[Kantan]
- 00:16:772 (16) - I think I know why you have a note here, because of the fast loud sound that start here 00:16:140 - , but how about moving it to here 00:16:140 - instead? And new player can focus on hitting this note 00:17:087 (17) - more easily as a really important sound xD.
- 00:44:245 (14) - Not sure if you might want to delete this, since the sound is not that important, and I think you put it there so player can get back to the white stick rhythm more easily since the previous one is on a red one. But I think starting to hit this 00:44:561 - should be more clear for new player what you are trying to match probably. Also to make it a bit different then this 00:45:982 (17,18,19,20) - xP.
- 00:59:719 (5) - Move it to here 00:59:087 - , like this part, 01:01:614 - is mostly for the piano on my part, could be for vocal as well for yours. But my main reason is to put a break so player focus on hitting this note 01:00:035 (6) - , since is new lyrics line (a whole new important stanza).
[Futsuu]
- 00:57:982 (3,4) - I personally would do these 2 the same color due to the sound and voice pitch, I don't really feel a kdk or a dkd in my opinion here. It feel like is a hard way to start the kiai for futsuu xD. Unlike this one 01:09:193 (32,33,34) - where kdk fit a lots due to the voice and you feel it a lots xD.
- 01:10:456 - I understand your trying to do break on futsuu which is a really good thing that you don't do too long pattern, the problem here is I feel like this sound 01:10:772 - follow this 01:10:456 - a whole lots probably due to the lyrics, but there also a quite loud drum here as well, probably want to see if is possible to fill a note here without a too long pattern xD.
- 01:11:719 (40,41,42,43,44) - I feel like these 2 01:12:351 (43,44) - should be different, how about something like this : https://puu.sh/ysQVZ/5eeb3e22f8.png , or if you want to avoid the 1/1 going d k d k, you can make it like this : https://puu.sh/ysQYP/7bc6e1aef5.png
- 01:21:508 (5,6,7,8) - I think this slow part is like the only one with a 1/1 at 01:22:456 - probably because of the voice, I doubt you were trying to make something with the piano, but I think is because of the 2 words voice? But the thing is you're not matching those 1/1 voice, and ofc those 1/2 since you try to make something calm. This is really a suggestion, but how about trying to focus more on the begining of a stanza that the piano high pitch is the loudest (really big my opinion/my style). 01:19:298 - add a note here to emphasize the beginning of the piano. Same here 01:21:824 - , and delete the note here 01:22:456 - , I know there is a loud high pitch piano + voice, but emphasize the big white line more that is here 01:22:772 - .
- If you end up doing above, you can avoid the huge white line 1/1 only note here 01:29:719 - . Add a note at 01:29:719 - and 01:30:035 - for the loud piano.
[Muzukashii]
- Don't forget to copy pasta the volume line change from the InneR:Oni from my mod, even if there is no note like here 00:21:351 - . People can still spam random note, or people with super super good ears, might randomly just hit there for fun, so just in case the note doesn't go too loud and they can at least here that low triplet drum on the background.
- 00:03:666 (5) - Hmm maybe make it d? I know is higher pitch then here 00:03:193 (4) - , but like maybe just keep this section, low pitch chord = d, high pitch chord = k, to avoid a 3 k 00:03:666 (5,6,7) - like this 00:01:930 (1,2,3) - , while both should be different.
- 00:20:719 - Add a note here? I feel like this piano is really important, and you've been mapping them all as well : 00:20:087 (64) - and 00:20:561 (66,67) - .
- 00:23:719 (73,74,75) - maybe just me, but I feel like the voice might fit a kdk here or kdd. It might just be me! Is like here 00:26:245 (80,81,82) - .
- 00:29:403 (89) - change to d, to emphasize this 00:29:719 (90) - more.
- 00:31:298 (95,96,97,98,99) - I find this rhythm being really confusing to play, because the piano is a consistent 1/2, but of course in such calm part, you'll want to avoid a lots of 1/2 in a row. And a 1/1 same rhythm like the piano, would be too easy, compare to the previous part, so how about this :
https://puu.sh/ye4YM/15e6f6c735.png or https://puu.sh/ye4ZM/e2c3ce0fa2.png (I like the 2nd one better to emphasize 00:32:245 (99) - .)
The reason why this double feel akward compare to the other double, is that the other double are mostly matched for vocal, so you can follow the vocal for them, but not here xD.
OR OR do something like here 00:41:245 (127,128,129,130,131,132) - !! Same piano part!! - 01:04:614 - add a d here, since this part of the kiai have been the easiest so far due to the 1/1 spam with the finisher, so how about making it non 1/1 feeling before the actual 1/1 with the big drum note.
- 01:08:245 (47) - Make this k? I don't really have a good reason for it, is probably my feeling that it follow this 01:08:087 - voice better.
- 01:09:982 (57) - ^ a bit same as above, I feel like this will follow this 01:09:824 (56) - vocal pretty well, it sound more neutral pitch and then it go down here 01:10:140 - . So 01:09:982 (56,57) - ctrl+g
- 01:15:824 (85) - This might be me from not modding taiko a lots, but I remember that people do complain about too long pattern in muzukashii, and here 01:11:719 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - I wonder if it count as a too long, if you agree with it, you can maybe delete this 01:15:824 (85) - , since the drum is yes consistent, but here 01:15:193 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - you started with a kk to follow the main sound which is super super clear, by deleting that note, you also put focus on that main sound that appear here 01:15:666 - and here 01:15:982 - . I find it more fitting, since if you continue kdkdkdk, i find that these 2 sound 01:15:666 - and here 01:15:982 - doesn't give much effect, you just hear it but player will play the same pattern.
- 01:26:245 - and 01:26:403 - add a note here? I know you try to start the calm feeling here, but I feel like..is kinda akward to stop matching the voice here. I feel like the calm part should start here 01:27:824 - , since the instrument sound on the background start to be calmer here so player can focus on those last few piano sound.
[chaica's Oni]
- 00:07:930 (19,20,21,22,23,24) - Pretty sure you can make something more interesting then just dkdkdk, just because each sound seem to have different piano pitch (in fact there one part that sound like that, but there is the same piano pitch, just a little volume of difference.
Here my suggestion : k k d k d d kd OR k k d d k k dk
All the piano pitch are kinda different and like is a mix of low pitch chord + high pitch chord, is not something like : low pitch chord, then high pitch chord, then low, then high,etc..which make dkdkdk fit more in this case.
00:07:930 - and 00:08:245 - , have some same pitch chord, is just the volume might be a bit lower on the 2nd one, since not the same amount of piano note as the first one.
00:08:561 (21,22) - You can group these 2 up because of "low pitch chord"
and these 2 00:09:193 (23,24) - like the first 2 notes, you can put it in the part of "high pitch chord"
(I hope I didn't word myself wrong QAQ) - 00:15:982 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - I'm not sure what you were trying to match here, from what I'm seeing from the begining kiai, piano has always been blue and most drum red. Here I think you try to do some variation judging from the main melody of the song? while the end of triplet blue because of piano. 00:16:930 (56,57) - How about ctrl+g here, like you did variation here 00:16:140 (50,51,52) - : up down down (melody pitch), here 00:16:772 (55,56,57) - it go mini up (with the piano) down up.
- 00:22:140 (79) - Not a bad thing, but same suggestion as I mention in the InneR:Oni, you'll find some "BOOM" sound in 00:22:140 (79) - to 00:37:298 (137) - there wont be any D or K in this calm part, so I wonder if a big D would be nice, since hitting a huge DON on a taiko give a similar sound to a boom.
Other boom sound : 00:27:193 (98) - , 00:32:245 (119) -. I'm not sure if you'll accept since you did use D for cymbal/crash sound on more exciting part. - 00:27:508 (99) - ^ Only if above is fix, turn this into a d, since you been trying to fit the voice pitch, and so far is been d k d k (if you remove the 1/2 snap, the 1/1 snap are like that so far XD).
- 00:28:456 (103) - make this the the same as 00:28:298 (102) - to follow the voice pitch.
- 00:29:403 (106) - Make this d to follow this 00:29:087 (105) - voice pitch and 00:29:719 (107) - this k, to emphasize the lots of piano chord being play here.
- 00:31:772 - Omg is it just me or did InneR:Oni when I first modded didn't add note on all the clear piano sound here, but in InneR:Oni it was this one 00:31:930 - that was missing XD. So 00:31:772 - add a note here aaa! the piano is SO SO SO SO SO CLEAR: and the voice just go "aaaa", so I don't see why other piano would be map and not this one XD.
- 00:33:508 (124,125) - ctrl+g here, to follow the vocal pitch but also to avoid a kdkdk here 00:33:824 (125,126,127,128,129) - . Since your dk here 00:32:877 (121,122) - fit the voice pitch, make this 00:33:351 (123,124) - kk to keep the voice going higher. and then 00:33:824 - d here for lower and this 00:34:140 (126) - is still d because is going lower.
- 00:39:193 (145,146) - Ok let's avoid another dkdkdk here, ctrl+g here for the voice pitch, so 00:39:193 - follow 00:38:877 - , and 00:39:508 - is higher.
If you accept this, you might want to change this as well 00:39:824 (147) - to d, and the rest you decide if you want to change or not
https://puu.sh/ye3nz/092b7b1c74.png or https://puu.sh/ye3s2/70e050ced5.png work as well. - 00:45:824 (177) - Make this a d? I don't know about you, but I feel like it should really be different then this 00:45:982 - .
- 00:48:351 (193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201) - I feel like there a really lack of note, is an Oni, and you been matching instrument + voice, don't go nearly voice only here, on each 1/2 beat here there is a drum sound, I really recommend mapping it instead of leaving it empty.
- 00:50:245 (202,203,204,205,206) - ^ don't need to add all, but can add a few. mostly here 00:51:035 - , i feel like it might be an important sound you'll want to map on Oni.
- 00:52:456 (214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224) - Is it me or this part feel um....easier then the calm part of the song? I think you try to do, easy to normal then to kiai harder!, but um...this is a bit too easy? Song look kinda hype here too XD.
- 00:53:640 - Hey wouldn't it be cool to have d here? that chick-a-chick instrument sound, it sound fun XD.
- 01:03:114 (272) - Make it k here, like you did here 00:57:982 (239,240,241) - , that sound is super super clear.
- 01:04:140 (280) - change to d, so emphasize a sound that is different then here 01:03:982 (278,279) - .
- 01:10:140 (309) - ^
- 01:16:298 (348) - make it D? I don't know if you hear it, since is not a clear cymbal, but there is like a crash on mostly all the instrument to mark some kind of a finish for this part.
- Also just to keep consistent, I think your volume green line are the same as InneR:Oni, stuff are already updated, you might want to check if there is some few different one in case. Or copy paste the line again in your .osu if the creator hasn't done it already. Like here: 00:21:351 - I made him put 30% due to the triplet being a bit too loud, you have no note here, but ppl that spam here, will hear it higher due to a change on volume going up. So just in case,
re-copy paste the timing point.
[InneR:Oni]
- 00:18:508 (73) - How about d?
Since this 00:18:351 (72) - is really high pitch, and then it go low here 00:18:508 - . Is a bit lower then this note 00:18:666 (74) - , so maybe a d d k here 00:18:508 (73,74,75) - would be nice. - 00:21:351 (90,91,92) - In my opinion i find these way too loud. I understand you try to do something like higher to lower and lower volume, but here, the kat are way too loud and the background sound is so low that is barely audible, so it can feel like hitting a random triple.
- 00:22:140 (93) - I think you didn't add a huge D because you try to make this part kinda relax and calm like the song. But the thing is there like a huge boom here to start the calm part.
- 00:23:719 (98,99,100,101) - I would rather do k d d k instead of d k k d, due to voice pitch going up here 00:23:719 (98) - and down here 00:24:034 (99,100) -. And then you have a lots of piano chord here 00:24:666 - with a higher pitch piano chord here as well, it will also be different then 00:24:982 (102,103,104) - , since that triplet start with a d.
- 00:27:193 (111) - D? Same reason as 00:22:140 (93) - . You can always lower the big D volume in case if you find them too loud for these calm part. It also give a different feeling then this note 00:27:508 - .
- 00:28:140 (114,115,116,117) - I suppose this is mostly match for voice, I find dk kd more fitting for the pitch, since at this part 00:28:140 - it go down the up. and here 00:28:614 - it follow the last note and go down here 00:28:772 - (the piano also go lower pitch).
- 00:29:403 (119,120,121) - Here again I suppose you try to follow the voice pitch, but how about doing d d k, to emphasize the highest voice pitch, but mostly to emphasize the piano chord since they are super loud and clear in that triplet.
- 00:30:035 (122,123,124,125) - I like your variation of double notes, but here are my suggestion.
00:30:035 (122,123) - I'd rather have these 2 same color because of the voice pitch being nearly the same, but mostly because the piano pitch on the lower chord being the same (there one note in the high piano chord at 00:30:193 - but is barely noticeable).
00:30:508 (124,125) - And here make it different mostly to emphasize the voice here 00:30:666 - .
In conclusion from this explanation, I would most likely be doing dd dk. - 00:31:930 - It might just be me being really sensitive with hearing, but omg that piano sound here is so clear, is like as loud as these 3 notes 00:31:614 (130,131,132) - . So why no note?
- 00:32:245 (133) -, 00:37:298 (154) - Same reason as 00:27:193 (111) - . Also you haven't been using big D on that calm part, only K for the cymbal, so that D can represent the boom pretty well~.
- 00:40:140 (166,167,168) - I suppose this is for the piano, how about kdk? Since this note 00:40:456 (168) - is the exact same piano pitch as 00:40:140 (166) - .
- 00:40:772 (169,170) - ctrl+g for the voice and piano pitch.
- 00:43:298 (182,183) - ctrl+g? To continue emphasizing the piano high pitch at 00:43:456 - , but also these 2 00:42:982 (181,182) - = same drum.
- 00:50:877 (227,228) - How about making a change here? Instead of always being dk or kd on those double, how about kk here? Mostly to emphasize the high pitch on the voice + instrument .
- 00:55:614 (260,261,262,263,264) - I don't know about you, but I find the kat here 00:55:693 (261) - being quite random ><. I would rather ctrl+g this 00:55:693 (261,262) - to make it ddkdk. So that 00:55:772 - and 00:55:930 - are the same drum = k. And the d here 00:55:851 - = a small change in pitch from the voice.
- 01:03:666 (53,54,55) - ddk? I think you try to match the voice + while doing different pattern in your kiai time, but here I can maybe have a nice reason for the ddk. In the instrument 01:03:666 - and 01:03:745 - = same pitch, while 01:03:824 - = higher~
- 01:09:903 (91) - You have a kdddk on the last 5 notes stream, how about kkddk to fit the voice like you did here 00:59:719 (21,22,23,24,25) - owo.
- 01:12:430 - I would rather make a triplet here 01:12:430 - , since there is an actual drum sound. I would make it ddd though, not sure if you'd like a ddd in your inner oni.
- 01:12:666 (115) - K? super loud cymbal here.
- 01:15:745 (143) - k since it does sound as if this 01:15:666 - high pitch continue a bit.
- 01:18:982 (169) - Make this d, even if is different then 01:18:824 - , the piano is still pertty low pitch, also to emphasize the high pitch at 01:19:298 (170) - .
- 01:20:719 (176) - I personally would prefer a k here to follow the vocal at 01:20:561 (175) - xD.
- 01:21:824 (181) - Ok I honestly don't know if you will hear like me but um, change to d so is different then 01:21:193 (178,179,180) - , and it emphasize the highest pitch of the piano here 01:22:456 (183) - , since the piano go, low to low-high to high (d d k)
- 01:30:351 (204) - change it to d so is different from these 2 notes 01:29:719 (202,203) - and to represent the many piano chord that play here.
Edit : Sorry took me so long, this is one heck of a solid set GJ!