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penoreri - Preserved Valkyria

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Kawashiro
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-sandAI
Why is your soft hitnormal so quiet compared to the rest of the samples in s:c1 ?
Even when I have my game at 1% music volume and 100% effect volume its still inaudible
Artorias_DELETED
Don't crucify me, but you should change the diff name to "Zexous's INFINITE", Zexous' is incorrect.

Singular possessive nouns always get a 's no matter if they end in an s or not. It's the plural possessive ones that do that if they end in an s.

So example:

Singular noun: Andreas

Singular possessive noun: Andreas's Car

Plural noun: Planets

Plural possessive noun: Planets' Orbits

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I like this mapset a lot. ;) btw kd cuz i can grammar lmao.
kbd

Artorias wrote:

Don't crucify me, but you should change the diff name to "Zexous's INFINITE", Zexous' is incorrect.

Singular possessive nouns always get a 's no matter if they end in an s or not. It's the plural possessive ones that do that if they end in an s.

So example:

Singular noun: Andreas

Singular possessive noun: Andreas's Car

Plural noun: Planets

Plural possessive noun: Planets' Orbits

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I like this mapset a lot. ;) btw kd cuz i can grammar lmao.
No, you are incorrect. Having something such as Jones' is perfectly fine, such as Mr. Jones' golf club. Zeoxus' is perfectly fine. Look at rule 1c here. Different publications will say different things (Oxford says to only add 's to nouns you add a -es to such as Jones's but not St. Thomas' Hospital. But different publications say different items (as per my source indicates))

If you want to continue this conversation, PM me since this is not a platform to have a grammar conversation. But I included this here to indicate first, the difficulty name is fine in many rules, and second even with Oxford's rule, since it's a username that has no proper pronunciation in English, Zeoxus can add an apostrophe with an S or no S.
Zexous

kobolddragon wrote:

Artorias wrote:

Don't crucify me, but you should change the diff name to "Zexous's INFINITE", Zexous' is incorrect.

Singular possessive nouns always get a 's no matter if they end in an s or not. It's the plural possessive ones that do that if they end in an s.

So example:

Singular noun: Andreas

Singular possessive noun: Andreas's Car

Plural noun: Planets

Plural possessive noun: Planets' Orbits

---

I like this mapset a lot. ;) btw kd cuz i can grammar lmao.
No, you are incorrect. Having something such as Jones' is perfectly fine, such as Mr. Jones' golf club. Zeoxus' is perfectly fine. Look at rule 1c here. Different publications will say different things (Oxford says to only add 's to nouns you add a -es to such as Jones's but not St. Thomas' Hospital. But different publications say different items (as per my source indicates))

If you want to continue this conversation, PM me since this is not a platform to have a grammar conversation. But I included this here to indicate first, the difficulty name is fine in many rules, and second even with Oxford's rule, since it's a username that has no proper pronunciation in English, Zeoxus can add an apostrophe with an S or no S.
:') 2k17 and we still have to go through this
Origuon
[*] Rio's MAXIMUM
Hey ! :) Im not a pro modder or something but this pattern looks really weird 01:32:798 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - is it rankable ?
Naren
where´s the mods?
Nao Tomori
zexous's'tv'ms't infinite
7ambda
Although here it's used correctly, there are times when it's better to include the second "s" after the apostraphe (for clarifying the pronunciation).

Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1040647&m=0
Kawashiro
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Voli
as requested

General
  1. volume control on the two lowest diffs plz?
The Entrance to Valhalla
  1. Could you plz increase the hitsounds in the kiai to about 70 or 80%? I really don't understand why they're only at 40% here, makes everything sound super underwhelming tbh, the rest of the diffs have way higher volume in the kiais as well.
  2. 00:33:211 (1) - Fix this short spinner plz, make it a slider instead?
  3. 00:55:707 (1,2,3,4) - could you give these a different movement than the regular triangular pattern that you followed here? since theres 1-2 1-2 emphasis on these notes so perhaps back and forth would work better
  4. 01:05:252 - this sound should be 1/3 i think instead of 01:05:252 (2,3) -
  5. 01:24:207 (2) - move closer to 01:23:798 (1) - so 01:24:343 (3) - can stand out more? maybe move it to where 01:24:480 (4) - is right now
Rio's MAXIMUM
  1. 01:25:571 (2) - is that finish there intentional? seems a bit out of place
  2. 01:32:798 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I really don't agree with the reading difficulty spike here, it doesn't fit the general theme of your map. I suggest mapping this differently without as many full overlaps. This is an issue that would make me not want to qualify (i like the rest of your map tho)
Kawa's GRAVITY
  1. 01:10:980 (9) - This should be a slider imo, a jump to 01:10:980 (9) - feels forced due to nothing being in the song there
Zexous' INFINITE

  1. 01:00:889 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Could you unstack these as there's no reason to hold momentum when the second sound is constantly stronger
Popping for the unrankable spinner, no volume control on lowest diffs and the part in rio's map, call me back when fixed
Kawashiro
@MariahCarey : it should not be a slider. there are same tone piano sounds in 01:09:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here and a pretty low piano in 01:10:980 (9) - here. So i did it. It is representing that low piano and emphasizing 01:11:116 (1,2) - next two high piano sounds as a flow and distance. Thanks!

