un-plugged wrote:

Que mapazo te mandaste, bueno acá va mi mod :^)

00:10:463 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - este stream suena mejor como ddkdkkddkdk, fijate si te gusta. Ya lo probe y no queda, no creo que necesite un cambio
00:18:520 (91,92) - ctrl+g acá, dado que acá 00:18:520 - se escucha el tono más alto del pattern Aplicado
00:19:206 (94,95,96) - kdd suena más apropiado Aplicado
00:24:349 (4,5,6) - estas tres no suenan igual que las tres anteriores? ocurriría lo mismo acá 00:27:092 (10,11,12) - (kdd) Aplicado
00:41:063 - no hay sonido acá? hmm Hay un sonido, ademas estan para conectar las patterns y que no hayan espacios vacios
01:21:949 - hmm, por lo menos yo no se por que aca va don en vez de kat (como en los otros dos ca-me-llia) Arreglado
01:23:320 - esta seccion esta igual a la anterior pero musicalmente tiene más beats, sin embargo solo estas enfatizando el coro, te recomendaría que agregues más notas como en el primer pattern (este 01:23:320 -) rellenando espacios vacios como estos: 01:24:349 - 01:24:520 - 01:24:863 - 01:25:206 - 01:25:549 - y los que proceden hasta acá 01:28:806 - . La idea es, como dije antes, que marques esos beats de la seccion para dar un toque más progresivo hasta la parte del stream. Rellenado :^)
02:26:577 (127) - cambiar a don Aplicado
04:12:692 - acá me parece que el stream arranca mas adelante, precisamente acá 04:13:377 - o quizas podes cortar un poco el stream previo a la parte que aumenta el ritmo, por ejemplo borrando esta nota 04:13:292 (59) - el stream pasa de seguir el sintetizador a seguir lo que sería el ultimo drop, así que no veo ningun problema que sea así de largo, aparte de que ya hay un sonido en 04:13:292 (59).

Y bueeeno, hasta llega mi aporte, mucha suerte con esto y ojalá la rankeen muy pronto, está genial :^)

Surono wrote:

