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ababa
180 posts
Joined June 2016
ababa
small mod, dont give kudosu if you didnt apply NCs

[Freezing]
00:20:670 (1) - if you have NC here then put NC here aswell 00:22:546 (2) -
else remove

00:47:107 (5,6,8,9) - why are these stacked when these arent? 00:48:796 (1,2,3,4) -

01:04:733 (8) - NC here, remove the other NC then
put NCs on big white ticks, here are the most important points in the kiai (although you can ignore this)
  • 01:06:233 (7) - ^
    01:07:733 (7) - ^
    01:10:733 (8) - ^
    01:12:233 (7) - ^
    01:13:733 (7) - ^
    01:16:733 (8) - ^
    01:18:233 (7) - ^
    01:19:733 (7) - ^
    01:21:233 (7) - ^
    01:22:733 (7) - ^
    01:24:233 (7) - ^
    01:25:733 (7) - ^
    02:40:733 (5) - ^
    02:42:233 (8) - ^
    02:43:733 (7) - ^
    02:45:234 (6) - ^
    02:46:733 (7) - ^
    02:48:233 (7) - ^
    02:49:733 (6) - ^
    02:54:233 (13) - ^
    02:55:733 (7) - ^
    02:57:233 (5) - ^
    02:58:733 (3) - ^
    03:00:233 (12) - ^
    03:04:733 (5) - ^

01:38:484 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing

01:46:733 (7) - why is this slider SV1.5 instead of the SV0.5 sliders before?

02:49:733 (6,7,8,9,10) - not straight

IceDynamix approves
Gologle
9 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Gologle

IceDynamix wrote:

small mod, dont give kudosu if you didnt apply NCs

[Freezing]
00:20:670 (1) - if you have NC here then put NC here aswell 00:22:546 (2) -
else remove

00:47:107 (5,6,8,9) - why are these stacked when these arent? 00:48:796 (1,2,3,4) -

01:04:733 (8) - NC here, remove the other NC then
put NCs on big white ticks, here are the most important points in the kiai (although you can ignore this)
  • 01:06:233 (7) - ^
    01:07:733 (7) - ^
    01:10:733 (8) - ^
    01:12:233 (7) - ^
    01:13:733 (7) - ^
    01:16:733 (8) - ^
    01:18:233 (7) - ^
    01:19:733 (7) - ^
    01:21:233 (7) - ^
    01:22:733 (7) - ^
    01:24:233 (7) - ^
    01:25:733 (7) - ^
    02:40:733 (5) - ^
    02:42:233 (8) - ^
    02:43:733 (7) - ^
    02:45:234 (6) - ^
    02:46:733 (7) - ^
    02:48:233 (7) - ^
    02:49:733 (6) - ^
    02:54:233 (13) - ^
    02:55:733 (7) - ^
    02:57:233 (5) - ^
    02:58:733 (3) - ^
    03:00:233 (12) - ^
    03:04:733 (5) - ^

01:38:484 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing

01:46:733 (7) - why is this slider SV1.5 instead of the SV0.5 sliders before?

02:49:733 (6,7,8,9,10) - not straight

IceDynamix approves

thx for the mod
xavier1488
1 post
Joined March 2017
xavier1488
add to ranked pls)))
Lord_Pahom
27 posts
Joined December 2015
Lord_Pahom
Карта топ
Cookie
8 posts
Joined July 2014
Cookie
I was bored and played through each diff. I haven't really modded before, so sorry if some of them are lazy. Overall, I really loved all of the maps. The only issues I really noticed were the timing and spacing of some notes. LMK if you need anything clarified.

Normal

00:32:858 (1) - Slider ends too late. Should end on white beat
00:34:170 (1) - Slider doesn't match song at all
01:35:295 (1) - Should start at 01:35:483
02:32:858 (1) - Should be a note at 02:32:858 and then spinner at 02:33:233. Also, the ending of the spinner should be moved or muted. It's really off-beat

Infamous Hype

00:31:545 (7) - Slider should end at 00:32:108 to match pattern
02:11:295 (6,7,8,9) - 7 should be after 8 to match pattern
02:36:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Start all of them on white beats. This timing is just a mess

Frozen

00:25:920 (4) - Timing is off. Should be 1/3
02:36:420 (1,2,3,4,1) - The starts of sliders should be on white beats, not red ones

Insane

00:25:920 (6) - Timing is off. Should be 1/3
00:28:733 (5) - Same as above
01:46:733 (4) - Weird SV change

Supreme's Snow

00:41:483 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Should follow pattern and only place notes on white beats.

