forum

Camellia vs Akira Complex - Reality Distortion

posted
Total Posts
102
show more
Sing

Kaifin wrote:

reality distraction
13:16 *Kaifin is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1231971 Camellia Vs Akira Complex - Reality Distortion [rrtyui x Sing's Transference (NEW)]]
13:16 Kaifin: can feel the editor lagging as i type nice
13:16 Sing: lmaoo
13:16 Kaifin: all those 1/8 slider triples play really well in rrtyuis part so if anyone says to change them dont
13:17 Sing: ye we wont
13:17 Kaifin: some bn will tell you to change them
13:17 Kaifin: but as you can see they are easily playable
13:17 Kaifin: how do i disable sb in the editooro
13:17 Kaifin: so i can mod
13:17 Sing: coby .osb
13:17 Sing: into sb folder
13:17 Sing: cut*
13:18 Kaifin: i tried to open osb in notepad
13:18 Kaifin: it crashed
13:18 Sing: just cut the entire file
13:18 Sing: dont open it
13:18 Sing: xd
13:18 Kaifin: i deleted the sb foolder
13:19 Sing: wew nic
13:19 Kaifin: is this first part you
13:19 Sing: ya
13:19 Kaifin: 00:19:553 (2) - i understand what these are mapped to but i think it would be better if you made the "aaaaaaa" clickable instead
13:19 Sing: okok
13:20 Kaifin: cause like it sounds like its off
13:20 Kaifin: u get me
13:20 Kaifin: that applies to all of them
13:20 Sing: this good?https://puu.sh/ycups/cd779f3fbd.png
13:20 Kaifin: 00:23:753 -
13:20 Kaifin: this stuff is all fine tho
13:20 Kaifin: ye
13:21 Sing: aite
13:21 Kaifin: wait
13:21 Kaifin: what i mean is to move 00:19:553 (2) - back to 00:19:403 -
13:21 Kaifin: and still have the slider end on the other "aaaa" sound unless you want to make it a circle
13:21 Sing: oh ok
13:22 Kaifin: since its held and it sounds off
13:22 Kaifin: 00:29:153 (2) - and then this one too
13:22 Sing: yeye its bettr now
13:22 Kaifin: i think the other ones are fine
13:22 Kaifin: also since you map the sound 00:30:353 (3) - here
13:22 Kaifin: you might want to consider mapping it back there
13:22 Kaifin: 00:30:953 (1,2) - is this a hidden repeat cause i cant see it lol
13:22 Sing: yea it is
13:23 Sing: ill fix tht
13:24 Kaifin: 01:06:353 (3) -
13:24 Kaifin: if you shorten this to the blue tick and add a circle i think this will look a lot better
13:24 Kaifin: the whole thing looks really weird rn
13:24 Sing: aite
13:25 Kaifin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9447210
13:25 Kaifin: you could do it like this or something
13:26 Sing: https://puu.sh/ycuHk/f80a4751c3.png yee
13:26 Kaifin: 01:35:153 (1,2,3,4) - if you move this a touch to the left it'll be a lot easier
13:26 Sing: o thts rrtyuis
13:26 Kaifin: i broke on it both runs cause its a weird angle
13:26 Kaifin: O
13:26 Sing: i can jus move it tho
13:26 Sing: not a big deal
13:27 Kaifin: would mention it to him
13:27 Kaifin: almost like a lil blanket http://puu.sh/ycuKo/a2eacfb009.jpg
13:27 Sing: ye i will
13:27 Sing: yea it is a blanket
13:27 Sing: thts y when i moved it i rotated it too
13:27 Sing: to keep the blanket
13:28 Kaifin: 01:44:153 (1) - is this is purposely lik a super normal slider
13:28 Kaifin: stuck out as exceedingly normal to the point where it looked a little silly
13:28 Sing: yea
13:28 Sing: mm i can try change it
13:28 Sing: lul
13:28 Kaifin: maybe you could like slowly distort it at the end or something
13:28 Kaifin: cause the sound starts to do that
13:29 Kaifin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9447238
13:29 Kaifin: Sad boys
13:29 Kaifin: Free My Man
13:29 Sing: xd