mod

03:38 Axer: What dis mean, I just noticed u
03:38 Surono: z
03:39 Surono: 00:36:177 (79,81,83) - kat these boi
03:39 Axer: fixed
03:39 Axer: they're now kat
03:42 Surono: 01:38:320 (547,548) - try avoid smth like this.. monotone emphasis... yeah ctrl g for smooth emphasis
03:42 Axer: oh, it sounds better now, applied
03:43 Surono: 01:39:092 - choose, kat or finisher lol
03:43 Axer: made it finisher
03:44 Surono: noice taste :^
03:44 Axer: just so it fits with the k finisher that comes a few milliseconds later uwu
03:46 Surono: 01:50:749 - don finish looks interesting, how/
03:48 Axer: wifi is spaghetti
03:48 Surono: *slrrupp
03:48 Axer: made it a big D
03:48 Axer: owo
03:48 Surono: BIG DADDY
03:48 Axer: OWO
03:48 Axer: Are you implying I have a big drill u////u
03:48 Surono: 02:16:977 (79,83) - kat these for variation and to avoid fingers get borin qwq
03:48 Surono: :^^^^^^^^^^
03:48 Surono: biggg
03:48 Axer: done owo
03:49 Axer: BIG
03:50 Surono: 02:33:606 - change color to blue ewe cuz KDK for kasai yeh? XD
03:50 Axer: oki, changed to KKK
03:51 Axer: awa
03:51 Surono: 02:50:920 - kat to follow da flow, 02:51:092 - and yeah to give alteration for sound from here
03:52 Surono: 02:56:235 - yummy big drum with big don dong :3
03:52 Axer: 02:51:092 - so I make this k too?
03:52 Surono: 02:50:920 - only this
03:52 Axer: alright, then I did gud iwi
03:52 Axer: BIG DON DONG
03:53 Axer: applied big dong
03:53 Surono: 02:57:606 - too much saw don kat don kat don colors, kat this for HEI qwq
03:53 Surono: 02:59:663 (335) - and this if u want qwq
03:54 Axer: made both of those kat cause it sounds more coolio
03:54 Axer: iwi
03:54 Surono: herman is coolio
03:55 Surono: herman lee
03:55 Axer: ah, I see you're a man of culture as weel
03:55 Axer: have you seen his hair
03:55 Axer: It's LOONG
03:56 Surono: :^) and his guitar playin always gud at doubles
03:56 Surono: a.k.a pp for oshh taco
03:56 Axer: owo big hair = big pp
03:56 Surono: YUSSSSSssss
03:56 Axer: so curly hair = :thinking:
03:56 Surono: :""""""D hard pepes
03:56 Axer: OOo
03:57 Axer: necrophagiatoast style
03:57 Axer: curly patterns owo
03:57 Surono: 03:06:863 - becarefuuul... da flow start long, not doubles able abluh qwq so yeh from here change as k k dddd
03:57 Surono: dw, sr is safe ewe
03:57 Axer: aaaaaaa
03:57 Axer: how ;;?
03:58 Axer: am confoos
03:58 Surono: 1/4 ewe
03:58 Axer: sooo
03:58 Axer: http://puu.sh/yCere/4950f0e3c1.jpg like this iwi?
03:58 Surono: aheuehue
03:59 Surono: why colors swag XDDddd
03:59 Surono: is that finishers?
03:59 Surono: de 2 notes single?
03:59 Axer: WAIT
03:59 Axer: k k dddd
03:59 Axer: am dumb
03:59 Surono: yes
03:59 Surono: XDDDDDddddd
03:59 Axer: 8.04*
03:59 Axer: (confused screaming)
04:00 Axer: wait
04:00 Axer: it's still 2100 circles
04:00 Axer: good
04:00 Surono: 04:02:406 - 
04:00 Surono: tss tss dussss
04:01 Surono: 04:03:777 - 04:06:520 - 
04:01 Axer: kkd?
04:01 Surono: yez da colorz
04:01 Axer: oo
04:01 Axer: ok fixed owo
04:01 Axer: kay kay dee
04:01 Axer: dee dee kay
04:01 Axer: kay kay dee
04:03 Surono: 04:13:292 - ...... so you wan beautiful number combos? qwq but i would suggest here to delete cuz for alteration.. if not delete, indeed looks overlap stream emphasis..
04:03 Surono: 04:11:920 - but tada,,, just move to here, theres still sound
04:03 Axer: actually
04:03 Axer: I got that same suggestion before by un-plugged
04:04 Axer: I said no because I tried to emphasize on the synth and then switch to the drop smoothly
04:04 Axer: but maybe that can work too
04:04 Surono: "link starto"
04:04 Surono: unplugged rip
04:04 Axer: I don't know
04:04 Axer: if you believe it could make it better then sure
04:04 Axer: owo
04:05 Surono: yeah qwq it would better dw
04:05 Axer: alright then, applied owo
04:05 Surono: 04:23:835 - move to 04:24:006 - here for accurate emphasis??
04:05 Surono: *swap
04:05 Axer: 04:11:920 - this should be a d tho right?
04:05 Surono: yes
04:05 Surono: so would build 4plet, ddkd kek
04:06 Axer: ok
04:06 Axer: so I ctrl+g those 2 notes?
04:06 Axer: or leave an empty spot in 4:23
04:06 Surono: ... swap
04:07 Axer: yes I noticed am dumb sorry
04:07 Axer: ;;
04:07 Axer: applied owo, sounds way more coolio now
04:07 Surono: yez qwq
04:08 Surono: 04:28:035 - this overdone if this kat, so don qwq.. cuz da sound is like 04:27:777 - up down up down right :"D
04:09 Axer: done
04:09 Axer: 04:29:406 - so the same here?
04:10 Surono: 04:29:320 (242,243) - for tow cuz low sound
04:10 Surono: two
04:10 Axer: 04:29:320 (242,243) - so these two are d now iwi?
04:10 Surono: YES
04:10 Axer: GOOD
04:10 Surono: ewee
04:11 Axer: owoo
04:11 Axer: alright, applied those mwm
04:13 Surono: 04:42:863 - ~ 04:43:549 - change this part as kdkdkkddk
04:14 Surono: 04:53:835 - same above
04:15 Axer: done 0w0
04:15 Surono: 05:02:749 - move this green line to 05:02:835 - here, seems not good if 05:02:749 - this finisher start to normal sv
04:16 Axer: fixed sv iwi

yeah for first, 04:18:863 - from here until end.. try to ask taco community if they want this I would nominate it and try contact other BN or QAT da important!

