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Horie Yui - True truly love

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Beomsan
1,878 posts
Joined November 2013
Beomsan

Zisa wrote:

I fixed Left's diff because Left said he would quit osu and let me fix it
a month later...
Riana
Beatmap Nominator
1,210 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Riana

Beomsan wrote:

Zisa wrote:

I fixed Left's diff because Left said he would quit osu and let me fix it
a month later...
Don't forget, you're here forever
Nokie-
171 posts
Joined July 2015
Nokie-
Here from my queue!

Originally I was going to mod this, but after looking at each of the maps for a decent amount of time, I must admit that I am simply too inexperienced to find any flaws in your maps (or there just aren't any), except for a few insignificant personal preferences.
I cannot honestly say that I would expect an improvement of any of the maps to come out of this, if I did list these few tiny things.
Therefore I will instead shoot two stars, one as an apology for the missing mod, and one to honor a job well done! (That's 20% of all I ever earned btw!)

Again, sorry for my incompetence and congratulations to all of the involved mappers. You have created an awesome set!
Good luck with ranking it in the near future!
Riana
Beatmap Nominator
1,210 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Riana

WasserIstGut wrote:

Here from my queue!

Originally I was going to mod this, but after looking at each of the maps for a decent amount of time, I must admit that I am simply too inexperienced to find any flaws in your maps (or there just aren't any), except for a few insignificant personal preferences.
I cannot honestly say that I would expect an improvement of any of the maps to come out of this, if I did list these few tiny things.
Therefore I will instead shoot two stars, one as an apology for the missing mod, and one to honor a job well done! (That's 20% of all I ever earned btw!)

Again, sorry for my incompetence and congratulations to all of the involved mappers. You have created an awesome set!
Good luck with ranking it in the near future!
thanks for praising my map and stars :D
b00
186 posts
Joined January 2014
b00
From my queue

Moa's TLove

00:09:790 (5,2) - Watch for overlaps
00:45:378 (1) - adding a circle here would allow for a 1/2 slider 00:45:452 - so your following the vocals with active clicks
Honestly this diff looks really solid. Not much I can say for it. Good work

Extra

00:11:408 (1,2) - this spacing seems really low for 1/2. You could make 00:11:408 (1) - this an extended slider?
00:30:525 (2) - there is quite a strong snare drum sound on the red tick on this slider. Maybe use a reverse?
00:33:025 (4,6) - if your going to overlap. Maybe put 4 half way in between the slider 6 so that it looks better. Same with 00:32:731 (2) - https://goo.gl/UvkCxW
00:36:702 (3,4) - overlaps like this imo work better with 1/4. Having this as a 1/2 gap seems odd
00:38:319 (3,1) - this flow seems really awkward to play. Using the clockwise rotation you had before would play better https://goo.gl/e6u4u3
minor stuff but 00:40:084 (4) - seems out of play in the pattern for no reason
00:59:643 (3) - nc?
01:11:996 (1) - I dont think these needs to be a buzz slider.
This diff is cute too. Apart from a few minor things I like it.
This song is awesome! Can I GD this quickly? I've been looking for a fun anime set to map a map on. :lol:
Edit - Read description *sigh* Thats fair enough. PM me if your ever making another animu set
Riana
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1,210 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Riana

b00 wrote:

Extra

00:11:408 (1,2) - this spacing seems really low for 1/2. You could make 00:11:408 (1) - this an extended slider?
00:07:878 (1,2) - that is same rhythm as this one, that one consistent with it and I think this part don't have to be emphasized so much
00:30:525 (2) - there is quite a strong snare drum sound on the red tick on this slider. Maybe use a reverse?
changed it to reverse slider
00:33:025 (4,6) - if your going to overlap. Maybe put 4 half way in between the slider 6 so that it looks better. Same with 00:32:731 (2) - https://goo.gl/UvkCxW
I think it would be good but that circles shaping star and slider head in the middle of star can't be kept that way.
00:36:702 (3,4) - overlaps like this imo work better with 1/4. Having this as a 1/2 gap seems odd
removed 4, so it is also consistent with 00:40:820 (1,2,3)
00:38:319 (3,1) - this flow seems really awkward to play. Using the clockwise rotation you had before would play better https://goo.gl/e6u4u3
minor stuff but 00:40:084 (4) - seems out of play in the pattern for no reason
fixed both

00:59:643 (3) - nc? nc off looks better imo
01:11:996 (1) - I dont think these needs to be a buzz slider. changed it to normal slider
This diff is cute too. Apart from a few minor things I like it.
This song is awesome! Can I GD this quickly? I've been looking for a fun anime set to map a map on. :lol:
Edit - Read description *sigh* Thats fair enough. PM me if your ever making another animu set
thanks for modding!

I want to get more gd if I was expert mapper, but I think I can't manage mapset with many diffs..
sorry for not accepting your gd.. I'll probably make another set after I rank this
Riana
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1,210 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Riana
fixed some stuffs I rejected to fix before
Kawashiro
1,522 posts
Joined April 2012
Kawashiro

Dailycare wrote:

[Kawa's Hard]
*맨 앞의 노트 12개에 대해 언락님의 의견을 읽어보았는데요, 제 의견은 벨 소리라 하더라도 음의 변화는 확실하게 있다는 것 입니다. 01:26:702 (1,2,3,4) - 처럼 짧으면 모를까, 지금건 약간 과한것같네요. 완전히 고쳐야한단 건 아니지만 그래도 더 나은 대안을 찾을 필요는 있을 것 같습니다. 한 명이면 모를까 여러 명이 언급한다는 것은 무슨 의미인지 알 것이라 생각합니다.