Extra

02:37:639 (16,1,2) - Very awkward stream jump. You have to go to the right and then immediately to the left.

Rikka's

00:36:045 (8) - Slider ends late. Should end on 1/2 beat.
02:36:514 (4,5,6) - Seems like a sharp turn for no reason
02:37:639 (16,1,2) - Seems like a stream jump for no reason
02:57:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream is different than the rest; would be better to be consistent


Snowstorm

02:37:732 (8,1,2) - This turn-around and speedup seems a bit too extreme. Nothing in the song really signals that drastic of a change in spacing either.

Freezing

00:58:733 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Consider spacing to follow the change in beat
01:15:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why does spacing decrease when the song stays at the same intensity?
01:35:858 (2,3,4,5,6) - Better, but spacing still seems a bit weird
02:15:421 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 9+10 can stay stacked, but spacing is really random here
02:24:608 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1+2 aren't stacked but 4+5 are... doesn't make sense

02:30:233 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Diff spike seems a bit too extreme for this part
02:53:108 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Jumps seem a bit drastic to me
02:59:858 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as both above

Towards the end, the jump difficulty seemingly increases out of nowhere. I'd recommend either making them a bit closer together or easing into them slower and not doing as many cross-screen jumps.

Also, just in general, the spacing during jump sections seems to fluctuate randomly. One line of the song will be half as spaced as the next line without any purpose really. I'd recommend trying to make your spacing consistent for each chorus, still having the last chorus be larger.
Poivila_qwq
40 posts
Joined June 2017
Poivila_qwq
hype :3 owo MUST RANKED
Gologle
9 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Gologle
Thx for your help ^^
i tryed to apply most of your recommendations

Cookie wrote:

I was bored and played through each diff. I haven't really modded before, so sorry if some of them are lazy. Overall, I really loved all of the maps. The only issues I really noticed were the timing and spacing of some notes. LMK if you need anything clarified.

Normal all done

00:32:858 (1) - Slider ends too late. Should end on white beat
00:34:170 (1) - Slider doesn't match song at all havent fount smth that realy fits si i'll leave it wip
01:35:295 (1) - Should start at 01:35:483
02:32:858 (1) - Should be a note at 02:32:858 and then spinner at 02:33:233. Also, the ending of the spinner should be moved or muted. It's really off-beat

Infamous Hype all done

00:31:545 (7) - Slider should end at 00:32:108 to match pattern
02:11:295 (6,7,8,9) - 7 should be after 8 to match pattern
02:36:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Start all of them on white beats. This timing is just a mess

Frozen all done

00:25:920 (4) - Timing is off. Should be 1/3
02:36:420 (1,2,3,4,1) - The starts of sliders should be on white beats, not red ones

Insane all done

00:25:920 (6) - Timing is off. Should be 1/3
00:28:733 (5) - Same as above
01:46:733 (4) - Weird SV change

Supreme's Snow No changes (Map isnt finished yet)

00:41:483 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Should follow pattern and only place notes on white beats.

Extra all done

02:37:639 (16,1,2) - Very awkward stream jump. You have to go to the right and then immediately to the left. tryed to make it smoother

Rikka's all done

00:36:045 (8) - Slider ends late. Should end on 1/2 beat.
02:36:514 (4,5,6) - Seems like a sharp turn for no reason made both smoother and closed the gap
02:37:639 (16,1,2) - Seems like a stream jump for no reason
02:57:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream is different than the rest; would be better to be consistent stacked now


Snowstorm

02:37:732 (8,1,2) - This turn-around and speedup seems a bit too extreme. Nothing in the song really signals that drastic of a change in spacing either. more circular now

Freezing all done

00:58:733 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Consider spacing to follow the change in beat
01:15:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why does spacing decrease when the song stays at the same intensity?
01:35:858 (2,3,4,5,6) - Better, but spacing still seems a bit weird
02:15:421 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 9+10 can stay stacked, but spacing is really random here
02:24:608 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1+2 aren't stacked but 4+5 are... doesn't make sense

02:30:233 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Diff spike seems a bit too extreme for this part
02:53:108 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Jumps seem a bit drastic to me
02:59:858 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as both above


decrease the distance at the end and increased in earlier sections
Towards the end, the jump difficulty seemingly increases out of nowhere. I'd recommend either making them a bit closer together or easing into them slower and not doing as many cross-screen jumps.

