1. Oni (5,11 stars, 2261 notes)

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Modders

1. JessiChan
2. Backfire
3. Ron
4. davidminh0111
5. Faputa
6. Astolfo
7. 404 AccNotFound
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Oni

JessiChan wrote:

Te gustan mucho los maratones ¿Eh?(?) NM request from my queue. Se me da muy mal mapear full spread (TE ESTOY VIENDO TSUKINAMI :eyes: (? )

Oni

1. 00:05:297 - Quizá una nota azul aca no vendría mal, si lo aplicas entonces hazlo también en parte similares. :3 Estoy siguiendo la melodía del sintetizador que hay en 00:02:601 (10) - . Esta parte no es muy notoria como para agregarlo
2. 00:46:926 (30) - Cámbialo a d y si quieres este también: 00:47:263 (33) - Cambié algunos patrones para aceptar esto
3. 01:11:702 (8,9) - 01:12:207 (10,11) - ctrl + g creo que seguiría mucho más el ritmo que suena de fondo. Cambiado
4. 01:14:061 (17,18) - ctrl + g pienso que el azul suena es en la primera nota de este patrón Pienso lo mismo
5. 01:38:331 (199) - Yo te sugeriría que lo cambies a d, porque en esta parte el sonido "muere" no es un silencio total pero suena muy débil. Claro, pensé lo mismo. Cambiado
6. 02:00:747 - Si te soy sincera no entiendo ese break D: creo que puedes seguir mapeando allí, la música aún suena. Quedaría muy parecido a esta parte 02:11:196 - si lo mapeo. No quiero hacerlo muy repetitivo
7. 02:25:522 (63,64,65) - k d k al igual que acá: 02:22:825 (43,44,45) - para mi suena lo mismo. Y repite en la parte que se repite, si es que lo aplicas. Corregido
8. 03:18:275 (10,11,12,13) - Creo que estos últimos cuatro sonarían muy bien si fuesen: kkdD owo Lo cambié a kkkD como en 05:21:084 (11,12,13) - . Hacerlo kkdD siento que lo hace dificil al tener que tocar el big

Muy buen map Gaston, como siempre me sorprende tu forma de mapear, mucha suerte de verdad. Muchas gracias por el mod

Backfire wrote:

[Oni]
00:32:769 (1,32,39,46,47,48,49) - These notes have a pretty distinct kick sound, try finishers on them and see how you feel about it. Not necessary at all. I think you're right, but I only added in 00:32:769 (1,29) - to emphasizes the vocal. Add finisher in 00:39:848 (36,42,43,44,45) - seems a bit overdone
01:05:129 - tbh i'm not a fan of breaks, it's not really necessary, you can follow the vocals and have a little refrain, but blatant breaks in taiko for me are a no-no. I added notes to follow the vocal
01:59:398 - I think this would be better as kddkddkdkD since it complements the music better. I thinke the same, changed
02:00:409 - Again, no need for breaks, please map this section. idk why the break, mapped
02:39:258 - Delete to put more emphasis on the ad-lib in the background Deleted
03:53:668 - 04:04:792 - still, breaks. I think taiko specifically has rules that states we can't have breaks btw. This part is very calm as to add notes, I'll keep
04:15:241 - All the way up until v, I feel like you really make this repetitive. There is a clap sound throughout, maybe use that to spice it up? Like this sound 04:27:713 - I think it starts here, you can hear it on each 2/1. I added notes in that part
04:48:275 - 04:49:623 - 04:50:971 - 04:52:320 - add some dons to expand further on how the map like, builds up? Added dons

I don't have much to say as far as the map and the combos, they feel really crisp and nice to me, it would be somewhat pointless to mod too extensively. The style and point of the map is to have some semi-random patterns repeated, so I mean, it's nice and fun anyways. I'm glad you like it, thanks for mod!