BlakeBestWaifu wrote:

Kawa's Hard
00:00:820 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Shouldn't be so high in the corner. Newish players will always miss on sightread - No they don't.
00:04:054 (4,1) - Reduce the jump a little bit - fixed myself
00:29:055 (1,1) - Reduce this jump too - ^

timemon wrote:

[Hard]
MA is also angry at this 01:07:290 (3) - grrrrrr - XDDDDDDDDDDD, it isnt offscrean so np

also dat start position tho
모딩온줄모랏어오
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Riana
Beatmap Nominator
1,210 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Riana
Updated Hard (like 8 hrs ago but anyway)
July - San
137 posts
Joined July 2016
July - San
hi hii!
From my queue! my queue
NM

Okay let's see here.. (Sorry for the short mod)

Easy

01:27:878 (2) - Maybe in this slider sounds better the hitsounds "clap"

Left's Insane

00:46:261 (5) - for me, it is better to eliminate the return of the slider, And put a circle here 00:46:555 -

01:24:937 (5) - maybe looks better a NC here

00:18:614 - 00:18:908 - 00:19:202 - Do not you think that in those places it is very empty? What do you think if you put a circle in those places?

00:27:437 (2) - that circle should not be there, does not keep pace

00:51:408 (5) - NC here

Extra

00:12:584 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Do not you think that's too long? you should cut it

00:24:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This too

00:34:349 (3) - NC Here

01:05:525 (9) - Maybe nc here?

The diff Moa's TLove it's so good!

Okay...Let me explain, your map it's soooo perfect, i love it! :)

Good luck for ranking ! bayy ;)
Riana
Beatmap Nominator
1,210 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Riana

July - San wrote:

hi hii!
From my queue! my queue
NM

Okay let's see here.. (Sorry for the short mod)

Easy

01:27:878 (2) - Maybe in this slider sounds better the hitsounds "clap"
Applied!

Left's Insane

00:46:261 (5) - for me, it is better to eliminate the return of the slider, And put a circle here 00:46:555 -
seems to be fine as it is now

01:24:937 (5) - maybe looks better a NC here
01:24:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) is one pattern and not even like 10+ combo so keeping it looks fine

00:18:614 - 00:18:908 - 00:19:202 - Do not you think that in those places it is very empty? What do you think if you put a circle in those places?
it's choice of Left to fit the music so I would like to just leave it

00:27:437 (2) - that circle should not be there, does not keep pace
I guess it's placed there because it has distinct sound

00:51:408 (5) - NC here
done

Extra

00:12:584 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Do not you think that's too long? you should cut it
since it is mid 5* Extra diff, I don't think there's need to "nerf" streams

00:24:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This too
same for this

00:34:349 (3) - NC Here
applied~

01:05:525 (9) - Maybe nc here?
applied~

The diff Moa's TLove it's so good!

Okay...Let me explain, your map it's soooo perfect, i love it! :)

Good luck for ranking ! bayy ;)
Left is not currently active so I'm fixing instead of him
I'm not changing Left's diff much so I could keep his intention as much as possible..

thanks you for modding~ :)
Luel Roseline
1,034 posts
Joined February 2014
Luel Roseline
Posting here so mod later here.
Luel Roseline
1,034 posts
Joined February 2014
Luel Roseline
매퍼 훈련중과 동시에 모딩을
인센만 문제가 있다는 걸로

[인센]
00:09:790 (2,3) - 컨트롤 쥐
00:16:996 (4,1) - 블랭크 고쳐라 두번 고쳐라
00:41:996 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - 이방식으로 고치는 게 더 좋다
00:50:231 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 음계가 점점 올라가지는 단계인데 간격이 점점 넓어지게 하는 것도 나쁘지 않을 듯
01:07:731 (1,2,3) - 뉴콤을 왜...슬라이더쪽으로 박아주시기를
Riana
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Topic Starter
Riana

Luel Roseline wrote:

매퍼 훈련중과 동시에 모딩을
인센만 문제가 있다는 걸로

[인센]
00:09:790 (2,3) - 컨트롤 쥐 - 딱히 고칠필요 없어보이네요
00:16:996 (4,1) - 블랭크 고쳐라 두번 고쳐라 - 고쳤습니다
00:41:996 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - 이방식으로 고치는 게 더 좋다 - 이건 매퍼분 취향 따르는거니 고치진 않을게요
00:50:231 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 음계가 점점 올라가지는 단계인데 간격이 점점 넓어지게 하는 것도 나쁘지 않을 듯 - 노트 자체가 위로 올라가는 형태라
추가로 그런 표현을 하진 않아도 될거같네요
01:07:731 (1,2,3) - 뉴콤을 왜...슬라이더쪽으로 박아주시기를 - 현재 뉴콤이 보기 좋아보이네요
Left님이 겟난은 알아서 모딩받아 고쳐달라하셔서 제가 고칩니다
제 맵이면 많이 반영해볼텐데 원래 만드신 의도 어긋나든가 할듯해서 일부로 많이 안건드네요..