Also, just in general, the spacing during jump sections seems to fluctuate randomly. One line of the song will be half as spaced as the next line without any purpose really. I'd recommend trying to make your spacing consistent for each chorus, still having the last chorus be larger.
tesspresso
1 post
Joined February 2017
tesspresso
cool map I hope it'll get ranked soon
Knose1
57 posts
Joined December 2016
Knose1
Maybe you could add "Remix by nightcoreFC" for the Source (I'm also making remix by nightcoreFC so it'll be better to find the nightcoreFC's remix, i'm gonne send you in Private message the youtube links of the 2 remix I'm mapping, but maybe i'll map other music remixed by nightcoreFC)

I'm not a pro-map make but think there's some problems:

For the Normal difficulty the snap distance often change but i heard that the snap distance mustn't change in easy, normal and Hard difficulties.
But sometimes you can keep the snap distance

00:22:358 (4,5) - Thoses objects are close and we think it a 1/4 timing or it's a 1/2 timing.
00:56:295 (2) - You can keep this slider as well but personaly i don't like his designe *^^*

Personaly i don't like the normal-Whistle sound: i don't think it goes well with the music, instead of it you can use the normal-Clap or any other soft and drum additions (If you don't know how to find it, I tell you that's at left of the editor but I think you know how to find it ^^). Warning the drum's sampleset and drum's additions don't do sound in taiko.

I love the designe of this ! :P 02:45:795 (1,2) -
Why don't you set the CS at 3 ? I think it'll be better for the new players to play on CS 3 than CS 3.3
Maybe the Ar is better at 5 ?

I think HP 5 is too high because i see HP between 3 and 4 on each normal map i see ranked.

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It may be cool to have an Hard difficulty on this my (I know that there's the Hyper difficulty but i'm training on Hyper and 4* Insane difficulties and the hyper is too hard for me because of the HP and the stream :? )

In the Hyper (Infamous Hype)
I saw some long combo. There's a problem because we have problem to regenerate the stamina if we fail on 2/3 notes or if we do some 100

00:03:795 - New combo here
00:04:733 - Remove the combo and set a new combo here 00:05:295 -
00:07:170 - New combo here
00:07:733 - Remove the combo here

Try to find other point where you have to set/remove combo. Try as much as possible to set the start of the combo before / on a slider (If you set a combo before a slider, the object must close to the slider (between x0 and x1 snap). Try to get the combo between 6 and 8, 10 is the maximum for this kind of difficulty. And remember: the combo don't follow the music, combo is a way to get some HP.

Also I don't know if the sliders are to mutch faster or not but you must check that. (Check that carefully on the sliders with reverse arrow)

I expect this will be usefull and good luck to rank this map *^o^*
Gologle
9 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Gologle
thx for your feedback. i will ad nightcorefc in the tags/source since i got the song from there.

Knose1 wrote:

Maybe you could add "Remix by nightcoreFC" for the Source (I'm also making remix by nightcoreFC so it'll be better to find the nightcoreFC's remix, i'm gonne send you in Private message the youtube links of the 2 remix I'm mapping, but maybe i'll map other music remixed by nightcoreFC)

I'm not a pro-map make but think there's some problems:

For the Normal difficulty the snap distance often change but i heard that the snap distance mustn't change in easy, normal and Hard difficulties.
But sometimes you can keep the snap distance

00:22:358 (4,5) - Thoses objects are close and we think it a 1/4 timing or it's a 1/2 timing. gap is now larger
00:56:295 (2) - You can keep this slider as well but personaly i don't like his designe *^^*

Personaly i don't like the normal-Whistle sound: i don't think it goes well with the music, instead of it you can use the normal-Clap or any other soft and drum additions (If you don't know how to find it, I tell you that's at left of the editor but I think you know how to find it ^^). Warning the drum's sampleset and drum's additions don't do sound in taiko.

I love the designe of this ! :P 02:45:795 (1,2) -
Why don't you set the CS at 3 ? I think it'll be better for the new players to play on CS 3 than CS 3.3
Maybe the Ar is better at 5 ?

I think HP 5 is too high because i see HP between 3 and 4 on each normal map i see ranked.

--------------------------------------------------------
It may be cool to have an Hard difficulty on this my (I know that there's the Hyper difficulty but i'm training on Hyper and 4* Insane difficulties and the hyper is too hard for me because of the HP and the stream :? )

In the Hyper (Infamous Hype)
I saw some long combo. There's a problem because we have problem to regenerate the stamina if we fail on 2/3 notes or if we do some 100

00:03:795 - New combo here all done
00:04:733 - Remove the combo and set a new combo here 00:05:295 -
00:07:170 - New combo here
00:07:733 - Remove the combo here

Try to find other point where you have to set/remove combo. Try as much as possible to set the start of the combo before / on a slider (If you set a combo before a slider, the object must close to the slider (between x0 and x1 snap). Try to get the combo between 6 and 8, 10 is the maximum for this kind of difficulty. And remember: the combo don't follow the music, combo is a way to get some HP.

