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Cote 2017-11-13T03:05:13+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
just passing by again, no kds

[Wolf's Insane]
00:06:706 (1,2) - make them a little bit closer? just like you did 00:08:306 (1,2) - here Fixed
00:41:106 - Although it isn't a bad rhythm, I'd prefer something similar as what Cris did on his gungi diff. However, I think 00:44:106 (2,3) - this part should be changed so it matchs other similar section. Why not making it a circle + 1/1 slider? Just like 00:40:906 (3,4) - 00:47:106 (3,4) - Okay, I put the circle and 1/1 slider
00:55:643 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Don't really know what kind of rhythm are you following tbh D: It really doesn't sound good You also make it different on 01:07:643 (2,3,1,2,3) - here which is... well, inconsistent. Why not trying a rhythm like https://puu.sh/ykxQg/f06141d823.jpg this one? Same for the start of the 2nd kiai. Fixed the rhythm, the same for the 2nd kiai
01:00:143 (5,6) - Since you're adding 2 claps here, you kinda should make it stand out from the other parts imo. Right now it just feels like is a generic part in this 00:59:768 (3,4,5) - triangle pattern. I'd suggest something like a jump. Also you could 00:59:393 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g the rhythm here and then adjust the pattern again, mainly because 00:59:393 - 00:59:581 - 00:59:768 - are quite important in this section, and applying 00:59:393 (2) - this slider ruins all of this. Consider it. Mmm, I tried to make the triangles again but this time with jumps not so difficult. Fixed the ctrl+g
01:25:456 (3,4,5) - I honestly feel like this jumps is waay too big for this whole section. it's even bigger than the last jumps 01:29:206 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - lol. Maybe move it to something like this? https://puu.sh/yky3f/480d8fa2a2.jpg Fixed

That's all from me. If I were a BN, after these changes i'd easily bubble it. But guess what, I'm not! xD Anyway, I feel like these points could make it so Cerulean can check it again :3

Good luck from now on o/

Thanks Yiyo!

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Cris-

Beatmap Nominator

551 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Cris- 2017-11-14T03:38:16+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
just passing by again, no kds

[notice]

[Gungi]
00:06:306 (3,4,1) - This linear transition doesn't really match with the rest of transitions you do in this section. Maybe something like this could work? Ok, fixed but with other pattern
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00:32:506 (2,3) - I don't really think that the stack here is supporting something special. Basically you can see what I'm saying when you look at 00:19:506 - and the way you mapped it. There's not really an emphasis needed for stacking + you didn't do it before on similar section. Fixed
00:33:706 (7,1) - Similar as before ^ On 00:20:906 (6,1) - here you didn't mapped it as a stack. ^
00:34:706 (3,4) - Similar as before before xD I think mapping both as a slider would fit better the vocals there.^
00:55:831 (3,4) - Again, stacking like that for such an emphasized sectino (kiai) doesn't really match at all. You also should care about 00:56:581 (2,3) - which is same rhythm but you apply it with different spacing. Mainly I don't recommend to stack on parts like that because you cut the movement that players have on the current gameplay. I think that doing 00:55:831 (3,4) - as 00:56:581 (2,3) - would fit a lot better. You also do it different 01:07:831 (3,4,1,2,3) - so yeah. Both fixed, more space added too
00:57:518 (6,7) - since you are mapping the triplets like this one, why not doing the same for 00:59:018 (6,7,1) - 01:00:518 (6,7,1) - etc? they feel so empty with not hitsounds :c Claps added
00:59:581 (2,3) - This stack makes more sense to me, although i'd prefer to make them separated, but that's up to you. Unstacked
01:03:518 (6) - Since there's a finish on the tail of the slider, I think it'd be better if you make it into 2 sliders, so you start the jumps (01:03:893 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ) with a better buildup. Replaced 01:03:143 (4,5) for a slider and 01:03:518 (6) is now 2 circles
01:10:081 (2,3) - Similar as other points, you do it separated before (00:58:081 (2,3) - ) so it doesn't really match with the mapping, consider make it as before. Fixed
01:15:518 (5,1) - Since the downbeat is pretty strong (finish), it feels weird to me that you stack it. Tbh I was expecting something like 01:14:018 (5,1) - 01:14:956 (3,4) - etc.. ^
01:27:143 (3) - maybe ctrl+g would work for a better flow? You can make something like this: https://puu.sh/ykxld/a7c446718c.jpg Ok

That's all from me. If I were a BN, after these changes i'd easily bubble it. But guess what, I'm not! xD Anyway, I feel like these points could make it so Cerulean can check it again :3

Good luck from now on o/

Thank you Yiyo for the mod!