for now, i just give suggestion from 04:50:406 - ~ 04:51:777 -

I Applied owo
good luck for ranking or going for hype, loved~~~~

Surono wrote:

mod

03:38 Axer: What dis mean, I just noticed u
03:38 Surono: z
03:39 Surono: 00:36:177 (79,81,83) - kat these boi
03:39 Axer: fixed
03:39 Axer: they're now kat
03:42 Surono: 01:38:320 (547,548) - try avoid smth like this.. monotone emphasis... yeah ctrl g for smooth emphasis
03:42 Axer: oh, it sounds better now, applied
03:43 Surono: 01:39:092 - choose, kat or finisher lol
03:43 Axer: made it finisher
03:44 Surono: noice taste :^
03:44 Axer: just so it fits with the k finisher that comes a few milliseconds later uwu
03:46 Surono: 01:50:749 - don finish looks interesting, how/
03:48 Axer: wifi is spaghetti
03:48 Surono: *slrrupp
03:48 Axer: made it a big D
03:48 Axer: owo
03:48 Surono: BIG DADDY
03:48 Axer: OWO
03:48 Axer: Are you implying I have a big drill u////u
03:48 Surono: 02:16:977 (79,83) - kat these for variation and to avoid fingers get borin qwq
03:48 Surono: :^^^^^^^^^^
03:48 Surono: biggg
03:48 Axer: done owo
03:49 Axer: BIG
03:50 Surono: 02:33:606 - change color to blue ewe cuz KDK for kasai yeh? XD
03:50 Axer: oki, changed to KKK
03:51 Axer: awa
03:51 Surono: 02:50:920 - kat to follow da flow, 02:51:092 - and yeah to give alteration for sound from here
03:52 Surono: 02:56:235 - yummy big drum with big don dong :3
03:52 Axer: 02:51:092 - so I make this k too?
03:52 Surono: 02:50:920 - only this
03:52 Axer: alright, then I did gud iwi
03:52 Axer: BIG DON DONG
03:53 Axer: applied big dong
03:53 Surono: 02:57:606 - too much saw don kat don kat don colors, kat this for HEI qwq
03:53 Surono: 02:59:663 (335) - and this if u want qwq
03:54 Axer: made both of those kat cause it sounds more coolio
03:54 Axer: iwi
03:54 Surono: herman is coolio
03:55 Surono: herman lee
03:55 Axer: ah, I see you're a man of culture as weel
03:55 Axer: have you seen his hair
03:55 Axer: It's LOONG
03:56 Surono: :^) and his guitar playin always gud at doubles
03:56 Surono: a.k.a pp for oshh taco
03:56 Axer: owo big hair = big pp
03:56 Surono: YUSSSSSssss
03:56 Axer: so curly hair = :thinking:
03:56 Surono: :""""""D hard pepes
03:56 Axer: OOo
03:57 Axer: necrophagiatoast style
03:57 Axer: curly patterns owo
03:57 Surono: 03:06:863 - becarefuuul... da flow start long, not doubles able abluh qwq so yeh from here change as k k dddd
03:57 Surono: dw, sr is safe ewe
03:57 Axer: aaaaaaa
03:57 Axer: how ;;?
03:58 Axer: am confoos
03:58 Surono: 1/4 ewe
03:58 Axer: sooo
