Fixed some stuff besides the jumps thats it
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Marika - Soul Release short ver.
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Sotarks
Sotarks wrote:
[Lasse]
00:03:110 (3,1) - stack like that feels unconfortable for hards how so, 1/4 -> 1/1 is easy
00:12:844 (3,4) - you're kinda doing harsh overlaps for hards, try maybe smth like this ? it's fine to read
00:33:748 (5,1,3) - unconfortable rhythm here, this can be fixed by making 00:34:227 (2,3) - those 1/1 slider prefer following the song
00:35:024 (5,1) - maybe try rhythm like this ? weird with vocals
NanoRIPE
-NanoRIPE- wrote:
[hard]
00:33:429 (3,4,5) - maybe increase the ds? so people can really tell that you emphasize the drum here (you used this kind of pattern for the vocal,like you did at 00:05:344 (4,5) - etc) don't think that matters, rather keep the overlap spacing structure
00:38:056 (2) - better if you stack this with 00:37:578 (1) - on the head for represent the vocal more
00:41:567 (5) - ^ (but this one on the tail slider (3) )
why would I put big jumps in a calm part lol. antijumps work similar but fit much better
01:05:982 (1,2,1,2) - its kinda wrong if you used this kind of pattern to emphasize the drum since you always used this pattern to the vocal how,
I don't think that matters it's in a different part anyways
@Kazuto: fixed the hitsound, other thing is consistent with my 1/1 stack concept
thanks!
also fixed some other things https://0paste.com/15165.txt
[Easy]
finish your insane -_ -
00:37:897 (3) - lol how sharp this slider is really doesn't fit with any of the aesthetics of the map
00:50:024 (2,3) - tbh you following the vocals here just doesn't sound right cuz you have 0 hitsounding to really support a whole lot of feedback while the strong guitar in the bg is being ignored, I get that you would want some variance but you kinda really need some hitsounding to support it better if you wanted to go this route. In any case though no other rhythm does this so you might as well just make it a 3/2 repeat
hitsounding wise you really should add some things for sections 00:03:429 - and 01:07:258 - for the guitar for some more feedback (i.e. a soft whistle sample that isn't on S:C1)
[Normal]
01:06:939 (6,1) - idk, if possible try to move 6, a lot of your previous stacks like this indicate that it was 1/2, but here is a 1/1 gap
[Hard]
00:16:195 (1,2) - swapping ncs to 2 for these would look a lot less awkward visually tbh, i kinda get if you wanted to keep them for the sake of the follow points though, just saying its an option
[Insane]
00:43:322 (2,3,4) - i think you could space out 2,3 and maybe 4 if u wanted to, contrary to the building intensity of the song, this is kinda just what you would see in a normal section lol
00:47:471 (2,3) - ya this is way to easy to misread as a triplet, u should probs moves 3
00:53:854 (5,6,7) - it'd be really cool if you incorporated a back and forth motion like you did for 00:53:216 (1,2,3) - just to draw parallels to similar kind of things going on in the song
00:54:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels a little exaggerated in comparison to all your other jumps, maybe tone the 3,4,5 part down a bit
01:03:429 (4) - really should make the red tick on this clickable tbh, a lot of time for slow sections, it's the drums that feel the most satisfying if they're the most focused on instrument to hit in game
01:05:982 (1,1,1,1) - even though it's nc'd it's kinda weird to have them as anti-jumps considering you didn't really use antijumps for emphasis for the most part
[Extra]
00:35:024 (1,2) - tbh like literally all of these felt really awkward to play since the pause yeah create that emphasis that leaves you hanging but, idk it felt like it was such an abrupt stop to me in gameplay lmao, if anything change 00:37:258 (2,1) - 's spacing because you really can't tell that that's a 3/4 into a 1/2 (pauses can still be there if you change this mostly cuz this just throws people off from the whole pause thing you're doing)
finish your insane -_ -
00:37:897 (3) - lol how sharp this slider is really doesn't fit with any of the aesthetics of the map
00:50:024 (2,3) - tbh you following the vocals here just doesn't sound right cuz you have 0 hitsounding to really support a whole lot of feedback while the strong guitar in the bg is being ignored, I get that you would want some variance but you kinda really need some hitsounding to support it better if you wanted to go this route. In any case though no other rhythm does this so you might as well just make it a 3/2 repeat