여튼 모딩 감사합니다~
Left
2,156 posts
Joined October 2014
Left
컥 이제부터 제가 고칠게요

위 설명 +
00:09:643 (1,2,3,4) - 그렇게 고치면 표현하려던 피아노 음이랑 전혀 엇나가서 x
00:41:996 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - 선호하는 간격사용도 아니고, 커서정지를 더 효과적으로 이용하고 싶었음
01:07:731 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 패턴뉴콤
Kawashiro
1,522 posts
Joined April 2012
Kawashiro
실수로 고치기 전 버전을 드렸네용

fixed
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio (2).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51408
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14937,25525,34937,51408,56114,60820,65525,70231
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.600001

[Metadata]
Title:True truly love
TitleUnicode:True truly love
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:Zisa
Version:Kawa's Hard
Source:DIVINA
Tags:divina online Left Moa Kawashiro
BeatmapID:1399567
BeatmapSetID:659776

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.2
CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:6.9
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"haruka.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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4349,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
5525,-100,4,2,1,68,0,0
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60084,-100,4,2,1,75,0,1
70231,-100,4,2,1,68,0,0
91408,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
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Combo2 : 255,136,255
Combo3 : 255,0,255
Combo4 : 255,191,255

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8,188,76114,1,2,1:2:0:0:
28,104,76261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,44,76408,1,2,1:2:0:0:
172,20,76555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,36,76702,6,0,L|252:92,3,32.5,4|0|0|4,1:2|0:0|1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
280,100,76996,2,0,L|277:132,3,32.5,8|8|8|8,0:3|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,176,77290,6,0,P|253:198|216:208,1,65,12|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,208,77585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,184,77732,2,0,B|42:209|58:245|58:245|74:277|58:309,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,343,78173,2,0,P|165:325|197:322,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,340,78467,6,0,L|368:344,1,65,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,348,78761,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,287,78908,2,0,P|459:267|427:262,1,65,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
344,256,79202,2,0,L|344:126,1,130,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,47,79643,6,0,P|341:40|310:50,1,65,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,104,79937,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,52,80085,2,0,B|128:12|128:12|75:53,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,112,80526,2,0,P|37:133|68:141,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,204,80820,6,0,L|116:284,1,65,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,332,81114,1,10,0:0:0:0:
228,268,81261,2,0,L|225:203,1,65,0|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
300,164,81555,2,0,L|312:316,1,130,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,376,81996,6,0,P|352:368|375:346,1,65,6|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,264,82290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,320,82437,2,0,B|480:332|480:332|480:208,1,130,2|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
508,148,82879,2,0,P|477:142|446:150,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,196,83172,6,0,P|345:202|313:195,1,65,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,140,83466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,168,83613,2,0,B|148:204|148:204|161:291,1,130,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
160,376,84054,2,0,P|192:373|219:356,1,65,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,368,84348,6,0,L|304:228,1,130,2|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,152,84789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,68,84936,2,0,L|152:68,1,130,2|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,68,85378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,152,85525,6,0,L|88:224,1,65,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,217,85819,2,0,L|269:217,1,65,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,217,86113,2,0,L|323:121,1,65,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
408,152,86407,2,0,L|504:152,1,65,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,237,86702,5,8,0:0:0:0:
473,237,86996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
473,237,87290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
473,237,87584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
473,237,87878,6,0,L|473:309,1,65,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,302,88172,2,0,L|292:302,1,65,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,302,88466,2,0,L|238:206,1,65,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
153,237,88760,2,0,L|57:237,1,65,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
2,237,89055,5,4,0:1:0:0:
256,192,89202,12,0,91408,0:0:0:0:
_xyliac
816 posts
Joined February 2016
_xyliac
NM req from my modding queue~

General:

  1. The spread is pretty rough imo there should be another insane or expert to atleast somehow even it out (2 diffs preferably, 1 insane (4.8*) and 1 expert (5.2*))
Moa's TLove:

  1. 00:09:349 (2,3,4,5,6) - tilting to play because of the previous large spacing
  2. 00:21:996 (1) - breaks the flow, consider changing this
  3. 00:18:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ack nerf dis
  4. 00:23:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - it didn't sound that intense, I wonder how come this is so spaced.
  5. 00:29:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nerf pls
  6. 00:32:584 (1,2) - you can make this circles since the vocal syllables are clickable
  7. 00:41:996 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same intensities but different distance spacing, also overspaced like a lot compared to it's intensity DX
  8. 00:59:643 (1) - I know it's consistent since it follows the vocals but imo it's tilting to play, there's also a more significant drum hitsound in the background, perhaps change this to 2 spaced circles instead of using a 1/1 slider?
  9. 01:21:114 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ack please change DX This comes out of nowhere, it breaks the player's momentum, reconsider.
  10. 01:24:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - nerf it by a bit
all I can say for this is, lower the ds for the early non-kiai jumps to highlight the intense parts in the chorus much more. The cross-screen jumps at the end need to be nerfed as well because it simply doesn't give proper emphasis to the music; I know that you're aiming for a high sr but please don't abuse the jump compositions DX but overall it's a really well made diff, GJ

Kawa's Hard:

  1. 00:10:672 (3) - make this point more from 00:10:525 (2) -
  2. 01:03:613 (2) - due to AR8, 01:02:437 (7) - makes 01:03:613 (2) - leave an ugly overlap
  3. 01:22:437 (3) - same as 00:10:672 (3) -
  4. 01:26:702 (1,2,3,4) - these are 4 significant sounds so why are they stacked to each other, perhaps separate them to add more emphasis to give a little blast in the ending I guess?
Solid diff! there wasn't much to point out.

