00:00:050 - didn't really like the intro due to it being an accuracy test with such high OD :
| The main issue here is that it doesn't have a really rhythm, which makes every hit dependent on the visual cue
| 00:00:050 (50|4) - would prefer to not have LNs like these, instead, notes so that it eases the problem above
| 00:00:739 (739|3,1084|2,1429|4,1774|6) - Connected LNs like these are better if the music allows
| 00:04:532 (4532|4,4877|6,5222|4,5567|5,5912|1) - The first comment goes for these too|
| and these 00:06:256 (6256|2,8325|1,8325|0,10050|2,11084|2,13843|0,14187|3,14532|6,14877|4,15222|1,15567|3,15912|5,16256|4) -
| LNs ending on the 1/2 rhythm is rather hard to time
00:00:050 - Felt like the slowjam is really way too slow, but that's just me, I prefer something around 0.75
00:10:222 (10222|4,10394|6) - I think this will be a problem due to the slowjam and it being a 1/2 :
| Suggesting 00:10:222 (10222|4) - to be a 1/2 long LN
| 00:10:394 (10394|6) - Change this to an LN if you want to map to the effect
00:30:050 (30050|2,30739|0,30912|3) - Pretty sure this is hard to time to, regardless of the thumb used :
| 00:30:050 (30050|2) - Shorten by 1/2 and 00:30:912 (30912|3) - move to the right by 1
00:34:532 (34532|0) - Suggest to move to 5 for simplicity
00:38:325 (38325|6) - Suggest to shorten by 1/1
01:39:877 (99877|4,99963|5,99963|3,100050|6,100136|4,100222|5,100222|3,100222|6) - Way to focused on the right hand :
| Suggestion :
01:42:636 - Would be better if you bracketted on ( 3{24} or 5{46} ), the chord after the bracket was hard to hit too :
| Suggestion :
01:43:843 (103843|2,104015|1,104101|0,104187|1) - Will probably never be a fan of these patterns, they are awkward as hell to hit :
| Suggestion :
01:45:222 (105222|5) - Will probably be better to hit on column 4
01:50:912 (110912|2,110912|4,110998|3,111084|4) - not a fan of {35}4 brackets also :
| Suggestion : 01:50:739 (110739|5,110912|4,110998|3,111084|4) - 7 654
01:53:498 (113498|1,113670|2,113756|3,113843|2) - Same but mirrored
01:57:636 (117636|6,117636|5) - Probably easier to read if you put the LN on 7
01:58:153 (118153|5,118325|6) - Swap Columns for easier playing
02:01:429 - I heavily prefer my version without the kick snare notes, I think the section here is fine without them :
| The idea of this section is that the players do not have to jack at all at any point but notes like this 02:03:843 (123843|5,124015|5,124187|3,124360|3) - destroy the idea
| These notes are horribly awkward to play especially if they are embedded within LNs 02:07:981 (127981|2,127981|3,127981|1,128153|2) -
| In conclusion, just remove the notes
02:11:084 (131084|0,131256|6,131429|0,131601|3,131774|1,131946|0) - I heavily prefer if you just focused on the drums itself here, adding in LNs everywhere kinda dilutes the effect the alternating hand pattern is trying to emphasize
02:12:463 - Same as my previous comment, removing the single notes would be better
02:47:636 - I used the LN on the first column since I am focusing all the trills on the right hand, but if you are planning to do it for both i would suggest it to be on the center
03:16:256 - Yea, this is horrible to play, remove the single notes
03:25:567 (205567|4,205739|3,205912|2,206084|4,206256|2,206429|3) - Same idea, it dilutes the alternating hand effect
03:28:584 (208584|5,208670|3) - Suggest to move to 5 and 6 respectively
03:31:170 (211170|0,211170|6,211256|3,211256|1,211256|5,211343|6,211343|0) - didn't really like trills on the ring and middle with a note in the center, it kinda throws me off a bit
| Suggestion:
03:34:187 (214187|5,214187|4,214187|6,214274|3,214360|6,214360|4) - This is really awkward to trill, suggest to move 03:36:429 (216429|4) - to the right by 1
03:38:325 (218325|6) - Don't really like the idea of layering all the sounds together no matter the situation, there should be some point where you shouldn't layer kicks/snares for playability :
| Suggestion 1: Remove all kicks and snares specifically for the section with the LN on the 4th column
| Suggestion 2: Change all kicks and snares to LNs where ever there is an LN beside it, this is to simplify and help reading because this currently looks like a reading challenge instead of something people will enjoy playing casually
| I heavily prefer Suggestion 1 though, it prevents mashing all 3 keys excluding the thumbs on each hand
| Besides, on the next section, you didn't layer those sounds, so it sort of makes sense
| In conclusion please just remove those extra notes
04:52:463 - This feels really anticlimatic, I assume you are trying to understand what Agka is saying, i also can't really understand what Agka is proposing so:
| Suggestion : The stream kinda breaks the flow here, so (1/8):
04:53:843 - cont.
| Suggestion : Using 1/12s then 1/16s because the streams here are faster than those snaps, should be ok (specifically used 1/12 as they snap to 1 whole beat nicely):
04:55:222 - I have absolutely no idea why would you do this, they are not readable
05:20:394 - Please don't
05:41:300 - what in the absolute fuck is this, the SVs do not fit at all:
| The pattern 05:41:795 (341795|0,341817|1,341838|2,341946|2,341968|1,341989|0,342075|0,342097|1,342118|2) - is kinda suggesting mashing 123 together, because doing it legitly would be a horrible idea
| Same for 05:41:716 (341716|6,341745|5,341774|4,341881|4,341903|5,341925|6,342011|6,342032|5,342054|4,342118|6) -
| Suggestion (that's what I did for my diff ):