или 3.5,пожалуйста . Я думаю появляются слишком много объектов в одно время с ар3.


Дьулус ыарахан

*ХП5 , пожалуйста. ХП6 это уровень Инсейн дифф.
*Расставь Хитсаунды.
* 00:48:157 (1) - думаю в подобных моментах лучше соблюдать параллельность между слайдерами. Неровности выглядят не красиво. Не красиво потому, что они не сочетаются с твоими другими аккуратными паттернами. Сразу в глаза бросаются во время игры.
https://puu.sh/yW5PC/8bba19732e.png

* 00:27:702 (3,5) - вот такие минорные неровности тоже фикс плс. Они замечаются и чувствуются во время игры.
https://puu.sh/yW5Rv/f41eb11755.png
https://puu.sh/yW5Sq/5b34458b35.png

* 00:51:566 (3,4) - а вот например такие паттерны оставляй как есть.
* 01:00:430 (1,2) - я конечно понимаю, что 01:00:941 (2) - стакнут с 01:00:089 (6) - но 01:00:430 (1,2) - они отдельно выглядят не красиво.

Если заинтересовался пиши мне в ПМ , поработаем над эстетикой

Иирбит

*Поставь ХП6,. На данный момент твой показатель ХП ниже чем у Дьулуса.
*Пожалуйста,поставь АР9.
*У диффы проблемы с флоу в джампах. Рекомендую апнуть старрейт диффы с 4.19* до 4.5*+ путём манипуляции спейсингов у джамп паттернов.Попробуй, может получится диффа получше.
* 00:16:793 (1,3) - пофикси оверлап
* 00:36:395 (2,1) - ^

Күүрээн

*Давай обсудим в ПМ.
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Topic Starter
beiv

m3gB3g wrote:

NM+GD~

Общее
*БГ покруче плз ОК
*Цвета комбо поярче. Сливаются с чёрным фоном. Пофиксил
*меня в тэги добавь Ок

Чэпчэки

*Поставь ар4 или 3.5,пожалуйста . Я думаю появляются слишком много объектов в одно время с ар3. По моему,логичнее поставить ar3.5

Иирбит

*Поставь ХП6,. На данный момент твой показатель ХП ниже чем у Дьулуса. Пофиксил
*Пожалуйста,поставь АР9. ОК
*У диффы проблемы с флоу в джампах. Рекомендую апнуть старрейт диффы с 4.19* до 4.5*+ путём манипуляции спейсингов у джамп паттернов.Попробуй, может получится диффа получше. Хызы,подумаю об этом
* 00:16:793 (1,3) - пофикси оверлап -
* 00:36:395 (2,1) - ^ -

Күүрээн

*Давай обсудим в ПМ. ОК
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Махтал за мод и гд 8-)
Djulus

m3gB3g wrote:

NM+GD~


Дьулус ыарахан

*ХП5 , пожалуйста. ХП6 это уровень Инсейн дифф. да
*Расставь Хитсаунды.okay
* 00:48:157 (1) - думаю в подобных моментах лучше соблюдать параллельность между слайдерами. Неровности выглядят не красиво. Не красиво потому, что они не сочетаются с твоими другими аккуратными паттернами. Сразу в глаза бросаются во время игры.
https://puu.sh/yW5PC/8bba19732e.png ну ок хотя это ничего не меняет :/

* 00:27:702 (3,5) - вот такие минорные неровности тоже фикс плс. Они замечаются и чувствуются во время игры.
https://puu.sh/yW5Rv/f41eb11755.png
https://puu.sh/yW5Sq/5b34458b35.png ттоже

* 00:51:566 (3,4) - а вот например такие паттерны оставляй как есть.
* 01:00:430 (1,2) - я конечно понимаю, что 01:00:941 (2) - стакнут с 01:00:089 (6) - но 01:00:430 (1,2) - они отдельно выглядят не красиво.

Если заинтересовался пиши мне в ПМ , поработаем над эстетикой бут, я уже поработал над этим.
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pavpab
Wait.. Didn't Mosntrata quit?
Djulus
idk
Elzix
Easy
That map is pretty solid, but 01:27:020 (1) - is weird, i'd delete this one/put a slider with spinner instead

Normal
00:05:884 (1,1,1,1,1) - NC is useless, you should put sliders instead, because there are almost no notes in that kind of important part
00:30:430 (1) - delete that hitsound
01:04:861 (2) - 1/4 sliders on normal maps = unranked

hard
great diff!

insane
00:16:111 (1,2) - CTRL G
01:24:293 (3,4,5,6) - that distance is too big

inspiration
good diff
m3gB3g

- Nico wrote:

Normal
00:05:884 (1,1,1,1,1) - NC is useless, you should put sliders instead, because there are almost no notes in that kind of important part i like circles more at this part , and NC's consistenced by the Big White ticks
00:30:430 (1) - delete that hitsound Hitsounds reworked!
01:04:861 (2) - 1/4 sliders on normal maps = unranked this is 1/2 slider
Thanks!
Update.
osu file format v14

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Topic Starter
beiv

- Nico wrote:

Easy
That map is pretty solid, but 01:27:020 (1) - is weird, i'd delete this one/put a slider with spinner instead fix

insane
00:16:111 (1,2) - CTRL G -
01:24:293 (3,4,5,6) - that distance is too big fix

inspiration
good diff thanks
Thanks for mod
Uta
from q
i hate v1 but whatever

  • [Easy]
  1. 01:27:702 (1) - easy diff should have 1/1 break on spinner
  2. 00:02:816 (4) - not important but blanket is off
  3. 00:05:884 (1) - newer players are more comfortable with circular flow so flipping it with ctrl h would make it more playable. if yes then flip this over too 00:07:248 (3) - and use the same blanketting

    [m3gB3g's Normal]
  4. AR should be 5
  5. okay about the ncing. you should always nc between combo 4-10. usually on lower diff people nc every downbeats. your nc-ing now is really random.
  6. 00:20:884 (1,2) - use straight slider for visual
  7. 00:30:430 (1) - its super weird that you always map vocals but here the vocal stop on 00:30:430 - but instead you made a slider which is not covering the vocal. change 00:29:407 (1,2,3) - into a reverse and then add a circle here 00:30:430 - . that way you cover all the vocals properly
  8. 00:39:975 (1) - unnecessary nc
  9. 01:04:861 (2,3) - rhythm is not showing any contrast here. you map vocal on 2 but not on 3. change 3 into a circle and a 1/2 slider or a 1/2 reverse

    [Djulus' Hard]
  10. HP drain rate should be 6
  11. OD should be 6.5
  12. 00:01:111 (3,4) - make this symmetrical so it looks more structured
  13. 00:02:305 (2,3,4) - unstack 3 and 4 and move them away from 2 because they are both different part of the song and so should the pattern
  14. 00:07:930 (3,4) - same here about the symmetrical thingy
  15. 00:07:759 (2) - missing clap
  16. 00:10:486 (2,3,4) - they are the same with 00:07:759 (2,3,4,1) - but both has different hs-ing. make them the same hs plz
  17. 00:16:793 (3) - normal additions on hitsounding is pretty random imo. just make it into auto instead
  18. 00:14:066 (1,2) - hitsounds on slider end is not really necessary. they are really loud and spamming it is not a wise thing to do
  19. 00:22:077 (1,2) - add clap
  20. 00:35:543 (4) - this slider is too curvey. reduce the curve a bit
  21. 00:53:043 (4) - how about separating this slider end so it looks like this https://i.imgur.com/PQe3o5q.png and the rhtyhm is like https://i.imgur.com/0A5ncsa.png that way the rhtyhm is more unic and variative to play
  22. 00:58:725 (6) - again slider too curvey
  23. 01:01:452 (3) - again, normal additions is pretty random. change into auto
  24. 01:08:270 (4) - remove clap
  25. 01:13:555 (2,3,4) - this reverse sounded pretty empty without hitsound. how about adding some claps?

    [Insane]
  26. 01:23:611 (1) - you can move this away from 01:24:293 (3,4,5) - . i know you map with stacking enabled. but the actual gameplay is touching and it ruins the pattern
  27. 01:25:827 (6) - nc to separate the jumps from the stream

    [Extra]
  28. 00:07:248 (1) - you can make this slider better https://i.imgur.com/HvdfH76.png
  29. pretty good diff tbh

    []
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m3gB3g

Uta wrote:

from q
i hate v1 but whatever


  • [m3gB3g's Normal]
  1. AR should be 5 nah i like 5.5 with dthr :)
  2. okay about the ncing. you should always nc between combo 4-10. usually on lower diff people nc every downbeats. your nc-ing now is really random. You right, i should rework them
  3. 00:20:884 (1,2) - use straight slider for visual nah
  4. 00:30:430 (1) - its super weird that you always map vocals but here the vocal stop on 00:30:430 - but instead you made a slider which is not covering the vocal. change 00:29:407 (1,2,3) - into a reverse and then add a circle here 00:30:430 - . that way you cover all the vocals properly okay
  5. 00:39:975 (1) - unnecessary nc okay
  6. 01:04:861 (2,3) - rhythm is not showing any contrast here. you map vocal on 2 but not on 3. change 3 into a circle and a 1/2 slider or a 1/2 reverse yes you right , will fix



    Thanks for mod ! :D
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update
osu file format v14

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Creator:beiv
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97,297,53611,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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297,96,54975,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,57702,12,4,61793,0:0:0:0:
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412,182,70998,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
beiv

Uta wrote:

from q
i hate v1 but whatever

  • [Easy]
  1. 01:27:702 (1) - easy diff should have 1/1 break on spinner I think you are wrong, because in this easy difficulty the same spinner https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1414508
  2. 00:02:816 (4) - not important but blanket is off fixed
  3. 00:05:884 (1) - newer players are more comfortable with circular flow so flipping it with ctrl h would make it more playable. if yes then flip this over too 00:07:248 (3) - and use the same blanketting fixed

    [Insane]
  4. 01:23:611 (1) - you can move this away from 01:24:293 (3,4,5) - . i know you map with stacking enabled. but the actual gameplay is touching and it ruins the pattern fixed
  5. 01:25:827 (6) - nc to separate the jumps from the stream fixed

    [Extra]
  6. 00:07:248 (1) - you can make this slider better https://i.imgur.com/HvdfH76.png fixed
  7. pretty good diff tbh thanks

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