Moa's Normal:

  1. 00:19:643 (1) - perhaps this can blanket 00:19:055 (2) - ? Visuals are a big variable in gameplay for lower diffs
  2. 00:23:172 (1,1,1) - a series of overlaps that can confuse a beginner, perhaps change it a bit?
  3. 01:02:584 (2) - just make these symmetrical? it looks slightly tilted
Solid as well! there wasn't much to point out.
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Kawashiro
1,522 posts
Joined April 2012
Kawashiro
1st issue, I don't think it is necessary

2nd and 3rd, look at this https://puu.sh/yyxKh/392ffb7cdb.png there is no overlap =w=

4th, I think you can realize the tone of background melody goes down at 01:26:702 (1,2,3,4) - here. this stack is for emphasize this tone changing by stopping cursor and following only drum

So nothing fixed. but Thank you ;3
Riana
Beatmap Nominator
1,210 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Riana

_xyliac wrote:

NM req from my modding queue~

General:

  1. The spread is pretty rough imo there should be another insane or expert to atleast somehow even it out (2 diffs preferably, 1 insane (4.8*) and 1 expert (5.2*)) - I think spread is ok but I may nerf extra to have more even spread
Forgot to respond on general thing
_xyliac
816 posts
Joined February 2016
_xyliac

Kawashiro wrote:

1st issue, I don't think it is necessary

2nd and 3rd, look at this https://puu.sh/yyxKh/392ffb7cdb.png there is no overlap =w= maybe I got the outdated version XD, or perhaps I'm blind or tired because I was modding this at around 2 a.m ww

4th, I think you can realize the tone of background melody goes down at 01:26:702 (1,2,3,4) - here. this stack is for emphasize this tone changing by stopping cursor and following only drum

So nothing fixed. but Thank you ;3
Sutherland
299 posts
Joined October 2012
Sutherland
모딩입니다 :3

Moa's TLove
00:07:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - 간주와 노트 박자가 맞지 않는것 같습니다. https://puu.sh/yCHpH/10094a7adc.jpg 이박자가 맞는거같은데 단순히 제 생각일 뿐이고 저대로 둬도 괜찮을것 같네요. 그리고 1번슬라이더를 서클 두개로 바꾸는것도 괜찮아보입니다.
00:09:349 (2,3,4,5,6) - 이전 패턴에 비해 디스턴스가 작습니다. 좀더 넓은 디스턴스를 이용해 다른 패턴을 만드는게 좋을것 같아요
00:33:172 (3) - 이 서클이 강조되어야할 타이밍인데 전혀 강조되지 않은것 같습니다. 디스턴스를 더 넓혀 서클을 강조하는걸 추천합니다
00:38:467 (1,1,1) - 굳이 변속을 넣어야할 필요는 없어보입니다. 단순히 점점 거리가 멀어지는 배치를 통해 음악을 따라가도 충분하다고 생각합니다
00:42:584 (1,2) - 두 서클의 자리를 바꾸면 어떨까요?
01:08:320 (1,1) - 두 슬라이더의 속도차이가 없음에도 뉴콤보가 들어가있습니다. 01:07:878 (1) - 이슬라이더부터 차례로 0.1배씩 속도가 빨라지게하면서 모든 슬라이더에 뉴콤보를 넣는것이 나아보입니다.
01:07:878 (1,1) - 그리고 이 두 슬라이더간의 디스턴스가 좀 좁다는 생각이드네요. 간격을 넓히면 좋겠습니다.
01:21:114 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 갑자기 한곳에 서클이 모여서 나오니 플레이할때 당황스러웠습니다. 곡의 나머지부분과 통일성을 갖추기위해 디스턴스를 넓힌 점프를 넣는게 나아보입니다
01:24:643 (2) - 곡의 음이 낮아지는 상황인데 슬라이더는 위로 올라갔네요. 이전 슬라이더보다 아래에 위치하는게 나아보입니다

플레이는 재밌게 했습니다 xD
너무 마지막 점프에 sr이 치중된건 아닌가 하는 생각이 드네요 이점도 참고해주셨으면 좋겠습니다.
Riana
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Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Riana
updated moa's diff

fixed some things mentioned in _xyliac, -Unlimit- 's modding
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Left
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Joined October 2014
Left
00:12:584 (1) - 솔직히 상위 세개 난이도에서 여기 스트림 왜들어가있는지 모르겠음. 전혀 근거가 없고 노래에 비해 과도하게 어렵고 강조되어있음

혹시 멜로디매핑한거면 그거 1/2임
Riana
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Riana

Left wrote:

00:12:584 (1) - 솔직히 상위 세개 난이도에서 여기 스트림 왜들어가있는지 모르겠음. 전혀 근거가 없고 노래에 비해 과도하게 어렵고 강조되어있음

혹시 멜로디매핑한거면 그거 1/2임
뭔가 원래 속도로 재생하면 1/4처럼 들렸네요.. 일단 제 난도들은 고쳤어요
Riana
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Riana
난도 추가한김에 BG 따로 해놨는데 겟난해주신분들도 혹시 BG 따로 하고싶으신거 있으면 주세요
Affirmation
2,543 posts
Joined March 2015
Affirmation
Q

