-Anhedonia- wrote:
m4m req from queue :0maybe add KAREN to tags since its TA2MAX alternate name
Antithesis
- 00:01:219 (3) - it feels weird that this note is a k regardless of the piano having less pitch than last note. If you think it messes up the following finisher, read next mod applied with some changed in the next suggestion.
- 00:01:382 (1,2,3,9,10,11,14,16,17,20,22,23,24,25) - These notes definitively should be K, not only it emphasizes much better the cymbals, but also are much more coherent with 00:06:571 (30,39,48,56,64,68,72,76,80) - . Maybe you would need to rework some parts to do this like that kkD( which is becoming kkK) changed most of the finishers to kat but with some dons inbetween too (K D K) as it feels more dynamic that way.
- 00:10:949 (69,73) - not really a suggestion or anything, i don't really mind these being k, but somebody needs to say these should be d the k works better with the following notes at 00:11:436 - . If it's too much of a problem I can change though.
- 00:16:138 (119,120,121,122) - this 1/6 should probably be on the same way the last one is (starting with k, finishing with d) because it sounds exactly like the last sound so you can keep it as kkkd or make your own variation of it (but remember to use first note k/last note d) I prefer to mirror the third 1/6 as it's more comfortable to do multiple kddk or dkkd than dddk or kkkd. Also goes for the previous suggestion.
- 00:56:841 (528,529,530,531,532,533,534) - not sure about the previous kkkdddk but this one really sounds more like kkkkkkd I'm alternating the patterns (kkkdddk and kkkkkkd) and finishing the pattern with k here is better with the 1/6 at 00:57:327 - .
- 00:57:652 (539,540,541,542) - dddk totally, last note should be k and that patterns fits correctly ok, fits well enough :p
- 01:27:003 - ~ 01:28:949 - you should probably stick to 1/3 in these parts just as you did in every other stream alike this one
- 01:52:949 - sorry if im not completely sure this is a thing but probably you should use a note here and then a spinner, as it feels like its missing it I'm using the spinner to be more consistent with the other diffs. Also, players that can play this level of map would already do the spinner after the stream pressing notes right after it, "extending" the stream and covering the missing note.
Muzukashii
- 00:11:111 (43) - move this note to 00:11:273 - as k ddd feels a bit weird on itself Ooo I like this one, applied.
- 00:16:868 (71) - move this note to 00:16:706 - so that 00:16:949 (72) - this note can shine more as a single loud snare sound I actually removed to fix the spread but that also applies to part of the suggestion.
- 00:32:841 - add note to keep consistency with 00:33:814 (144,145) - . I'll keep the break but I also nerfed the following section.
- 00:40:787 (175) - this note is very anti-climatic in my opinion since it doesn't make a pattern, neither follows something really necessary and finally breaks the flow of having dons every white line because you avoided using a note in 00:40:949 - to keep density low enough the kat fills the high pitched synth sound. Also, I wasn't following dons on every white line on this section so the missing note isn't that much of a problem. It actually gives more emphasis on the kat which I like. Added don at 00:41:111 - if flow is the problem.
- 00:51:165 (220) - ^. Going all the time between synths and drums indiscriminately really hurts a map (and it happens a lot on xfrac map too but I decided to keep your maps as true to your styles as possible so if you guys think is okay to make your players not know what are they following, then so be it) Don't worry, it flows naturally. It's just more dynamic and covers both sounds, not that strict to one or another. Some like and some dislike and I get why but it's just different :p
- 00:56:679 (250) - (Suggestion) if you ignored 00:56:030 - 's beat to keep density low, then ignoring this wont hurt much either true, applied.
- 00:57:814 - ~ 00:58:463 - (Suggestion) k ddd k > d kkk k , so you emphasize the louder sounds in this part. Not like kkk K is the world's end in terms of difficult things and you also do ddd D right after Mm, did k d kkk K as the first note is similar to the previous single kats but I like the suggestion, something inbetween.
- 01:08:760 (290) - Move this to 01:08:598 - since the buzzing drum is more notorious there and it does the job much better since 01:08:841 (291) - is supposed to be a kind of finishing snare. Makes sense and I like it :p, applied.
- 01:34:787 (122) - consider if else getting rid of this slider or adding one in 01:37:381 - (and in 01:38:679 - and 01:39:976 - ) is the solution here
- 01:52:949 - maybe move this spinner 1/4 to the right and add a note here instead I like the finisher on the last note :C. I'll only change if it's unrankable tbh.
Last two diffs are okay to me, I suppose that's it I hope they are :v
Good luck >:3 Thanks o/