@Kroytz : 01:10:980 (9,1) - Swap NC on my diff plz, Thanks ;3
Fushimi Rio

MariahCarey wrote:

Rio's MAXIMUM
  1. 01:25:571 (2) - is that finish there intentional? seems a bit out of place is intentional
  2. 01:32:798 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I really don't agree with the reading difficulty spike here, it doesn't fit the general theme of your map. I suggest mapping this differently without as many full overlaps. This is an issue that would make me not want to qualify (i like the rest of your map tho) changed to some clearer pattern
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01:22:434 (1,2) - lower spacing here would portray better contrast between the build up and the start of the kiai, especially given that these are 2 3/4 sliders but it comes off as 1/2 sliders
01:28:843 (3,4,5) - and 01:30:207 (2,3,4) - hitsound these triplets please. Having triplets for rhythm emphasise feels wrong if you don't hitsound them imho

2nd top
00:09:018 (1,2,1,2) - Can you explain your reasoning behind the change in NC lengths?
00:15:695 (5) - These drum samplesets in the stream sound really weird and quite forced.
00:29:243 (1,1,2,3) - shorten all these sliders to blue tick for an easier, more forgiving, less stressful hitwindow
00:35:437 (3) - This is especially unfair as it's given larger spacing than you would expect
00:39:308 (1,2) - same as above. Don't use close snaps like this on the timeline if you're going to have this spacing and structure. It's so unexpected and hard af
00:59:389 (4,5,6) - If you're going to have a triplet then please hitsound it like a triplet, don't have it silent please
01:13:161 - Quite odd for you to skip out on these piano notes when you mapped them at 01:12:071 (1,2) - and 01:13:707 (3,4) -
01:56:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn't git the song nor have you attempted to hitsound it appropriately. Pretty much ghost notes

3rd top
00:18:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - whistles
00:33:114 (1,2,3) - 1/4 beats make snapping rather uncomfortable and too forced imo, try ending them on red ticks
00:40:082 (2,1) - ^
00:39:985 - because this is such a predominant sound I thhink this rhythm would be more appropriate for your diff. Based off of how you mapped your other rhythms https://i.imgur.com/PfL2vSE.png
01:33:071 (1,1) - You don't need these extra NCs
01:39:616 (1,1) - ^
01:56:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not really a big problem but make the spacing between the circles equal? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9554937
01:57:889 (1,2,3,4,1) - I can suggest for you to use a rhythm similar to the 2 higher diffs? Having 01:58:343 as a passive object (slider end) doesn't feel natural to play given how strong the beat is. Nor does it mesh well with your rhythm density
[]will finish tomorrow seems like you already have another BN, gl then!
Fushimi Rio

Kisses wrote:

2nd top
00:09:018 (1,2,1,2) - Can you explain your reasoning behind the change in NC lengths? yeah, changed to consistent lengths
00:15:695 (5) - These drum samplesets in the stream sound really weird and quite forced. ok I don't like it too
00:29:243 (1,1,2,3) - shorten all these sliders to blue tick for an easier, more forgiving, less stressful hitwindow 1/4 buzzing feels really bad since the bpm is relatively low here
00:35:437 (3) - This is especially unfair as it's given larger spacing than you would expect actually not hard for 7* maps but I can understand the thoughts
00:39:308 (1,2) - same as above. Don't use close snaps like this on the timeline if you're going to have this spacing and structure. It's so unexpected and hard af ^
00:59:389 (4,5,6) - If you're going to have a triplet then please hitsound it like a triplet, don't have it silent please ok
01:13:161 - Quite odd for you to skip out on these piano notes when you mapped them at 01:12:071 (1,2) - and 01:13:707 (3,4) - there are two piano tracks here. I followed the one with higher pitch
01:56:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn't git the song nor have you attempted to hitsound it appropriately. Pretty much ghost notes the song does have 1/4 drums here
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Topic Starter
Kroytz
@MariahCarey - Fixed all except spinner, I prefer the spinner things more than the slider.