13:30 Kaifin: 02:22:553 - fc choke point
13:30 Kaifin: but its Good
13:30 Sing: yea
13:30 Kaifin: 02:25:703 (1,1) - hidden repeat
13:31 Kaifin: lol did i even see this when playing wtf
13:31 Sing: yea it was evn worse when stacked
13:31 Sing: shiet
13:31 Sing: https://puu.sh/ycuWh/bb095e8cba.png
13:31 Sing: fixed
13:31 Kaifin: 02:29:603 (1,2,3,4,5) - lowering this a little bit more would help it with readability
13:32 Kaifin: i was lik O when it happened
13:32 Kaifin: cause the spacing isnt the same for any of the other stacked ones
13:32 Kaifin: i think if you changed the stream shape since the spacing stays the same, it'd be cooler
13:32 Kaifin: so i'd recommend that first
13:32 Kaifin: like how rrtyui does it in his part
13:33 Kaifin: 02:32:153 (1,2,1,2) - i understand the spacing idea here but a little bit more spacing between these pairs like this would be nice for flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9447267
13:33 Sing: aite aite
13:33 Kaifin: could make it even narrower angle like http://puu.sh/ycv1q/afc355ba51.jpg
13:33 Kaifin: sec phone call
13:34 Sing: okok
13:34 Sing: fixed all those
13:46 Kaifin: ok back
13:46 Sing: aite
13:48 Kaifin: 04:21:053 -
13:48 Kaifin: since all your streams start at the spacing of 04:19:853 (1,2) - or at least fully seperated
13:48 Kaifin: 04:22:253 (1,2) -
13:48 Kaifin: 04:23:453 (1,2) - examples
13:49 Kaifin: thats why i fully whiffed this in the run
13:49 Kaifin: i would buff the inital spacing a bit and adjust the increase accordingly
13:49 Kaifin: you might have to change the placement slightly to do this
13:49 Sing: okok
13:49 Kaifin: like this
13:50 Kaifin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9447376
13:50 Sing: https://puu.sh/ycvKX/7aa7b0fdef.png
13:50 Kaifin: yea that works
13:50 Sing: aite
13:50 Kaifin: my placement suggestion was trying to keep the big jump to 04:21:353 (1) -
13:50 Kaifin: cause thats the big focus in rrtyui's part as well
13:51 Kaifin: but yours is consistent with your spacing so it makes sense
13:51 Sing: yeye
13:51 Kaifin: 04:27:053 (1,2,3,4) - same complaint here
13:51 Kaifin: except here tbh i would just make it even spacing
13:52 Sing: https://puu.sh/ycvP7/dcdf35517d.png
13:52 Kaifin: i'm not sure how you could do expanding spacing and make it look nice with where all the objects are, but if you can do it
13:52 Kaifin: that works but move 2 and 3 like 2 pix to the left
13:52 Kaifin: left/up diagonal
13:52 Sing: aite
13:53 Kaifin: what i would do would be like uhhh http://puu.sh/ycvRO/f701c88cee.jpg
13:53 Kaifin: but keeping the expanding looks fine tooo
13:53 Kaifin: 04:30:653 (1,2,3,4) -
13:54 Kaifin: and this one 04:33:053 - which is especially O My because of how much it increases in spacing
13:54 Sing: well thas the end of the section
13:54 Sing: so larger increase makes sense
13:54 Kaifin: oh no the increase makes sense
13:54 Kaifin: just make sure the first 2 are spaced more
13:54 Kaifin: so its less awkward to fully ramp into the spaced motion
13:54 Sing: okok
13:55 Kaifin: 04:37:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this one's fine cause it goes from high to low
13:55 Kaifin: you might want to be careful stacking it though
13:55 Sing: https://puu.sh/ycvYf/412b1e3d9f.png
13:55 Sing: yea tru
13:55 Kaifin: lookz good
13:56 Kaifin: i think the end stuff is all g
13:56 Kaifin: its fine that its different from the start i think cause the 1/1 sounds are a lot more pronouced at the end
13:56 Kaifin: Nice Map