hitsounding wise you really should add some things for sections 00:03:429 - and 01:07:258 - for the guitar for some more feedback (i.e. a soft whistle sample that isn't on S:C1)
[Normal]
01:06:939 (6,1) - idk, if possible try to move 6, a lot of your previous stacks like this indicate that it was 1/2, but here is a 1/1 gap
[Hard]
00:16:195 (1,2) - swapping ncs to 2 for these would look a lot less awkward visually tbh, i kinda get if you wanted to keep them for the sake of the follow points though, just saying its an option
[Insane]
00:43:322 (2,3,4) - i think you could space out 2,3 and maybe 4 if u wanted to, contrary to the building intensity of the song, this is kinda just what you would see in a normal section lol
00:47:471 (2,3) - ya this is way to easy to misread as a triplet, u should probs moves 3
00:53:854 (5,6,7) - it'd be really cool if you incorporated a back and forth motion like you did for 00:53:216 (1,2,3) - just to draw parallels to similar kind of things going on in the song
00:54:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels a little exaggerated in comparison to all your other jumps, maybe tone the 3,4,5 part down a bit
01:03:429 (4) - really should make the red tick on this clickable tbh, a lot of time for slow sections, it's the drums that feel the most satisfying if they're the most focused on instrument to hit in game
01:05:982 (1,1,1,1) - even though it's nc'd it's kinda weird to have them as anti-jumps considering you didn't really use antijumps for emphasis for the most part
[Extra]
00:35:024 (1,2) - tbh like literally all of these felt really awkward to play since the pause yeah create that emphasis that leaves you hanging but, idk it felt like it was such an abrupt stop to me in gameplay lmao, if anything change 00:37:258 (2,1) - 's spacing because you really can't tell that that's a 3/4 into a 1/2 (pauses can still be there if you change this mostly cuz this just throws people off from the whole pause thing you're doing)
cute suggestion, remade nc for that part
https://0paste.com/15188.txt
also added a few finishes and increased volume of some parts
https://0paste.com/15188.txt
also added a few finishes and increased volume of some parts
Topic Starter
Changed/Updated for Lasse going to do mine today.
Topic Starter
Waiting for other Cucks then full updateBattle wrote:
[Normal]
01:06:939 (6,1) - idk, if possible try to move 6, a lot of your previous stacks like this indicate that it was 1/2, but here is a 1/1 gap Alright did some tweaks
[Insane]
00:43:322 (2,3,4) - i think you could space out 2,3 and maybe 4 if u wanted to, contrary to the building intensity of the song, this is kinda just what you would see in a normal section lol Did some stuff
00:47:471 (2,3) - ya this is way to easy to misread as a triplet, u should probs moves 3 Aight Ctrl+G stuff here
00:53:854 (5,6,7) - it'd be really cool if you incorporated a back and forth motion like you did for 00:53:216 (1,2,3) - just to draw parallels to similar kind of things going on in the song For whatever I did rhythm didn't feel right if I tried to make it parallel. With the triplet being in there it's not identical to the previous back and forth which makes things awkward for me.
00:54:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels a little exaggerated in comparison to all your other jumps, maybe tone the 3,4,5 part down a bit Smoothed this part out made things more consistent but PP
01:03:429 (4) - really should make the red tick on this clickable tbh, a lot of time for slow sections, it's the drums that feel the most satisfying if they're the most focused on instrument to hit in game Only part of the music that really dies down and rhythmically sounds like this compared to the rest of the song. If I tried notes it'll really kill the subtleness of the sliders in this section. I think this is the only time it's passable in the song imo
01:05:982 (1,1,1,1) - even though it's nc'd it's kinda weird to have them as anti-jumps considering you didn't really use antijumps for emphasis for the most part Probably true but I like this one more than other patterns that I do https://puu.sh/xxbwv/d26f732c9f.jpg So I'll keep this as is just for my preferences. I don't see anything wrong with playability as well as misreading this so I believe it should be ok. People may not like it because music freaks but I like it.
