02:24 HanzeR: hey mr. axarious, i just finished a map and i was wondering if i could bother you to test it xD
02:24 *Axarious is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1447537 M2U - Gypsy Tronic [Procarbazine]]
02:24 Axarious: ?
02:24 HanzeR: yessir
02:24 HanzeR: hha, you have?
02:24 Axarious: okie
02:25 Axarious: i looked in editor when i wasn't at home
02:25 HanzeR: yay! ^^
02:27 HanzeR: jeeze you made it look easy haha
02:27 HanzeR: thats definitly the best play ive seen so far
02:27 Axarious: ;o
02:28 Axarious: quite tricky
02:28 HanzeR: yeah there are some parts that probably need to be adjusted
02:28 Axarious: should i point some things out? o;
02:28 HanzeR: i havent really seen someone play it that well so i can look at your replay to help find them
02:28 HanzeR: yeah that would be great!
02:30 Axarious: 01:01:050 (4,5,6,7) -
02:30 Axarious: 7 feels a bit awkward to hit
02:30 HanzeR: i can see that
02:31 HanzeR: yeah ill adjust that pattern
02:31 Axarious: 00:53:970 (6,1,2,3,4,5) -
02:31 Axarious: i really liked this here
02:32 Axarious: but then it gets kinda bland here 01:01:650 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:32 Axarious: and there's no note on the blue tick 01:01:830 -
02:32 Axarious: in comparison to the first set
02:32 HanzeR: ooh youre right
02:32 HanzeR: thats totally a mistake /.\
02:33 Axarious: 01:07:050 (2,1) - spooky, i can imagine sliderbreaking here
02:34 HanzeR: aha totally
02:34 HanzeR: i could just cut the reverse by 1
02:34 Axarious: yea i think that would work
02:34 Axarious: i think it's more beautiful if you leave as is \o/
02:34 HanzeR: i think that actually fits the song better when i slow it down xD
02:35 HanzeR: haha
02:35 Axarious: 01:17:250 (7,1,2) - this felt a little awkward
02:35 Axarious: passive on the slider 01:17:490 -
02:35 Axarious: but then becomes three clicks for 01:17:970 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
02:36 HanzeR: icic
02:36 HanzeR: i should change that too
02:36 Axarious: otherwise it feels like http://cdn.shigetora.pw/i/hczeezf.png
02:36 HanzeR: i got stuck thinking about the pattern and not the song /.\
02:37 HanzeR: yeah the jump doesnt amke sense
02:38 HanzeR: just changed it, thanks ^^
02:38 Axarious: 01:21:450 (1) -
02:38 Axarious: hm
02:39 HanzeR: lol thats probably illegal /.\
02:39 Axarious: it's readable
02:39 Axarious: but it felt weird as a pause
02:39 Axarious: no click 01:21:570 - here
02:39 Axarious: 01:22:890 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - and this is evil haha
02:40 HanzeR: xD
02:40 HanzeR: yeah ill change that tooo
02:40 Axarious: 01:28:530 (2,3) - not a big deal but i think this is illegal too
02:41 HanzeR: oh that would be disappointing
02:41 Axarious: i'm not entirely sure, maybe get someone who knows more about ranking criteria to look at it haha
02:41 HanzeR: i think ill keep those until someone tells me i have to change them xd
02:41 Axarious: yeye
02:43 Axarious: 01:32:010 (2,3,4) - this might've seemed a little slow
02:43 HanzeR: mhm
02:43 Axarious: 01:35:490 (5,6,7) - same with this one
02:44 Axarious: i think it's okay to keep tho, should get a second opinion
02:44 HanzeR: yeah it wouldnt be too hard to adjust
02:44 Axarious: 01:43:170 (4,5,6,7) - this time gap felt a little weird
02:45 HanzeR: orz there was a slider there but i removed it to try and make it fit 00:25:890 (1) - this section more