03:58 Axer: http://puu.sh/yCere/4950f0e3c1.jpg like this iwi?
03:58 Surono: aheuehue
03:59 Surono: why colors swag XDDddd
03:59 Surono: is that finishers?
03:59 Surono: de 2 notes single?
03:59 Axer: WAIT
03:59 Axer: k k dddd
03:59 Axer: am dumb
03:59 Surono: yes
03:59 Surono: XDDDDDddddd
03:59 Axer: 8.04*
03:59 Axer: (confused screaming)
04:00 Axer: wait
04:00 Axer: it's still 2100 circles
04:00 Axer: good
04:00 Surono: 04:02:406 - 
04:00 Surono: tss tss dussss
04:01 Surono: 04:03:777 - 04:06:520 - 
04:01 Axer: kkd?
04:01 Surono: yez da colorz
04:01 Axer: oo
04:01 Axer: ok fixed owo
04:01 Axer: kay kay dee
04:01 Axer: dee dee kay
04:01 Axer: kay kay dee
04:03 Surono: 04:13:292 - ...... so you wan beautiful number combos? qwq but i would suggest here to delete cuz for alteration.. if not delete, indeed looks overlap stream emphasis..
04:03 Surono: 04:11:920 - but tada,,, just move to here, theres still sound
04:03 Axer: actually
04:03 Axer: I got that same suggestion before by un-plugged
04:04 Axer: I said no because I tried to emphasize on the synth and then switch to the drop smoothly
04:04 Axer: but maybe that can work too
04:04 Surono: "link starto"
04:04 Surono: unplugged rip
04:04 Axer: I don't know
04:04 Axer: if you believe it could make it better then sure
04:04 Axer: owo
04:05 Surono: yeah qwq it would better dw
04:05 Axer: alright then, applied owo
04:05 Surono: 04:23:835 - move to 04:24:006 - here for accurate emphasis??
04:05 Surono: *swap
04:05 Axer: 04:11:920 - this should be a d tho right?
04:05 Surono: yes
04:05 Surono: so would build 4plet, ddkd kek
04:06 Axer: ok
04:06 Axer: so I ctrl+g those 2 notes?
04:06 Axer: or leave an empty spot in 4:23
04:06 Surono: ... swap
04:07 Axer: yes I noticed am dumb sorry
04:07 Axer: ;;
04:07 Axer: applied owo, sounds way more coolio now
04:07 Surono: yez qwq
04:08 Surono: 04:28:035 - this overdone if this kat, so don qwq.. cuz da sound is like 04:27:777 - up down up down right :"D
04:09 Axer: done
04:09 Axer: 04:29:406 - so the same here?
04:10 Surono: 04:29:320 (242,243) - for tow cuz low sound
04:10 Surono: two
04:10 Axer: 04:29:320 (242,243) - so these two are d now iwi?
04:10 Surono: YES
04:10 Axer: GOOD
04:10 Surono: ewee
04:11 Axer: owoo
04:11 Axer: alright, applied those mwm
04:13 Surono: 04:42:863 - ~ 04:43:549 - change this part as kdkdkkddk
04:14 Surono: 04:53:835 - same above
04:15 Axer: done 0w0
04:15 Surono: 05:02:749 - move this green line to 05:02:835 - here, seems not good if 05:02:749 - this finisher start to normal sv
04:16 Axer: fixed sv iwi