Also I don't know if the sliders are to mutch faster or not but you must check that. (Check that carefully on the sliders with reverse arrow)

I expect this will be usefull and good luck to rank this map *^o^*
VadimZharikov
8 posts
Joined May 2015
VadimZharikov
da best!
Xelite
20 posts
Joined January 2016
Xelite
Hey, i just played Extra diff and noticed some things. There are a lot of places with combo higher than 10. IMO this diff looks better without two numbers in any circle. There some places where I think would great to add NC:
00:06:608 (8) - 00:09:233 (7) - 00:12:608 (9) - 00:26:858 (9) - 00:31:733 (6) - 00:35:295 (8) - 00:39:795 (9) - 00:44:295 (7) - 01:00:983 (7) - 01:51:983 (6) - 02:07:733 (7) - 02:12:608 (7) - 02:38:576 (1) - 02:53:483 (7) - 03:02:858 (8) - 03:05:858 (1)
Also after changing NC-s you should make HP higher, from 5 to 5.5 or 6.
Few other diffs have the same problem, but I played the most Extra one just this diff is good for my level.

Also another few things:
01:42:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think there will more comfortable to play if you'll make each next circle at an angle like this:
SPOILER
02:43:732 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think this place needs more balance in spacing between circles, it's extremely awkward to read intuitively these jumps, don't forget about flow.

Sorry for short mod but I have noticed only these places. Good luck in ranking, fun map :)
Gologle
9 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Gologle
did some changes here and there

Xelite wrote:

Hey, i just played Extra diff and noticed some things. There are a lot of places with combo higher than 10. IMO this diff looks better without two numbers in any circle. There some places where I think would great to add NC:
00:06:608 (8) done- 00:09:233 (7) placed it on 5 (fits more to the lyrics imo)- 00:12:608 (9) done- 00:26:858 (9) every "right now got it's own combo color now"- 00:31:733 (6) - 00:35:295 (8) NC on 3 (lyrics)- 00:39:795 (9) done- 00:44:295 (7) done- 01:00:983 (7) done- 01:51:983 (6) placed it on 4- 02:07:733 (7) - 02:12:608 (7) done- 02:38:576 (1) - 02:53:483 (7) - 03:02:858 (8) placed it on 5- 03:05:858 (1) placed it on 4
Also after changing NC-s you should make HP higher, from 5 to 5.5 or 6. 6.2 (i kinda like the number xd)
Few other diffs have the same problem, but I played the most Extra one just this diff is good for my level.

Also another few things:
01:42:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think there will more comfortable to play if you'll make each next circle at an angle like this:
SPOILER
02:43:732 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think this place needs more balance in spacing between circles, it's extremely awkward to read intuitively these jumps, don't forget about flow. 1- 4 are jumpier now

Sorry for short mod but I have noticed only these places. Good luck in ranking, fun map :)
thx for the mod even if it's short ^^ every help is welcome
Living Flower
131 posts
Joined June 2011
Living Flower
Normal
Difficulty Setting Guidelines:
Approach Rate should be between 4 and 6.
between means between and not "more than 6"


Difficulty Setting Guidelines
Overall Difficulty / HP Drain Rate should be between 3 and 5.
same goes for the OD


also, all kiai's are off-beat (thx AiMod), which wouldn't be that bad, if there wouldn't be any SV changes, BUT there actually are SV changes, even while slider are still played (!!!). Things like those are fatal. Please avoid those in future.

00:04:733 (1,2,3) - idk, overlaps wouldn't be that good readable for newer once, since the normal needs to be as simple as possible, otherwise it's an easy required...
01:14:108 (1) -
Spinner recovery time should be at least 2 beats. This is to ensure adequate time to click a hit object following a spinner.
00:34:170 (1,2) - Looks a bit like a failed blanket tbh...
01:09:233 (3,4) - blanket nazi...pls fix..
01:24:608 (9,1) - pls fix those blankets...
02:01:733 (4) - those anchors.....https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8854436 - Overall: reducing the sliders anchors, many are longer than required...
03:05:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - no sound there but still was mapped?
Saltssaumure
205 posts
Joined April 2017
Saltssaumure
Placeholder for mod, I was looking through my beatmaps list and saw this. Good luck btw!
PIECEofTOAST
20 posts
Joined September 2014
PIECEofTOAST
Really hope this gets ranked, I had such a blast playing Rikka's dif.
My love Megumin
1 post
Joined September 2017
My love Megumin
good map
mmatt
89 posts
Joined January 2016
mmatt
wait this isn't ranked?
TotalDrought
11 posts
Joined August 2016
TotalDrought
WTF PEPPY WHERE ARE YOU!?

