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kanpakyin
Mod..request by HKOSP's
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ReD=I think you should fix this
BluE=Just a suggestion

[Easy]
00:26:694(4)left 5 grid?
00:30:537(5)up 1 grid
00:31:257(1)^
00:38:774(1)remove new combo
00:50:916(1)^
01:10:728(5)Add a whistle?
01:17:958(3)use whistle to substitute clap
01:24:730(1)remove new combo
02:22:854(1)up 1 grid
02:34:421(x)what's the green line using?If not,please cancel it
02:35:191(x)^
02:56:678(x.x.x.x.x.x.x)Green line?

[Normal]
00:03:490(4)gemination with (5.1)
00:25:618(2)remove clap sound
00:36:357(1)Remove new combo
00:36:865(2)New combo
00:51:645(1)remove new combo
00:52:325(3)new combo
00:53:354(5)left 3 grid than 00:53:764(1)gemination with (5)
01:10:994(4)gemination with(5.6)
01:47:998(1.2)gemination with (1.2.3)
02:06:835(8.9)up 1 grid
02:36:155(2)add a whistle
02:37:075(4)^
02:38:075(6)^
02:38:999(2)^
02:39:969(4)^
02:40:959(6)^
02:56:678(x.x.x.x.x.x.x)Green line?

[Hard]
00:31:316(8)use whistle to instead clap
00:34:226(1)up 3 grid
00:49:194(1)spacing(too far)
01:01:805(8)new combo
00:17:693(8)^
01:20:697(1)up 1 grid
01:40:250(1.2.3.4)spacing
02:06:325(3)Horizontally with (2)
02:25:971(2)spacing
02:34:095(x)Remove Green line?
02:46:013(1)to 02:49:182(6)unusual range

[crystalsuicune's Taiko Oni]
d=red notes
k=Blue notes
00:10:504(7)remove k?
00:11:214(11)change to k?
00:12:405(17)change to k
00:13:224(21)^
00:20:149(45)^
00:20:808(38)change to d
00:32:547(18)change to k
00:40:314(160)^
00:40:495(61.62.63.64)k.k.d.k?
00:51:827(214)slider stop in 00:52:847
00:59:130(243)Big blue notes?
01:08:061(3)change to k
01:10:051(10)^
01:11:260(15)big red note?
01:18:495(47)big blue note?
02:33:965(30)big red note?
02:49:968(x)remove x2 BPM,it is really odd if taiko appear x2 BPM

[What my suggestion]
~Re-range some diff
~Taiko diff is not oni..

anyway..try your best and good luck ;)
Sallad4ever
Hai animelover :D
I like APH too, I even have Delicious tomato song on my to map list :3

[General]
Slider tick rate 2 to all diff is better imo
for a funny song like this the BG doesn't fit at all, the Taiko BG is hilarious though
Make the spinner on the end of all diff have the same length

[Normal]
00:08:063 (5) - add clap on the last repeat arrow
01:19:192 (5) - can't agree how this 1/4 slider with 5 repeats fit the song, try other pattern? maybe change it into 1/2 long slider with 2 repeats
my suggestion is to delete this, add circle on 01:19:192, then add slider that start from 01:19:434 until 01:19:918
02:03:950 (2) - umm if your hitsound pattern is clap every 1/1 notes, the clap should start from here not 02:04:434 (3)
02:56:208 (1) - move this spinner 1/2 beat back to red tick
02:10:724 (2) - again I can't agree with this ;_;

[Hard]
00:46:047 (1) - not very comfortable jump, cause this goes stright into streams. Decrease the jump?
00:49:192 (1) - this jump is too far imo, maybe make it into 1.5x spacing
01:03:708 (2,3,4) - plays kinda awkward, I suggest to unstack 2 or make 01:03:950 (3) into 1/4 slider
01:05:643 (9) - add circle? or make 01:05:401 (8) into slider until this place
01:20:643 (6) - spacing error or mini jump?
01:20:885 (1) - ^
01:35:885 (1) - remove NC then NC on 01:36:369 (2)
02:18:466 (x) & 02:18:708 (x) - add a circle here just like on 00:43:627 (6,7)

very funny song, the ending is epic. AMERICA NO BAKA~ :lol:
anyway nice map, the hitsounds are quite decent despite it's unconsistency on some place
Good Luck
~star
Topic Starter
Mint Bunny