02:45 HanzeR: but yeah i literally just deleted the slider haha
02:45 Axarious: oh haha
02:46 HanzeR: i think it played better with the slider but i wasnt sure xD
02:46 HanzeR: so ill change it back now ^^
02:46 Axarious: oh going back 00:36:150 (4) -
02:46 Axarious: this sounded really weird when playing
02:48 HanzeR: oh
02:48 HanzeR: thats definitiely a mistake x_x
02:49 HanzeR: sorry this is like the first time ive mapped anything in a year xD
02:49 Axarious: glad to see you still mapping \o/
02:50 Axarious: breath of fresh air to see maps like yours
02:50 HanzeR: oh thanks :3 that means a lot <3
02:50 HanzeR: im a big fan of yours /.\
02:50 Axarious: ><
02:51 Axarious: as for 02:09:570 -
02:51 Axarious: i think silencing sliderends would be good here
02:51 HanzeR: yeah that would totally fit
02:51 Axarious: like in nold's technonationalism
02:52 Axarious: 02:15:090 (1,2,1,2) - this is a difficult combo
02:52 HanzeR: hmm yeah i was thinking of the overlaps in the other ranked map of this song
02:53 HanzeR: the flow changes fit the song but maybe its too extreme there
02:53 Axarious: i think it would work if these weren't stacked 02:15:210 (2,1) -
02:54 HanzeR: yeah i just found a neat way to change it
02:54 HanzeR: i think it plays a lot better
02:54 Axarious: mm okie
02:54 HanzeR: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9379331
02:54 Axarious: holy the 4,1
02:55 Axarious: 02:15:690 (4,1) -
02:55 HanzeR: lol where?
02:55 Axarious: in your screenshot haha
02:56 HanzeR: you think its too mean xD
02:56 Axarious: yea
02:56 Axarious: haha
02:57 HanzeR: hmm ill have to test it more
02:57 HanzeR: i can play it really well but maybe thats just because i expect it xD
02:57 Axarious: haha
02:57 Axarious: 02:21:090 (1,2) -
02:57 Axarious: the circles underneath are a little hard to see
02:57 HanzeR: 4sure
02:57 Axarious: same with 01:25:530 (2,3) -
02:57 HanzeR: and now i see some are stacked really poorly too /.\
02:58 Axarious: hehe don't need perfect stacks :^
02:59 HanzeR: would stacking it under the slider head help
02:59 HanzeR: it might give more time to read then
02:59 HanzeR: for these 02:21:450 (1) -
03:00 Axarious: i think the slider tail is so close it's hard to tell
03:00 HanzeR: yeah ill have to think about that a bit
03:00 Axarious: and then the rhythm feels awkward without movement there
03:00 HanzeR: i like the aesthetic but it is weird to play
03:01 Axarious: 02:18:090 (5) - i think this is 1/4 not 1/6 here
03:02 Axarious: and this might be 1/6? 02:17:130 (4) -
03:02 Axarious: same with 02:20:490 (2) -
03:02 Axarious: but i'm not too positive
03:02 HanzeR: youre right about the first one xD
03:03 HanzeR: and the second one
03:03 HanzeR: i think the third one i count 4 notes
03:03 HanzeR: but its hard to tell with the grace note
03:04 Axarious: mm
03:04 Axarious: o 00:43:890 (1,2,3) -
03:07 Axarious: i think that's the last thing
03:07 HanzeR: you think 1,2 is hard to read?
03:07 Axarious: uh maybe not hard to read
03:08 Axarious: i think this rhythm http://cdn.shigetora.pw/i/aufggtj.png would be better
03:09 HanzeR: yah could totally do that
03:10 HanzeR: thanks so much for taking the time to do this <3
03:10 HanzeR: was incredibly helpful
03:10 HanzeR: post in the thread i can save this log and giev you kds :3
03:10 Axarious: okie \o/

14:47 *HanzeR is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1447537 M2U - Gypsy Tronic]
14:47 HanzeR: yaaaay
14:48 Liiraye: m2u!!!!