this map... the best i played, only thing i'll say
YODAza
2 posts
Joined March 2016
YODAza
Amazing mapper hope when this project is fully completed these maps are as big as Highscore ^^.. I do think that the size of the circles on Snowstorm does take away a little bit of the fun of the map. i understand that it is used to make it more difficult but i suggest making them 0.2 or so larger ^^
My first and probably my only post purely to motivate you for this map :D.
YODAza
2 posts
Joined March 2016
YODAza
''August. 31.2017
smaller changes on Noarmal''

Normal*
0_skreamer_0
6 posts
Joined June 2016
0_skreamer_0
this map need to be ranked
tux1230
27 posts
Joined November 2014
tux1230
Frozen
00:01:542 - end spinner here and place a circle where the old spinner ended
00:13:826 (2) - i dont like this circle
00:15:514 (3) - here you do the same thing but it fits the song better here
00:25:983 (4) - move circle to the red tick, dont use 1/3 snap divisor
00:26:858 (1,2,2,3,4) - remove whistle here, sounds bad
00:49:358 (3) - stack this on the slider head
00:52:358 (4) - same
01:39:233 (3) - this slider doesnt fit the song at all
01:59:858 (9) - stack this on the same place as the following circles
02:00:232 (2) - circle is unsnapped
02:00:233 (2) - new combo should be here, not the circle before
02:08:295 (8) - stack
02:09:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - put the same distance between these, in the top left you can see how far away from the previous and next object they are.
02:10:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - same
02:27:233 (3) - new combo here, not the next slider
02:30:233 (8) - new combo
02:34:263 (9) - slider end is unsnapped
02:35:763 (5) - same
02:33:420 (6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - doesnt really fit the music with these short sliders
02:45:233 (9) - new combo should be here
02:47:295 (1) - no new combo here
02:48:420 (4) - new combo should be here
02:51:233 (9) - new combo should be here
02:53:858 (9) - new combo should be here
map the different choruses in the same style, in the first you used straight sliders and the second and third ones, curved
overall, i dont like this difficulty.
Supreme's Snow
difficulty isnt even finished!
Freezing
00:33:233 (2) - end isnt snapped
01:38:576 (2) - object isnt snapped
01:38:951 (5) - same
01:39:328 (8) - same
02:38:578 (2) - same
02:40:547 (2) - youll never guess whats wrong here
02:52:826 (5) - same
02:58:167 (5) - same
02:59:291 (1) - same
02:59:483 (3) - same
03:04:078 (2) - same
Insane
00:12:420 (3,4,5,6) - this can flow better
00:12:420 (3,4,5,6) - give these the same distance between jumps
00:25:983 (6) - remove this circle
00:28:983 (4) - same
00:51:983 (5,6) - make this a slider with a reverse arrow to better fit the music
00:53:483 (1,2,3) - remove the whistle hitsound on these circles
i like the way you mapped the chorus of the song on this difficulty :)
02:12:420 (6) - this slider feels weird, can you make it a different shape that doesnt feel so long?
02:20:108 - add a circle here
02:49:733 (4,5) - change these circles to a slider to follow vocals better
apart from these i really like this difficulty!
All difficulties
you need to snap timing points it annoys me and AiMod. slider velocity changes still apply if the green line is snapped to the same beat as the beginning of a slider
i dont know if this was just on insane difficulty, but dont use 1/3 and 1/6 snap divisor if the song doesnt use a 3/4 metronome
turn down the volume of hitsounds, more than 70% on a calmer part of the song is not very comfortable to play with, it doesnt sound that good, for example the green lines at 25:875, 25:975, 34:125, 36:750, also, dont just use normal sample, some places this sounds really bad, if you desperately want the same sample for the whole song, use soft, and not normal
you have new combos on every other big white tick, i prefer it on every. idk you dont have to do this it might take too long to change its just what i usually prefer to do.
you can use hitsounds on only the slider head or the slider tail, some places this would sound a lot better.
on the end of each difficulty, dont use whistle, it sounds awful
otherwise, awesome mapset, hope you can get it to ranked one day!
Taro-chan_old_1
Taro-chan_old_1
I'M LOVE THIS MAP

ok, let's mod!