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hai animelover :D
I like APH too, I even have Delicious tomato song on my to map list :3 OH OH I SO WANNA GUEST DIFF THAT ♥

[General]
Slider tick rate 2 to all diff is better imo
for a funny song like this the BG doesn't fit at all, the Taiko BG is hilarious though find me one then =w=

[Hard]
01:20:643 (6) - spacing error or mini jump? mini-jump =w=
01:20:885 (1) - ^
01:35:885 (1) - remove NC then NC on 01:36:369 (2) no >w<


very funny song, the ending is epic. AMERICA NO BAKA~ :lol:
anyway nice map, the hitsounds are quite decent despite it's unconsistency on some place i'll be working on that now...
Good Luck
~star
YAY fellow APH fan =w=
thx for star~
Hakeru
yay pub and go ! i love APH too :D
Just a suggestion :D

[Easy]
00:44:111 - (1) spacing
01:49:918 - (1) make one combo with 01:50:885 (3)(4)
hey add some whistle ( normal hitsound ) if you want

[Normal]
Circle Size : +1 (?)
01:02:740 - (5) spacing , too close from (4)

[Hard]
Approach Rate : +1 (?)
02:03:587 ~ 02:05:280 - add some note
02:11:450 - Breaktime (?)

ok that's all , sorry i can't mod that taiko diff ;_;
Topic Starter
Mint Bunny

Hakeru Prismriver wrote:

yay pub and go ! i love APH too :D YAAAAY
Just a suggestion :D

01:02:740 - (5) spacing , too close from (4) MANUEL STACKING >_<

[Hard]

ok that's all , sorry i can't mod that taiko diff ;_; it's ok~
Me_Me_old
:)
Revengexsoyah
hI (Only suggestions.)

~Easy~

00:30:079 : fix the spacing , more simetrical.
01:20:885 : put a slider here ending in 01:21:853

~Normal~
00:03:466 : down one grid.
01:02:256 : put it closer to the 5
01:19:192 : fix the spacing , more simetrical
01:49:918 (1,2,3) : fix the spacing according to the previous combo

~Hard~
00:07:579 : remove new combo
00:08:305 : add new combo.
00:29:595 : try this.

00:44:111 : put a slider here ending in 00:44:595
01:13:022 : bye "clap" use "whistle"
01:13:143 : bye "whistle" use "clap"

FINE DIFFIE. (L)


starred for dedication
good luck (Y).
Topic Starter
Mint Bunny

Revengexsoyah wrote:

hI (Only suggestions.)

~Easy~

00:30:079 : fix the spacing , more simetrical. done
01:20:885 : put a slider here ending in 01:21:853 done

~Normal~
00:03:466 : down one grid. thats manual stacking
01:02:256 : put it closer to the 5 ^
01:19:192 : fix the spacing , more simetrical done
01:49:918 (1,2,3) : fix the spacing according to the previous combo MANUAL STACKING

~Hard~
00:07:579 : remove new combo no
00:08:305 : add new combo. ^
00:29:595 : try this. no

00:44:111 : put a slider here ending in 00:44:595 done
01:13:022 : bye "clap" use "whistle" no
01:13:143 : bye "whistle" use "clap" no

FINE DIFFIE. (L)


starred for dedication
good luck (Y).
thanks for modding!
dkun
sorry, hindi ko naman matitingnan agad, wala ang main cp ko eh. :(
so, star na lang! sana mairank mo ito! :)
orioncomet
[Easy]
- remove audio lead in?
look good ~

[Normal]
02:56:329 (1) - end this spinner at white tick.. oh.. just move it to 1/4 backward

[Hard]
00:29:837 (6) - move it farther from (5) -a bit- .. look messy..
00:32:014 (13) - move it farther from (12) a bit ^

nice done
Topic Starter
Mint Bunny

orioncomet wrote:

[Easy]
- remove audio lead in?
look good ~

[Normal]
02:56:329 (1) - end this spinner at white tick.. oh.. just move it to 1/4 backward

[Hard]
00:29:837 (6) - move it farther from (5) -a bit- .. look messy..
00:32:014 (13) - move it farther from (12) a bit ^

nice done
all done
vytalibus
I modded this before, I'm here for another check.

