Part. Number. Three.
when you say you'll get the rest tomorrow but you accidentally take 10 day s uuhhhh opps
light insane
• 00:06:330 (5,6,7) - this stack gets in the way of the even spacing between 00:05:960 (3,4,5) - and the aesthetic. move it down and to the right so it looks even with circle 5
• 00:19:849 (6,7,1) - same here
• 00:34:108 - doesnt feel right to skip this vocal since the slider of 00:33:367 (1) - emphasizes it
• 00:40:589 (1,2) - 00:43:552 (1,2) - again with stacks REEEE, just space these two tho
• 01:14:478 (6,1,2) - this makes flow kind of jagged, would be better if you put 1 right in front of the slidertail like this
• 01:22:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this stream seems like a lot because you never really use anything more than a triple until this, then its like 9 notes all at once and big diff spike. replace with something simpler
• 00:19:849 (6,7,1) - same here
• 00:34:108 - doesnt feel right to skip this vocal since the slider of 00:33:367 (1) - emphasizes it
• 00:40:589 (1,2) - 00:43:552 (1,2) - again with stacks REEEE, just space these two tho
• 01:14:478 (6,1,2) - this makes flow kind of jagged, would be better if you put 1 right in front of the slidertail like this
• 01:22:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this stream seems like a lot because you never really use anything more than a triple until this, then its like 9 notes all at once and big diff spike. replace with something simpler
marianna
• 00:08:552 (3,4) - since vocals stop here and there's a snare roll, maybe replace this rhythm with something different? suggesting so it doesnt make the jumps feel too forced on the intense vocal parts
• 00:11:145 (1,2,3,4) - the 1/2 sliders here also sound like they can be varied, there is a kick on 00:11:330 - and a potential triple at 00:11:886 - so it just feels strange to stick to 1/2 sliders here
• 00:55:219 (4,5,1) - really big difference in spacing here feels weird to play, can you make the two jumps spaced more similar
• 01:04:478 - Don't leave sliderends on the downbeats like this, since it starts off a new measure it takes more priority. also guitar, vocal and drum beat here to show that
• 01:22:997 (3,4,5) - same as 00:55:219 (4,5,1) -
• 00:11:145 (1,2,3,4) - the 1/2 sliders here also sound like they can be varied, there is a kick on 00:11:330 - and a potential triple at 00:11:886 - so it just feels strange to stick to 1/2 sliders here
• 00:55:219 (4,5,1) - really big difference in spacing here feels weird to play, can you make the two jumps spaced more similar
• 01:04:478 - Don't leave sliderends on the downbeats like this, since it starts off a new measure it takes more priority. also guitar, vocal and drum beat here to show that
• 01:22:997 (3,4,5) - same as 00:55:219 (4,5,1) -
mk
• 00:37:626 (5,1) - would sound better ctrl+g imo, i think this prioritizes the snare and guitar note better
• 00:57:626 (3) - turn this into a triple? it feels strange because this is the only times you use a kickslider like this, lol
• 01:14:478 - the way you totally skip this beat feels awkward, its a pretty powreful snare + guitar note
• 00:57:626 (3) - turn this into a triple? it feels strange because this is the only times you use a kickslider like this, lol
• 01:14:478 - the way you totally skip this beat feels awkward, its a pretty powreful snare + guitar note
sh1n1
• 00:23:737 (3) - it feels strange how the vocal lands on that reverse arrow after you follow 00:22:997 (1,2) - these vocals with 1/2 sliders, try circle + 1/2 slider maybe
• 00:31:701 (4,1,2) - fix blanket
• 00:41:515 (2,3) - picky, but maybe rotate this to the right a tiny bit so its on the same axis as 00:41:145 (1) -
• 00:31:701 (4,1,2) - fix blanket
• 00:41:515 (2,3) - picky, but maybe rotate this to the right a tiny bit so its on the same axis as 00:41:145 (1) -
polka
• 00:13:923 (4,5) - i think ctrl+g works better here because it prioritizes this bass note 00:13:923 - better (with a held slider) and the snare at 00:14:293 - with a clickable
• 00:46:700 (2) - i think this works better as 2 1/1 sliders because 00:46:700 and 00:47:441 - are two different vocal phrases
• 01:10:219 (5,6) - disagree with sliderend on this downbeat, because of the exaggerated vocal + snare here. also, if you're trying to map to drums here consider also mapping the snare at 01:10:774 - somehow
• 01:23:552 (1) - the way you continue this repeat slider pattern feels forced, because you map to the drums at 01:22:071 (5,7) - but that just makes this one confusing. if you want a hold rhythm for the vocals i'd recommend just a 1/1 slider