General
01:39:839 - Klai Short than 15 seconds
Change mp3 from 221 kb/s to 192 kb/s or VBR

Diffs:
Normal
Fix klai because is without tempo!
Without tempo: 01:03:000, 01:39:562,
Kiai short than 15 seconds: 01:39:562,
End of klai: 01:25:687
01:51:187
03:04:875

Infamous Hype
Same with normal

Frozen
Same with normal
02:34:263 (9) - Object end is without tempo
02:35:763 (5) - ^

Insane
Kiai short than 15 seconds - 01:39:608

Supreme's Snow
Same with normal
w8, this map need finished, because isn't finished to end
Author this GD need finished GD

Extra
Same with normal

Rikka's dunno
Klai short than 15 seconds - 01:40:059

Snowstorm
Klai short than 15 seconds - 01:40:059

Freezing
Klai short than 15 seconds - 01:40:059

Here you are
Good luck with rank!
[i'm listen to your map very long] :D
RockStyle
40 posts
Joined December 2016
RockStyle
please rank this, i beg you :(
CaptainBasculin
327 posts
Joined September 2017
CaptainBasculin
This map has to be ranked!
Draell
14 posts
Joined January 2015
Draell
I loved those maps, I do not understand why they have not been ranked yet.
YoWuzUp
47 posts
Joined August 2016
YoWuzUp
This map probably isn't getting ranked. The best diff is Supreme's Snow. After that, the rest aren't that well mapped imo
YoWuzUp
47 posts
Joined August 2016
YoWuzUp
sorry to say it, but unless you remapped almost the entire mapset, it's probably not getting ranked.
This map will probably remain in the graveyard for a while. I'd say move on to a new mapset if you want a ranked map.
I'm surprised I'm the first mapper to say this.
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NightcoreCC
4 posts
Joined March 2018
NightcoreCC
map hard
Vertik555
1 post
Joined April 2017
Vertik555
good map. Hope it will be ranked
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crisrufo
1 post
Joined November 2017
crisrufo
there are some little issues, like in the frozen there is one note missing but that ain't a reason for it to not get ranked :'( it's beautiful! come on!
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Shinx
26 posts
Joined August 2017
Shinx
if it''s not gonna get ranked, can it at least get loved?
YoWuzUp
47 posts
Joined August 2016
YoWuzUp
I would try just dropping a huuuge mod, but there would be so much I'd change.

tip to mapper
As a note, if you listen to a mod you should reply to it by quoting the whole mod, replying whether or not you fixed what the mod said. for example
##:##:# (1) - Make this slider 2 circles - Wow, that looks so much better, thank you!
YoWuzUp
47 posts
Joined August 2016
YoWuzUp
I guess I could try dropping a mod that's not too big, so it could reach lovable standards, but it wouldn't be guaranteed.
(Wow i really bashed this map last month, it really is salvagable I believe lol)
YoWuzUp
47 posts
Joined August 2016
YoWuzUp
Okay here it is, I guess lol.

Mods!
Whenever i put ^, that means "same as above" basically.

- - - NORMAL - - -
00:17:483 (2) - What's with this spacing? I know it's not an Easy, but Normal still needs pretty regular and consistent spacing.
00:20:858 (2) - No reason for this to be like this. It just wrong to not have it right here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873705
00:25:733 (4,5,1) - If you're gonna have this, at least make it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873714
00:42:983 (2) - Here's how you make sliders like these good: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873759
00:54:608 - Could use a circle here, probably like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873729
00:59:858 (3) - Move this like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873767
01:01:358 (6) - How it should look: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873774
01:10:733 - Should be a circle here.
01:22:358 (6) - Fix spacing. Should look something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873745
01:35:483 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873749 that would look better.
02:53:108 (9) - New Combo
03:06:608 (5,6,7) - I'd delete these last 3 circles, the echo cannot really be heard anymore after circle 4.

Not as thorough as I'd like to make it, but I limited it on purpose.