14:48 Liiraye: wow so many favorites
14:48 Liiraye: dahell
14:48 HanzeR: jaja
14:48 HanzeR: this song is so addicting
14:48 HanzeR: a lot of people like it for some reason xd
14:48 Liiraye: aaaaa
14:49 Liiraye: i love it
14:52 HanzeR: aha
14:52 HanzeR: its kinda silly xD
14:53 Liiraye: hahaha
14:53 Liiraye: o god
14:53 HanzeR: nicee
14:53 Liiraye: fun af
14:53 Liiraye: but
14:53 Liiraye: fuck I can't play this hard
14:53 HanzeR: ahaaaa
14:53 Liiraye: I wish I could
14:53 HanzeR: yeah
14:53 HanzeR: 6.14 stars is deceptive xD
14:53 Liiraye: 9*
14:53 Liiraye: :'D
14:53 HanzeR: i cant play it either xD
14:53 Liiraye: but I really love the jerky movements
14:54 Liiraye: thats like my favorite aspect of the game
14:54 Liiraye: the sort of hops
14:54 Liiraye: you have to make
14:54 HanzeR: haha yeah
14:54 HanzeR: it really fits with the music here
14:55 HanzeR: do you think the 1/8 sliders at the end are too much
14:55 Liiraye: yaa
14:55 Liiraye: hm
14:55 Liiraye: I dont know tbh, I think at first it was confusing but
14:55 Liiraye: when you need to do back n forths it gets easier
14:55 Liiraye: I think
14:56 Liiraye: maybe it would be easier to start it off with circles
14:56 Liiraye: on the first line
14:57 HanzeR: yeah i tried that
14:57 HanzeR: but then it felt hard to justify using 1/8ths for no reason
14:57 Liiraye: or mby
14:57 Liiraye: the first 2 as circles
14:57 Liiraye: last line as it is
14:58 HanzeR: i was thinking of maybe just having the first 2 1/8s circles
14:58 HanzeR: just the first combo
14:58 Liiraye: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386722
14:58 Liiraye: like this?
14:59 HanzeR: hmmmm
14:59 HanzeR: lemme try it
14:59 Liiraye: or mby
14:59 Liiraye: the first line as a stream
15:00 Liiraye: then second line is spaced like so
15:00 Liiraye: last is sliders
15:00 Liiraye: Xd
15:00 HanzeR: ahaha
15:00 Liiraye: like
15:00 Liiraye: first one as spaced stream
15:00 HanzeR: these 1/8ths habve been the biggest headache of my year so far xD
15:00 Liiraye: 02:15:330 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
15:00 Liiraye: like u have here
15:00 Liiraye: but mby less spaced
15:01 Liiraye: also
15:01 Liiraye: I think this part
15:01 HanzeR: yeah ill have to play with it more
15:01 Liiraye: 02:21:090 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
15:01 Liiraye: I always have issues reading end notes stacked like that
15:02 Liiraye: so I would probably put them on the start of next slider instead
15:02 HanzeR: thats a good idea
15:02 HanzeR: they were stacked on the slider end but axarious had trouble reading them too so i moved them there
15:02 HanzeR: but i didnt think about using the slider head
15:02 Liiraye: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386747
15:02 Liiraye: like so
15:02 Liiraye: I think it plays much better
15:03 Liiraye: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386755
15:03 Liiraye: ending like so
15:03 HanzeR: thts a great idea
15:03 HanzeR: just did that
15:04 HanzeR: 9wow that plays so much better haha
15:04 HanzeR: i was struggling all last night to find a way to make that work
15:05 HanzeR: u should post in the thred so i can kds u
15:05 Liiraye: xD wait
15:05 Liiraye: hahah
15:05 Liiraye: nice
15:05 Liiraye: 02:13:170 (4) -
15:05 Liiraye: ending on red instead? so u get a triple in there
15:05 Liiraye: I would personally prefer spaced streams
15:05 Liiraye: instead of sliders
15:05 Liiraye: but
15:05 Liiraye: its up to you
15:06 HanzeR: yeah totally could
15:06 Liiraye: on the following 1/8 sliders
15:06 Liiraye: I mean
15:06 Liiraye: ^^
15:06 Liiraye: like
15:06 Liiraye: from here
15:06 Liiraye: 02:13:890 (1) -
15:06 Liiraye: starting with some spaced circles
15:07 Liiraye: 02:14:370 (1) - sliders
15:07 Liiraye: 02:14:850 (1) - circles
15:07 Liiraye: but not as spaced as the last stream
15:07 Liiraye: you feel?