[R] wrote:

yo

[Oni]
00:26:702 - change don ? Fits good with the vocal, changed
01:15:241 - you may add note, the drum sound feels sudden if leave blank I'll keep cuz I want emphasizes the crash cymbal
01:26:196 - change don, there has pitch change forward Changed
01:26:954 - or 01:28:640 - change kat, to give a variety
01:29:651 - ^ The pitch don't convinced me, I want follow the vocal and ddk is fine to do it
01:37:572 - change kat ? there has same pattern in 01:39:342 - , you may variate them I changed to kat this 01:39:426 (63) - cuz I have this 01:37:572 (48) - with kat but in this place 02:55:775 (48) - for guitar pitch
02:44:398 - can change don, pitch different forward Fixed
03:41:027 - delete ? to make sound more clear forward (it doesnt like xx pattern) My bad, fixed
03:52:404 - change kat ? Consistency with 01:37:488 (47,48) -
03:53:668 - i see 2 note stack here lol fixed
start 06:09:848 - maybe just maping in 1/1 since the sound fade out Doesn't a bad idea, for now I'm going to keep the current pattern but I'll test about that suggestion

that's all from me
Good luck

1. 00:26:027: Change to d? Make contrast in 00:24:342 Also, it would fit the pitch
2. 00:31:758: I think the spinner is unecessary
3. 00:41:870: Change to D? There is a drum hitting strong, so it has a low pitch
4. 01:15:241: Add note? I hear drum
5. 01:24:848: Change to k to create a nautral flow.
6. 01:38:499 (57, 58): CTRL + G because pitch is clearly different from each other
7. 01:47:432: That's weird if you stop kiai here and continue the kiai after a while
8. 03:29:230: Remove this note to emphasize the next note
9. 03:40:016: Remove Finish, nothing is strong here
10. ...

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello 2199, from my queue:

[Oni]

1. 00:26:027: Change to d? Make contrast in 00:24:342 Also, it would fit the pitch I wanna emphasizes the vocal pitch, that's more high than 00:23:331 (87) -
2. 00:31:758: I think the spinner is unecessary I think you're right, for now I'll remove it
3. 00:41:870: Change to D? There is a drum hitting strong, so it has a low pitch It isn't so noticeable as to add a finisher
4. 01:15:241: Add note? I hear drum I'm keeping consistency with 01:13:556 (15,16) -
5. 01:24:848: Change to k to create a nautral flow. I replace it with a finisher to emphasizes the vocal (also have silimar pitch than 01:24:005 (97,101) - )
6. 01:38:499 (57, 58): CTRL + G because pitch is clearly different from each other I changed to K 01:38:836 (58) -
7. 01:47:432: That's weird if you stop kiai here and continue the kiai after a while That part is too calm as follow with the kiai
8. 03:29:230: Remove this note to emphasize the next note I follow the instrumental there, also always the pattern end with k k d or k d d before the break
9. 03:40:016: Remove Finish, nothing is strong here Removed
10. ...

Good luck

Faputa wrote:

From my Queue,
o/

⏩00:22:994 (86,87,88,89) - I think k d d k sounds better and fits the vocal. Consider changing it? Changed

⏩03:05:634 (41,1,2,3) - Vocal is different from 01:47:432 (120,1,2,3) - and 05:08:331 (63,1,2,3) - . I think you can change the pattern at 03:05:634 - so that it make the end kiai’s part stands out more. You're right, changed to kdk

⏩03:12:376 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - For I will suggest ending this one with d instead of k because k D usually implys that the D is important, but the k is not nothing too. d D would be a better way to lead the players to the next section well, which is very different from the part at the moment. Plus, you used d D at 01:54:174 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - and 05:15:072 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - too. Applied

⏩03:41:196 (177) - I suggest including SV change here. While testplaying, I found that you have SV changes at 01:47:432 (120,1,2,3) - , 03:05:634 (41,1,2,3) - and 05:08:331 (63,1,2,3) - I am feeling that adding SV change at 03:41:196 (177) - can make the already-existing SV changes more reasonable for players. But that is up to you. Yeah, for consistence I added the sv
Same tgoes with 03:52:994 (55,56,1) - . Maybe also have a SV change here. I don't think about this, the sv is weird there

