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HoneyWorks feat. Gero - Jakusha no Sengen [Osu|Taiko]

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Aisha
Hello! Here I am

[General]
  1. Don't forget to check the tags, are incosistent through diffs
  2. Also Space's Insane is the only diff finishing on 01:33:104 , would be nice if you make them all finish at the same spot
[Muzu]
  1. Don't use SV changes on this diff, save them for Oni
  2. It's pretty strange to see you didn't mapped the vocal on 00:00:995 - 00:02:293 - that sounds louder than 00:03:590 - , I thought you were following background music and it's complemented with vocals so it's unhearable, try this:
    00:01:320 -
  3. 00:05:212 (14,15) - 00:06:509 (18,19) - pitches are clearly different, what about 00:05:860 - making d k dd?
  4. 00:14:941 (52,53) - more than double big note it sounds like a triple kkk in somewhere, it's not even supported with big notes D:
  5. 00:20:131 - also consistency with here, they're not even big notes o.o
  6. 00:27:590 - please set a difference from this with 00:28:887 - vocal pitches aren't the same, ddk on second would fit good
  7. 00:30:833 (116,117,118,119) - this sounds way overmapped, even d ddd fits better
  8. 00:31:158 - 00:41:536 - this section would need a rework, it's so similar than the section before and it's clearly more intense than the other, also some vocals aren't correctly followed a.k.a 00:37:968 -
  9. 01:02:131 - overall the idea on Kiai is good, but some parts like 01:03:752 - break a lot the current flow, it's like a drum and vocal mix and it's way strange to hear it, even to read for players (e.g. 01:02:131 (222,223,224,225,226,227,228) - drums then 01:08:131 (247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256) - excessive vocal follow)
[Oni]
  1. Same problem as muzu, 00:06:509 - drum follow when you're following vocals on 00:07:482 - so you skipped 00:06:833 -
  2. 00:08:131 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - k d kkddk fits better imo
  3. Please reconsider every ddK ddK kkD pattern you used, they don't look that nice tbh and most bignotes aren't that strong, also happens on muzu
  4. 00:14:779 (61,62,63,64,65,66) - ^, ddk ddk it's totally better
  5. 00:20:293 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96) - ddkkkkd totally better imo
  6. 00:33:590 (154) - delete this one, would be nice to set a difference from other triples, they're way repetitive and vocal here isn't strong, just a connection
  7. 00:38:779 (177) - ^
  8. 00:40:887 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195) - kkddkkd better or dkddkkd
  9. 00:40:887 - also you can make a better sv slowdown, it can overlaps
  10. 01:02:131 - Kiai is way easy and somehow boring, you can add some triples and not stucking literally at vocals
  11. 01:22:401 (365,366,367,368,369,370,371) - i don't get the point of this odd pattern tbh D:
Basically comments on both difficulties are similar, some finisher usage isn't neccesary imo, this would need more mods imo, you can call me back after some mods! Good luck with this
JiruPiru
here's your mod

Desperation
00:00:671 (4) - why this shape? this doesn't fit.
the whole map uses seemingly random slider shapes that doesn't fit the song very well. unless they depend changing on each word but the lyrics stay generally the same intensity throughout the whole map.
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

xfraczynho wrote:

Hello! Here I am

[General]
  1. Don't forget to check the tags, are incosistent through diffs Fixed
  2. Also Space's Insane is the only diff finishing on 01:33:104 , would be nice if you make them all finish at the same spot He added a note now
Basically comments on both difficulties are similar, some finisher usage isn't neccesary imo, this would need more mods imo, you can call me back after some mods! Good luck with this Okay thanks

DilPil111 wrote:

here's your mod

Desperation
00:00:671 (4) - why this shape? this doesn't fit.
the whole map uses seemingly random slider shapes that doesn't fit the song very well. unless they depend changing on each word but the lyrics stay generally the same intensity throughout the whole map.
Uhm, i don't see why this shape doesn't fit. I make sliders according to what fits the best visually so I can create certain patterns, they don't have a meaning
Spayyce
Thanks for all the modders, apologies for no feedback I kind of got overwhelmed with how many we got!

You're all appreciated tho!
Poii

xfraczynho wrote:

Hello! Here I am

[General]
  1. Don't forget to check the tags, are incosistent through diffs
  2. Also Space's Insane is the only diff finishing on 01:33:104 , would be nice if you make them all finish at the same spot
[Muzu]
  1. Don't use SV changes on this diff, save them for Oni ok del SV
  2. It's pretty strange to see you didn't mapped the vocal on 00:00:995 - 00:02:293 - that sounds louder than 00:03:590 - , I thought you were following background music and it's complemented with vocals so it's unhearable, try this: ok
    00:01:320 -
  3. 00:05:212 (14,15) - 00:06:509 (18,19) - pitches are clearly different, what about 00:05:860 - making d k dd? mirror ok
  4. 00:14:941 (52,53) - more than double big note it sounds like a triple kkk in somewhere, it's not even supported with big notes D:00:15:104 - triplet
  5. 00:20:131 - also consistency with here, they're not even big notes o.o
  6. 00:27:590 - please set a difference from this with 00:28:887 - vocal pitches aren't the same, ddk on second would fit good ok
  7. 00:30:833 (116,117,118,119) - this sounds way overmapped, even d ddd fits better del triplet
  8. 00:31:158 - 00:41:536 - this section would need a rework, it's so similar than the section before and it's clearly more intense than the other, also some vocals aren't correctly followed a.k.a 00:37:968 - it have same flow, yeah the vocal doesnt change that much, i'll keep this section, and change that 00:37:968, i'll try to ask more pipol about this section
  9. 01:02:131 - overall the idea on Kiai is good, but some parts like 01:03:752 - break a lot the current flow, it's like a drum and vocal mix and it's way strange to hear it, even to read for players (e.g. 01:02:131 (222,223,224,225,226,227,228) - drums then 01:08:131 (247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256) - excessive vocal follow) [b]i fill the space with drum, if i mapped only vocal, there will be 2/1 or longer space at kai, like 01:02:455 - has drum but no vocal, yeah, will find more modder and more suggestion ofc[/b]
[Oni]
  1. Same problem as muzu, 00:06:509 - drum follow when you're following vocals on 00:07:482 - so you skipped 00:06:833 - re-arranged
  2. 00:08:131 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - k d kkddk fits better imo ok
  3. Please reconsider every ddK ddK kkD pattern you used, they don't look that nice tbh and most bignotes aren't that strong, also happens on muzu
  4. 00:14:779 (61,62,63,64,65,66) - ^, ddk ddk it's totally better yeah i know,i'll remove some low finsher
  5. 00:20:293 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96) - ddkkkkd totally better imo ok
  6. 00:33:590 (154) - delete this one, would be nice to set a difference from other triples, they're way repetitive and vocal here isn't strong, just a connection
  7. 00:38:779 (177) - ^ ok
  8. 00:40:887 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195) - kkddkkd better or dkddkkd first choice
  9. 00:40:887 - also you can make a better sv slowdown, it can overlaps S for Smooth
  10. 01:02:131 - Kiai is way easy and somehow boring, you can add some triples and not stucking literally at vocals
  11. 01:22:401 (365,366,367,368,369,370,371) - i don't get the point of this odd pattern tbh D: drum maybe, del some notes there
Basically comments on both difficulties are similar, some finisher usage isn't neccesary imo, this would need more mods imo, you can call me back after some mods! Good luck with this
ty frac

muzu
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Title:Jakusha no Sengen
TitleUnicode:弱者の宣言
Artist:HoneyWorks feat. Gero
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256,192,54833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55158,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56293,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56455,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,56779,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,60995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,62455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63104,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,64401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,65050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,65698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,66022,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,66995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67077,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67158,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67320,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68293,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,69590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,72266,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,72509,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,74131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,74455,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,74860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,76077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,76239,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,77050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,77536,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,78022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,78671,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,78995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,79806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,80131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,82806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,83050,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,83860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,84509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84671,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,85320,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85644,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86293,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86779,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87266,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87914,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88239,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,89860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,92779,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,93104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,93428,1,12,0:0:0:0:

dont forget to fix the tag :3 j a c k
Shunao
  • easy
  1. 00:57:104 - from here until 01:00:347 - remove all the notes for a break, like normal and hard diff i don't think it's necessary to map this moment especially on a easy diff lol
  2. 00:12:347 (4,1) - the transition between these notes is mehh because the angle is too big, i can suggest this https://puu.sh/yTHq8/76d0852d56.jpg OR https://puu.sh/yTHAF/8a0e79f3f2.jpg because its looks more attractive and it's easier to follow these notes through to the flow.
  3. 00:20:779 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is different to 00:00:023 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - but this is the same vocals and same density
  4. 00:25:968 (1,1) - stack, should be better imo
  5. 00:29:860 (4) - new combo for emphasis this long slider?
  6. 00:47:698 (2) - why did you make a long slider? it's sound very off tbh, maybe just add a note at 00:47:698 - and a 1/1 slider here 00:48:022
  7. 00:53:860 (4,5) - 00:55:158 (2,3) - and 00:56:455 (5,6) - there are too much circles at the same time, idk if newbies can be able to click on all these circles. imo i think that you could replace some circles by sliders renverse like you did 00:43:482 (3) - 00:45:752 (2)
  8. 01:09:428 (1) - and 01:15:914 (2) - the tails of these slider are too high, it makes a bad transition for the next note, so for the tail of this slider 01:15:914 (2) - i recommend to place it at x:212 y:354 (like this https://puu.sh/yTIqr/d3e6cf0bf7.png) and for the other 01:09:428 (1) - tail should be at x:227 y:238 (like this https://puu.sh/yTIx4/173980f103.png)
  • insane
  1. 00:10:077 (4,1) - why there isn't a high spacing between these notes?? the density isn't the same at all
  2. 00:20:617 (7,1) - here too ^
  3. 00:29:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - aaa please increase spacing between these notes, it's doesn't looks good because they contact all between them, im sure that you can make something better
  4. 00:36:022 (6,1) - not even a little spacing..
  5. 01:12:185 (4,5) - since this is the kiai part, me i would replace them by circles for more fun its can work good i think
  6. 01:33:104 (6) - for the last note, i will make something like this https://puu.sh/yTJCV/fd319952be.jpg because it's more fun to play
i want to see this map ranked!

and nice choice for the song~

gl!~
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

ShogunMoon wrote:

  • easy
  1. 00:57:104 - from here until 01:00:347 - remove all the notes for a break, like normal and hard diff i don't think it's necessary to map this moment especially on a easy diff lol Ok deleted
  2. 00:12:347 (4,1) - the transition between these notes is mehh because the angle is too big, i can suggest this https://puu.sh/yTHq8/76d0852d56.jpg OR https://puu.sh/yTHAF/8a0e79f3f2.jpg because its looks more attractive and it's easier to follow these notes through to the flow. True, I changed the entire section, I hope it's better now
  3. 00:20:779 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is different to 00:00:023 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - but this is the same vocals and same density Ok made them the same
  4. 00:25:968 (1,1) - stack, should be better imo Fixed
  5. 00:29:860 (4) - new combo for emphasis this long slider? Ok
  6. 00:47:698 (2) - why did you make a long slider? it's sound very off tbh, maybe just add a note at 00:47:698 - and a 1/1 slider here 00:48:022 Yeah seems better
  7. 00:53:860 (4,5) - 00:55:158 (2,3) - and 00:56:455 (5,6) - there are too much circles at the same time, idk if newbies can be able to click on all these circles. imo i think that you could replace some circles by sliders reverse like you did 00:43:482 (3) - 00:45:752 (2) Ok changed, I dare anyone to complain about the 1/1 slider spam
  8. 01:09:428 (1) - and 01:15:914 (2) - the tails of these slider are too high, it makes a bad transition for the next note, so for the tail of this slider 01:15:914 (2) - i recommend to place it at x:212 y:354 (like this https://puu.sh/yTIqr/d3e6cf0bf7.png) and for the other 01:09:428 (1) - tail should be at x:227 y:238 (like this https://puu.sh/yTIx4/173980f103.png) Fixed, your suggestions were all really helpful on this diff
  • insane
  1. 00:10:077 (4,1) - why there isn't a high spacing between these notes?? the density isn't the same at all Increased spacing
  2. 00:20:617 (7,1) - here too ^ Not necessary, the drums are stronger than 1, it's also better visually if I keep it like this
  3. 00:29:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - aaa please increase spacing between these notes, it's doesn't looks good because they contact all between them, im sure that you can make something better No, I'm not changing this anymore until I have a concrete solution to this problem, every modder is just saying that it's a bad pattern but I've honestly tried everything now kms
  4. 00:36:022 (6,1) - not even a little spacing.. Increased
  5. 01:12:185 (4,5) - since this is the kiai part, me i would replace them by circles for more fun its can work good i think No triples and streams in this diff
  6. 01:33:104 (6) - for the last note, i will make something like this https://puu.sh/yTJCV/fd319952be.jpg because it's more fun to play I don't like maps ending with a circle and I don't think it's necessary rhythmically here either
i want to see this map ranked!

and nice choice for the song~

gl!~
Thank you so much for modding my map (once again xd) :3
Shunao

J a c k wrote:

Thank you so much for modding my map (once again xd) :3
np xd
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki
Now that all mods have been resolved, I changed the offset again because Mirash recommended it (a long time ago lmao)
Timperjuncio
Desperation

00:07:809 (1,2) - while testplaying, I felt like if it was 1/4 instead of 1/2 because of its comfort while playing. Maybe ctrl+g'ing every one of these 00:08:296 (2,3,4,5,6) - could help to understand it better.
00:12:350 (3,4) - don't emphasize that much in these notes. They are not really important and its spacing is just too big!
00:12:998 (1,2,3) - same with this: do not space so much. But be careful: DO space more here 00:13:485 (4) - .
00:14:134 (1) - fix that blanket (the sliderend should be a less-shaped angle)
00:15:593 (1,2,3) - don't emphasize that much in these notes. They are not really important and its spacing is just too big! (I am going to stop pointing out these mistakes because they happen very often. I hope you understood what I meant with these points and manage to remap all of those you find ^^)
00:23:377 (1,2) - and 00:24:025 (4) - are the same vocals structure, but you mapped it differently. They should be the same (I suggest to make 00:24:025 (4) - look like 00:23:377 (1,2) - ).
00:28:566 (1,4) - same vocals structure (lower sound than in, for example, 00:27:917 (3) - ), but different slider representation. Make it look the same. As they are a lower sound, I would make 00:28:566 (1) - look like 00:29:215 (4) - .
00:31:161 (1,2) - ^ (I won't point out these mistakes anymore. I hope you understand them better and can manage to "mod" it by yourself).
00:35:701 (4,5) - I suggest to replace that with a slider.
00:36:350 (1,2) - This should be 4 circles (undermapped) and I suggest, as I said before, to replace 00:36:998 (3,4) - with a slider.
00:37:647 (1,2) - Good job here! 2 different sliders for 2 different sounds. This is how you should deal with all of the slider issues. Even though it is correctly done, maybe you should make 00:37:971 (2) - like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9931864 because is a stronger sound, and strong sounds are commonly represented with this kind of slidershape.
00:41:539 (1) - to make this circle more accurate, do the following: 00:40:890 (1,2) - ctrl+c ctrl+v this. Then, ctrl+h. After you have ctrl+h'ed those sliders, put them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9931884 . Right where it is the 00:41:620 (1) - slider, you should place that circle. As you can see, it is overlapping with 00:40:890 (1) - , so you should consider to move it horizontally (I hope I have explained myself with this sh*t :P)
00:50:620 here there is sound, but it isn't mapped. You should map it! (I would map it by making 00:50:458 (4) - a slider which could turn into a blanket with 00:49:971 (3) - . Anyways, this is up to you :D)
01:23:053 (1,2,3) - I would ctrl+h this and make it more separated from 01:22:890 (8) - .
Saltssaumure
forgot how to do mods on forum

[Desperation]
pretty fun to play, though I'd increase the spacing on all streams as they tend to kill the momentum of the song when too easy.
00:09:107 (1) - circle feels better when it's in line with previous slider heads instead of slider tail
01:00:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the music has buildup here so the jump pattern should start smaller and increase to match the music.

[Space's Insane]
00:11:701 (1,2,3) - wide angle seems out of place in a map where almost every jump is less than 90 degs.

[Elcheer's Insane]
Increase AR to 9, 8.7 feels low for a 187bpm song.
custom combo colors?
00:29:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is neato

[Insane]
00:08:296 (2,3,4,5,6) - may be slightly too brain melting to read for low sr insane, it'd be easier as circles (or just angled so that each slider points towards the next perhaps).
00:26:620 - from here to 00:30:836 - it's quite a long section of counterclockwise movement. consider making the star at 00:29:863 - rotate clockwise instead to show the change in music more and also to avoid mouse drift.

[Ky's Hard]
I really liked the triangle circles in the kiai.
00:09:755 (2) - NC and/or different slider shape to make the SV change more obvious.
00:44:782 (2,3,1) - blanketing is a lil off
01:26:620 (3) - random clap hitsound?
01:33:107 (5) - the reverse makes the map feel unfinished, would be better as a 1/1 slider.

[Irohas' Normal]
Not a problem, just curious why there are anchors in the middle of the ""straight"" sliders that don't do anything?

gl with rank!
Irohas

Saltssaumure wrote:

[Irohas' Normal]
Not a problem, just curious why there are anchors in the middle of the ""straight"" sliders that don't do anything? slight curved sliders
FiddleBlue
Hi from my queue.

Easy
  1. 00:40:239 (4) - This 1/2 slider seems out of place since it's an easy diff. Usually, objects in an easy difficulty have a spacing of 1 or more beat to not overwhelm the players. The slider is also out of place since there are only 2 objects that use 1/2 snapping divisor.
  2. 00:57:104 (1,2,3,1,2) - Personally, I would make this a break as the music here is really calm.
  3. 01:20:617 (2) - I already stated why this feels out of place, so I hope I don't need to do again.
Irohas' Normal
  1. 00:02:293 (5) - I think changing this to two circles overlapping the next slider's head is better since there's no aiming requirement and that it's easier to manage for players. It fits because it doesn't require much work on sounds that are not that strong.
  2. 00:45:104 (2,3,4) - This part seems too much for players in a calm section. Perhaps do this instead: https://i.imgur.com/37LU5nn.png
  3. 00:47:212 - There's a drum sound here, so maybe make 00:46:725 (1) - stop 1/2 beat early and put a circle on the white tick.
Ky's Hard
  1. 00:03:914 (1,2) - Why not just make it a full beat slider lol. There's nothing particular in the second white tick so this isn't really necessary.
  2. 00:11:536 (1,2) - Flow here is uncomfortable. You use comfortable flow for 00:16:725 (1,2) - and 00:19:320 (1,2) - so why not here?
  3. 00:35:698 (3,4) - I already talk about this, so explanation needed I hope. There are parts which are the same but recognizing them won't be hard lol.
  4. 00:44:779 (2,3) - FIX BLANKET REEEEEEE
  5. 00:48:347 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These using drum-hitnormal is really weird. Doesn't seem to emphasize anything.
  6. 01:32:779 (4,5) - There's a sound on the first red tick and none in the second. A 1/2 beat slider following a 1 beat slider separated by 1/2 beat seems more appropriate.
Insane
  1. Don't really agree with how every 1/4 rhythm is simplified with 1/4 sliders. Players are capable of streaming since it's an insane diff, and give off the impression that every 1/4 rhythm is the same thing since they're emphasized with the same object. The next three bullets are examples of this:
  2. The sounds on 00:08:212 - and 00:08:293 (2) - are different than 00:08:455 (3,4,5,6) - . So perhaps make it into a stream from 00:07:806 (1) - leading to the 1/4 sliders to differentiate and emphasize the strong snares better.
  3. 00:15:104 (4) - A triple is better since the sound on the red and blue tick is the same.
  4. 00:20:455 (6,7) - The sounds here are different than the one on the other 1/4 sliders. A stream would be great to emphasize that.
  5. 00:35:050 (1,2,3) - Perhaps make the triangle larger for 00:34:401 (3,2) - to be properly stacked?
  6. 00:50:779 (1) - A 1/2 slider seems to be better here to make 00:51:104 (2) - feel more comfortable. It's more of a feeling so idk your choice.
  7. 01:27:752 (4) - Triples work better here.
Elcheer's Insane
  1. 00:00:350 (3) - Perhaps change to 2 circles instead since you seem to follow the vocals at the beginning of the song?
  2. 00:01:323 (1,3) - Could be made to not overlap one another so that it looks neater.
  3. 00:29:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - This is really just stupid aesthetic nitpicking, but objects that are overlapping one another could be made for them to be the same distance. You could copy for example 00:30:025 (2,5) - and use it for 00:30:188 (3,7) - and 00:30:998 (8,9,1) - .
  4. The sound on 00:35:053 (1,2,3,4) - is different than 00:34:404 (3,4,5,6) - . So you could change 00:34:404 (3,4,5,6) - to be 1/2 sliders to emphasize the sound on the next four 1/2 beats.
Space's Insane
  1. 00:00:026 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is overdone with its spacing and flow. The music at the beginning isn't that intense to support this kind of placements, and the rest of the section isn't as intense as them. 00:00:026 (1,2) - flows uncomfortably since the 00:00:026 (1) - is going the opposite of where the next slider is. This isn't really justified in the music or the section. 00:00:674 (3,4,5) - spacing is too big when there's nothing strong in the music. You could make it like this: https://i.imgur.com/hS4PapT.png, or just anything that flows smoothly or makes sense to the rest of the section.
  2. 00:08:458 (3,4) - These sound different than 00:07:809 (1,2) - , they're more stronger. You could make them a stream or 1/4 sliders to emphasize that.
  3. 00:09:107 (1) - How come this isn't spaced? It's as strong as the other white tick :(
  4. 00:09:755 (2) - There's no drum sound on both white tick, so putting claps wouldn't make sense lol.
  5. 00:10:242 (3) - Why is there a clap here lol.
  6. 00:11:053 (4) - Chances are the drum sound here is a bass drum or just guitar. Either way, the clap won't work here since it's a snare sound so it's not appropriate. Snares sound sharp and are usually on the second and third white ticks like 00:10:728 (2) - and the slider's end of 00:11:053 (4) - . Sometimes it does not, so use 25% playback to listen if you're unsure. Fix the rest of the map with the same issue.
  7. 01:17:863 - Why stop hitsounding the drums? Don't think there's anything here to support that.
  8. 01:33:431 - Uhh nothing to emphasize this sound?
Fapu's Extra
  1. 00:01:971 (3) - Since the guitar disrupt this part from being like before, you could make this to be two stacked 1/2 circles. This will emphasize the guitar and relate it to the other same parts.
  2. 00:08:458 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Drums here are the same intensity so you could use one volume instead.
  3. 00:30:350 (4) - Sound here seems to belong to the first stacking instead of the second one.
  4. 00:30:512 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - The stacked 1/2 circles and the stream related to each other since the guitar sound is played on each 1/2 beat. The guitar thing divides itself into two parts: the first (00:29:863 (1,2,3,4) - and last (00:30:512 (5,6,7,9) - ) two beats of the measure. So by doing this adds to your emphasis on that guitar.
  5. 01:17:377 (4,5,6) - You could make this triple have a motion that follows the circular flow of 01:16:404 (1,2,3) - .
Desperation
  1. 00:08:296 (2) - Just a circle would fit here. The 1/4 rhythm actually starts at 00:07:809 - spanning for a whole measure with 00:08:458 (3,4,5,6) - having drums in them while the rest don't. Since you ignore the subtle 1/4 sounds on the first and second beat doing 00:08:296 (2) - won't really make sense.
  2. 01:08:458 (5,4) - Fix overlap :(
  3. The rest of the map is really straightforward with its rhythm and gameplay so I don't have anything wrong with them. Good job!
Good luck with the mapset! o/
FiddleBlue
edit: ignore this. send the same thing twice and i can't delete lol
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

FiddleBlue wrote:

edit: ignore this. send the same thing twice and i can't delete lol
lol no problem, I will apply all mods as soon as Timperjuncio finishes his mod because he said he would continue another day
Spayyce

FiddleBlue wrote:

00:00:026 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is overdone with its spacing and flow. The music at the beginning isn't that intense to support this kind of placements, and the rest of the section isn't as intense as them. 00:00:026 (1,2) - flows uncomfortably since the 00:00:026 (1) - is going the opposite of where the next slider is. This isn't really justified in the music or the section. 00:00:674 (3,4,5) - spacing is too big when there's nothing strong in the music. You could make it like this: https://i.imgur.com/hS4PapT.png, or just anything that flows smoothly or makes sense to the rest of the section.
Fixed part of the mod by reducing space on 3,4,5. Kept the same pattern because "It's my style(TM)"

FiddleBlue wrote:

01:33:431 - Uhh nothing to emphasize this sound?
The last suggestion is also changed.
Irohas

FiddleBlue wrote:

Hi from my queue.

Irohas' Normal
  1. 00:02:293 (5) - I think changing this to two circles overlapping the next slider's head is better since there's no aiming requirement and that it's easier to manage for players. It fits because it doesn't require much work on sounds that are not that strong. i think sliders are more easier than circles in lower diffs, so i keep
  2. 00:45:104 (2,3,4) - This part seems too much for players in a calm section. Perhaps do this instead: https://i.imgur.com/37LU5nn.png the bell sound on the downbeat is too heavy being ignored, but both suits
  3. 00:47:212 - There's a drum sound here, so maybe make 00:46:725 (1) - stop 1/2 beat early and put a circle on the white tick. its more like a consistency with 00:41:539 (1,1) - actually xd and i voluntary skipped that sound cause that part is too calm and i dont want to make a complicated rhythm in that kind of part
no change but thx!!
FiddleBlue

-Space- wrote:

FiddleBlue wrote:

00:00:026 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is overdone with its spacing and flow. The music at the beginning isn't that intense to support this kind of placements, and the rest of the section isn't as intense as them. 00:00:026 (1,2) - flows uncomfortably since the 00:00:026 (1) - is going the opposite of where the next slider is. This isn't really justified in the music or the section. 00:00:674 (3,4,5) - spacing is too big when there's nothing strong in the music. You could make it like this: https://i.imgur.com/hS4PapT.png, or just anything that flows smoothly or makes sense to the rest of the section.
Fixed part of the mod by reducing space on 3,4,5. Kept the same pattern because "It's my style(TM)"

FiddleBlue wrote:

01:33:431 - Uhh nothing to emphasize this sound?
The last suggestion is also changed.
So I guess you rejected the rest? I would like an explanation why so I can understand your map and this unusual (for me) way of hitsounding.
Elcheer

Saltssaumure wrote:

[Elcheer's Insane]
Increase AR to 9, 8.7 feels low for a 187bpm song. with the diff below me at ar8.5 and the diff above me at 9, i'd rather stay in between the two
custom combo colors? oops, fixed
00:29:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is neato fixed lmao

FiddleBlue wrote:

Elcheer's Insane
  1. 00:00:350 (3) - Perhaps change to 2 circles instead since you seem to follow the vocals at the beginning of the song? fixed
  2. 00:01:323 (1,3) - Could be made to not overlap one another so that it looks neater. fixed
  3. 00:29:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - This is really just stupid aesthetic nitpicking, but objects that are overlapping one another could be made for them to be the same distance. You could copy for example 00:30:025 (2,5) - and use it for 00:30:188 (3,7) - and 00:30:998 (8,9,1) - . fixed, it does make it neater
  4. The sound on 00:35:053 (1,2,3,4) - is different than 00:34:404 (3,4,5,6) - . So you could change 00:34:404 (3,4,5,6) - to be 1/2 sliders to emphasize the sound on the next four 1/2 beats. fixed
also added a few adjustments on my end

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Kyle Y

Saltssaumure wrote:

[Ky's Hard]
I really liked the triangle circles in the kiai. thanks
00:09:755 (2) - NC and/or different slider shape to make the SV change more obvious. okay
00:44:782 (2,3,1) - blanketing is a lil off fixed, hope it will be okay.
01:26:620 (3) - random clap hitsound? I will fix hit sound later.
01:33:107 (5) - the reverse makes the map feel unfinished, would be better as a 1/1 slider. fixed.

gl with rank!

FiddleBlue wrote:

Hi from my queue.

Ky's Hard
  1. 00:03:914 (1,2) - Why not just make it a full beat slider lol. There's nothing particular in the second white tick so this isn't really necessary. for rhythm constant
  2. 00:11:536 (1,2) - Flow here is uncomfortable. You use comfortable flow for 00:16:725 (1,2) - and 00:19:320 (1,2) - so why not here? not really big problem here.
  3. 00:35:698 (3,4) - I already talk about this, so explanation needed I hope. There are parts which are the same but recognizing them won't be hard lol.
  4. 00:44:779 (2,3) - FIX BLANKET REEEEEEE fixed
  5. 00:48:347 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These using drum-hitnormal is really weird. Doesn't seem to emphasize anything. I will deal with hit sound later.
  6. 01:32:779 (4,5) - There's a sound on the first red tick and none in the second. A 1/2 beat slider following a 1 beat slider separated by 1/2 beat seems more appropriate.fixed.
Good luck with the mapset! o/
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TitleUnicode:弱者の宣言
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Tags:Irohas MugiwaraSekai Kyle_Y Elcheer -Space- Faputa Poii
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Spayyce
I like the way they sound.

I don't necessarily believe they're hindering the song as they, to me, sound like a universal beat that can incorporate the song very well.
Faputa

FiddleBlue wrote:

Hi from my queue.

Fapu's Extra
  1. 00:01:971 (3) - Since the guitar disrupt this part from being like before, you could make this to be two stacked 1/2 circles. This will emphasize the guitar and relate it to the other same parts. Optional while not important. I'll keep my own pattern
  2. 00:08:458 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Drums here are the same intensity so you could use one volume instead. Drums did have volume rise from what I heard
  3. 00:30:350 (4) - Sound here seems to belong to the first stacking instead of the second one. having this as the second stacking emphasizes the new drum sound enters, and it plays well.
  4. 00:30:512 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - The stacked 1/2 circles and the stream related to each other since the guitar sound is played on each 1/2 beat. The guitar thing divides itself into two parts: the first (00:29:863 (1,2,3,4) - and last (00:30:512 (5,6,7,9) - ) two beats of the measure. So by doing this adds to your emphasis on that guitar. I mapped more circles in this section to indicate just that and while clicking more, players know it is more intense. So no need to do anything else here.
  5. 01:17:377 (4,5,6) - You could make this triple have a motion that follows the circular flow of 01:16:404 (1,2,3) - . fixed

Good luck with the mapset! o/
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Tags:Irohas MugiwaraSekai Kyle_Y Elcheer -Space- Faputa Poii
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-Atri-
From my queue

[General]
  1. Volume setting on your diffs and Normal could work harder, you used same volume setting on calmer parts (00:00:000 - , 00:20:782 - ) and stronger parts (00:10:404) and it's really plain

[Irohas' Normal]
  1. 01:31:971 (3) - offscreen

[Ky's Hard]
  1. 同fapu嘅一樣,成個diff都無咩finish,況且開頭果度點解會咁多種hitsound嘅方法,00:10:404 - 果度用drum已經唔係幾合理,00:12:998 - 轉咗去soft,00:12:998 (1) - 先有claps
  2. 整體上除咗hitsound無咩問題

[Insane]
  1. 00:10:890 (4,1) - symmetry
  2. 00:13:971 (5,1) - 00:19:161 (5,1) - 01:24:025 (5,1) - 01:26:620 (5,1) - etc. Unstack these? Stacking them makes the emphasis on finishes weaker
  3. 00:40:890 (1) - Offscreen.
  4. Same problem as Desperation on volume settings

[elcheer's Insane]
  1. 00:19:809 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - nazi, but blanket 00:19:323 (1) - slider end
  2. 00:38:620 (6) - ctrl+g? and the spacing is too large imo judging the spacing in this part
  3. 00:48:998 (8) - make it a curve slider like 00:48:025 (5,6,7) - ? For visual consistency
  4. 01:00:998 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - the emphasis is quite strange though, the stronger note was on 01:00:998 - 01:01:485 - 01:01:971 - but the current pattern emphasizes 01:01:323 - 01:01:647 - instead
  5. 01:02:134 (1,4) - the overlap can be avoided imo, yet the visual contrast isn't go well with 01:02:134 (1) -

[Space's Insane]
  1. 01:03:269 (4,1) - 01:05:863 (5,1) - 01:08:620 (5,1) - 01:29:377 (5,1) - etc. the rhythm is quite off though, there's a new section of vocal/guitar on the red tick, instead of the downbeat, the finish makes this problem worse, but you did them well on 01:13:809 (1) -
  2. 01:18:188 (3,5,6) - 01:19:161 (1,3,5,7) - ... Why the random normal finish though lol, not really necessary
  3. 01:33:431 - Add note? There's an important sound

[Fapu's Extra]
  1. 00:02:296 (4,1) - 建議blanket包近啲,而家咁樣唔單止令到 00:01:647 (2,4,1) - 個visual spacing好唔整齊,00:02:620 (1,2) - 嘅1/4 flow感覺唔好打
  2. 00:04:242 (2,3,4,5,6) - 如果個連打係跟結他聲嘅話都係stack或者係減細spacing,而家嘅spacing感覺好似突顯咗比較靜嘅聲
  3. 00:07:809 (1,2) - nazi,就算開咗stack都無blanket好
  4. 00:08:296 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nazi,個曲線唔齊,如果係漸進連打嘅話建議用slider嚟對齊佢哋
  5. 00:35:539 - 呢都冇跟結他triple點解 00:36:836 (3) - 跟咗,好inconsistent
  6. 00:37:647 (1,2,3,4) - 呢度跟咩,唔係幾似跟人聲
  7. 發現成個diff都無咩finish,建議嚮 00:10:404 (1) - 00:11:539 (1) - 等等有cymbal嘅地方落finish

[Desperation]
  1. 01:12:188 (4,5,6,7,1) - Make the spacing in this stream larger? to give better flow with the jump
  2. 01:22:404 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^, yet it give more gradual slow down with 01:22:728 (7,8,1) -
  3. Solid

Good luck~
Rougoku
no kd, not too much to report which hasn't really been said I guess

[General]
Background size is too

[Easy]
00:36:350 (1) - I don't like it so much, most of your repeats on vocals are more curvy, and I find that this slider sticks really out compared to all others.
01:20:620 (2) - 1/2 slider which is a little out of place, especially on an Easy. Moreover, the sound at 01:20:944 is pretty much the same, so that would mean that if you want to keep it, you need to put another 1/2 slider instead of the circle.

[Normal]

01:31:971 (3) - offscreen
Elcheer

Firis Mistlud wrote:

[elcheer's Insane]
  1. 00:19:809 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - nazi, but blanket 00:19:323 (1) - slider end somewhat fixed
  2. 00:38:620 (6) - ctrl+g? and the spacing is too large imo judging the spacing in this part somewhat fixed
  3. 00:48:998 (8) - make it a curve slider like 00:48:025 (5,6,7) - ? For visual consistency fixed
  4. 01:00:998 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - the emphasis is quite strange though, the stronger note was on 01:00:998 - 01:01:485 - 01:01:971 - but the current pattern emphasizes 01:01:323 - 01:01:647 - instead somewhat fixed
  5. 01:02:134 (1,4) - the overlap can be avoided imo, yet the visual contrast isn't go well with 01:02:134 (1) - fixed

bleh
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Timperjuncio
Fapu's Extra

00:01:323 (1,2,3) - I would rotate it 45º and place it like this so it flow better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9952692
00:04:242 (2,3,4,5) - I don't hear any 1/4 sound
00:06:350 (7,8,1) - space it more. While I was playing it, I got confused with a 1/4, instead of 1/2 (you can see a similar spacing between 00:06:025 (6,7) - and 00:07:161 (4,5) - , even though they are 1/2 and 1/4 respectively)
00:08:296 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - really anaesthetic. It seems to have been made manually. Make a slider as a point of reference and place the cirlces over it to make propper shapes.
00:16:242 (3,4,5) - I would make it flow as it was flowing before and make the flow-change in 00:16:728 (1) - . I think it makes much more sense and it's really comfortable to the player. If not, there would be too many flow-changes in such short time.
00:20:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the flow in this part is really weird on its own. If you want to make it look like a common structure, make 00:22:080 (1) - be placed in a lower position than where it is. You will realise if you focus on the cursor's movement.
01:04:080 (3,4,5,6) - I personally disagree with the idea of making jumps with such sharp angle. I would make it more "star-like" so that it is more comfortable for the player.
01:15:593 (2,3) - there are no vocals on this part. Even though, you mapped it just the same as in 01:15:917 (4,5,6) - . Consider to make any change to distinguish both parts.
01:23:053 from this part until the end I miss many clap sounds.

Space's Insane

What's the reason to make soooo many unnecessary clap sounds through all the song? Make it according to the drums, not to the interpretation you give to the song.

00:00:836 (4) - I would actually make it stack with 00:00:350 (2) - . I don't feel like it is a nice overlap tbh.
00:00:998 (5,1) - separate more 00:00:998 (5) - from 00:01:323 (1) - (or 00:01:323 (1) - from 00:00:998 (5) - )
00:20:944 (2,3) - too spaced for a slow part
00:37:485 (5,1,2) - this pattern's flow is really meh. I would place them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9952991
00:56:134 (2,3,4) - I don't hear any 1/4 sound
01:03:593 (1,1,1,1,1) - I would start those sliders the red tick before
01:05:215 (2,3,4) - very uncomfortable to play (too sharp)
01:10:404 (2,3) - the music is not really loud here, but its spacing is very big. Make it smaller in order to fit the song propperly
01:30:836 (1) - this is just too random. As it is not a repeated slider, I would replace it with a more common one.
Faputa

Firis Mistlud wrote:

[Fapu's Extra]
  1. 00:02:296 (4,1) - 建議blanket包近啲,而家咁樣唔單止令到 00:01:647 (2,4,1) - 個visual spacing好唔整齊,00:02:620 (1,2) - 嘅1/4 flow感覺唔好打 okay
  2. 00:04:242 (2,3,4,5,6) - 如果個連打係跟結他聲嘅話都係stack或者係減細spacing,而家嘅spacing感覺好似突顯咗比較靜嘅聲 小改了
  3. 00:07:809 (1,2) - nazi,就算開咗stack都無blanket好 夠好了吧?
  4. 00:08:296 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nazi,個曲線唔齊,如果係漸進連打嘅話建議用slider嚟對齊佢哋 fixed
  5. 00:35:539 - 呢都冇跟結他triple點解 00:36:836 (3) - 跟咗,好inconsistent fixed
  6. 00:37:647 (1,2,3,4) - 呢度跟咩,唔係幾似跟人聲 我覺得ok
  7. 發現成個diff都無咩finish,建議嚮 00:10:404 (1) - 00:11:539 (1) - 等等有cymbal嘅地方落finish

Good luck~

Timperjuncio wrote:

Fapu's Extra

00:01:323 (1,2,3) - I would rotate it 45º and place it like this so it flow better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9952692 I think currently is fine
00:04:242 (2,3,4,5) - I don't hear any 1/4 sound There is
00:06:350 (7,8,1) - space it more. While I was playing it, I got confused with a 1/4, instead of 1/2 (you can see a similar spacing between 00:06:025 (6,7) - and 00:07:161 (4,5) - , even though they are 1/2 and 1/4 respectively) fixed
00:08:296 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - really anaesthetic. It seems to have been made manually. Make a slider as a point of reference and place the cirlces over it to make propper shapes. fixed in previous mod
00:16:242 (3,4,5) - I would make it flow as it was flowing before and make the flow-change in 00:16:728 (1) - . I think it makes much more sense and it's really comfortable to the player. If not, there would be too many flow-changes in such short time. fixed?
00:20:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the flow in this part is really weird on its own. If you want to make it look like a common structure, make 00:22:080 (1) - be placed in a lower position than where it is. You will realise if you focus on the cursor's movement. I think its fine. There's like a "ku" sound that I can use as flow break
01:04:080 (3,4,5,6) - I personally disagree with the idea of making jumps with such sharp angle. I would make it more "star-like" so that it is more comfortable for the player. angles here whether it is star-shaped or not I have designated, so its fine
01:15:593 (2,3) - there are no vocals on this part. Even though, you mapped it just the same as in 01:15:917 (4,5,6) - . Consider to make any change to distinguish both parts. fixed
01:23:053 from this part until the end I miss many clap sounds. fixed as well

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Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

Timperjuncio wrote:

Desperation

00:07:809 (1,2) - while testplaying, I felt like if it was 1/4 instead of 1/2 because of its comfort while playing. Maybe ctrl+g'ing every one of these 00:08:296 (2,3,4,5,6) - could help to understand it better. Yeah they are supposed to be comfortable
00:12:350 (3,4) - don't emphasize that much in these notes. They are not really important and its spacing is just too big! No, 3 is like my default spacing, I'm not really emphasizing them more than others. The spacing is not too big, this is not a 3* map lmao
00:12:998 (1,2,3) - same with this: do not space so much. But be careful: DO space more here 00:13:485 (4) - . I don't really agree with this,
the only difference between them is that 4 is a longer sound and that is expressed by a slider, I think it's fine

00:14:134 (1) - fix that blanket (the sliderend should be a less-shaped angle) I'm not sure whether I'm supposed to blanket the first or the last circle of the triple in such a case...I blanketed the first one since it's the first to appear but idk this is just weird
00:15:593 (1,2,3) - don't emphasize that much in these notes. They are not really important and its spacing is just too big! (I am going to stop pointing out these mistakes because they happen very often. I hope you understood what I meant with these points and manage to remap all of those you find ^^) Thanks for the suggestion but nah, it's fine the way it is
00:23:377 (1,2) - and 00:24:025 (4) - are the same vocals structure, but you mapped it differently. They should be the same (I suggest to make 00:24:025 (4) - look like 00:23:377 (1,2) - ). Remapped the whole section
00:28:566 (1,4) - same vocals structure (lower sound than in, for example, 00:27:917 (3) - ), but different slider representation. Make it look the same. As they are a lower sound, I would make 00:28:566 (1) - look like 00:29:215 (4) - . I don't use slidershapes to represent certain sounds
00:31:161 (1,2) - ^ (I won't point out these mistakes anymore. I hope you understand them better and can manage to "mod" it by yourself). Same as above
00:35:701 (4,5) - I suggest to replace that with a slider. I mapped the drums in this section, not the vocals
00:36:350 (1,2) - This should be 4 circles (undermapped) and I suggest, as I said before, to replace 00:36:998 (3,4) - with a slider. This is also because of the drums
00:37:647 (1,2) - Good job here! 2 different sliders for 2 different sounds. This is how you should deal with all of the slider issues. Even though it is correctly done, maybe you should make 00:37:971 (2) - like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9931864 because is a stronger sound, and strong sounds are commonly represented with this kind of slidershape. Idc about slidershapes
00:41:539 (1) - to make this circle more accurate, do the following: 00:40:890 (1,2) - ctrl+c ctrl+v this. Then, ctrl+h. After you have ctrl+h'ed those sliders, put them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9931884 . Right where it is the 00:41:620 (1) - slider, you should place that circle. As you can see, it is overlapping with 00:40:890 (1) - , so you should consider to move it horizontally (I hope I have explained myself with this sh*t :P) That's just not how you do perfect geometric shapes, I want to have a perfect triangle, that does not mean that 00:40:890 (1) - and 00:41:539 (1) - are horizontally aligned
00:50:620 here there is sound, but it isn't mapped. You should map it! (I would map it by making 00:50:458 (4) - a slider which could turn into a blanket with 00:49:971 (3) - . Anyways, this is up to you :D) I didn't map it because I am already focusing on drums + vocals in this section and i want to emphasize 00:50:782 (1) -
01:23:053 (1,2,3) - I would ctrl+h this and make it more separated from 01:22:890 (8) - . The flow is really good here so I'm not changing anything
Thanks for the mod!

Saltssaumure wrote:

forgot how to do mods on forum

[Desperation]
pretty fun to play, though I'd increase the spacing on all streams as they tend to kill the momentum of the song when too easy.
00:09:107 (1) - circle feels better when it's in line with previous slider heads instead of slider tail Ok
01:00:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the music has buildup here so the jump pattern should start smaller and increase to match the music. It's already increasing

[Insane]
00:08:296 (2,3,4,5,6) - may be slightly too brain melting to read for low sr insane, it'd be easier as circles (or just angled so that each slider points towards the next perhaps). It's fine imo
00:26:620 - from here to 00:30:836 - it's quite a long section of counterclockwise movement. consider making the star at 00:29:863 - rotate clockwise instead to show the change in music more and also to avoid mouse drift. You may be right about that but I don't wanna break flow here

gl with rank!
Thanks :3

FiddleBlue wrote:

Hi from my queue.

Easy
  1. 00:40:239 (4) - This 1/2 slider seems out of place since it's an easy diff. Usually, objects in an easy difficulty have a spacing of 1 or more beat to not overwhelm the players. The slider is also out of place since there are only 2 objects that use 1/2 snapping divisor. It's not forbidden to use 1/2 rhythm in easy. This sound is really strong so I'm keeping it
  2. 00:57:104 (1,2,3,1,2) - Personally, I would make this a break as the music here is really calm. Already fixed in another mod
  3. 01:20:617 (2) - I already stated why this feels out of place, so I hope I don't need to do again. No changes here
Insane
  1. Don't really agree with how every 1/4 rhythm is simplified with 1/4 sliders. Players are capable of streaming since it's an insane diff, and give off the impression that every 1/4 rhythm is the same thing since they're emphasized with the same object. The next three bullets are examples of this:
  2. The sounds on 00:08:212 - and 00:08:293 (2) - are different than 00:08:455 (3,4,5,6) - . So perhaps make it into a stream from 00:07:806 (1) - leading to the 1/4 sliders to differentiate and emphasize the strong snares better. Ok so first of all, there is no sound on 00:08:215 - . And I could replace 00:08:296 (2) - by two circles but it feels really weird. I think it's okay to keep it as a 1/4 slider because actually the only difference is the volume of the drums, which I made clear by using different hitsounds. Also, circles give more emphasis than sliders imo therefore it would not make sense
  3. 00:15:104 (4) - A triple is better since the sound on the red and blue tick is the same. So what? The sound is also the same as the previous short reverse slider
  4. 00:20:455 (6,7) - The sounds here are different than the one on the other 1/4 sliders. A stream would be great to emphasize that. Hmm okay
  5. 00:35:050 (1,2,3) - Perhaps make the triangle larger for 00:34:401 (3,2) - to be properly stacked? I prefer keeping equal distances
  6. 00:50:779 (1) - A 1/2 slider seems to be better here to make 00:51:104 (2) - feel more comfortable. It's more of a feeling so idk your choice. Not necessary imo
  7. 01:27:752 (4) - Triples work better here. There's no reason for that
Desperation
  1. 00:08:296 (2) - Just a circle would fit here. The 1/4 rhythm actually starts at 00:07:809 - spanning for a whole measure with 00:08:458 (3,4,5,6) - having drums in them while the rest don't. Since you ignore the subtle 1/4 sounds on the first and second beat doing 00:08:296 (2) - won't really make sense. That's not true at all. There is a sound at 00:08:377 - although it's not that strong
  2. 01:08:458 (5,4) - Fix overlap :( Fixed
  3. The rest of the map is really straightforward with its rhythm and gameplay so I don't have anything wrong with them. Good job! Thanks!
Good luck with the mapset! o/
Ty :3

Firis Mistlud wrote:

From my queue

[General]
  1. Volume setting on your diffs and Normal could work harder, you used same volume setting on calmer parts (00:00:000 - , 00:20:782 - ) and stronger parts (00:10:404) and it's really plain Fixed in my diffs

[Insane]
  1. 00:10:890 (4,1) - symmetry Fixed
  2. 00:13:971 (5,1) - 00:19:161 (5,1) - 01:24:025 (5,1) - 01:26:620 (5,1) - etc. Unstack these? Stacking them makes the emphasis on finishes weaker It's fine imo
  3. 00:40:890 (1) - Offscreen. I'm not sure if this counts as offscreen
  4. Same problem as Desperation on volume settings Already fixed

[Desperation]
  1. 01:12:188 (4,5,6,7,1) - Make the spacing in this stream larger? to give better flow with the jump I like the streams this way
  2. 01:22:404 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^, yet it give more gradual slow down with 01:22:728 (7,8,1) - Same as above
  3. Solid Thanks!
Good luck~
Ty for the mod

Rougoku wrote:

no kd, not too much to report which hasn't really been said I guess I'm still giving you kudosu xd

[General]
Background size is too No.

[Easy]
00:36:350 (1) - I don't like it so much, most of your repeats on vocals are more curvy, and I find that this slider sticks really out compared to all others. Ok changing back to straight slider
01:20:620 (2) - 1/2 slider which is a little out of place, especially on an Easy. Moreover, the sound at 01:20:944 is pretty much the same, so that would mean that if you want to keep it, you need to put another 1/2 slider instead of the circle. Replaced by circle
Thanks for the mod
Kyle Y

Firis Mistlud wrote:

From my queue 嘩嘩原來你個queue 仲係到

[Ky's Hard]
  1. 同fapu嘅一樣,成個diff都無咩finish,況且開頭果度點解會咁多種hitsound嘅方法,00:10:404 - 果度用drum已經唔係幾合理,00:12:998 - 轉咗去soft,00:12:998 (1) - 先有claps
  2. 整體上除咗hitsound無咩問題
    我對我既Hard 有自信,只係對hit sound 冇自信
    話說我好似冇幫依張圖hit sound 過 :P
    睇黎係時候加hit sound 啦

Good luck~
Kyle Y
update: hit sound fix.

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-Atri-
Ya it touched the boundary of the screen, still count as offscreen

Faputa

Firis Mistlud wrote:

Ya it touched the boundary of the screen, still count as offscreen

🤔
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

Firis Mistlud wrote:

Ya it touched the boundary of the screen, still count as offscreen

Okay I will fix this, thanks for letting me know :)
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki
Btw about the end of the song:
  1. Kyle Y, I think you made 01:33:107 (5) - too short by mistake, it should last until 01:33:431 -
  2. -Space-, I think you forgot to add a note at 01:33:431 - (and did you overlook Saltssaumure's mod or did you not reply bc it was so short xd)
Lafayla
from queue
really late D:
general suggestion -> i would suggest doing a harsher fade at the end of the mp3, optional though
Easy

00:29:863 (1,2) - this overlap is a bit painful to look at especially when rest of placement is clean
00:48:674 (4,2) - visual spacing bettween is much lower here, can be prettied up for better aesthetic try to match ->00:54:512 (1,2) - since this one was done p good
00:26:944 (2,3) - same thing ^
00:51:917 (1,2) - same thing ^
irohas

01:02:134 (1) - this hitsound is pretty scary D:
01:31:971 (3) - offscreen
cool diff tho
ky

00:43:809 (3,1) - visual spacing would look better if similar to 00:44:782 (2,3) -
00:55:809 (1,1) - this diff was pretty clean until this, i see the square pattern happening but im sure there is something cleaner that can be put here instead
00:57:107 - a circle for that cymbal crash hitsound would be cool and making the repeat just a 1/2 slider
elcheer

00:00:512 (4) - painful angle despite not being what you are emphasizing
00:04:566 (3,1) - ugly overlap
00:12:674 (5,1,2,3,4) - this can definitely be cleaned up
00:52:728 (4) - big spacing why?
00:53:863 (4) - emphasis spot in the middle of a tri pattern ... making something distinct for 00:53:863 (4,5) - would be better
01:24:188 (1) - would be better if visually similar to 00:10:890 (4,1) - and 00:13:485 (4,1) -
00:56:620 (6) - why the lower spacing? i don't hear anything significant changing inside this jump spam, also you can definitely make this star prettier
00:55:809 (1) - this object is offscreen by only 1 pixel
00:55:809 (1,2) - these would be better as claps rather than whistles because start of jump spam also drum is litterally the same
space

00:06:674 (2) - this wide angle and extra spacing seems a bit too harsh for this object especially when i expected emphasis on 00:06:512 (1) -
00:11:053 (4) - i don't understand the emphasis here, is this alt emphasis pattern intentional
00:15:593 - ignoring the melody for only mapping percussion sounds weird here, you can help this out by 00:16:242 (4) - switching this for 2 circles so that you still follow percussion but melody doesn't get left for dirt
00:18:836 (4) - same^
01:06:188 (1) - emphasis on this sounds weird because you left 01:06:025 - for a slider end

best of wishes with the mapset jack
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

Lafayla wrote:

from queue
really late D: no problem xd
general suggestion -> i would suggest doing a harsher fade at the end of the mp3, optional though I don't think it's necessary, I've already changed the mp3 and I don't wanna do it again lmao
Easy

00:29:863 (1,2) - this overlap is a bit painful to look at especially when rest of placement is clean Fixed
00:48:674 (4,2) - visual spacing bettween is much lower here, can be prettied up for better aesthetic try to match ->00:54:512 (1,2) - since this one was done p good Fixed
00:26:944 (2,3) - same thing ^ I think it's not that bad here and I didn't find a way to fix it properly anyways
00:51:917 (1,2) - same thing ^ Same as above
best of wishes with the mapset jack
Thank you :3
Aeo
Space's Insane
01:03:593 (1) - The vocals start on the red tick so I'd put this slider at 01:03:431 considering you did the same at01:04:728 (1)
01:06:188 (1) - Same for this, there's not any significant sound on the white tick
01:08:782 (1) - ^
01:11:377 (1) - ^
01:20:296 (1) - ^
01:25:647 (1) - There's a sound on a red tick so I'd say it would be better for the slider to be all notes
01:26:782 (1) - Stronger sound at the end of the slider so I'd suggest a rhythm like this? - https://puu.sh/yY5H4/927544690c.png
01:29:377 (1) - Same as 01:03:593 (1)
01:30:836 (1) - There's still a pretty noticeable sound on the red tick here as well
01:33:431 - Note here?
Tiff
hai NM here
erm I cant see that much problems but here are some advices
Easy
01:12:512 (1) - I'm not sure if stacking circles at the end of slider in easy is rankable, I recommend not tho. Easy usually keep their slider tails clear
01:21:431 - I could hear a heavy beat here, extend 01:21:593 (4) - to 01:21:593 (4) -
Hard
just a question, but why would u put a circle here 00:04:242 (2) - why don't you extend the slider instead?
01:08:134 (3,4,5) - stack? looks better
01:09:431 (3,4,5) - ^
ok that's it I am only good modding low levels
btw I like your map so a star and I like honeyworks and their songs too :P
good luck PLS RANK
Josh123uaJ
Ayy from q. Sry for being late.

I don't have much to say since this map is already solid.

Insane:
01:11:215 (1) - The slider head looks too close to the two circles nearby. Move it a way just a bit.
01:18:674 (4,5) - Move it down a bit so that they are equally spaced from the slidertail of (2). Makes it look a little better imo.
01:20:782 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Probably picky but the spacing increase from each note is uneven. Make the spacing increase consistent.

Fapu's Extra:
00:20:458 (4,5,6,7) - Claps are missing.
00:30:998 (7,9,10) - ^
01:32:782 (3,4) - I think this can be replaced by circles since you used them in areas like 00:20:458 (4,5,6,7).

Desperation:
01:20:944 (3,4,5,6) - Imo, these jumps are too large even if there's strong drum sounds. Maybe reduce spacing to 4.7x or 4.8x

Nice mapset and GL reaching rank! :)
Elcheer

Lafayla wrote:

elcheer

00:00:512 (4) - painful angle despite not being what you are emphasizing i honestly think this is fine
00:04:566 (3,1) - ugly overlap somewhat fixed
00:12:674 (5,1,2,3,4) - this can definitely be cleaned up somewhat fixed
00:52:728 (4) - big spacing why? somewhat fixed
00:53:863 (4) - emphasis spot in the middle of a tri pattern ... making something distinct for 00:53:863 (4,5) - would be better did...something with it
01:24:188 (1) - would be better if visually similar to 00:10:890 (4,1) - and 00:13:485 (4,1) - eh...would rather not
00:56:620 (6) - why the lower spacing? i don't hear anything significant changing inside this jump spam, also you can definitely make this star prettier did something with this, somewhat fixed
00:55:809 (1) - this object is offscreen by only 1 pixel fixed
00:55:809 (1,2) - these would be better as claps rather than whistles because start of jump spam also drum is litterally the same fixed
wew lad
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