yeah for first, 04:18:863 - from here until end.. try to ask taco community if they want it I would nominate it and try contact other BN or QAT da important!

for now, i just give suggestion for this part 04:50:406 - ~ 04:51:777 -

good luck for ranking or going for hype, loved~~~~

Vulkin wrote:

RANK IT NOWIO SDIOFJ SDAIOF IOSWDA J

Taikocracy wrote:

placeholder meme xd

but no i’m actually going to look at this soon:tm:

Taikocracy wrote:

placeholder meme xd

but no i’m actually going to look at this soon:tm:

Worminators wrote:

a n o t h e r o n e

Taikocracy wrote:

i talked to axer about a lot of this stuff when he asked me to testplay it, so to be fair this was kind of inevitable if the things i told him about weren't changed

i call into question the playability of all the 1/6 spams, whether the music call for such a spam or not it is extremely hard to play this and highly unnecessary when there are multiple alternatives. if every person who mapped electronic decided to map their buildups with 1/6 streams, that would be horrible. in cases like midnaait's version of the same map, 1/4+1/6 is used to make the map more intuitive to play. the alternatives include any other version of 1/4+1/6, or using a spinner in places that have a sound that grows steadily.

the last two kiais, and i mean this in such a sincere manner, should NOT BE STREAMS. none of the instruments present in either kiais are constantly making noises that can or should be plotted. rather, the scheme present in the last two kiais to me is let me place a don where ever the instrument isn't playing, which, in that case, why not make the whole map a stream? the same logic could be applied universally. intensity =/= streams, silence =/= dons. i ask that you remap the kiais to be more rhythmically accurate, and if you need any suggestions or help, i'm happy to work with you on it.

the same goes for anything in this mod, if you need extra help or anything feel free to message me, i'm happy to help if i need to

thanks

Taikocracy wrote:

i call into question the playability of all the 1/6 spams, whether the music call for such a spam or not it is extremely hard to play this and highly unnecessary when there are multiple alternatives. if every person who mapped electronic decided to map their buildups with 1/6 streams, that would be horrible. in cases like midnaait's version of the same map, 1/4+1/6 is used to make the map more intuitive to play. the alternatives include any other version of 1/4+1/6, or using a spinner in places that have a sound that grows steadily.

Taikocracy wrote:

the last two kiais, and i mean this in such a sincere manner, should NOT BE STREAMS. none of the instruments present in either kiais are constantly making noises that can or should be plotted. rather, the scheme present in the last two kiais to me is let me place a don where ever the instrument isn't playing, which, in that case, why not make the whole map a stream? the same logic could be applied universally. intensity =/= streams, silence =/= dons. i ask that you remap the kiais to be more rhythmically accurate, and if you need any suggestions or help, i'm happy to work with you on it.

Shinsekai- wrote:

Taikocracy wrote:

i call into question the playability of all the 1/6 spams, whether the music call for such a spam or not it is extremely hard to play this and highly unnecessary when there are multiple alternatives. if every person who mapped electronic decided to map their buildups with 1/6 streams, that would be horrible. in cases like midnaait's version of the same map, 1/4+1/6 is used to make the map more intuitive to play. the alternatives include any other version of 1/4+1/6, or using a spinner in places that have a sound that grows steadily.

I can disagree with this cuz this "using a spinner", I think if Axer add one spinner will be bad for the song cuz sounds like this one " 00:36:692 - " will be unused, Why i'm saying one spinner doesn't work? well one spinner can be easily CLEARED F A S T leaving like 3 or 4 seconds with no notes and that's kinda bad cuz we are losing sounds and wasting the sounds as well =S if he delete those 1/6's the map automatically will be too easy for more experienced players, in my oppion this version is more tehcnical than Mid's version actually People can judge this like " THAT MAP IS ONLY FOR PP, FUCK IT, IS SHIT" But clear this map requires skill to make it clear or well FC. And in my oppion the kiais are ok they are pretty accurate

okay but that goes for any spinner in any map, so that's kind of invalid in itself lol. there are more technical maps than this also without the 1/6 spam, so the same can be achieved with some alternatives

Taikocracy wrote:

the last two kiais, and i mean this in such a sincere manner, should NOT BE STREAMS. none of the instruments present in either kiais are constantly making noises that can or should be plotted. rather, the scheme present in the last two kiais to me is let me place a don where ever the instrument isn't playing, which, in that case, why not make the whole map a stream? the same logic could be applied universally. intensity =/= streams, silence =/= dons. i ask that you remap the kiais to be more rhythmically accurate, and if you need any suggestions or help, i'm happy to work with you on it.