13:57 Kaifin: oh you might wanna do od 8.5 or 8.8 or something sily
13:57 Kaifin: cause of the stream spacing
13:58 Kaifin: dont have to go to 9 if you dont want to but 9 is also option
fixed all new .osu: https://puu.sh/ycw9B/5c51ed35f8.osu
-sandAI
what the storyboard
Asphyxia
Cool storyboard
Topic Starter
rrtyui
yey thanks all :)

Kaifin wrote:

13:57 Kaifin: oh you might wanna do od 8.5 or 8.8 or something sily
13:57 Kaifin: cause of the stream spacing
13:58 Kaifin: dont have to go to 9 if you dont want to but 9 is also option
i like od9 so i'll keep it
Topic Starter
rrtyui
updated.

omg got 10 stars in an instant we did it lul
Just Miracle-
Nice :D
Hybrid Theory
This Storyboard is a masterpiece :D
-GN
amazing storyboard, but why does a loading spinner show up at the very end ( 05:15:353 (1) - ) when it's not loading anything?!
shinyflakes
amazing song
amazing storyboard
amazing map
Regou
<3 luv you guys

Ill mod this later
-Atri-
Elite storyboarder when
NeilPerry
Yay some mod.

General:
Remove reality distortion from tags.
Add in tags smthing like: drumstep.
On epilepsy warning.
Recheck with modding assistans unsuing sb files. He is crying xd

Transference:

01:16:403 (1,2,3) - make ds more even
01:49:853 (1) - offscreen
02:06:353 (1,2) - avoid pixel overlap
03:41:003 (2) - NC will be ok cuz big sv gap on soft part
03:50:603 (2,2) - same nc thing

Other stuff seems fine to me

Sorry for no wall mod. It's going to be my best of 2017 <3
Minorsonek
old version was more playable and imo had better rhythm,
new version has better sliderarts at least

especially this section 01:27:353 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - was waaayy better in old version, now it doesnt follow music well
Gokateigo
Hi
tiny mod
  1. Enable Epilepsy warning
  2. 00:01:253 - and 00:01:553 - these green lines are useless
  3. 00:23:303 (4) - NC ?
  4. 00:24:503 - there is a sound here
  5. 00:26:153 (3) - it shouldn't be a part of this imo 00:25:853 (1,2,3) - it's a different sound
  6. 00:28:553 (1) - needs more emphasis
  7. 00:33:353 (3) - overmapped
  8. 01:36:653 (4) - why is this here ? Keep copypasting/rotating sliders like you did for the beggining of the combo
  9. 02:02:453 (1,1,1,1,1) - undermapped
  10. 02:06:803 (2,3,4) - overmapped
  11. 04:34:253 (2) - I think it's overmapped
  12. 04:37:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much spaced imo
  13. 05:20:828 - circle here
Really cool map, GL :)
pocket-
best of 2017
Sing
mods:

neilperry:
01:16:403 (1,2,3) - make ds more even done
02:06:353 (1,2) - avoid pixel overlap fixed

gokateigo:

Enable Epilepsy warning done
00:01:253 - and 00:01:553 - these green lines are useless deleted
00:23:303 (4) - NC ? nah, not consistent with later sections because i NC at the synth pattern after
00:24:503 - there is a sound here ??? i dont hear anything
00:26:153 (3) - it shouldn't be a part of this imo 00:25:853 (1,2,3) - it's a different sound same noise, different pitch. not changing because pattern is fine as it is
00:28:553 (1) - needs more emphasis did the same thing before so its fine
00:33:353 (3) - overmapped i did the same thing before too? its fine
01:36:653 (4) - why is this here ? Keep copypasting/rotating sliders like you did for the beggining of the combo aesthetic? its not really a problem and its the first pattern so it can be different
02:06:803 (2,3,4) - overmapped i had a repeating slider before it so i thought to use different rhythm, not even overmapped considering what followed right before it so it's fine
04:34:253 (2) - I think it's overmapped ??? how is this even overmapped its the break of the kiai so i used a slider as opposed to full 4 circle stream, its fine
04:37:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much spaced imo playtesters who passed the map said its fine, and i dont really see it as a problem