- - - INFAMOUS HYPE - - -
00:09:045 (5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873786 Might look better.
00:03:233 (5) - New Combo here instead of 00:03:795
00:04:733 (4) - New Combo here instead of 00:05:295
00:06:608 (6) - New Combo
00:12:608 (8) - ^
00:15:233 (6) - ^
00:21:233 (7) - ^
00:23:108 (3) - New Combo here instead of 00:22:170
00:26:295 - I think 2 circles would fit here.
00:28:920 (5) - Maybe add a repeat to this slider?
00:32:295 - 2 Circles again.
00:33:795 - ^
00:36:983 (7) - New Combo
00:41:295 (6) - Do this with this circle: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873859
00:42:233 (9) - Extend slider to next white tick.
00:57:233 (7) - Take off the repeat on this slider.
01:06:795 (6) - New Combo
01:11:108 (7) - ^
01:20:108 (5) - ^
03:06:608 (8,9,10) - Same as Normal

I was way too thorough for the first minute, then I didn't mod anything for the next minute lol.


- - - FROZEN - - -
00:11:295 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874096 This would be better probably. That, or just stack it
00:12:045 (6,7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874103 Same here.
00:26:108 - There could be more circles here.
00:29:295 - Put 2 circles here.
00:30:420 - ^
00:32:108 - Add Circles.
00:33:420 - ^
00:39:233 (7) - New Combo
00:50:483 (7) - ^
00:53:483 (8) - ^
01:27:233 (5) - ^
01:28:545 - Add a circle.
01:30:983 (6) - New Combo
01:36:233 (4) - ^
01:37:358 (7) - ^
01:39:233 - You NEED a circle here. New Combo it as well.
01:59:483 (7) - New Combo probably.
01:59:858 (3) - Move here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874155
01:59:858 (3,4) - Then, Switch these 2 notes (highlight and press Ctrl+G)
02:00:232 (2) - New Combo here instead of 02:00:045
02:03:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - The stream is overmapping, remove circles on blue ticks, then maybe arrange like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874186
02:09:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapping again. Arrangement: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874203
02:10:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874210
02:12:795 (3,4,5,6,7) - Arrangement is a little weird here, i'd suggest something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874217
02:21:420 (4,5,6) - Overmapping. Arrangement: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874230
02:22:920 (4,5,6) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874236
02:30:233 (8) - New Combo
02:44:483 (7) - ^
02:50:858 (7) - ^
02:54:233 (10) - New Combo here instead of 02:54:795
02:56:483 (6) - New Combo
03:02:858 (6) - ^

Also, this one was pretty thorough too lol. Keep in mind, it isn't as thorough as I would've made it.


- - - INSANE - - -
00:16:545 (1) - This slider doesn't look very good to me. Do this instead maybe: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10877964
00:19:545 - A circle would fit well here.
00:22:545 (1) - The slider might look better like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10877977
00:34:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing on these objects is bad. Here is once again, what i'd do: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878027 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878039
00:47:858 (4) - New Combo
00:49:358 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878066 Something like this would work here.
00:52:545 (6) - The good wavy slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878114
00:59:858 (8) - New Combo
01:27:233 (5) - ^
01:30:608 (5,6,7) - Arrangement would be better like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878134
01:33:420 (5,6) - I'd stack the 5 onto the 6, and put another circle on that stack on the blue tick, so it'd look like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878155
01:37:358 (7) - New Combo
01:45:045 (5) - Move this circle up, try to have equal spacing before and after it. Maybe here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878173
01:54:233 (1,2,3) - I'd make this 2 half-beat sliders then 2 circles.
02:18:983 (8) - New Combo
02:25:358 (7) - ^
02:39:983 (3) - New combo here, or on the slider ahead.
02:43:733 (5,6,7) - I'd do slider->slider->circle here, then rearrange to make it look good.
02:50:858 (7) - New Combo
02:52:920 (3) - ^
03:02:858 (7) - ^
03:06:608 (5,6,7) - These last 3 circles, same as previous difficulties.

Usually when I say New Combo, it's either it just feels appropriate, or looks better imo.


- - - SUPREME'S SNOW - - -
00:41:483 (7) - New combo here maybe? Maybe somewhere else, I just think the combo is too long.
00:49:920 - Put a circle here, on the stack, it just makes better sense to me.
00:56:108 - I think a circle should go here to. Like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878309
00:56:295 (9) - New Combo
There's a lot of random triplets that don't work very well in this kiai imo. The ones right after the kiai are fine though.
01:37:358 (3) - New Combo
01:38:483 (6) - New Combo
02:02:858 - The map just kinda stops here lol.
Maybe what you could do, is either you or another mapper could finish it, assuming Supreme never comes back, and you could rename it to Collab Snow.

But that's all. Notice that this diff didn't get many mods. Not only is it just pretty good, but the higher the difficulty, the more you can get away with lol.


