1. Irregular (5.73 stars, 1580 notes)

1. Unsnapped notes: 00:48:018 (1) - 00:53:536 (1) - 01:01:812 (1) - 01:03:018 (1) - 04:42:670 (2) - 04:43:018 (1) -
2. 00:27:846 (1,1,1) - 改成1/8 sliders應該帶感d
   
3. 00:33:363 (1,2,3,4) - sv漸快?
4. 00:38:881 (1,1,1) -
5. 00:51:639 (1,2) - 轉成slider?
6. 01:27:760 (2) - 改成1/8? 1/4好似太長
7. 02:07:846 (1,2,3,4) - ultra overkill lul
8. 02:15:777 (2) - :wheelchair: sliders
9. 02:29:743 (1,2,1) - spacing特登嘅?
10. 03:56:122 (3) - NC?
11. 04:49:570 (3) - :wheelchair: sliders
12. 04:51:294 (1) - ?

Sinnoh wrote:

can i pop bubble

Sinnoh wrote:

can i gd

1. 01:06:639 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream is the only one which changes from more curved to almost straight. It looks not so nice aesthetically and you used less curved streams later (like 01:31:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ) so I'd suggest to make something similar in shape, it's very minor though.
2. 02:07:846 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps felt too extreme to play, especially since the transition from the sliders into this pattern isn't so smooth. Wouldn't it fit better to give these a small spacing to highlight the pause in the beat and then a huge jump towards 02:08:536 - when the beat continues?
3. 02:12:674 (1,2,3) - Until here, 1/4-sliders always had 1/4-gaps afterwards so this rhythm felt unintuitive to me. What about using slow halfbeat sliders for (1,2)?
4. 02:18:881 - Just wanna mention that this verse was the hardest section of the map for me, because I find the stop-and-go motion of the streams (like 02:19:915 (1,2,3,4,1) - ) to be much more difficult than the spaced streams or jumps used in the rest of the map. It was kinda anticlimatic to have the difficulty peak in the verse instead of a more intense section but I know different players are going to feel different about this so it's more of a comment than a suggestion of any kind.
5. 03:55:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - In these parts it was kinda unclear what's halfbeats and what's stream. Both have highly varied spacing throughout the map so it's difficult to tell. Maybe you could make this more clear by having equal spacing at the start of each stream (for example between these notes 03:56:122 (3,4,5) - ) so it's more obvious that a stream is starting, or you could atleast use some NCing to signal the change.

Vert wrote:

星爷啊

作为一个理智粉我觉得这个风格不适合这个曲子
而且觉得重点放错地方了

Vert wrote:

星爷啊

作为一个理智粉我觉得这个风格不适合这个曲子
而且觉得重点放错地方了