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2017-12-11T15:30:49+00:00

rechec sry 4 the big delay xd
no kds, just a couple stuff b4 we mov on ok

[Wolf]

00:41:106 (4,1) - The visual distance spacing here seems too close compared to the rest of your arrangement, and pretty much the similar one to 00:44:306 (3,1) -. I would suggest extending the spacing just a little more on this part to balance out much better in structure.

00:57:706 (1) - Not a big deal, but you could actually pull out a better slider design body on this one for sure. I would probably say, you just needed to tweak out the slider curves a little steep in order to appeal the bits of flow more clearly in movement. Or maybe if you want to keep it the way it is, you could just simply broaden the two curves towards the next few notes.

[Gungi]

01:05:862 (5) - There's literally no beat or a 1/4 drumroll here, on this blue tick. So I don't really find this stream should necessarily needing more circles here when it only sounds more like a triplet in the song track. So, it would be best to remove this circles for sure.

Looks much better than the last time I checked ;p

other three diffs r ok and pretty gud, hmu whenever ur rdy o/

Cote

275 posts

Joined January 2015

Cote 2017-12-11T20:58:11+00:00

Cerulean Veyron wrote:
rechec sry 4 the big delay xd
no kds, just a couple stuff b4 we mov on ok

[Wolf]
00:41:106 (4,1) - The visual distance spacing here seems too close compared to the rest of your arrangement, and pretty much the similar one to 00:44:306 (3,1) -. I would suggest extending the spacing just a little more on this part to balance out much better in structure. Okay, I've spaced as you said, now it's similar to the example that you gave, since they have the same ds

00:57:706 (1) - Not a big deal, but you could actually pull out a better slider design body on this one for sure. I would probably say, you just needed to tweak out the slider curves a little steep in order to appeal the bits of flow more clearly in movement. Or maybe if you want to keep it the way it is, you could just simply broaden the two curves towards the next few notes. Taken the second option

other three diffs r ok and pretty gud, hmu whenever ur rdy o/

Thanks you so much Cerulean!

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Cris- 2017-12-11T21:09:35+00:00

Cerulean Veyron wrote:
rechec sry 4 the big delay xd
no kds, just a couple stuff b4 we mov on ok

[Gungi]
01:05:862 (5) - There's literally no beat or a 1/4 drumroll here, on this blue tick. So I don't really find this stream should necessarily needing more circles here when it only sounds more like a triplet in the song track. So, it would be best to remove this circles for sure. You're right, circle removed

Looks much better than the last time I checked ;p Thanks c:

other three diffs r ok and pretty gud, hmu whenever ur rdy o/

Many thanks!!

Updated~~

Cerulean Veyron

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Cerulean Veyron 2017-12-12T00:00:06+00:00

ya, looks p gud for now ;p gl on the process!

Cris-

Beatmap Nominator

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Cris- 2017-12-12T00:26:12+00:00

Thanks Cerulean

!!

pishifat

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pishifat 2017-12-23T10:19:01+00:00

your video has a silent audio stream. this is the same file with the audio stream removed: https://www.dropbox.com/s/6vecp7e0t8r9b ... t.avi?dl=0

all diffs
00:55:081 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 01:07:081 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - your claps are on beats 1 and 3 as opposed to what the music supports (2 and 4). should switch stuff around accordingly

top diff
01:21:706 - is there a reason why you're ending kiai half a beat earlier than your other diffs

normal/easy
01:27:706 (1) - should end at 01:29:206 - tbh. a spinner going through two different parts of the music sounds pretty wrong.
alternative would be mapping up to the red line, then putting a spinner over the guitar thing

call me/cv back!!

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Cris- 2017-12-24T05:13:53+00:00

pishifat wrote:
your video has a silent audio stream. this is the same file with the audio stream removed: https://www.dropbox.com/s/6vecp7e0t8r9b ... t.avi?dl=0 Ok, video changed

all diffs
00:55:081 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 01:07:081 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - your claps are on beats 1 and 3 as opposed to what the music supports (2 and 4). should switch stuff around accordingly Ok, fixed this issue in all diffs

top diff
01:21:706 - is there a reason why you're ending kiai half a beat earlier than your other diffs Oops, fixed

normal/easy
01:27:706 (1) - should end at 01:29:206 - tbh. a spinner going through two different parts of the music sounds pretty wrong.
alternative would be mapping up to the red line, then putting a spinner over the guitar thing Taken spin ends at 01:29:206

call me/cv back!!