Good suggestions, thank you!
A lot of people had concern with hitsound volumes so I edit everybody's diff to be much higher so it's audible now~ :)

@Kisses - 01:22:434 (1,2) - lower spacing here would portray better contrast between the build up and the start of the kiai, especially given that these are 2 3/4 sliders but it comes off as 1/2 sliders The slowness of the sliders give the player a bit more time to react that these are 3/4 sliders. It also gives a reasonable emphasis to the upcoming spaces.
01:28:843 (3,4,5) - and 01:30:207 (2,3,4) - hitsound these triplets please. Having triplets for rhythm emphasise feels wrong if you don't hitsound them imho Sure thing

Thank you Kisses~ :)
Zexous

MariahCarey wrote:

Zexous' INFINITE

  1. 01:00:889 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Could you unstack these as there's no reason to hold momentum when the second sound is constantly stronger the point is eliciting movement on the strong sounds that's why there's no movement for the weak sounds
no change but thanks but fk u voli
Topic Starter
Kroytz

Zexous wrote:

MariahCarey wrote:

Zexous' INFINITE

  1. 01:00:889 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Could you unstack these as there's no reason to hold momentum when the second sound is constantly stronger the point is eliciting movement on the strong sounds that's why there's no movement for the weak sounds
no change but thanks but fk u voli
This is Mariah Carey you're talking to, how dare you
Kawashiro

Kisses wrote:

00:18:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - whistles
00:33:114 (1,2,3) - 1/4 beats make snapping rather uncomfortable and too forced imo, try ending them on red ticks
00:40:082 (2,1) - ^
00:39:985 - because this is such a predominant sound I thhink this rhythm would be more appropriate for your diff. Based off of how you mapped your other rhythms https://i.imgur.com/PfL2vSE.png - You can realize there is 1/8 if u listen carefully with set playback rate as 25%. So i skipped for emphasize main rhythm.
01:33:071 (1,1) - You don't need these extra NCs
01:39:616 (1,1) - ^
01:56:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not really a big problem but make the spacing between the circles equal? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9554937
01:57:889 (1,2,3,4,1) - I can suggest for you to use a rhythm similar to the 2 higher diffs? Having 01:58:343 as a passive object (slider end) doesn't feel natural to play given how strong the beat is. Nor does it mesh well with your rhythm density - Not putting clickable object at 01:58:343 - here is for emphasize 01:58:434 (1) - this piano sound
No comment = fixed

Thanks

My waifu is Nitori
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256,144,111752,6,0,L|248:54,1,90,2|8,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
400,288,112025,1,0,3:2:0:0:
264,192,112161,6,0,L|271:102,1,90,10|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
120,336,112434,1,8,3:2:0:0:
256,240,112571,6,0,L|248:150,1,90,2|8,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
400,384,112844,1,0,3:2:0:0:
136,148,112980,5,10,3:2:0:0:
336,160,113116,1,0,3:2:0:0:
224,340,113252,1,10,3:2:0:0:
240,104,113389,1,0,3:2:0:0:
384,288,113525,5,14,3:2:0:0:
436,88,113661,1,2,3:2:0:0:
432,76,113798,1,10,3:2:0:0:
304,328,113934,5,2,3:2:0:0:
252,128,114070,1,10,3:2:0:0:
256,116,114207,1,2,3:2:0:0:
132,256,114343,5,10,3:2:0:0:
184,56,114479,1,2,3:2:0:0:
180,44,114616,1,10,3:2:0:0:
52,296,114752,5,2,3:2:0:0:
0,96,114888,1,10,3:2:0:0:
4,84,115025,1,2,3:2:0:0:
132,256,115161,6,0,P|144:298|132:341,1,90,10|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
264,160,115434,2,0,P|251:117|263:74,1,90,14|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
464,272,115707,6,0,L|368:268,1,90,14|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
220,308,115980,1,10,3:2:0:0:
488,184,116116,6,0,L|392:180,1,90,4|10,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
244,220,116389,1,0,3:2:0:0:
512,96,116525,6,0,L|416:92,1,90,14|8,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
268,132,116798,1,8,3:2:0:0:
476,336,116934,5,2,0:0:0:0:
428,204,117071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,316,117207,1,2,0:0:0:0:
490,255,117343,1,2,0:0:0:0:
350,235,117480,1,2,0:0:0:0:
399,367,117616,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,204,117752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,117889,5,4,3:0:0:0:
232,316,117980,1,4,3:0:0:0:
208,320,118071,1,4,3:0:0:0:
184,322,118161,2,0,P|154:264|171:207,1,120,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
64,344,118434,5,2,3:2:0:0:
256,192,118525,12,0,122252,0:0:0:0:
Doormat
looks like everything that needed addressing has been addressed, so rebubbling-
squirrelpascals
kroytz rhythm gamer
Voli
disqualified
Kawashiro
KOOL
Pachiru
On Renumi's diff:

00:14:921 (3,4,5,6) - https://i.imgur.com/bFGqapO.png

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Avoid overlapping circles, slider heads, and slider tails. These can be confusing for new players. 1/1 overlaps due to distance snapping should be avoided with higher spacing or slider velocity.
Since it's the lowest diff of the set, that would be nice to at least respect the ranking criteria's guidelines for this? Using multiple overlaps in a row is kinda misleading for a beginner in my opinion.
nextplay

MariahCarey wrote:

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Seni
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Renumi

Pachiru wrote:

On Renumi's diff:

00:14:921 (3,4,5,6) - https://i.imgur.com/bFGqapO.png

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Avoid overlapping circles, slider heads, and slider tails. These can be confusing for new players. 1/1 overlaps due to distance snapping should be avoided with higher spacing or slider velocity.
Since it's the lowest diff of the set, that would be nice to at least respect the ranking criteria's guidelines for this? Using multiple overlaps in a row is kinda misleading for a beginner in my opinion. it is what it is,, a guideline,, i really really doubt there's confusion here,,, lot of my diff is kinda centered on this kinda stuff too adapt and overcome cleanse thyself
Pachiru
Oh come on, this is the only big issue of this difficulty, you're doing an overlap and an stack that make the thing hard to read on this part, I don't know how to explain it. Even if it's a guidelines, it's not a reason to ignores it?

I also notice that your diff is based on stacks, and stuffs, but on this part ONLY, it's not clean, and it can be misleading.
Anyway, I've nothing else to say, cause the difficulty is good overall, and I doubt you'll change something since the map is qualified.

Gratz on qualified tho, the song is good, and the topdiffs are really interesting to watch.

it just triggers me that people ignores guildelines, cause they're guidelines (on low SR diffs). so i'm very sorry if my post sounds very rude or else.
_DT3
On question on the top diff:
01:26:934 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Even though I can tell that there is some symmetry and copy-paste there, the spacing here between the circles is kinda weird imo because you can easily tell that there are huge differences in spacing like 01:27:889 (1,2) - and 01:27:616 (3,4) - , but if you listen closely those have the same instruments on them (small kick + piano).

Would have been nicer to either have consistent/the same spacing on these jumps for that repetitive piano or same spacing for snares and kicks respectively there

Really cool map though, I like that consistency in the diffs a lot
Gratz! \w/
Rizia
insane
Kyouren
Congratulations! <3
Topic Starter
Kroytz

_DT3 wrote:

On question on the top diff:
01:26:934 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Even though I can tell that there is some symmetry and copy-paste there, the spacing here between the circles is kinda weird imo because you can easily tell that there are huge differences in spacing like 01:27:889 (1,2) - and 01:27:616 (3,4) - , but if you listen closely those have the same instruments on them (small kick + piano).

Would have been nicer to either have consistent/the same spacing on these jumps for that repetitive piano or same spacing for snares and kicks respectively there

Really cool map though, I like that consistency in the diffs a lot
Gratz! \w/
I think I see what you mean, but I had a slightly different approach with what I'm going for here. Basically instead of trying to be accurate with the drums, I chose the stronger (imo) piano to follow:

01:26:934 (1,2,3) - is a triangle for the three rising sounds | 01:27:343 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - two pairs of quadruple circles for the same beat of the piano | 01:28:434 (5,1) - and with these two I reuse one more beat for the finish and increase the spacing to separate for the next three-circle combo which isn't part of the former combo at 01:28:571 (1,2,3) -At (1) you can hear it's clearly different while (5) shares the same pitch from before with just an added finish.

So this is how I organized this section versus trying to find relative spacing within the drum beats. Thank you _DT3! :)
_DT3
Ah, I see now, thanks for the polite response!
Enon
Please rank my map too thanks
Kawashiro

Enon wrote:

Please rank my map too thanks
-Atri-

Enon wrote:

Please rank my map too thanks
I Must Decrease
Bit confusing as to why Rio's Maximum during the final kiai uses 1----2 jumps instead of 1-2-3 like every other diff. The rhythm is 3/2, 3/2, 3/2, 2/2, 2/2, so your jumps should reflect that really.