I'm agree with this but they are pretty accurate xd the things he needs now is notes to delete the 1st seccion of the kiai is ok for me the 2nd is pretty overmapped in my oppinion, And like I said the kiais doesn't needs to be re-mapped only nerf deleting notes that's all

Taikocracy wrote:

i call into question the playability of all the 1/6 spams, whether the music call for such a spam or not it is extremely hard to play this and highly unnecessary when there are multiple alternatives. if every person who mapped electronic decided to map their buildups with 1/6 streams, that would be horrible. in cases like midnaait's version of the same map, 1/4+1/6 is used to make the map more intuitive to play. the alternatives include any other version of 1/4+1/6, or using a spinner in places that have a sound that grows steadily. is that not bad to use spinner or slider for 04:16:120 - something like this? its the "burst" stream sound, 1/6 longstream with kat colors on every white and red tick only are the most accurate to express the emphasis of this burst, it was the mapper choice than making 1/6+1/4 and Im fine with this even it spammed alot overall. Idk the playability for non kddk users but well thats it the challeng

the last two kiais, and i mean this in such a sincere manner, should NOT BE STREAMS. none of the instruments present in either kiais are constantly making noises that can or should be plotted. rather, the scheme present in the last two kiais to me is let me place a don where ever the instrument isn't playing, which, in that case, why not make the whole map a stream? the same logic could be applied universally. intensity =/= streams, silence =/= dons. i ask that you remap the kiais to be more rhythmically accurate, and if you need any suggestions or help, i'm happy to work with you on it. overmapped doesnt mean bad, its taiko.. and its just not only about noise or intesity but theres sound that called as synth and often syncrons with the main sounds, so I dont see something bad for it but ok, for the second part of the last kiai could be nerfed. 2spots of the last kiais are enough for the break section tho, yeah song it is

Taikocracy wrote:

okay but that goes for any spinner in any map, so that's kind of invalid in itself lol. there are more technical maps than this also without the 1/6 spam, so the same can be achieved with some alternatives
eh ok we'll see about that

Taikocracy wrote:

Shinsekai- & Taikocracy wrote:

i call into question the playability of all the 1/6 spams, whether the music call for such a spam or not it is extremely hard to play this and highly unnecessary when there are multiple alternatives. if every person who mapped electronic decided to map their buildups with 1/6 streams, that would be horrible. in cases like midnaait's version of the same map, 1/4+1/6 is used to make the map more intuitive to play. the alternatives include any other version of 1/4+1/6, or using a spinner in places that have a sound that grows steadily.

I can disagree with this cuz this "using a spinner", I think if Axer add one spinner will be bad for the song cuz sounds like this one " 00:36:692 - " will be unused, Why i'm saying one spinner doesn't work? well one spinner can be easily CLEARED F A S T leaving like 3 or 4 seconds with no notes and that's kinda bad cuz we are losing sounds and wasting the sounds as well =S if he delete those 1/6's the map automatically will be too easy for more experienced players, in my oppion this version is more tehcnical than Mid's version actually People can judge this like " THAT MAP IS ONLY FOR PP, FUCK IT, IS SHIT" But clear this map requires skill to make it clear or well FC. And in my oppion the kiais are ok they are pretty accurate

okay but that goes for any spinner in any map, so that's kind of invalid in itself lol. there are more technical maps than this also without the 1/6 spam, so the same can be achieved with some alternatives

I already made a special nerfed diff for you and other people that I left in the map's description, it is 7.84* and has the last streams "cut and emphasized" and more importantly, the 1/6 kddk removed and replaced with 1/6 x 1/4, you might like it, you might not, that doesn't really mean anything to me as it's something I've done in 15 minutes for some people to experience how the map would be if I did apply your mod, although it's not accurately represented because I only had 15 minutes to do that. Either way, I'm sure that's at least a preview of how the map would be with 1/6 x 1/4 patterns in the drops instead of kddk 1/6 and with the last 2 streams way more cut instead of following a Fun Stream scheme.

Shinsekai & Taikocracy wrote:

the last two kiais, and i mean this in such a sincere manner, should NOT BE STREAMS. none of the instruments present in either kiais are constantly making noises that can or should be plotted. rather, the scheme present in the last two kiais to me is let me place a don where ever the instrument isn't playing, which, in that case, why not make the whole map a stream? the same logic could be applied universally. intensity =/= streams, silence =/= dons. i ask that you remap the kiais to be more rhythmically accurate, and if you need any suggestions or help, i'm happy to work with you on it.

