M4M with this map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/638443
really cool map, i like the set a lot, hope this gets ranked soon!
Insane
00:06:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for these triples you rotate them, but 00:07:573 (7,8,9) - is exactly the same as the triple before, maybe rotate this a bit for consistency
00:08:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same with these
00:12:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe space this out a bit more to show the emphasis you've done with the hitsounds
00:37:159 (2,3,4,5,6) - feels a tiny bitawkward to play, either keep distance between notes the same or make the angle between the notes sharper
00:41:504 (1,2,3) - hard to read because 2 and 3 go the opposite direction than the slider, try making them flow in the same direction
01:04:676 (4) - maybe rotate this like this for better flow
01:48:331 (3,4,5) - space these out a bit more so they play better like you did here 02:18:331 (1,2,3,4) -
02:20:711 (16,1) - if your going to use stream jumps, try make them flow into each other like this 02:24:849 (8,1) -
I don't agree with this ending here, because it isn't the end of the song at all, like at 03:02:193 this is the same part as the intro, but yet you don't map it
00:08:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same with these
00:12:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe space this out a bit more to show the emphasis you've done with the hitsounds
00:37:159 (2,3,4,5,6) - feels a tiny bitawkward to play, either keep distance between notes the same or make the angle between the notes sharper
00:41:504 (1,2,3) - hard to read because 2 and 3 go the opposite direction than the slider, try making them flow in the same direction
01:04:676 (4) - maybe rotate this like this for better flow
01:48:331 (3,4,5) - space these out a bit more so they play better like you did here 02:18:331 (1,2,3,4) -
02:20:711 (16,1) - if your going to use stream jumps, try make them flow into each other like this 02:24:849 (8,1) -
I don't agree with this ending here, because it isn't the end of the song at all, like at 03:02:193 this is the same part as the intro, but yet you don't map it
Hard
00:25:987 (2) - this should start on the previous white tick i think
01:05:918 (3) - this in a hard diff is a bit too much imo
01:11:711 (6,7,8,9,10) - curve this pattern? idk it just looks weird
02:24:331 (2,3,4) - the triples in the chorus don't really seem to fit that well because you start half of them on a white tick and the other half on a red tick without any clear indicator in the music that justifies these changes
again i don't agree with where you ended the song
01:05:918 (3) - this in a hard diff is a bit too much imo
01:11:711 (6,7,8,9,10) - curve this pattern? idk it just looks weird
02:24:331 (2,3,4) - the triples in the chorus don't really seem to fit that well because you start half of them on a white tick and the other half on a red tick without any clear indicator in the music that justifies these changes
again i don't agree with where you ended the song
Normal
00:00:745 (2) - 00:02:400 (2) - 00:04:056 (2) - 00:05:711 (2) - extending these out to the next white tick sounds so much better
00:51:435 (3) - maybe move this to the top of the previous slider end for clear circular flow
02:20:607 (1,2,3) - i love what youv'e done with the triples here, doing the triples in the hard like this would help a lot
00:51:435 (3) - maybe move this to the top of the previous slider end for clear circular flow
02:20:607 (1,2,3) - i love what youv'e done with the triples here, doing the triples in the hard like this would help a lot
Easy
00:38:193 (2) - small nitpick but the turns on this slider seem a bit too sharp
can't find anything wrong with this, nice map
can't find anything wrong with this, nice map
really cool map, i like the set a lot, hope this gets ranked soon!