15:07 Liiraye: I think it would play really nice
15:07 Liiraye: maybe do some fun patterns with them
15:07 Liiraye: this is the highlight of the map
15:08 HanzeR: yeahhh
15:08 HanzeR: so you would alternate between sliders and circles?
15:08 Liiraye: love the kiai in the middle
15:09 Liiraye: um
15:09 Liiraye: yeah probably
15:09 Liiraye: at least I'd try
15:09 HanzeR: 4sure
15:09 Liiraye: let me try and see what I think
15:09 HanzeR: im gonna test it out
15:10 HanzeR: lol witch kiai?
15:10 Liiraye: 1:20
15:10 Liiraye: im thinking
15:10 Liiraye: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386785
15:10 Liiraye: something like that
15:11 Liiraye: but you could change up the sliders little to your liking so it looks cooler mby?
15:11 Liiraye: or like that is fine
15:11 Liiraye: or perhaps its better to start with the circles
15:12 Liiraye: i think the sliders will be less confusing then
15:13 Liiraye: omg yes
15:13 Liiraye: this is awesome
15:13 HanzeR: i liiike it
15:14 HanzeR: i just have to find a way to make it as good looking as my old pattern xD
15:14 HanzeR: it definitily emphasizes the right parts a lot better than what i had though
15:14 Liiraye: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386807
15:14 Liiraye: yeah
15:14 Liiraye: im thinking something like this rhythm
15:14 Liiraye: but you can place it however
15:15 Liiraye: just did a quick copypaste
15:15 Liiraye: beri coolu
15:18 HanzeR: okok
15:18 HanzeR: lemme update
15:24 *HanzeR is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1447537 M2U - Gypsy Tronic [Procarbazine]]
15:24 HanzeR: yeye
15:24 HanzeR: give it a whirl m8
15:24 Liiraye: o
15:24 Liiraye: wait
15:25 Liiraye: would be more consistent if 02:14:370 (1,2,1,2) - was sliders
15:25 Liiraye: circles* sorry
15:25 Liiraye: and 02:14:850 (1,2,1,2) - sliders
15:25 HanzeR: yeahh maybe
15:25 Liiraye: and nc these 02:21:330 (2) -
15:25 HanzeR: idk i thought it was neater to have it oppsoite hah
15:25 Liiraye: and remove on these 02:21:450 (1) -
15:25 Liiraye: xD
15:26 Liiraye: maybe, but the sounds are similar on those parts
15:26 Liiraye: 02:13:410 (2,3,1,2) - same sound as 02:14:370 (1,2,1,2) -
15:26 HanzeR: yeah but in the music
15:26 HanzeR: the emphasis is on this 02:14:850 (1) -
15:27 HanzeR: it goes so high pitch there
15:27 HanzeR: thats y i put circle there
15:27 HanzeR: maybe ill just cahnge it so the first patternh matches the second
15:27 HanzeR: 02:13:890 (1) - so these are circles
15:27 HanzeR: cuz the music also emphasizes 02:13:890 (1) -
15:27 Liiraye: yeah I see
15:28 Liiraye: its just
15:28 HanzeR: the boobie sliders at the end play so much better now xD
15:28 Liiraye: if you think about how the song progresses
15:28 Liiraye: its low-high-low-high
15:28 Liiraye: on that part
15:28 Liiraye: tudududu-TUDUDUDU-tudududu-TUDUDUDU
15:28 Liiraye: x'DDD
15:29 Liiraye: but in terms of pitch at least
15:29 HanzeR: lool
15:29 Liiraye: boooobiess
15:32 HanzeR: urgh
15:32 HanzeR: now i have to remember how i placed the sliders before
15:33 Liiraye: x_X
15:33 Liiraye: which ones
15:33 Liiraye: oh the last ones?
15:33 HanzeR: 02:13:350 (1,2,3,1,2) - these 1s
15:33 Liiraye: think it was just progressing upwards
15:34 Liiraye: something like that iirc http://puu.sh/y5Ywo/bb61af7fd3.jpg
15:39 Liiraye: i gotta go m8
15:39 Liiraye: I'll check it later
15:39 Liiraye: good luck with it