I'm agree with this but they are pretty accurate xd the things he needs now is notes to delete the 1st seccion of the kiai is ok for me the 2nd is pretty overmapped in my oppinion, And like I said the kiais doesn't needs to be re-mapped only nerf deleting notes that's all

eh ok we'll see about that
I'm sure I made it clear, but either way, I'll see about that sooner or later.

Taikocracy wrote:

i’m going to be flat out honest, if you know that there are multiple people against this map and you’re still pushing it for rank, don’t expect it to get anywhere. the diligence and effort are honorable, but not changing things that multiple people have agreed on will not get this map anywhere. we all have to sacrifice things we like about our maps so that they’re fit for ranking, and this is not fit for ranking. if you truly do not want to change anything that me, fruko, nepuri, and tons of other taiko bns have agreed on as a bad idea, then i suggest you start looking into getting this map loved.

Raphalge wrote:

hi

[not a pp map]
00:05:492 (21) - change to k for the tone difference between 00:05:149 (19,20) - and 00:05:492 (21,22) - ? ✓
00:08:920 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - change to k d k k d d k so you cover both the main and background synth? ✓
00:16:463 (79) - and 00:16:977 (82) - change to d and D? 00:16:463 (79) - for the same reason as 00:05:492 (21) - and 00:16:977 (82) - to make it easier to read ✓
00:18:692 (92) - change to k? I just think it looks nice contrasting with 00:19:206 (94,95,96) - :V ✓
00:20:235 (99) - change to k? since this and 00:20:406 - are basically the same note. ✓
00:28:463 (17) - honestly think this section up until the stream would look nicer with just a simple k d k d k theme, to match the simplicity of the stream. up to you though. I'll leave it as it is, uwu
00:43:463 (160,161) - invert since the bass hit is on 00:43:549 - ? I know it has the buzz sound but it'd help make the stream a bit less cluttered with all the kats. ✓
00:44:492 (172) - change to d to improve readability? also sounds like there's a bit of a dip before 00:44:577 (173) - which I think would be nice to emphasise. ✓
00:45:263 (179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191) - change pattern to kkkdkkkdkkddk? would fit your previous rhythms a lot better. ✓
00:46:635 (193) - I don't see why only this stream starts with a d? I'm already getting lazy so I'll just post one of these as a pattern suggestion. Again I feel like it'd match your previous rhythms better. ✓ sounds very nice, thanks!
00:54:692 (272,273,274) - while this stream seems fine, it's a little boring. If you invert these three you'll incorporate part of 00:52:463 (250) - this stream AND 00:51:092 (236) - this stream, idk I think it'd be neat. ✓
01:22:292 (421) - For the sake of my sanity please change either this to k or 01:18:177 (412) - and 01:19:549 (415) - please, why aren't they the same D: ✓ AM SORRY I FORGOT
01:37:377 (538) - k for consistency with 01:35:835 (522,523) - and to highlight the higher pitch buzz on 01:37:377 (538) - ? ✓
01:42:863 (592) - ^ ✓
01:46:034 (623) - change to d? I think it'd improve readability. Same for all the other instances. of (kkkd)k ✓ uwu
01:49:377 (657) - change to d since 01:49:549 (658) - is basically the same note? (also for a nicer pattern)
01:54:177 (699,700,701,702,703,704,705,706) - kkkdkkdd looks a lot nicer imo, otherwise you have the 1/6 starting on the same color as the note before it, and that'd be the only place in the map this happens (kinda off-putting tbh) ✓ motherfk it sounds so much better now ><!!!
02:11:663 (45) - same as 00:05:492 (21) - ✓
02:22:292 (106,107,108,109,110,111,112) - with the amount of finishers here I think a simple k k d d k k d would be nicer, mustly for readability. ✓
02:24:520 (117) - change to d to (kind of) match 00:18:349 (90,91,92,93) - ? ✓
02:40:977 (190) - and 02:42:349 (206) - change to k for no other reason than to spice up the stream a bit? ✓ SPICY
02:45:863 - missed note? Don't see why you'd skip this one since you mapped it at 02:54:092 - ✓ added uwu!!
02:48:692 (254,255,256,257,258,259) - k k d k k d would cover the kicks a lot better imo. ✓ kkdkkd uwu
02:50:663 - add k? it's an 8* map so a little 1/4 wouldn't hurt right? :^) ✓ added d, u probably got confused and typed k by accident uwu
02:58:977 (330) - change to d? there's a little woop in the background where a different note would look nice plus it'd improve playability. ✓
03:03:092 - weird skipped note again? the woops deserve emphasis my dude! ✓ DONE MY DUDE
03:04:463 (368) - d for the same reason as 02:58:977 (330) - ? ✓
03:05:920 (383) - k here? sounds the same as the rest of the stream so I don't see why it should be mapped differently
03:07:549 - change this sv to 1.25x as well please. Would avoid a really weird overlap that way. ✓
03:55:892 (202) - change to d for the same reason as 00:05:492 (21) - ? ✓
04:08:749 (21,22) - change to k for a nice mirror with 04:09:435 (27,28) - ? ✓
04:09:692 - strongly suggest adding a k here and inverting 04:09:777 (29,30) - , the pause is kind of weird since the drum beat doesn't actually "stop" at all.
04:11:835 (46,47,48,49) - move this to 04:11:749 - and change to dkkd? If you then move 04:12:263 (50,51,52) - to 04:12:177 - and add a k at 04:12:520 - I think it'd look pretty nice. ✓
04:12:692 (54,55,56,57,58,59,60) - change to dkkdkkd if you apply the previous suggestion? ✓