updated .osu: https://puu.sh/ydp8L/4107114a2f.osu
Irreversible
the sb
Ancelysia

Irreversible wrote:

the sb
Regou
mod
sorry this is too perfect idk what to write

  1. 01:06:653 (4) - NC for cut-stream?
  2. 01:28:253 (1,2) - silence sliderend?
  3. 01:30:653 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:51:203 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - swapping these two set of stream pattern should make it easier to read
  5. 03:00:803 (3,1) - space them further?
  6. 03:37:103 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The spacing here is much larger than the others I don't think it's necessary
  7. 03:44:603 (1,1) - reduce spacing here? generally it feels too much for a slow part
  8. 04:30:653 (1,2,3,4) - make it consistent with previous stream pattern? (e.g 04:21:053 (1,2,3,4) -) unlike 04:33:053 (1,2,3,4) - which is highlighting end of section music remains relatively the same which make this kinda sudden
  9. 04:46:553 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - sex
Best song, best map, best sb 👁 💭 👈 💘 👌 💯 👈
pw384
D:\osu!\songs\582089 Camellia Vs Akira Complex - Reality Distortion\sb\plox\I was wondering if you could rank this.png

plz
blobdash
storyboard pls


more seriously though, i'm compressing your files right now.
i'll send it later.

edit : k i'm done

might not seem like it, but it really improves FPS on low end systems.

It shouldn't break anything as I just recompressed the images, though if it fucks something up make sure to backup everything.
Compressed : https://fruity.s-ul.eu/Y5w0AygS
Original files : https://fruity.s-ul.eu/gJPEoVRW
hi-mei
this storyboard is the best thing i ever seen in my life
Jun Maeda
oh god this is.... good c:
DeRandom Otaku
This blew my mind


can i bubble this
- Frontier -
I was wondering if you could rank this.png :thinking:
Exote
godly
7ambda
nutty remap
vyper
Literally the BEST storyboard I've ever seen in my life
ErunamoJAZZ
Hi, I just pointed some notes that are touching or close to touche some elements (like hpbar or so), not kudo.

details
  1. 01:14:453 (2) -
  2. 02:07:253 (1,2) -
  3. 02:14:603 (1) -
  4. 02:17:753 (1) -
  5. 02:25:703 (1) -
  6. 03:38:153 (1) -
  7. 03:53:003 (2) -
  8. 03:57:053 (3) -
  9. 04:29:978 (2,3) -

Very good job with SB and map, I dropped some little tears watching this ^^U
Good luck!
Nakano Itsuki
cool sb
Lavender
Singpart aka Sing
Topic Starter
rrtyui

Minorsonek wrote:

old version was more playable and imo had better rhythm,
new version has better sliderarts at least

especially this section 01:27:353 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - was waaayy better in old version, now it doesnt follow music well i've just come up with that lol well i replaced to easier version.

NeilPerry wrote:

General:
Remove reality distortion from tags. Done
Add in tags smthing like: drumstep. Done
On epilepsy warning. Done
Recheck with modding assistans unsuing sb files. He is crying xd This osb file is so much optized so that just makes error.

01:49:853 (1) - offscreen Replaced
03:41:003 (2) - NC will be ok cuz big sv gap on soft part
03:50:603 (2,2) - same nc thing

Gokateigo wrote:

Hi
  1. Enable Epilepsy warning Done
  2. 02:02:453 (1,1,1,1,1) - undermapped this kiai is calmer than others kiai, and after part is also very calm. i think it shouldn't be built it up.
  3. 05:20:828 - circle here This part is obviously calm part. don't wanna be complex them.