⏩The section starting at 04:15:241 - I don’t know, I think this section is kinda boring. Maybe applying the note pattern at 04:42:544 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - throughout the map (kd dk/ kd kk) instead of just kd dk everytime with little improvisations at the end of each bar.
Same goes with the section before 00:22:994 - I wanna make it more consistent with the melody song, I changed some patterns from 04:26:027 - to be more variable

⏩The section starting at 04:36:814 (47) - . To make it less repetitive, maybe use the rhythm at 00:33:106 (2) - instead? I emphasizes the guitar in 00:32:769 - , in 04:36:814 - there are guitar, but it's very low than 00:32:769 -, thats is the reason I added kddkddk in the beginning

⏩05:01:842 (20,21,22,23) - I suggest changing to kddk here. Right now it is a little not representing the music here good enough.

The obvious/ structural issues are the above ones. Some parts can be mapped better :3 That place always was dkdk, I wanna keep the consistency

Overall the map is neat, but it could be better in terms of gameplay. I remapped some parts
Hope you get it approved soon Good luck!

Astolfo wrote:

hello! i love this song so i wanted to mod lol..

hp5 maybe?


00:32:769 (1,29) - you use finisher for big kick drum here, so you should use them here too 00:39:848 (36,42,43,44,45) - I removed these finishers

00:59:735 (1) - can remove this finisher, no cymbal hit here Removed

01:09:005 (60) - k, higher pitch vocal Changed

01:25:016 - i think ddd triple is nice here. the gap is a little weird to play when there is drum in the background. I feels weird ddd there, cuz I wanna emphasizes the vocal. I'll keep it for now
02:43:218 - ^ Same

01:45:241 (253) - missed finisher Fixed woops

02:26:112 (29,33) - i do like how its different here for higher guitar, but maybe just make these d, so it's kdd k kdd. its still pretty quiet
02:31:505 (67,71) - ^ That's fine, applied

02:39:089 (45) - maybe delete this for emphasis on the vocal here? which is different from the first section I wanna make the consistency with the first section, I'll keep it

02:56:533 (20) - delete this, i think having 1/1 breaks after that stream is cool, and follows music better Deleted

03:18:275 (10,11) - can change these to d, gives better emphasis on the snare k which is at 03:18:499 - I changed only 03:18:387 (11) - , it can emphasizes I guess

03:20:887 - add d for guitar? i think you could fill in some more spots too for a more interesting rhythm in this section. Added don
03:21:814 - ^ i think this is better for guitar https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10892586 I do some similar to 03:20:466 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) -
03:32:011 - can add k here tooI wanna emphasizes the kick in 03:32:095 -
03:34:539 - kd 1/4 here feels nice. (that means this is d 03:34:623 (150) - and add k before it) kdk fits better with the guitar imo
03:35:718 - add k, and can add k here 03:36:393 - and here 03:36:561 - might make this part harder but follows the guitar so much nicer. Feels very weird and hard to play. I think the current pattern fits nice, but I added notes in 03:35:718 - and 03:36:393 -

also you could keep the kiai from 03:18:612 - to 03:40:016 - i think. since the guitar part is really a big part of the song I don't think it's neccesary, seems a bit overdone

03:41:196 - would do kdd triple, the empty space should be filled in i think, it felt weird to play Added

04:43:556 (28) - 04:46:252 (38) - add finisher If you have noticed, I'm following the vocal with these finishers

04:58:134 (96,99) - change to k, and 04:58:303 (98) - to d. follows guitar ending better I changed it with other pattern

04:58:640 - i think the guitar starts here... but if you dont want to do it because weird rhythm then i understand I prefer the current place, fits better to paly

05:07:151 (58) - remove finish for consistency Removed

05:29:904 (82) - k for change in guitar pitch Changed

05:34:707 - can add k for guitar Added

05:40:775 (169) - d, because lower pitch than 05:41:196 (172,173,174) - but it is mapped the same.. I changed it with other pattern to follow better the guitar

very nice kiai sections, i hope for this to get ranked sometime!!! good luck Thanks so much for mod