[Entrance to Valhalla]
Kroytz since you're following synth during chorus I'm a bit confused on your rhythm choice here. 01:26:116 (2) - Shouldn't this be a slider like all other instances of strong sounds like this at the start of the kiai? 01:26:525 (3) - i dont get why this is a slider but the other point isnt.

01:30:071 (1) - why is this even a note, the rhythm is so weak and the jump isnt really supported, it would fit the beat alot more to break up the monotony of your constant jumps.

01:28:298 (4) - is basically the strongest note of the combo but you have the lowest spacing here of all jumps lo.. 01:28:434 (5) - is clearly weaker, if i were you i'd map it as a slider end.

01:45:889 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - i dont really get your logic on why this is so spaced. when you compare it to 01:49:161 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - , this is way more intense but the other pattern is more spaced.

the whole section is a lower intensity part but you're mapping it cross-screen the whole time 01:46:980 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc. The rhythm is constant, so having lower spacing notes that are more close together would better fit the rhythm. Additionally, the section that follows would feel more distinct.

01:53:525 (1,2,3) - is not as intense as 01:53:934 (1,2,3) - or 01:54:752 (1,2,3) - . You probably would find better results with patterns that change in size to fit the beat better, rather than keeping everything the same spacing for the purpose of aesthetic.

01:58:366 (1) - Pretty sure this beat is on 1/4th not 1/3rd

01:39:343 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this is rly anticlimatic and underspaced given the intensity. compared to other 1/3rd sections this should be more spaced.

inb4

Kroytz wrote:

The spacing isn't supposed to be seen as "emphasis" because of it being simply 'spaced further'.
Topic Starter
Kroytz

Xexxar wrote:

[Entrance to Valhalla]
Kroytz since you're following synth during chorus I'm a bit confused on your rhythm choice here. 01:26:116 (2) - Shouldn't this be a slider like all other instances of strong sounds like this at the start of the kiai? 01:26:525 (3) - i dont get why this is a slider but the other point isnt. I mean it's possible, there are a few rhythm choices to make here. The one I chose decided to make the two circles 01:25:980 (1,2) - stand out a bit more. It's similar to how I represented 01:26:934 (1,2,3) -

01:30:071 (1) - why is this even a note, the rhythm is so weak and the jump isnt really supported, it would fit the beat alot more to break up the monotony of your constant jumps.

01:28:298 (4) - is basically the strongest note of the combo but you have the lowest spacing here of all jumps lo.. 01:28:434 (5) - is clearly weaker, if i were you i'd map it as a slider end. Slider end is much more inferior here. I gave out my reasoning for this in previous page but basically this entire combo is grouped with the piano (synth?) things.

01:45:889 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - i dont really get your logic on why this is so spaced. when you compare it to 01:49:161 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - , this is way more intense but the other pattern is more spaced.
the whole section is a lower intensity part but you're mapping it cross-screen the whole time 01:46:980 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc. The rhythm is constant, so having lower spacing notes that are more close together would better fit the rhythm. Additionally, the section that follows would feel more distinct. The entire period is to be gradually growing higher in spacing so that when it does get into the next kiai moment, it's not completely out of nowhere whack with the spacing. Perhaps the contrast could be more evident but I figure that because there are virtually no sliders in the next section, that is contrasting enough.

01:53:525 (1,2,3) - is not as intense as 01:53:934 (1,2,3) - or 01:54:752 (1,2,3) - . You probably would find better results with patterns that change in size to fit the beat better, rather than keeping everything the same spacing for the purpose of aesthetic. Then it would go against the theme of the map here... I believe both ways of interpreting are correct, personally I find the triangle stuff more pronounced to the music than having back and forths and so that's why they exist. Another possibility could be smaller triangles and space them out into quadrants but then that wouldn't be as symmetrical as I wanted to establish.

01:58:366 (1) - Pretty sure this beat is on 1/4th not 1/3rd It's on 1/3 -_ -

01:39:343 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this is rly anticlimatic and underspaced given the intensity. compared to other 1/3rd sections this should be more spaced. I think it can be spaced further too. Problem is having it too spaced wouldn't make the next section feel as a build-up section. Everything would feel a little too similar spacing. Yknow, everything is intense so nothing is intense idea. Trying to avoid that here.

inb4

Kroytz wrote:

The spacing isn't supposed to be seen as "emphasis" because of it being simply 'spaced further'.
Taken a little out of context but this refers to the triangle symmetries in previous sections zz
Hope this answers your queries Xexxar! :)
I Must Decrease
Don't really agree with most of what you said. I may make some more points when I get home and push the discussion further. Also the rhythm is definitely 1/4th, compare the MS gap between the two notes as to the 1/3rd before hand, you can clearly hear that the former is faster.
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