• 01:25:960 (8) - make this wave slider symmetric reeeee
• 00:46:700 (2) - i think this works better as 2 1/1 sliders because 00:46:700 and 00:47:441 - are two different vocal phrases
• 01:10:219 (5,6) - disagree with sliderend on this downbeat, because of the exaggerated vocal + snare here. also, if you're trying to map to drums here consider also mapping the snare at 01:10:774 - somehow
• 01:23:552 (1) - the way you continue this repeat slider pattern feels forced, because you map to the drums at 01:22:071 (5,7) - but that just makes this one confusing. if you want a hold rhythm for the vocals i'd recommend just a 1/1 slider
• 01:25:960 (8) - make this wave slider symmetric reeeee
hazu
• 00:42:997 (3) - make this wave slider symmetric, the tail is a bit less curvy
• 00:47:441 - i'd like it if 00:47:441 - were clickable also because of the way you prioritized it with a circle on 00:46:700 (4) -
• 01:27:441 (4,5) - rhythm here feels strange because you're not able to map to these snares like the two circles before, it would be better though if you found a way to make that sliderend clickable
• 00:47:441 - i'd like it if 00:47:441 - were clickable also because of the way you prioritized it with a circle on 00:46:700 (4) -
• 01:27:441 (4,5) - rhythm here feels strange because you're not able to map to these snares like the two circles before, it would be better though if you found a way to make that sliderend clickable
bor
• 00:32:812 (3) - feel like this slider would work better if it started on 00:32:997 - because of that guitar strum thing that would go better with a hold rhythm.
• 00:47:812 (4,1) - putting this to the left of this sliderend 00:47:812 (4) - would show more structure because it would give better symmetry with 00:47:256 (2,3) -
• 01:00:034 (1,2,3) - i think if you simplified your rhythm here it would be more consistent with 00:52:626 (1,2,3) - and kinda 00:57:256 (2,3,1) - because the vocals do the shame kind of rhythm here
• 01:11:886 (1,2,3) - flow is very off here and there are weird corners on sliderend of 1 and sliderhead of 3. i think placing 2 like this would make the pattern feel more natural for the player to hit
• 01:14:108 (3) - i dont know why you chose to map the reverse arrow on the blue tick like this, it seems to be placed surrounding noticable drum beats but not ON them, and its also confusing because its the first time you used this rhythm.
• 00:47:812 (4,1) - putting this to the left of this sliderend 00:47:812 (4) - would show more structure because it would give better symmetry with 00:47:256 (2,3) -
• 01:00:034 (1,2,3) - i think if you simplified your rhythm here it would be more consistent with 00:52:626 (1,2,3) - and kinda 00:57:256 (2,3,1) - because the vocals do the shame kind of rhythm here
• 01:11:886 (1,2,3) - flow is very off here and there are weird corners on sliderend of 1 and sliderhead of 3. i think placing 2 like this would make the pattern feel more natural for the player to hit
• 01:14:108 (3) - i dont know why you chose to map the reverse arrow on the blue tick like this, it seems to be placed surrounding noticable drum beats but not ON them, and its also confusing because its the first time you used this rhythm.
cosmo
• 00:38:923 - it think you would benefit more from putting something clickable here because there's an intense drum roll that starts here, so putting a sliderend here is underwhelming
thats all honestly lol
thats all honestly lol
easy
• 00:30:404 (1,2) - 11 slider would probably be better here, since you usually simplify these vocals a lot more like at 00:18:552 (1) -
• 01:16:330 (1) - i feel like this slider looks too cramed, try doing something like this to make the aesthetic nicer
• 01:16:330 (1) - i feel like this slider looks too cramed, try doing something like this to make the aesthetic nicer
iyiyo
• 00:36:330 (1) - maybe split this up into 2 sliders, with another starting at 00:37:812 - ? suggesting because the drums get more intense there, so it would fit
• 01:25:219 (1) - think it would be better to start this at 01:26:700 - because the long guitar note starts there, so the spinner would represent that better if you started it there as well
• 01:25:219 (1) - think it would be better to start this at 01:26:700 - because the long guitar note starts there, so the spinner would represent that better if you started it there as well
when you say you'll get the rest tomorrow but you accidentally take 10 day s uuhhhh opps