change spacing as u said
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thanks battle wwBattle wrote:
[Easy]
finish your insane -_ - CRAP I KEEP FORGETTING ABOUT THIS LOL
00:37:897 (3) - lol how sharp this slider is really doesn't fit with any of the aesthetics of the map i made it into a wave slider
00:50:024 (2,3) - tbh you following the vocals here just doesn't sound right cuz you have 0 hitsounding to really support a whole lot of feedback while the strong guitar in the bg is being ignored, I get that you would want some variance but you kinda really need some hitsounding to support it better if you wanted to go this route. In any case though no other rhythm does this so you might as well just make it a 3/2 repeat
hitsounding wise you really should add some things for sections 00:03:429 - and 01:07:258 - for the guitar for some more feedback (i.e. a soft whistle sample that isn't on S:C1) changed it to a 3/2 repeat
https://drmt.s-ul.eu/eiWYNTqA
Topic Starter
kibb. the huge spacing of 00:42:365 (1,2,3,4) - takes away a lot of emphasis from the more emphatic jumps 00:43:003 (1,2,1,2,1,2)
fixed
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Topic Starter
Updated
want me to rebubble?
Topic Starter
Sure
Doormat
kiai is unsnapped by 1 ms, lul. You can fix for doormat
Normal
00:11:088 (1) - feels weird that there is a finish here. In the entire section the only other finish that exists is 00:03:429 (1). So yh, to put a finish there when all the other measures don't have finishes breaks the hitsound pattern
Lasse
00:23:376 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - If you're going to have a stream in a hard could you have it flowing as comfortably as possible? Since a lot of these players would have struggle playing bursts as it is and being the first time to come across this element it would be ideal to make it as easy as possible for them https://i.imgur.com/jVLGBK5.png
00:34:067 (1) - suggestion https://i.imgur.com/iUPeTCz.png
00:54:173 (1) - A 3/4 slider would show more contrast and have more impact imo
Kibb
00:00:876 (1) - reported for plagiarising kocari
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The volume on the Lasse's diff for the final spinner is different than the rest of the diffs. I don't see why it should vary so could you communicate with each other on what would be ideal to use. If you really want the varying volumes state why (tbh it's my style would be suffice)
[]w ~
kiai is unsnapped by 1 ms, lul. You can fix for doormat
Normal
00:11:088 (1) - feels weird that there is a finish here. In the entire section the only other finish that exists is 00:03:429 (1). So yh, to put a finish there when all the other measures don't have finishes breaks the hitsound pattern
Lasse
00:23:376 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - If you're going to have a stream in a hard could you have it flowing as comfortably as possible? Since a lot of these players would have struggle playing bursts as it is and being the first time to come across this element it would be ideal to make it as easy as possible for them https://i.imgur.com/jVLGBK5.png
00:34:067 (1) - suggestion https://i.imgur.com/iUPeTCz.png
00:54:173 (1) - A 3/4 slider would show more contrast and have more impact imo
Kibb
00:00:876 (1) - reported for plagiarising kocari
[]
The volume on the Lasse's diff for the final spinner is different than the rest of the diffs. I don't see why it should vary so could you communicate with each other on what would be ideal to use. If you really want the varying volumes state why (tbh it's my style would be suffice)
[]w ~
volume like that works well with the fading out guitar (also made it fade more) so I don't really want to change it to something louder
applied first point
changed rhythm on second in a different way that transistions well to vocals and makes the start of the part a bit easier to read
no change for third thing since there is a drum on red tick and I didn't use any other 3/4 sliders in the diff, so I don't want to introduce them so late
thanks!
https://0paste.com/16930.txt
applied first point
changed rhythm on second in a different way that transistions well to vocals and makes the start of the part a bit easier to read
no change for third thing since there is a drum on red tick and I didn't use any other 3/4 sliders in the diff, so I don't want to introduce them so late
thanks!
https://0paste.com/16930.txt
Topic Starter
Changed it/Updated
because he said i could bubble
more marika in 2017! :d
fixed a rhythm so ready to go