The great stream pattern suggestion of 2017

[Stream 1]
Only apply this if you apply all of them, otherwise it'll probably look like shit idk. Ask me if you need clarification on any points.

04:15:349 (83) - swap with 04:15:520 (85) - ? Making the patterns really complex at the very end of the map is a bit big of a diff spike if you ask me.
04:19:292 (125,126,127,128) - kdkk? same reason as the last point, this stream really is a ton harder than the rest of the map :S ✓ edited this pattern just a bit
04:20:320 (137) - k sounds nice here and would add some variety. ✓
04:21:092 (146,148,150) - swap colors? bring back the kdkkdkkk from 00:51:092 (236) - :^) nain, too confusing ;;
04:21:777 (154) - since I'm lazy again I'll just suggest another screenshotted stream pattern like this nain, too confusing ;;
04:24:006 (180,181,182,183) - change to kdkk ✓ , 04:24:520 (186,187,188,189,190,191,192) - into kdkdkkd and 04:25:206 (194,195,196,197,198,199) - into kdkkdk? nain, too confusing ;;
04:25:720 (200,201,202,203) - change into ddkk?nain, is fine like dis
04:27:006 (215,216) - inverting these sounds nice if you change the following stream pattern to something like this color=#FF0000]nain, is fine like dis[/color]
04:29:835 (248) - another stream suggestion starting from here. boom too confusing ;w;
04:32:235 (248) - and then starting from here. bam too confusing ;w;
04:36:177 (322) - change to d? ✓
04:37:549 (338) - ^? ✓
04:39:263 (358) - ^? ✓ and this will also allow me to make it end on a Big Kat!!

[Stream 2]
04:44:749 (413) - k would fit the melody you followed before the 1/6 ✓
04:47:063 (441,442,443,444) - change to kddk for smoother playing? It's fine like this
04:47:492 (446) - k for the same reason as the last one? ✓
04:48:006 (452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464) - kkkdkkddkdkdk would look nicer imo, and fit the previous rhythms better. It's fine like this, don't need any changes
04:55:720 (536) - k for the same reason as the last one? ✓
04:58:120 (565,567) - change to k to emphasise the stuff you did at 04:52:806 - ? ✓

Hope some of this is comprehensible, I just woke up. So yeah bubble pops hurt, but I'd hate to see you give up on one of your first maps. So ganbatte, Axer-chan!