Regou wrote:

  1. 01:28:253 (1,2) - silence sliderend? replaced.
  2. 01:30:653 (1,2) - ^ replaced.
  3. 01:51:203 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - swapping these two set of stream pattern should make it easier to read uhh... i don't think that's works well and current version is still better imo.
  4. 03:00:803 (3,1) - space them further? done
  5. 03:44:603 (1,1) - reduce spacing here? generally it feels too much for a slow part fixed.
  6. 04:46:553 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - sex
also i applied new sb files things (and i also reoptimized things). Thanks!
Sing

Regou wrote:

mod
sorry this is too perfect idk what to write

[list]
[*]01:06:653 (4) - NC for cut-stream? done
[*]03:37:103 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The spacing here is much larger than the others I don't think it's necessary fixed
[*]04:30:653 (1,2,3,4) - make it consistent with previous stream pattern? (e.g 04:21:053 (1,2,3,4) -) unlike 04:33:053 (1,2,3,4) - which is highlighting end of section music remains relatively the same which make this kinda sudden fixed

Best song, best map, best sb 👁 💭 👈 💘 👌 💯 👈
updated .osu : https://puu.sh/yCicR/f1257a9f03.osu
LowAccuracySS
is it just me or does the map look deleted?

Topic Starter
rrtyui

LowAccuracySS wrote:

is it just me or does the map look deleted?
It's just forum's bug :v you can still download through forum thread.
Minorsonek

rrtyui wrote:

LowAccuracySS wrote:

is it just me or does the map look deleted?
It's just forum's bug :v you can still download through forum thread.
Not only forum's bug, you've updated your map today and after I update in-game it shows 00:00 length 0bpm map, i need to manually come here and download it again, so seems like this map is bugged in some way.

