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insane
drum-hitfinishes does not even fit the song at the first part of the song plus they're a bit louder imo replacing them with hitwhistles (and not drum-hitwhistle) would fit much better the song
00:00:766 (1,3) - // 00:01:791 (4,6) - // 00:04:868 (1,3) - // 00:05:894 (4,6) - etc. they're overlapping each other ugh they don't look really pleasant visually speaking unstacking them would look more visually cleaner tbh
00:09:483 (2,3) - space them a little more it is clearly that the vocal is a little bit intense and some build-up wouldn't hurt // 00:11:535 (2,3) - same
00:15:124 (1,2,3) - flow feels a bit weird to me moving all of them to 132|258 would make the flow more smoothlier tbh
00:18:201 (3) - a 1/2 slider with repeat works here indeed but it is an insane diff so removing the repeat and have the rhythm formed by 1/2 slider + 1/1 note would be much better
00:21:791 (2,3,4) - would be nice if you will space them more as the vocal is clearly intense and it needs some build-up effect
00:30:509 (4) - this could've ended on 1/4 aswell as the vocal is in extension and spamming only 1/2 sliders is pretty boring lol
00:37:689 (1) - this would work much better if this would end on 1/2 instead // same for 00:39:740 (1) -
00:46:407 (3,4,5) - more spacing plsss
00:47:945 (1,1,1) - i know there are every 1/1 gap between notes but you don't need to overuse the NCs
talking about 00:49:996 (1) - and 00:49:996 (1) - (the kiais) they have to be more distinctive because there are more sliders than notes for instance 00:49:996 (1,2,3,4) - can have the rhythm structured like this: 1/2 slider + 1/1 note + doublets + 1/2 sliders picture so you have to replace some 1/2 sliders with notes as the kiai represents the song's chorus (the intense part of the song) so it should be a little bit harder imo
00:52:176 (2) - this 1/4 note doesn't really have any relevance to the song, not to vocal nor instruments // 00:58:330 (2) - same
00:54:612 (2,3,4) - again, space them more as the instruments and the vocal are pretty intense
01:01:278 (3,4,5,6) - this pattern can be improved as it looks not really nice visually speaking at its current state for example you can do a star pattern well...half-star pattern this will improve the flow and it will look much better visually
01:02:304 (1) - cool it down a bit feels a bit forced imo
01:14:996 (4) - there are no triplets in the song so would have more relevance to leave a 1/2 gap between 01:14:868 (2) - and 01:15:124 (3) - (remove the note lol)
01:16:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you have to cool the spacing down a bit as this part of the song has the same intensity as 00:49:996 (1) - part does
01:24:868 (1,1,1) - same as I stated for 00:47:945 (1,1,1) -
needs more work but looks pretty promising tbh the kiai needs to be a bit more distinctive so that would be perfect in order to fit the song chorus' stronger intensity
gl!
insane
drum-hitfinishes does not even fit the song at the first part of the song plus they're a bit louder imo replacing them with hitwhistles (and not drum-hitwhistle) would fit much better the song
00:00:766 (1,3) - // 00:01:791 (4,6) - // 00:04:868 (1,3) - // 00:05:894 (4,6) - etc. they're overlapping each other ugh they don't look really pleasant visually speaking unstacking them would look more visually cleaner tbh
00:09:483 (2,3) - space them a little more it is clearly that the vocal is a little bit intense and some build-up wouldn't hurt // 00:11:535 (2,3) - same
00:15:124 (1,2,3) - flow feels a bit weird to me moving all of them to 132|258 would make the flow more smoothlier tbh
00:18:201 (3) - a 1/2 slider with repeat works here indeed but it is an insane diff so removing the repeat and have the rhythm formed by 1/2 slider + 1/1 note would be much better
00:21:791 (2,3,4) - would be nice if you will space them more as the vocal is clearly intense and it needs some build-up effect
00:30:509 (4) - this could've ended on 1/4 aswell as the vocal is in extension and spamming only 1/2 sliders is pretty boring lol
00:37:689 (1) - this would work much better if this would end on 1/2 instead // same for 00:39:740 (1) -
00:46:407 (3,4,5) - more spacing plsss
00:47:945 (1,1,1) - i know there are every 1/1 gap between notes but you don't need to overuse the NCs
talking about 00:49:996 (1) - and 00:49:996 (1) - (the kiais) they have to be more distinctive because there are more sliders than notes for instance 00:49:996 (1,2,3,4) - can have the rhythm structured like this: 1/2 slider + 1/1 note + doublets + 1/2 sliders picture so you have to replace some 1/2 sliders with notes as the kiai represents the song's chorus (the intense part of the song) so it should be a little bit harder imo
00:52:176 (2) - this 1/4 note doesn't really have any relevance to the song, not to vocal nor instruments // 00:58:330 (2) - same
00:54:612 (2,3,4) - again, space them more as the instruments and the vocal are pretty intense
01:01:278 (3,4,5,6) - this pattern can be improved as it looks not really nice visually speaking at its current state for example you can do a star pattern well...half-star pattern this will improve the flow and it will look much better visually
01:02:304 (1) - cool it down a bit feels a bit forced imo
01:14:996 (4) - there are no triplets in the song so would have more relevance to leave a 1/2 gap between 01:14:868 (2) - and 01:15:124 (3) - (remove the note lol)
01:16:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you have to cool the spacing down a bit as this part of the song has the same intensity as 00:49:996 (1) - part does
01:24:868 (1,1,1) - same as I stated for 00:47:945 (1,1,1) -
needs more work but looks pretty promising tbh the kiai needs to be a bit more distinctive so that would be perfect in order to fit the song chorus' stronger intensity
gl!