FROM MY QUEUE[General]
Pls do me favor and use custom hitsounds - map can sound pretty shitty with the hs of each individual player
If you are not acustomed to that - I'm offering my help~
[Stage 1]
Generally it's considered bad mapping to mostly use x and y axis - BUT it's well enough performed - so I really doesn't care about that00:14:707 (2,3,4) - do me a favor and put (3) in the center
https://puu.sh/wI7Hr/5d5569d48a.jpg00:31:374 (2) - don't use whistle on the sliderslide pls
00:42:874 (1) - goes completly against the flow - don't do that - except if you use it more then once or twice
00:45:541 (1) - ^
00:47:374 (4,3) - overlap that's visible while playing - fix it - flipping the rest could be an option
00:51:541 (3,2) - keep a consistent space betweens (3) sliderend and (2)
00:52:707 (2,3) - could look nicer with (3) goind around (2)s start
00:56:874 (3,2) - same problem
01:03:374 (2) - get rid of this whistle sliderslide
01:09:541 - Add Timing section with 5% volume
[Stage 2]
Also very odd mapping, bu I like it00:26:041 (8) - uneccesarily odd-shaped - use just a curved slider imo
00:29:541 (1) - STR+G to put (3) perfectly beneath the sliderstart and then STR + G it back so that it's the end
00:30:041 (2) - don't use this jump - you did not use even one before and this one's fairly brutal
00:30:874 (5,6,7) - Oh how those whistles trigger
00:45:541 (1,5) - visible overlap (ew)
00:54:207 (2,1) - ^
00:58:041 (8) - still unsure about those
01:00:207 (1,2,1) - double overlap escalation
01:00:207 (1,2,3) - Pls don't use those jumps
01:02:874 (5,6,7) - whistle don't hurt me don't hurt me - no more
01:09:541 - Add Timing section with 5% volume
[Landia]
I think you should know how I feel about those whistles - also pls be consistent with your hs - if you use claps here, apply the same to Stage one and two
00:29:374 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - spacing is really wanky around there
00:47:374 (7) - this slider needs surgery
01:09:541 - Add Timing section with 5% volume
I hope I can help you ^^
EDIT: Deine Musik ist echt nett - genauso wie die map mal etwas eigenes - also im Sinne von speziell und das ist imo immer etwas gutes