btw, why od9? :crying:
DeRandom Otaku
irc from a week ago i forgot to post
 17:15 DeRandom Otaku: http://puu.sh/yBYr6/833a97ea77.png
17:15 DeRandom Otaku: ??
17:18 rrtyui: uhhh
17:21 DeRandom Otaku: is that happening for you too or is it just me lol
17:22 rrtyui: i think that was happened by me
17:24 rrtyui: well i'm trying to fix that now
17:24 DeRandom Otaku: it shows correct info on thread http://puu.sh/yBYCC/4accb56cee.png
17:24 DeRandom Otaku: idk maybe osu is bugging
17:26 rrtyui: hmmmm
17:26 rrtyui: i reuploaded it now
17:27 DeRandom Otaku: still same for me wth
17:28 rrtyui: aswell...
17:28 DeRandom Otaku: i asked few more people and its same for them too lol
17:30 rrtyui: probably osu takes it as like a new map i think because when i uploaded just new forum design page was appeared
17:30 rrtyui: *appeared
17:30 DeRandom Otaku: well atleast it downloads and plays fine so ye
17:30 rrtyui: orz
17:31 DeRandom Otaku: let me have a check
17:31 rrtyui: yeah it can download from forum page for now
17:31 rrtyui: yey
17:31 DeRandom Otaku: it can also be downloaded from listing page properly lol
17:32 DeRandom Otaku: Who made the SB
17:32 DeRandom Otaku: you didn't mention about it anywhere
17:32 rrtyui: lul
17:32 rrtyui: hmmmm
17:33 rrtyui: it was mentioned in storyboarding tho
17:33 DeRandom Otaku: o
17:33 rrtyui: i should put it in somewhere
17:33 DeRandom Otaku: yep
17:33 rrtyui: like in discription
17:33 DeRandom Otaku: yes that would be cool
17:33 rrtyui: oh then ill
17:34 DeRandom Otaku: oh my god my whole editor is laggy LOL
17:34 DeRandom Otaku: my pc suck
17:34 DeRandom Otaku: s
17:34 rrtyui: ok done
17:35 DeRandom Otaku: Epic
17:35 rrtyui: rip
17:36 DeRandom Otaku: http://puu.sh/yBYTG/2d4d714820.png
17:36 DeRandom Otaku: http://puu.sh/yBYTY/f40fd56ea6.png
17:36 DeRandom Otaku: is this real
17:36 DeRandom Otaku: i just deleted and re downloaded them pa
17:36 DeRandom Otaku: the map*
17:36 rrtyui: i'm also laggy tho heheh
17:36 rrtyui: i already confirmed that is not correct
17:37 rrtyui: well... osb file was super compressed so
17:37 rrtyui: it seems just like that
17:37 DeRandom Otaku: if the files are'nt used and still exist in map's folder ,you should get rid of them i guess
17:37 rrtyui: i think it's exception for modding assistant
17:37 DeRandom Otaku: also what about this http://puu.sh/yBYVj/58c84dbf91.png. Ai-mod says that
17:38 rrtyui: ooohhh
17:38 rrtyui: ok ill check again
17:39 DeRandom Otaku: alright
17:40 rrtyui: oops that's extension was just wrong...
17:40 rrtyui: it actually jpg but thats png now
17:40 DeRandom Otaku: nice
17:44 DeRandom Otaku: 01:16:628 - did you intentionally remove that break
17:47 rrtyui: oops
17:47 DeRandom Otaku: 02:57:053 (1) - Change to two kick sliders?
17:48 DeRandom Otaku: it would be nicer to have the kick on 02:57:203 - emphasized in some way
17:52 DeRandom Otaku: 04:31:853 (1,1,2) - These should be part of same combo ,like 04:23:453 (1,2,3,4) - 04:24:653 (1,2) - etc
17:52 DeRandom Otaku: the new combo shiould start from 04:32:153 (3) -
17:57 rrtyui: about 02:57:053 (1): i prefer current style than that
17:58 rrtyui: * 02:57:203
17:59 DeRandom Otaku: 04:27:353 (1) - Missing hitsound on tail
17:59 rrtyui: about 04:31:853 (1,1,2): hmm that's not my part tho, but i think current works well
18:00 rrtyui: 04:31:853 (1) - i think that is needed, 04:32:003 (1) - is also needed for aesthetic problem
18:00 DeRandom Otaku: ya it looks cleaner but consistency is kinda important too lo
18:01 DeRandom Otaku: well anyway ,its pretty minor. doesnt matter much
18:03 DeRandom Otaku: 01:48:953 (3) - you forgot to add drum addition and finish here as well
18:03 DeRandom Otaku: 01:54:953 (1) - Drum addition
18:04 rrtyui: yeah i actually understand that is but im going to respect for my partner's sence in that
18:04 rrtyui: about 04:27:353 (1) - : sorry but i still don't get it...
18:05 rrtyui: about 01:48:953 (3) - : fixed
18:05 rrtyui: about 01:54:953 (1) - : fixed
18:07 DeRandom Otaku: 04:27:353 (1) - i meant, add drum addition and finish
18:07 DeRandom Otaku: on sliderend
18:09 rrtyui: oops i was dumb i just mistook that for sonething
18:09 rrtyui: fixed
18:10 DeRandom Otaku: Change slider tick rate to 1 atleast
18:10 DeRandom Otaku: 0.5 is not allowed
18:10 DeRandom Otaku: it has caused DQ's in past
18:10 rrtyui: oh
18:11 rrtyui: sing actually said before that is rankable lol
18:11 rrtyui: well ok ill fix
18:11 DeRandom Otaku: i asked other BNs about it http://puu.sh/yBZIc/e321741f26.jpg
18:12 rrtyui: setting bpm 100 :^^^^^^^^c^)
18:12 DeRandom Otaku: :^)
18:12 rrtyui: well ill set 1
18:14 DeRandom Otaku: ya i guess thats it

Also since 01:44:153 (1) - is slider ,why not slider at 04:17:828 (1) - as well?

Also still need to talk a bit more about SB and the bug on score listing page before bubbling this
Xinnoh
Mystery solved

Topic Starter
rrtyui

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hi, I just pointed some notes that are touching or close to touche some elements (like hpbar or so), not kudo.
i don't care about that so.

Minorsonek wrote:

btw, why od9? :crying:
because it's one of my favorite :roll:

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

**irc modding**
thanks for modding and a lot of carrying me! :cry:

Sinnoh wrote:

Mystery solved
thanks for supporting! that issue is fixed by that now.



and, i added my logo animation into sb's intro yey~
DeRandom Otaku
This base storyboard is actually coded in 2017 spring. It was around eighty percent done i think.
but sadly, I had no idea anymore, so it was shelved in a long time.
However, Sing told me "How about rank this? with my diff renewed style." in 2017 oct.
I just think it was chance to tackle it again, also that is waste that keeping this storyboard asleep.
so i decide to revive this, also go for rank : ). and i just to tell you, That is, PLS RANK THIS. Thanks.
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply