henlo
remove "Mitsuha is such a qt" from tags lol maybe add like "your name nandemonaiya kimi no na wa"
00:14:846 (2) - this slider looks super pretty but doesn't really have a clear path to where it's going like I couldn't tell where from a glance in play.
00:37:551 (1) - I say stack the head of this slider to 00:37:194 (3) - since you kinda do the same thing with 00:30:408 (1) -
00:40:229 (5,1) - I say just extend the slider to 00:40:229 - since the circle may be kinda confusing to play.
00:41:834 (2) - I say nc this if you do the point above
00:43:262 (2) - remove the nc on this one since its not the downbeat
00:44:691 (2) - NC this since it's a downbeat (and you can tell it's more important than the piano key before)
00:45:405 (2) - remove this nc since the nc before
00:47:548 (2) - I think should be nc'd aswell since its a downbeat
01:11:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I know your trying to build up but the jumps literally seem random placed to me
01:47:548 (4) - I dont really understand why you made the slider like this like maybe just copy and replace 01:46:476 (6) -
01:53:619 (1) - I say make this a straight slider to keep consistency with 01:50:762 (1) -
01:56:476 (1) - same with this one
01:50:762 - this timing point isn't snapped to anything (doesn't really matter but still)
02:08:619 - place a circle here and start the spinner 02:08:708 - so you give some feedback to the beat on 02:08:619 -
02:11:838 (1,2,3) - I say increase the spacing between these notes for consistency
02:19:695 (7,8,9) - I say copy these and rotate them 180 degrees for 02:20:409 (1,2,3) - for a more clean look and stack 02:20:766 (3) - to 02:19:516 (6) - (hope that made sense
02:22:730 (8,9) - spacing change here seems kinda overkill in comparison to rest of the section.
02:11:838 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
Throughout this section it feels like you are trying to be super organized but then kinda forgot in some spots.Like with things like 02:28:088 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - are different than 02:30:945 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - even tho they are basically the same thing in the song.
02:17:909 (3) - why is this a reverse slider when 02:15:052 (3) - isn't? its just some small inconsistencies
02:37:145 (1,1,1,1) - having nc's on all of these is completely unnecessary imo
same here 02:38:216 (1,1,1,1) -
03:03:268 (1) - I say the sv change here is kinda a lot imo maybe make this slider the same .75 sv as the sliders before
03:14:697 (1) - I think this slider could be more like smooth or less points maybe try a wave slider or something (basically I think it's ugly I "it's subjective but still:( )
03:40:054 (8,9) - I get your trying to build up but this jump is kinda big imo.
03:40:411 (1,2,3) - tis flow hurts meh. coming out of the reverse slider just to go back and then back again isn't really comfortable
maybe just stack 03:41:304 (2) - to 03:41:482 (3) -
03:45:769 (1,1,1) - nc thing again also I think having the jump to the slider is to much especially since the diff is only 4.2 stars lo
03:47:554 (1) - nc this for consistency with 03:48:982 (1) - since I'm guessing you going off vocals so this too 03:53:268 (5) - and so on
03:49:518 (2) - t h e r e ' s n o t h i n g o n t h i s x d (i say just delete it)
03:49:697 (3,4,5,6) - find the spacing here to be kinda big especially in comparison to the stuff around it
03:52:375 (2,3) - this jump is um kinda w i d e maybe make the jump to 3 a smaller angle
04:08:982 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - <3
04:06:125 (1) - checkmark (just had to say it :^) )
anyway imma wrap the mod up here. All in all i think the map is very inconsistent with what you are trying to follow, like sometimes you do only instruments and sometimes you only do vocals. The first kiai is a heavy diff spike when it truthfully doesn't have to have jumps are triple the size as the parts before. Also i think you break flow to much
good luck with the mapset~~