[Normal]
01:02:014 (4,5,6,7,1) - Look how the last four notes aren't spaced properly from (4). Either stack them with (4)'s end or move them away.
01:49:676 (2,1,2,3) - ^

A great improvement from the last time I modded this. Nice job.
Topic Starter
Mint Bunny

vytalibus wrote:

I modded this before, I'm here for another check.

[Normal]
01:02:014 (4,5,6,7,1) - Look how the last four notes aren't spaced properly from (4). Either stack them with (4)'s end or move them away.
01:49:676 (2,1,2,3) - ^

A great improvement from the last time I modded this. Nice job.
thanks ^^
and that's all manual stacking :o
Sakura
There's 2 spaces between igirisu and iggy on the tags in all diffs except [Hard]

[Hard]
You could include more breaks, there's a big break at the start then all the song continues without any breaks and the hand gets tired.
01:43:627 (7,8) - Align with the rest? like this
01:53:789 (1) - This spinner might be a tad too long.
02:28:627 (1) - ^

[Normal]
The hitsounds at the start sound too soft
00:03:466 (4,5,1,2,3) - Do a better manual stacking
Pretty good diff

[Easy]
Pretty good diff as well
Tonoko
:oops: pretty good
;) cant find errors
give star.
Sakura
Congratulations you did it!
Bubbled!~
Haneii
:)

Edit:
Le gasp! where did it go? :O Yay! its back!
Sakura
Do not edit the first post or it will remove any icon it has :<
Bubble repair!~
Sander-Don
star~
crystalsuicune
OK,I fixed my guest diff...am I doing it right?

Download: Noriaki Sugiyama - Pub and GO! (animelover1432) [crystalsuicune's taiko oni].osu
Sallad4ever
oh my crystal just updated the taiko diff, but it's already bubbled :(
Topic Starter
Mint Bunny

crystalsuicune wrote:

OK,I fixed my guest diff...am I doing it right?
yes, you're doing it right

Sallad4ever wrote:

oh my crystal just updated the taiko diff, but it's already bubbled :(
well, i guess it's ok maybe if i don't upload it... I'll ask later...
abalee
feel free to pop the bubble if you want to fix something, just ask MATs/BATs to rebubble it again.

and when I use the fixed taiko difficulty to replace the one in the song folder, I found that it have a different AudioFilename in the osu file. check it out please.
Topic Starter
Mint Bunny

abalee wrote:

and when I use the fixed taiko difficulty to replace the one in the song folder, I found that it have a different AudioFilename in the osu file. check it out please.
fixed
bubble went bye bye ;w;
DerekMcD
*Star*
Louis Cyphre
Delete United 2 - copy.png image from folder, than full submit.
Audio Lead-in for 1-1.5 seconds will be enough.

[Easy]
-1 OD, -1 AR.

00:53:789 - make this please perfect. My suggestion: http://puu.sh/I3o
01:11:208 (6) - new combo
01:19:434 (5) - ^


[Normal]
-1 OD, - 1 AR. Normal is fast =/

00:05:160 (5) - I'm strongly recomend you to avoid such constructions in normal diffs.
00:05:401 (6) - new combo
00:53:789 (1) - same stuff like in easy
00:51:611 (4) - delete this note.
01:02:740 (5,6,7) - fix spacing please.

[Hard]
00:30:079 (7) - new combo there
02:12:055 - fill these place with notes, or remove break.
02:34:918 (1) - remove new combo
02:55:240 (1,1) - ^

star :>
Topic Starter
Mint Bunny

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Delete United 2 - copy.png image from folder, than full submit. That's the BG :P
Audio Lead-in for 1-1.5 seconds will be enough.

[Easy]
-1 OD k, -1 AR. Nope

00:53:789 - make this please perfect. My suggestion: http://puu.sh/I3o Nope. i did adjust it though
01:11:208 (6) - new combo k
01:19:434 (5) - ^ k


[Normal]
-1 OD, - 1 AR. Normal is fast =/

00:05:160 (5) - I'm strongly recommend you to avoid such constructions in normal diffs.Nope
00:05:401 (6) - new combo k
00:53:789 (1) - same stuff like in easy k
00:51:611 (4) - delete this note. k
01:02:740 (5,6,7) - fix spacing please. Manual stacking

[Hard]
00:30:079 (7) - new combo there k
02:12:055 - fill these place with notes, or remove break. k
02:34:918 (1) - remove new combo k
02:55:240 (1,1) - ^ nope

star :>

Thanks! ^^
(will upload when i have time) uploaded
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. I found the clap switchs between 1st/3rd white tick to 2nd/4th and back here and there, plz make sure most of them are set on 2nd/4th ones. (the situation now is a bit confusing for me) p.s. of coursely it's fine to set on all white ticks
[Normal]:
  1. 00:42:176 (1,2,3) - spacing
  2. ouch the stacking... this works fine in normal mod, but in Hardrock, everything will be messed :O (as a Normal, Hardrock is very common, isn't it?) so, plz increase the stack leniency and stack the things like 00:03:466 (4,5,1), 00:05:401 (1,2,3), 01:02:014 (4,5,6,7), 01:47:982 (1,2,1,2,3)
  3. lean-in: 0.5s is enough
[Hard]:
  1. 01:45:563 (T) - feels odd to left blank here, 1 note?
  2. 01:47:498 (T) - ^
  3. 01:53:305 (T) - ^
  4. 02:40:724 (1,2,3) - as you changed how things going by 02:41:692 (4,5,1), do some change to these notes too? I used to think you will keep the loop in testing :P
  5. 02:24:756 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - no clap on red tick
  6. lean-in: 0.5s is enough
[Easy]:
  1. 02:42:176 (T) - well, not a good idea to leave a break here. as there are only 2 spinner and 3 notes after it. so plz map this part.
[crystalsuicune's Taiko Oni]:
  1. KIAI: 00:42:176~00:59:111. 01:42:176~01:59:111. 02:17:014~02:33:950
  2. tags on this diff: igirisu iggy (there are 2 blanks there!)
main issue is the looks random claps and the stacking in Normal, fix them, try to get more mods and I might check this later
Topic Starter
Mint Bunny

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. I found the clap switchs between 1st/3rd white tick to 2nd/4th and back here and there, plz make sure most of them are set on 2nd/4th ones. (the situation now is a bit confusing for me) p.s. of coursely it's fine to set on all white ticks
[Normal]:
  1. 00:42:176 (1,2,3) - spacing
  2. ouch the stacking... this works fine in normal mod, but in Hardrock, everything will be messed :O (as a Normal, Hardrock is very common, isn't it?) so, plz increase the stack leniency and stack the things like 00:03:466 (4,5,1), 00:05:401 (1,2,3), 01:02:014 (4,5,6,7), 01:47:982 (1,2,1,2,3)
  3. lean-in: 0.5s is enough
[Hard]:
  1. 01:45:563 (T) - feels odd to left blank here, 1 note?
  2. 01:47:498 (T) - ^
  3. 01:53:305 (T) - ^
  4. 02:40:724 (1,2,3) - as you changed how things going by 02:41:692 (4,5,1), do some change to these notes too? I used to think you will keep the loop in testing :P
  5. 02:24:756 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - no clap on red tick
  6. lean-in: 0.5s is enough
[Easy]:
  1. 02:42:176 (T) - well, not a good idea to leave a break here. as there are only 2 spinner and 3 notes after it. so plz map this part.
[crystalsuicune's Taiko Oni]:
  1. KIAI: 00:42:176~00:59:111. 01:42:176~01:59:111. 02:17:014~02:33:950
  2. tags on this diff: igirisu iggy (there are 2 blanks there!)
main issue is the looks random claps and the stacking in Normal, fix them, try to get more mods and I might check this later
all done <3
re-mapped more parts to make the map flow better~
Pereira006
;)
KiriNoMorii
Iggy *W*
Star~
dkun
~

:)
Sakura
yay mod post...