[Kizuna]
  1. 00:05:231 (5,1) - 스택해야 할 이유가 있나요? 이런 형태의 스택은 잘 보지도 못했고 이런 형태의 스택은 리딩이 조금 더 어려워 질 수 있을 것 같아서 개인적으로 추천드리고 싶진 않은 형태의 패턴입니다.
  2. 00:05:967 (4) - 사실 여기를 들어보면 00:05:525 (1,2,3) - 보다 확실히 더 강한 음이 실려 있어요. 그런데 그만한 표현은 하지 않으신 게 조금 아쉽네요. 점프를 넣는게 대표적인 강조의 예인데 이런 강한 음에 점프를 넣지 않으신게 조금 어색했습니다.
  3. 00:12:584 (1,2,1,2) - 여기가 00:13:761 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 보다 좀 더 강한 음 같은데 전혀 강하다는 표현을 해주지 않았다는 게 조금 아쉬웠습니다.
  4. 00:15:525 (3,4) - 00:17:878 (3,1) - 여기가 비슷한 음으로 들리는데 한쪽은 3/4고 한쪽은 1/2네요...? 조금 통일된 리듬을 써주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. 그리고 00:18:172 (1) - 필요없는 뉴콤 제거.
  5. 00:27:584 (6) - 앞쪽에 리듬들, 00:25:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 이런거나 00:26:702 (1,2,3,4) - 이런걸 보시면 조용한 파트라도 보컬비트에는 클릭을 할 수 있도록 해두셨는데 00:27:584 - 여기에는 아무 보컬도 없거든요. 개인적인 생각이지만 00:27:290 (5) - 를 1.1로 바꿔주시고 00:27:731 - 여기 비트는 아무것도 없도록 하는게 보컬 표현에 조금 더 좋다고 봅니다. 같은 이유로 00:28:172 (3,4) - 여기도 그냥 슬라이더 하나로 처리해 주시는 게 좋다고 보구요.
  6. 00:33:319 (2,1) - 이거 눈으로 볼떄 거리가 00:33:172 (1,2) - 랑 똑같거든요. 그러면 플레이어 입장에서는 저게 1/2이라고 읽을 수가 없습니다. 딱히 1/1이라고 어떻게 경고해 둔 패턴 같은 것도 안보이고 00:32:584 (1,1,1) - 여기 뉴콤 앞에는 전부 1/2니깐 당연히 00:33:614 (1) - 도 1/2라고 인식을 하겠죠. 1/1간격이라는 걸 조금 보여 줄 수 있는 패턴을 생각 해 보시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.
  7. 01:08:761 (5) - ctrl G를 하시면 조금 더 나은 형태의 흐름이 될 수 있을 갓 같습니다. 01:08:320 (4) - 가 시계 방향으로 흘러가니깐요. 그리고 01:07:878 (3,4) - 처럼 모든 노트의 간격을 조금 씩 띄워주는 데도 좋을 것 같다고 생각합니다.
  8. 01:24:349 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 이 패턴이 이렇게 뉴콤을 스팸해도 될 정도로 강조가 큰 음들은 아니라고 생각하거든요, 제가 보기에 이런 형태의 패턴은 음에 맞는 패턴은 아니라고 봅니다. 차라리 00:12:584 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 랑 같은 음이니 비슷한 리듬으로 표현해주세요.
[Moa's Extra]
  1. 00:07:143 (2,3,4) - 이 음이 00:06:702 (1) - 랑 비슷하게 보이는데 그냥 00:06:702 (1) - 를 복사해서 00:07:143 - 다 붙이세요. 음 표현이 좀 더 깔끔해집니다.
  2. 00:08:172 (2,3) - 다른 똑같은 음들인 00:05:525 (1,2,3) - 00:10:231 (1,2,3) - 를 보시면 그냥 배경음? 을 따라가셨는데 여기는 드럼을 따라갔잖아요. 일관성에 어긋나서 어색하거든요. 비슷하게 맞워주시는게 일관성에 더 좋다고 봅니다.
  3. 00:09:349 (2,3,4,5,6) - 갑자기 점프 왜사라짐. 다른데 보시면 전부 점프가 잘 들어가 있는데 여기만 이상하게 오각형 맞춰져 있고 점프가 안되어 있네요, 00:09:349 (2,3) - 특히 이런거 보면 강조점이 다른 음들 보다 더 강해야 한다고 봅니다.
  4. 00:12:584 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

    Left wrote:

    00:12:584 (1) - 솔직히 상위 세개 난이도에서 여기 스트림 왜들어가있는지 모르겠음. 전혀 근거가 없고 노래에 비해 과도하게 어렵고 강조되어있음

