Nice mapset. I can't find that many flaws, but I noted the ones I could easily find.
My map for M4M:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/688504[Sayorara]
Ok this map overall is pretty solid. I can see this being ranked with a few changes.
01:18:290 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Please just use repeating sliders to cover the 1/3. You can also easily cover the strong sounds on 3, 6 and 9 this way.
Compare the sections of the song at 00:47:065 (1,2,3,4,5) and 00:49:514 (1,2,3,4,5) , and the drastic change in the pattern spacing is uncalled for. Reduce the spacing on the larger one, and increase one the smaller one, as imo it would be the best choice.
00:57:779 (1,2) - You have made vocals the main instrument, so suddenly not following it feels weird to play.
01:08:494 (4,5,6) - The flow here can be improved. If you wanted to change flow concepts between kiai and normal sections, then imo your contrast is not high enough. Remove as much clean flow in the kiai as you can while sticking with visuals if you wanna use this flow concept, or it is a sign of a mistake.
01:23:341 (6,7,8) - ^
00:32:677 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would argue the spacing here is not enough, as the rest of this section uses spacing pretty simular to this. Either reduce spacing of the section but this, or space this larger to emphasize the climax of the verse.
[Walao's Insane]
Jesus this is a clean map. Please get ranked mah dude, u make good stuff
00:05:432 (1,2) - spacing should be consistent. You spaced every other piano, so space this one too.
00:28:392 (5,6) - This jump feels out of place, as everything arfound it uses low spacing. The song becomes intense on 00:28:698 (1) , not 6, so spacing the triple makes no sense. Either be ok with the triple increasing map intensity, or replace 6 and 7 wiht a 1/4 slider so you can space 1.
00:30:535 (4,5,6) - This spacing feels out of place from the rest of the section. Remember that spacing emphasizes the object being jumped to. If you wanted higher spacing, space 00:28:698 (1,2,3) - too, as this feels too small then.
00:46:759 (3,4,1,2) - 00:49:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - This feels underwelming, when 00:43:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6) comes before it, covering about the same intensity. Increase spacing for the remaining objects, or lessen the spacing on 00:43:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6) , cus as it stands, it feels too spaced. I understand if you wanna space for percussion, but if the rest of the section is about that intensity, then it feels too spaced. Maybe just space sliders, at it feels like a good compramise.
[everything else]
Im dumb at moding low diffs