[General]
Avoid the use of pure white combo color, it's blinding during kiai

[Timing]
I keep hitting early, i think the offset might be too late, try -10 ms.

[Hard]
00:49:192 (1) - New combo here for consistence with 00:47:256 (6)
01:23:305 (5,6) - This turn looks kinda sloppy, change the slider angle so that it's the same angle as the notes before it?
01:29:837 (4,5,6,1) - weird shape? mostly the (1) feels off.
01:33:224 (6) - align with (5), move also the rest of the notes together to keep the shape.
01:37:337 (4,5,6,7) - [Nazi] 1 grid right. so that 4,5,6 are centered in between 2 and 3 and 7 doesnt get messed up spacing.
01:53:789 (1) - I think this spinner doesnt fit, but that would be a big order for a rebubble, so i'll just leave it to your discression.
02:13:143 (1) - This spinner feels too long and it's starting too early, the first part of it could easily be replaced by notes.
02:21:369 (5,6) - What's with this awkward jump?
02:23:305 (5,6) - ^
02:27:418 (4) - [Nazi] 1 grid up, 3 grid right, so that it looks better aligned with the 2 previous notes.
02:28:627 (1) - I also think this spinner doesnt fit at all.
02:41:208 (3,1,3) - I think you could do something better with these sliders. Also there's an ugly overlap here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/57047 can you fix that?.

[Normal]
00:28:143 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - All the 1/1s here feel kinda boring for a Normal, try to do something more interesting? there are more instruments other than the main beat you know.
00:50:885 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - This note positioning feels really weird as well.
01:08:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Again with the 1/1s like i said earlier, there's more instruments going other than the main beat.
02:00:079 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Guess what im going to say :>
02:07:821 (1,2,3,4) - Notes are stacked in a weird way, but i cant think on any good fix other than manual stacking them.

[Easy]
Slider speed might be a bit too fast... i'd say stick to 1.0 or lower on Easies, but since BPM is slow here 1.0 would fit it better.
Avoid stacking notes on an Easy... like 00:37:821 (1,2,1,2), they can be confusing for newbies
02:34:918 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The positioning of this notes is weird since it's triple, a few singles, then a double?
02:50:401 (8) - Unstack 8... shouldnt be too hard to do.

Makes me wonder how did i bubble this in the first place, but i assure you wont get my bubble that easily again...
Topic Starter
Mint Bunny
all done and changed a few things
Sakura
[Hard]
There's a long break really close to the start of the song that all players will have to go through, try to map through this?

[Normal]
02:13:617 (2) - Doesnt feel like it's right in the middle of (1,3) try moving it 1 grid right?.
02:17:004 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing looks awkward.
There's a long break really close to the start of the song that all players will have to go through, try to map through this?
Even with that break, you have about 2:30+ mins of playtime without breaks, add more breaks in the middle rather than in the beginning.

[Easy]
Why isnt this diff starting at the same spot as the others?
Topic Starter
Mint Bunny

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Hard]
There's a long break really close to the start of the song that all players will have to go through, try to map through this?

[Normal]
02:13:617 (2) - Doesnt feel like it's right in the middle of (1,3) try moving it 1 grid right?.
02:17:004 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing looks awkward.
There's a long break really close to the start of the song that all players will have to go through, try to map through this?
Even with that break, you have about 2:30+ mins of playtime without breaks, add more breaks in the middle rather than in the beginning.

[Easy]
Why isnt this diff starting at the same spot as the others?
done all o/
LuPiiTa
;)

Edited: Me again! Love Hetalia xD
loveFantasy
ahaha! hetalia!

since your map had went through many mods (some of them from my respected modders :!: ), i doubt if i can find anything wrong, thus i'm doing some spacing nazi because they can make your map better if fixed.

