hi chiming in some rather agreeable stuff. i don't know why people are freaking out over this map, it's just kind of silly but isn't really trying to do anything particularly groundbreaking or unheard of, all of these trick patterns exist elsewhere.
Sweet Surrender
01:24:618 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - this seems like it's trying to follow the melody but it's really not following the melody at all - specifically, new comboing and some minor pattern changes to better fit the melody and turning - like new comboing at 01:24:805 - instead of 01:24:618 - , 01:25:180 (4,5) - turning this into a 1/4 slider since there's no actual 5-note roll here like the others, etc etc. it's pretty "minor" playability-wise but it really fucks with how the map's going with the music.
01:42:234 - All I really think should be done here is to put some consistency to the angle with which players need to jerk to hit the last note in the triple - 01:42:055 (2,3,4) - is actually much harder to hit than 01:42:805 (2,3,4) - , as i'm sure you're aware, and not due to spacing.
01:39:055 (2,3,4,5) - Should also let the melody chime in a bit, this is the last repeat of this pattern so you can get away with changing up the rhythm.
03:00:899 (1,2) - really switch ncs, 2 is the start of the actual section...
03:13:743 (1,2,1,2) - This plays out more like a slider-triple-slider, not two circlesliders, at full speed - listening at low speed my be "right" but it won't ever "feel" right. 03:14:493 (2,1,2,1) - "feels right" because you did it with the triple despite a nearly identical roll being used. This kind of thing repeats, so it's consistent, but still seems weird.
03:29:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream being the only one with a sharp turn (A literal 180) seems out of place. Either add more sharp turns at the midpoints to the other ones at points to make it part of a pattern, or smooth this one out.
03:36:430 (1) - Silence this sliderslide. It's audible and fucks with the ending fade.
fanzhen
00:45:618 (1,2,3,4) - any reason this is a straight line and not a twitched shape like the other three 1234s?
also idk why people are up in arms about this either it's just....plain and kind of boring tbh. got some weird melody skips like 03:15:430 (6,1) - that make it feel like the patterns were poorly designed to not actually follow the music, but that's normal for this kind of map.
03:30:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - did u just get bored and stop the spacing changes lol