Surono wrote:
its time
what the difference diffnaming of Inner and Ura, dem engrish jaban haha.
>Ura Oni
* 00:23:398 - yow pay attention more with the actual rhythm, the current patterns sounds random at emphasis
so this is the suggestion: 00:22:863 - k d K d ddk d kkd d k d k ddk you're following the melody and I'm following the drum but i'll try this one xd cuz fit with the melody hehe
* 00:28:756 - kat to keep consistent to follow with 00:29:023 - 00:29:291 - these kat example
* 00:29:693 - quick suggestion from here, ddk d kkd k ddk ddk k d
* if you applied with above suggestion, 00:30:296 - you might add here don since the strains flow is long
* 00:36:122 - https://puu.sh/y6IT5/a4d85e661e.jpg and dont forget 00:37:595 - finish it for consistency with 00:36:791 -
* 00:55:006 - 00:55:809 - 00:56:613 - wanna give them variation? yes kdddk and dkkkd would be good, every 5plet Ive pointed out e.g 00:55:006 - 1st notes with 00:55:273 - with 5th notes are similar. so yeah why not
* 00:58:488 - kdddkkddkkddkdddkkdd(kkkd) yeah, 00:58:756 - 00:59:023 - high pitch so yeah 2 kats, the rest are just 1 kat 00:58:488 - 00:59:291 - . Actually i'm following the clock and the melody qwith k kk k k kk but if i put one can be nice too right?
* 01:00:095 - kkddkdddkkkk(dddd) 01:00:631 - high pitch then turning 01:00:898 - low pitch OvO dem sir ty XD fixed
* 01:01:501 - keep don or change kat? kat... I put that like a d cuz is better for the next (dddk) is more ez to get
* 01:08:599 - move to 01:08:867 - here and change kat for high pitch, 01:09:135 - swap with 01:09:202 - this since 01:09:202 - its loud drum.
* 01:09:939 - I dont think it should be kat cuz too overemphasized, dkk 01:08:800 - is gud in here ye
* 01:15:095 - high drum so yeah kat
* 01:21:657 - k dkkkd -> dkkkd k , do ctrl g I changed this 01:21:256 (572,573,574) - into k d k and cut the stream dkkkd to dkk d is most comfortable and the other triple kkd to a ddk follows the piano as well
* 01:22:193 - ddk d kkd k d kdkkd, 01:23:131 - why in here changed as kat? for consistency 01:10:273 -
* 01:24:336 - d k ddk dkk
* 01:25:273 - kdkkd seems overemphasized, kdddk enough in here
* 01:43:488 - looks nice now haha, alternating playable seems good but Im nub :^) * unless I HT it lo
* 01:49:113 - lol feels2015map , inb4 TKS and Firce intensifies from here : P
and now, consindering this diff cuz I felt its really important for your quality of this diff. most of overall it had many patterns were randomly adjusted, so yeah sorry if it looks nazi suggestion but well up to you, I could rebub this if you applied/agreed with these points or just well let see I still dont think it should bubbled with the current circumstances of this diff. yeah pop'd for this purpose heh I Feel too... Some times i see the lowers diff and I ask to myself if is this good for get that... And then some friends tell me YES DO IT and is likes :S
>Muzukashii
* 01:02:372 - 01:03:175 - add don here to balance with futsuu
* 01:23:331 - please make it simpler, dd so 01:18:510 - that kk not lonely :3 :o ok weird but ok
>Futsuu
adding notes suggestion sometimes on purposes to avoid far density with low diff and close with mid diff, yeah balancing the spread density
* 00:19:514 - add don here to make consistency with 00:19:113 - this drum
* 00:22:863 - delete, its close with muzu density and need a break here
* 00:23:800 - delete, seems hard and a bit close with muzu. i think you had better just 00:23:532 - follow this drum so yeh.
* 00:36:657 - same above, let give it a mini break
* 01:03:175 - so on muzukashii its d k but on futsuu its ddk? rip *yeah if you already check muzu, you dont need to do smth in here
* too dense zzz, 01:33:309 01:33:309 - 01:33:577 - delete these, 01:35:988 - move to 01:34:916 -, 01:39:738 - move to 01:42:148 - here and change kat for better structures and purpose at emphasizing
>Kantan
total combo 129 then futsuu has 306, well I guess its simple kantan.
* 00:00:631 - ~ 00:11:613 - quiet part and unbalance with futsuu density, 00:03:041 - kat and 00:07:863 - don , https://puu.sh/y6Lxa/15bb820db8.png yeah rip
* 00:19:648 - add don here, 00:22:327 - delete as the break instead of 00:23:934 - here and in here make it as dd 1/1
* 00:26:345 - kat finish, it looks monocolors from 00:23:934 - here
* 00:52:059 - seems monocolors from here, I have an inovation here. 00:53:666 - 00:55:273 - 00:56:881 - you can add these with finish to make a better gameplay than with the normal notes that looks dull
* 01:06:256 - add don, seems too quiet
* 01:12:952 - high impact, you could finish it
* 01:15:363 - don and 01:16:166 - kat
* 01:27:416 - finish and 01:28:756 - add don
ok but somehow I felt this kantan looks a bit concerned for me since thetotal notes of kantan is yeahoverall snapping and density yeah.... I know its hard to map this level diff on this song but yeah try to find references that has good concept. from me i would suggest you to make few 2plet 1/1 and give it a mini rest just like 00:28:220 - ~ 00:31:702 - this part, well dont doing smth that would break this diff and idk what to do with this. but for now try to make total notes of kantan at least reach 140~150 by checking the density of futsuu.. yeah try to balance with that diff since the futsuu has alot 2plets and some 5plet zzzzz and kantan just simple 1/1 and some huge breaks that feels awkward imo.. pls becareful when trying to buff this diff.. i mean yeah just " a little " if you feel theres awkward breaks or quite part. I'll try
I will rebub this if you fix your highest diff with improved points and especially the kantan, idk about kantan but I want you recheck the balance of density with futsuu.