- - - EXTRA - - -
00:36:045 (9) - Delete slider then make this slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878392 (I feel like this works pretty well)
00:47:858 (4) - New Combo
Some of the jump patterns in the kiais are not very good, but for lovable standards it might be fine? Maybe...
02:07:170 (4,7) - New Combo on these
02:25:358 (4) - New Combo
03:06:608 (5,6,7) - Again with these last 3 circles.

There's a lot more that more experienced mappers would attack you for, but when thinking of loved maps, I believe that not much more, maybe more, but not much more than this would be good for getting it loved.


- - - RIKKA'S DUNNO - - -
Please change that difficulty name, it's very not cool. Something like "Rikka's Blizzard" would be great.
00:02:670 (3) - Stack the 3 onto the 4, would look better.
00:06:608 (8) - New Combo
00:08:295 (4) - This slider would work better half a beat later, so move the circle after it onto that red tick, then the slider to start on the white tick, then rearrange to make it look good.
00:08:858 (5,6,7) - You probably did this on purpose, just do it where it looks appropriate please. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878502 Like this.
00:12:608 (8) - New Combo
00:21:233 (8) - ^
00:59:858 (7) - New Combo here or circle immediately after.
01:25:733 - This timing point should have kiai on.
01:26:670 - This timing would work better starting on the slider, at 01:27:045
01:30:983 (5) - New Combo
01:38:295 - Move this timing point to on top of the slider ahead of it, and turn kiai on for it.
01:50:108 (8) - New Combo
01:52:358 (7) - ^
01:53:483 (13) - ^
01:56:108 (7) - ^
01:58:733 (7) - ^
02:01:733 (6) - ^
02:07:733 (9) - ^
02:18:983 (8) - ^
02:28:733 (10) - ^
02:32:108 (10) - ^
02:40:545 (3) - I'd make this 2 circles, 2nd one being a New Combo.
02:48:795 (7) - New Combo
02:50:858 (14) - ^
03:02:858 (8) - ^
03:06:608 (5,6,7) - These last 3 circles as always.

I think the jumps in this map are not bad, they just have extremely high spacing. Like with Supreme's diff, there are some triples/bursts that I don't think work too well (not the long stream, that one I thought was pretty good), but oh well.


- - - SNOWSTORM - - -
00:03:233 (6) - Move this to probably here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878631
00:18:233 (6) - New Combo
00:21:233 (7) - ^
00:32:858 (11) - ^
00:36:045 (1) - Might be better if you shortened it to the white tick before the red tick where it currently ends, but I'll leave that up to you.
00:50:483 (9) - New Combo
00:59:858 (4) - ^
01:25:733 - Turn kiai on for this timing point
01:26:670 - Move this timing point onto the slider at 01:27:045
01:33:420 (4) - This could be a triple, I'd say Ctrl+H then Ctrl+Shft+F and hit ok, and bam. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878701
01:42:608 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - wth lol that's a very weird pattern.
01:47:108 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Most people don't like jump patterns that are just a circle motion, triangles are fine, and squares are fine if they're not done for too long, so this jump pattern might not be so good.
01:52:733 (6) - New Combo
02:06:608 (5) - ^
02:07:733 (11) - ^
02:15:608 (5) - ^
02:28:733 (4) - ^
02:30:233 (8) - ^
02:30:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This whole section is off, it should be redone imo.
03:06:608 (5,6,7) - Again with these circles.

Like the other 2 diffs, there are triples/bursts that don't work very well imo.


- - - FREEZING - - -
00:04:733 (1) - I'd take off repeat, and put another circle instead.
00:47:858 (7) - New Combo
00:59:858 (7) - ^
03:06:608 (10,11,12) - And these circles.

Okay, I know I didn't make many points, but this map is far from perfect. Yeah, you have triples and bursts that don't for me, but the way you amplified the difficulty is jump spamming very high spaced all over the kiais. Most people don't like this. I'd say, just maybe (so take this with a grain of salt), reduce a lot of spacing, and maybe this map will be automatically more enjoyable.

That being said, most of the non-kiai time's mapping is quite nice, at least acceptable.


- - - MOD DONE - - -
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CaptainBasculin
327 posts
Joined September 2017
CaptainBasculin
Congrats on almost 1000 favourites
charmfox
24 posts
Joined June 2016
charmfox
lovely maps. they need to be ranked
zoryox
9 posts
Joined August 2017
zoryox
I played this map since I started playing osu and i've been waiting since then for it to be ranked.
Keep up the great work :)
Ep1ore
6 posts
Joined December 2017
Ep1ore
Jesus! this is one of the most epic and fun map that i have ever played, hope this get ranked!
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