[General]
- compress both your background image and taiko bg image to JPG format and resubmit

[Easy]
<00:03:456> (3..) inconsistent spacing on (5,6)
<00:07:327> (3,4,5) inconsistent spacing
<00:29:585> (2,3,4) ^, also make their y-coord symmetrical to <00:32:488> (1,2,3)
<00:47:488> (2) whistle instead
<00:49:908> (3) new combo
<01:32:488> (1) x:304 y:120 (2) x:224 y:56 (3) x:144 y:120 (4) x:177 y:216 (1) x:278 y:211
<01:37:327> (2) this finish feel weird, exchange hitsound with (3)?
<02:17:004> (1) it's ugly, make it less curvy?
<02:22:811> (3,4,5) inconsistent spacing
<02:38:295> (4,1) 2 grid left (grid lv4) will be better
<02:41:198> (4,5,1) inconsistent spacing

[Normal]
<00:37:811> new combo on (2) instead
<01:03:456> (5) new combo, remove next new combo
<01:20:875> (5) ^
<01:34:424> (3) ^
<01:52:327> (2) 2 grid down (grid lv4)
<02:10:472> new combo on (3) instead
<02:28:133> (4) use other hitsound? a bit too much finish nearby..

[Hard]
<00:31:279> (6) looks better if endpoint is moved toward bottom-right (i.e. x:320 y:272)
<00:45:311> why new combo?
<01:05:391> (7) new combo and remove next new combo
<01:12:891> (5,6,7) a bit not good-looking, arrangement like <01:37:327> (4,5,6) is better
<01:22:811> (1,2,3,4,5) not a straight line
<01:32:972> (5) ^
<01:43:375> (6,8) keep the spacing
<02:34:908> (1,2,3,4) 2 grid up (grid lv4)

nicely done, star!
Topic Starter
Mint Bunny

loveFantasy wrote:

ahaha! hetalia!

since your map had went through many mods (some of them from my respected modders :!: ), i doubt if i can find anything wrong, thus i'm doing some spacing nazi because they can make your map better if fixed.

[General]
- compress both your background image and taiko bg image to JPG format and resubmit done

[Easy]
<00:03:456> (3..) inconsistent spacing on (5,6) done
<00:07:327> (3,4,5) inconsistent spacing done
<00:29:585> (2,3,4) ^, also make their y-coord symmetrical to <00:32:488> (1,2,3) done
<00:47:488> (2) whistle instead No, dosn't fit
<00:49:908> (3) new combo done
<01:32:488> (1) x:304 y:120 (2) x:224 y:56 (3) x:144 y:120 (4) x:177 y:216 (1) x:278 y:211 English please? ;^;
<01:37:327> (2) this finish feel weird, exchange hitsound with (3)? done
<02:17:004> (1) it's ugly, make it less curvy? made it straight on a whim
<02:22:811> (3,4,5) inconsistent spacing done
<02:38:295> (4,1) 2 grid left (grid lv4) will be better That would make it un-aligned
<02:41:198> (4,5,1) inconsistent spacing done

[Normal]
<00:37:811> new combo on (2) instead Dosn't flow well
<01:03:456> (5) new combo, remove next new combo done
<01:20:875> (5) ^ that makes an ugly colour stack
<01:34:424> (3) ^ that makes an ugly colour stack
<01:52:327> (2) 2 grid down (grid lv4) no sorry :<
<02:10:472> new combo on (3) instead done
<02:28:133> (4) use other hitsound? a bit too much finish nearby.. mhmmm

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<00:31:279> (6) looks better if endpoint is moved toward bottom-right (i.e. x:320 y:272) done
<00:45:311> why new combo? removed
<01:05:391> (7) new combo and remove next new combo done
<01:12:891> (5,6,7) a bit not good-looking, arrangement like <01:37:327> (4,5,6) is better done
<01:22:811> (1,2,3,4,5) not a straight line fixed
<01:32:972> (5) ^ fixed
<01:43:375> (6,8) keep the spacing it's the same :|
<02:34:908> (1,2,3,4) 2 grid up (grid lv4) wow tha was really small, done ^.^

nicely done, star!
nice eyes ._.
Kei
I like it *-* star <3
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