Cliver vs Mallancia - Pokaz jak sie krecisz · forum

Bass

Joined January 2009

Topic Starter

Bass 2010-04-06T16:27:03+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20 lipca 2010 at 03:33:56

Artist: Cliver vs Mallancia
Title: Pokaz jak sie krecisz
BPM: 138
Filesize: 4829kb
Play Time: 04:55
Difficulties Available:

Bass' Mix (5 stars, 759 notes)

Download: Cliver vs Mallancia - Pokaz jak sie krecisz
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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O yeah my next map for approval. Polish song.

Title in English: Show how your're spinning.

FINISHED, please move to pending.

Last edited by Bass 2010-07-20T01:34:05+00:00, edited 13 times in total.

XepherX3

625 posts

Joined September 2008

XepherX3 2010-04-06T20:17:29+00:00

here you go

Download: 14683 Cliver vs Mallancia - Pokaz jak sie krecisz.zip

Matma Rex

586 posts

Joined March 2009

Matma Rex 2010-04-07T07:53:18+00:00

Fu, trudne.

Nieuzywane pliki w folderze, no, ale to WIP.

01:59:574 (6,7) - spacing
02:36:313 (1,2,3) - nierowno
02:37:726 (5,6,7,8,9) - nie pasuje
03:54:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
04:03:052 (1) - nierankowalne, auto musi miec co najmniej +2k

Storyboard jest deczko niepoprawnie zrobiony, powinien być jeden obrazek z wieloma eventami, a nie wiele, a kazdy po jednym evencie. A najlepiej to powinna być pętla. / Storyboard should be made using one image and triggerloops. There:Download: Cliver vs Mallancia - Pokaz jak sie krecisz (Bassmaster).osb

Garven

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Joined January 2010

Garven 2010-04-07T17:04:34+00:00

Try Offset: 410.

This did break some of the slider speed change timing points, so keep that in mind.

Overall, the hitsounds were really bland. All I hear is the snare drum on every. single. beat. I know there are claps etc strewn throughout, but after five minutes of a pretty much the same rhythm, it starts to get at you. Try to vary between soft and loud hits depending on the section of the song.

I'm assuming the storyboard isn't finish since it only goes a little bit into the song. A comment on the pulsating crowd effect: it made me miss a lot while I was trying to keep up with the high velocity of the circles. Looked neat, though.

Try to vary things up a bit too, like what you did with the beginning with the anti-jumps at 00:27:801. Add some actual jumps (even though the velocity is insane as is, it would be a good excuse to give a variance in the rhythms that you're using the entire time you're playing)

00:56:496 I don't know if this spinner (or any of the others at this length) is long enough for ranking/approval (1000 with auto)
01:01:496 [6, 7, 8, 9] Instead of tildes, maybe alternate between down and up humps to make it more visually pleasing.
01:59:540 [6, 7] Odd spot for a jump... Even then, the 6's position really doesn't look good.
02:02:149 [5] Line this up with the end of [4]

I'll throw out a star when you get this thing finished up.

Alice

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Joined October 2008

Alice 2010-04-10T13:34:56+00:00

Bass' mix
00:27:835 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Even for approval, the spacing thing here is kinda annoying and confusing imo. :/
00:43:378 (1) - I know that fast notes after spinners are rarely allowed, though maybe it's ok for approval. I'd finish the spinner at 00:43:052. :/
00:57:291 (1) - ^
02:22:509 (1) - ^
04:45:335 (|) - useless timing section

I think there's no major errors.. So yeah, star~~ =w=

Matma Rex

586 posts

Joined March 2009

Matma Rex 2010-04-12T18:08:30+00:00

zzz mp3 ma niską jakość

zzz obrazki w SB powinny mieć max. 640x480

zzz "Title in English: Show how your're moving." = "Title in English: Show how you're spinning."

zzz star

Bass

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Joined January 2009

Topic Starter

Bass 2010-04-13T12:08:13+00:00

Matma Rex wrote:
zzz mp3 ma niską jakość - nie sraj się, ściągałem ze strony clivera

zzz obrazki w SB powinny mieć max. 640x480

zzz "Title in English: Show how your're moving." = "Title in English: Show how you're spinning."

zzz star

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined August 2008

Andrea 2010-05-23T13:45:11+00:00

Revived.

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2010-05-23T14:06:05+00:00

00:56:496 (1) - O u
01:38:670 (11) - Add clap
01:52:149 (1) - O u
01:58:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can just delete all of these, and let the break extend. It feels more natural without these.
02:21:714 (1) - If I see that cat one more time
02:35:627 (1) - GAAH
04:03:018 (1) - FSJAL

That's all :3~

ilu.

fartownik

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Joined December 2008

fartownik 2010-05-24T20:03:29+00:00

Offset: 424 (+14)

Last edited by fartownik 2010-05-24T20:04:16+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

fartownik

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Joined December 2008

fartownik 2010-05-24T20:03:56+00:00

Doublepost~

Kecco

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Joined September 2009

Kecco 2010-06-14T19:20:21+00:00

Star~<3

maal

maal 2010-06-14T19:23:02+00:00

You told me to. lol

lol

lol

lol

rofl.

Utena

90 posts

Joined June 2008

Utena 2010-06-18T06:06:58+00:00

I agree " the hitsounds were really bland. All I hear is the snare drum on every. single. beat. I know there are claps etc strewn throughout, but after five minutes of a pretty much the same rhythm, it starts to get at you. Try to vary between soft and loud hits depending on the section of the song."

Overall, i guess most of it its fixed so, even though im not a fan of a gazillion speed sliders, it looks fine

arien666

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Joined May 2009

arien666 2010-06-24T08:41:59+00:00

Pizza is good anyway ;_;

ztrot

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ztrot 2010-06-25T11:45:33+00:00

it basic and i think it could do without the x2 but we will see what the next bat thinks.
#1bubble

Shohei Ohtani