    혹시 멜로디매핑한거면 그거 1/2임
  5. 00:21:996 (1,3) - 슬라이더 꼬리끼리 진짜 끝부분만 오버랩 되어있는거 보면 좀 이상한데 꼬리오버랩 떼주실 수 있나여.
  6. 00:38:467 (1,1,1) - 진~~~~~~~짜 쓰잘데기 없는 개소린데 블랭킷 의도하신거면 조금 어긋나 있습니다.
  7. 00:54:937 (1,3) - 슬라이더 블랭킷 하신건 진짜 좋다고 보는데 님 이런 형태의 오버랩을 다른 패턴에는 안쓰셨잖아요. 조금 랜덤하게 보이네요. 굳이 이런 데에서만 쓸 정도로 여기가 그렇게 강조점이 큰 것도 아니고요.
  8. 01:07:878 (1,1,1,1) - 음 분위기가 점점 고조되고 있는데 슬라이더 속도는 왜 들쑥날쑥인가요. 일관적으로 조금씩 올려주는 패턴이 조금 더 좋다고 봅니다.
  9. 01:17:437 - 다른 음들이랑 비교했을때 유일하게 이 음만 무시되어 있네요. 똑같이 1/2로 표현을 해 주시는게 일관적이고 좋다고 생각합니다.
  10. 01:21:114 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 앞과 같은 이유, 조금 더 강조가 될 수 있는 음들입니다.
  11. 01:26:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 이런 아무 배경음도 없는 구간에 크게 간격을 설정했어야 할까요...조금만 줄여주시면 좋을것 같습니다.
[Left's Insane]
  1. 00:08:320 (2) - 이거 컨쥐해서 00:05:967 (1,2) - 랑 비슷한 패턴 만들어주시면 흐름 일관성에 조금 도움이 될것 같습니다,
  2. 00:29:643 (5,6,7,8) - 이거 간격 조금만 늘려줘도 괜찮지 않을까요? 00:12:584 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 이렇게 음의 강조점에 맞춰서 간격을 설정해 주시면 좋을 것 같아요.
  3. 01:08:320 (4) - 스택에러 조금만 맞춰주세용/.
  4. 01:25:379 (8,1) - 이거 00:13:614 (8,1) - 처럼 간격 작게 해주세요. 스택이 갑자기 나오니깐 조금 어색하네요 .
[Kawa's Hard]
  1. 00:07:143 (3,4) - 다른음들 보면 전부 배경음에 맞춰서 매핑했는데 여기만 드럼사운드를 따라가신 이유가 있나요? 딱히 큰 이유가 없다면 그냥 다른것처럼 배경음을 따라가는게 낫지 않을까요?
  2. 00:14:937 - ~ 여기부터 너무 뉴콤 주기가 길어지네요. 그냥 그대로 1다운비트로 끊어 주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.
  3. 00:51:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 01:00:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 복붙을 하실거면 티가 안나게.....
  4. 01:13:320 - 필요한 음인가요? 단순 보컬만 따라가신것 같은데 이부분은, 그러면 여기 소리는 크게 필요하다고 느껴지지 않네요. 01:15:525 (3) - 처럼요.
  5. 01:17:290 (1) - 여기부터도 복붙 티 안나게 조금씩 수정해주세요.
GL
Riana
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Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Kizuna]
  1. 00:05:231 (5,1) - 스택해야 할 이유가 있나요? 이런 형태의 스택은 잘 보지도 못했고 이런 형태의 스택은 리딩이 조금 더 어려워 질 수 있을 것 같아서 개인적으로 추천드리고 싶진 않은 형태의 패턴입니다. - 조금 이동했습니다.
  2. 00:05:967 (4) - 사실 여기를 들어보면 00:05:525 (1,2,3) - 보다 확실히 더 강한 음이 실려 있어요. 그런데 그만한 표현은 하지 않으신 게 조금 아쉽네요. 점프를 넣는게 대표적인 강조의 예인데 이런 강한 음에 점프를 넣지 않으신게 조금 어색했습니다. - 디스턴스 조절했습니다.
  3. 00:12:584 (1,2,1,2) - 여기가 00:13:761 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 보다 좀 더 강한 음 같은데 전혀 강하다는 표현을 해주지 않았다는 게 조금 아쉬웠습니다. - 슬라랑 노트패턴 나오는 순서를 바꿨습니다.
  4. 00:15:525 (3,4) - 00:17:878 (3,1) - 여기가 비슷한 음으로 들리는데 한쪽은 3/4고 한쪽은 1/2네요...? 조금 통일된 리듬을 써주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. 그리고 00:18:172 (1) - 필요없는 뉴콤 제거. - 3/4 리듬으로 통일하고 뉴콤 삭제했습니다.
  5. 00:27:584 (6) - 앞쪽에 리듬들, 00:25:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 이런거나 00:26:702 (1,2,3,4) - 이런걸 보시면 조용한 파트라도 보컬비트에는 클릭을 할 수 있도록 해두셨는데 00:27:584 - 여기에는 아무 보컬도 없거든요. 개인적인 생각이지만 00:27:290 (5) - 를 1.1로 바꿔주시고 00:27:731 - 여기 비트는 아무것도 없도록 하는게 보컬 표현에 조금 더 좋다고 봅니다. 같은 이유로 00:28:172 (3,4) - 여기도 그냥 슬라이더 하나로 처리해 주시는 게 좋다고 보구요. -
    보컬이 없다해도 00:27:584 (6) - 슬라 머리 자리에는 어느정도 강한 음이 있어서 1/2 슬라를 이어두는게 나은거같네요.. 변속은 반영했습니다. 00:28:172 (3) - 고쳤습니다!
  6. 00:33:319 (2,1) - 이거 눈으로 볼떄 거리가 00:33:172 (1,2) - 랑 똑같거든요. 그러면 플레이어 입장에서는 저게 1/2이라고 읽을 수가 없습니다. 딱히 1/1이라고 어떻게 경고해 둔 패턴 같은 것도 안보이고 00:32:584 (1,1,1) - 여기 뉴콤 앞에는 전부 1/2니깐 당연히 00:33:614 (1) - 도 1/2라고 인식을 하겠죠. 1/1간격이라는 걸 조금 보여 줄 수 있는 패턴을 생각 해 보시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. - 00:33:320 (2) - 를 1/4 슬라이더로 처리했습니다. 중간에
    끊긴부분도 어느정도 표현하면서 1/1구분이 더 될거같네요.
  7. 01:08:761 (5) - ctrl G를 하시면 조금 더 나은 형태의 흐름이 될 수 있을 갓 같습니다. 01:08:320 (4) - 가 시계 방향으로 흘러가니깐요. 그리고 01:07:878 (3,4) - 처럼 모든 노트의 간격을 조금 씩 띄워주는 데도 좋을 것 같다고 생각합니다. - 01:08:761 (5) - 를 적당히 회전시켜서 간격이 좀 떨어지게 했습니다. 흐름도 더 낫게(아마?) 고쳤습니다.
  8. 01:24:349 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 이 패턴이 이렇게 뉴콤을 스팸해도 될 정도로 강조가 큰 음들은 아니라고 생각하거든요, 제가 보기에 이런 형태의 패턴은 음에 맞는 패턴은 아니라고 봅니다. 차라리 00:12:584 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 랑 같은 음이니 비슷한 리듬으로 표현해주세요. -
    앞의 같은부분도 1-2로 바꾸기도 했고 뉴콤은 있지만 디스턴스가 작은거로 약한것은 표현이 됐다고 생각하네요.. 그래도 디스턴스는 더 줄였습니다
모딩 감사합니다~
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Zisa wrote:

updated moa's diff
he said to skip feedback this time
모아님 피드백 스킵하면 맵랭할때 조금 불편할겁니다. 나중에 몰아서 하겠다는건지 저 모딩을 건너뛰겠다는건진 모르겠는데 답변은 반드시 해줘야 한다는걸로 알고 있어요. 저도 네피지님 겟난받을때 제가 네피지님한테 모딩 답변 받아서 하나하나 전부 제가 업로드 했었습니다. 귀찮으시면 OX 표시만이라도 해두시는걸 권장합니당
Riana
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Riana

Neoskylove wrote:

Zisa wrote:

updated moa's diff
he said to skip feedback this time
모아님 피드백 스킵하면 맵랭할때 조금 불편할겁니다. 나중에 몰아서 하겠다는건지 저 모딩을 건너뛰겠다는건진 모르겠는데 답변은 반드시 해줘야 한다는걸로 알고 있어요. 저도 네피지님 겟난받을때 제가 네피지님한테 모딩 답변 받아서 하나하나 전부 제가 업로드 했었습니다. 귀찮으시면 OX 표시만이라도 해두시는걸 권장합니당
모딩 반영은 하셨는데 답변은 생략하신다했네요.. 이미 고쳐놓은 상태라 뭐 반영하셨는지 기억하실지 모르겠는..
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랭킹크레테리아였나? 정확히 기억은 안나는데 무시되는 모딩이 없도록 해야 한다는 글을 본적이 있습니다. 본인맵 보면서 비교하면 충분히 체크 가능할거라고 봐요 저는.
Riana
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Neoskylove wrote:

랭킹크레테리아였나? 정확히 기억은 안나는데 무시되는 모딩이 없도록 해야 한다는 글을 본적이 있습니다. 본인맵 보면서 비교하면 충분히 체크 가능할거라고 봐요 저는.
음.. 그럼 그냥 제가 확인해보고 반영/미반영이라도 적어놔야겠네요
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Make sure no mod posts in the map thread have been ignored before qualifying or bubbling a map. Posts without a sufficient reply may count as ignored. When in doubt, double check if the Code of Conduct for Mapping and Modding has been violated on the mapthread and act accordingly.
넵 화이팅하세용~
Riana
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Neoskylove wrote:

Make sure no mod posts in the map thread have been ignored before qualifying or bubbling a map. Posts without a sufficient reply may count as ignored. When in doubt, double check if the Code of Conduct for Mapping and Modding has been violated on the mapthread and act accordingly.
넵 화이팅하세용~
규정이 있군요.. ㄷㄷ 알려주셔서 감사합니다~
Kawashiro
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Neoskylove wrote:

[Kawa's Hard]
  1. 00:07:143 (3,4) - 다른음들 보면 전부 배경음에 맞춰서 매핑했는데 여기만 드럼사운드를 따라가신 이유가 있나요? 딱히 큰 이유가 없다면 그냥 다른것처럼 배경음을 따라가는게 낫지 않을까요? - 00:07:143 (3,4) - , 00:09:496 (3,4) - , 00:11:849 (3,4) - 이 세 부분의 오르간 소리만을 비교해서 들어보시면 마지막 구역에만 3번째 레드틱, 00:12:437 - 여기에 오르간 소리가 있다는 것을 알게 되실겁니다. 이 박자 변화는 이 소리를 표현해주기 위한 거라
    문제 없을 것 같네요
  2. 00:14:937 - ~ 여기부터 너무 뉴콤 주기가 길어지네요. 그냥 그대로 1다운비트로 끊어 주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. - 보컬이 두 마디마다
    끊어져서 이대로 가는게 더 노래랑 잘 맞는 것 같네요
  3. 00:51:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 01:00:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 복붙을 하실거면 티가 안나게..... - 키아이 북마크로 나눠둔거 보셨겠지만 저는 키아이 1번 마디랑 3번 마디가 매우 비슷하다고 생각하기에 복붙을 이용해서 "어, 아까랑 똑같네?"하는 느낌을 주는 것이 좋은 아이디어라고 생각해요.
  4. 01:13:320 - 필요한 음인가요? 단순 보컬만 따라가신것 같은데 이부분은, 그러면 여기 소리는 크게 필요하다고 느껴지지 않네요. 01:15:525 (3) - 처럼요.
  5. 01:17:290 (1) - 여기부터도 복붙 티 안나게 조금씩 수정해주세요. - 인트로랑 아웃트로가 완전히 똑같다고 생각하기 때문에 위에서 말한
    거랑 같은 이유로 거절합니다.
GL
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nisenoji
108 posts
Joined August 2017
nisenoji
[Kizuna Difficulty]

00:24:202 - 00:25:231 ~ I would recommend decreasing the spacing a little bit on this stream, since the BPM is over 200. (This isn't a big deal it's just that this part of the song doesn't sound like it should be that difficult)

00:28:467 - 00:28:614 ~ These three notes have different spacing, they should all be the same.

00:41:996 - 00:43:614 ~ These notes have some big shifts in spacing, which is fine, but I would make them a little bit closer.


Sorry if there isn't that much, I'm still a little new to modding and such so yeah >~<
Riana
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Riana

Geminous wrote:

[Kizuna Difficulty]

00:24:202 - 00:25:231 ~ I would recommend decreasing the spacing a little bit on this stream, since the BPM is over 200. (This isn't a big deal it's just that this part of the song doesn't sound like it should be that difficult) - sounds at that time has high pitch. and tho it's spaced, many test players played that part without problem. so I'd leave it yet.

00:28:467 - 00:28:614 ~ These three notes have different spacing, they should all be the same. - oh that's my mistake.. fixed!

00:41:996 - 00:43:614 ~ These notes have some big shifts in spacing, which is fine, but I would make them a little bit closer. - I think those spacing change is fine as it emphasize sounds well.


Sorry if there isn't that much, I'm still a little new to modding and such so yeah >~<
thanks for modding~ :3
M o c h a
105 posts
Joined September 2013
M o c h a
I didn't notice much while playing this other than its kinda hard..

Kizuna

HP might be too low? You can kinda survive even if you miss half the streams. Maybe change to 6+
maybe raise the OD too <-- just my preference, you can ignore this if you want

00:24:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - NC somewhere? maybe on 00:24:937 (11) -
00:35:820 (4) - stack this properly with 00:34:937 (1) - , same with 00:35:525 (3) - and 00:37:290 (1) - I see it everywhere so it might be intentional? (it's like slightly off)
00:50:231 (1,2) - the distance between these are too small ( I know you wanted to overlap 00:50:378 (2) - with 00:49:202 (2,1) - )
00:51:702 (6,7,8) - maybe more consistent spacing like 00:52:731 (2,3,4) -
01:01:261 (3) - it would be cool if you can somehow blanket this
01:09:937 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't think this flows off well from the previous slider

That's all! I hope you find this useful! :>
Riana
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Riana

M o c h a wrote:

I didn't notice much while playing this other than its kinda hard..

Kizuna

HP might be too low? You can kinda survive even if you miss half the streams. Maybe change to 6+
maybe raise the OD too <-- just my preference, you can ignore this if you want - changed hp to 6, but raising od would make it too high,
so I didn't change

00:24:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - NC somewhere? maybe on 00:24:937 (11) - NCed on 00:24:937 (1) -
00:35:820 (4) - stack this properly with 00:34:937 (1) - , same with 00:35:525 (3) - and 00:37:290 (1) - I see it everywhere so it might be intentional? (it's like slightly off) - I didn't notice or maybe just mistake when I changed stack leniency or smth.. fixed!
00:50:231 (1,2) - the distance between these are too small ( I know you wanted to overlap 00:50:378 (2) - with 00:49:202 (2,1) - ) - 00:49:055 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - have stronger sound, so I wanted to make contrast. also 00:50:231 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - have increasing spacing as their pitch do
00:51:702 (6,7,8) - maybe more consistent spacing like 00:52:731 (2,3,4) - fixed!
01:01:261 (3) - it would be cool if you can somehow blanket this - I think distance between slider and circle would be too large if I try to blanket it.. and I think current one is ok. moved position a bit but not blanketed
01:09:937 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't think this flows off well from the previous slider - I think it's fine

That's all! I hope you find this useful! :>
your modding was useful! tho I didn't accept some. thanks for modding~
Atomosphere
176 posts
Joined November 2014
Atomosphere
Kizuna

owo

00:07:437 (4,5) - this is less prominent than 00:07:878 (1,2,3) - so i think you should lower spacing for 4 and 5, increase spacing for 1,2 and 3
00:09:790 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing aswell
00:28:467 (4,5,6) - overmap?
00:32:584 (1,2,1,2,1) - uncomfortable
00:39:643 (3,4,5,6) - this is a bit sudden comparing it to the other jumps in this section
00:41:702 (4,5,1) - uncomfortable movement imo
00:42:143 (1,2,3,1) - ^^
00:42:731 (1,2,3,1) - ^^
00:58:172 (4,1) - pause so make the spacing between these 2 larger
00:59:055 (2,3,1,2) - just a weird flowing pattern, it flows pretty bad imo
01:21:114 (2,3,4,5) - tbh this part should just be 2 sliders, like this maybe?: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9904042
01:24:349 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this pattern just looks like a jumble of circles maybe fix the flow and aesthetics of it

I personally just think the flow in some sections and patterns are bad but overall the map is fun to play and i love me some horie yui <3
Riana
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Riana

Atomosphere wrote:

Kizuna

owo

00:07:437 (4,5) - this is less prominent than 00:07:878 (1,2,3) - so i think you should lower spacing for 4 and 5, increase spacing for 1,2 and 3 - fixed
00:09:790 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing aswell 4,5,6 is higher pitch so high spacing and gave 1 some emphasis as it's strongest one from 1,2,3
00:28:467 (4,5,6) - overmap? - vocal
00:32:584 (1,2,1,2,1) - uncomfortable - a bit fixed but I think it's fine to play
00:39:643 (3,4,5,6) - this is a bit sudden comparing it to the other jumps in this section - strong vocal
00:41:702 (4,5,1) - uncomfortable movement imo - I think it's not that uncomfortable to play.. but a bit fixed
00:42:143 (1,2,3,1) - ^^ - same
00:42:731 (1,2,3,1) - ^^ - same
00:58:172 (4,1) - pause so make the spacing between these 2 larger- fixed
00:59:055 (2,3,1,2) - just a weird flowing pattern, it flows pretty bad imo - fixed along with problem mentioned above. my mistake
01:21:114 (2,3,4,5) - tbh this part should just be 2 sliders, like this maybe?: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9904042 - this part has more prominent sound than 01:18:761 (2,3,4) - so I chose to use circles there.
01:24:349 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this pattern just looks like a jumble of circles maybe fix the flow and aesthetics of it - fixed to the same pattern as 00:12:584 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -

I personally just think the flow in some sections and patterns are bad but overall the map is fun to play and i love me some horie yui <3
thanks for modding~
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