RADWIMPS - Yume Tourou [Osu|CatchTheBeat] · forum

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-10-05T18:37:05+00:00

Good luck

IRC mod Russian

2017-10-05 21:54 makisokk: 00:24:488 (1,2,3) - фиксани бланект
2017-10-05 21:54 makisokk: бланкет*
2017-10-05 21:54 makisokk: и я только на твою дифу мод сделаю
2017-10-05 21:54 My Angel DanyL: ок
2017-10-05 21:54 makisokk: А и еще рк мод подходит?
2017-10-05 21:54 My Angel DanyL: бтв можешь на форум написать мод
2017-10-05 21:54 My Angel DanyL: я кудосу дам
2017-10-05 21:54 My Angel DanyL: что такое рк мод
2017-10-05 21:55 makisokk: ирк*
2017-10-05 21:55 makisokk: Ну типо в чате
2017-10-05 21:55 My Angel DanyL: а
2017-10-05 21:55 makisokk: Я потом просто выкладываю нашу переписку
2017-10-05 21:55 My Angel DanyL: да
2017-10-05 21:55 My Angel DanyL: ок
2017-10-05 21:55 My Angel DanyL: нп
2017-10-05 21:56 makisokk: 00:26:406 (2,3) - имхо, лучше сделать один слайдер вместо этого
2017-10-05 21:56 makisokk: Там же один звук идет
2017-10-05 21:57 My Angel DanyL: а маппается под голос
2017-10-05 21:57 My Angel DanyL: так что нет
2017-10-05 21:57 makisokk: Понял, принял
2017-10-05 21:58 makisokk: 00:27:801 (2) - Этот слайдер тоже?
2017-10-05 21:58 makisokk: Просто я считаю его лучше закончить здесь 00:28:150 -
2017-10-05 21:58 My Angel DanyL: Ок
2017-10-05 21:59 My Angel DanyL: это исправлю
2017-10-05 21:59 makisokk: 00:29:720 (4,1) - можно сделать бланкет, с началом слайдера 1
2017-10-05 22:00 makisokk: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9247948 Вот так]
2017-10-05 22:00 My Angel DanyL: тогда вот эти слайдеры 00:28:674 (1,2,3,4) -
2017-10-05 22:00 My Angel DanyL: буду разные
2017-10-05 22:01 makisokk: Хммм
2017-10-05 22:01 makisokk: Нет же
2017-10-05 22:01 My Angel DanyL: ой
2017-10-05 22:01 My Angel DanyL: не 00:30:069 (1,3,1) -
2017-10-05 22:01 My Angel DanyL: вот эти 00:30:069 (1,3,1) -
2017-10-05 22:01 My Angel DanyL: во
2017-10-05 22:02 makisokk: Ну да, но их можно заменить, Ну в общем решай сам хочешь ли сделать чуть красивее или нет
2017-10-05 22:02 makisokk: Уменьши звук хитсов
2017-10-05 22:02 makisokk: До 15%
2017-10-05 22:02 makisokk: А то слишком орут
2017-10-05 22:02 makisokk: В начале песни
2017-10-05 22:02 makisokk: 00:41:232 - до сюда где-тол
2017-10-05 22:03 My Angel DanyL: ок
2017-10-05 22:03 makisokk: 00:52:394 - Тут уже либо 40-50% сделаешь
2017-10-05 22:03 makisokk: 00:32:162 (3) - есть предложение сделать слайдер кривым
2017-10-05 22:04 makisokk: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9247981 По моему так лучше выглядит]
2017-10-05 22:04 makisokk: 00:33:557 (2) - Конец слайдера на x:88 y:224
2017-10-05 22:05 makisokk: Так флоу лучше
2017-10-05 22:05 My Angel DanyL: так он и так там стоит
2017-10-05 22:05 My Angel DanyL: втф
2017-10-05 22:05 makisokk: Трудна)
2017-10-05 22:05 makisokk: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9247995 В общем так]
2017-10-05 22:06 My Angel DanyL: хз
2017-10-05 22:06 My Angel DanyL: шляпа получается
2017-10-05 22:07 makisokk: Ну круговое лофу же
2017-10-05 22:07 My Angel DanyL: как по мне флоу лучше когда он по фолоу поинтам идёт
2017-10-05 22:07 makisokk: флоу*
2017-10-05 22:09 makisokk: 00:34:255 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Мне вообще не нравится расположение этого паттерна, по моему лучше как-то так [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9248015 сделать]
2017-10-05 22:10 makisokk: 00:50:301 (3,1) - Не меного пофикси бланкет
2017-10-05 22:10 makisokk: 00:52:046 (1) - считаю что это слайдер можно удалить, там нету ни вокала, ни инструментала
2017-10-05 22:11 My Angel DanyL: А я слышу звук
2017-10-05 22:11 My Angel DanyL: может я особенный
2017-10-05 22:12 makisokk: Звук который вы слышите начинается здесь 00:51:697 -
2017-10-05 22:14 makisokk: 00:57:281 (4) - X 118 y 245?
2017-10-05 22:14 My Angel DanyL: ок
2017-10-05 22:15 makisokk: Очень плохой паттерн, 01:01:663 (6,1) - лучше либо слайдер переместить или ноту
2017-10-05 22:15 makisokk: 01:01:832 (1) - а еще лучше слайдер ctrl+j
2017-10-05 22:16 My Angel DanyL: не лучше кстати
2017-10-05 22:16 My Angel DanyL: переделаю паттерн
2017-10-05 22:16 makisokk: 01:03:180 (4) - подвиньте слайдер чуть ниже, чтобы выглядело ровнее
2017-10-05 22:17 My Angel DanyL: подвинул
2017-10-05 22:18 makisokk: 01:23:405 (1,2,3) - между ними сделайте спейс поменьше, а 01:23:742 (3,4,5,6) - тут на оборот увеличьте, потому что идет сильный звук, его можно выразить
2017-10-05 22:19 My Angel DanyL: сделал
2017-10-05 22:20 makisokk: Ладно это все
2017-10-05 22:20 makisokk: Читал гайды какие-нибудь?
2017-10-05 22:20 My Angel DanyL: какие гайды
2017-10-05 22:21 makisokk: t/86329
2017-10-05 22:21 makisokk: t/441929
2017-10-05 22:21 My Angel DanyL: не
2017-10-05 22:21 My Angel DanyL: не читал
2017-10-05 22:21 My Angel DanyL: гайды для лохов
2017-10-05 22:21 My Angel DanyL: так сказать
2017-10-05 22:21 makisokk: Во 2 почти все написано про маппинг
2017-10-05 22:21 makisokk: lul
2017-10-05 22:22 My Angel DanyL: не умею читать
2017-10-05 22:22 My Angel DanyL: я O$3R
2017-10-05 22:22 makisokk: Ты хотя бы читал про ранг критерии?
2017-10-05 22:22 My Angel DanyL: нет
2017-10-05 22:22 makisokk: https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria/osu!
2017-10-05 22:22 makisokk: Вот это
2017-10-05 22:22 makisokk: Вообще самое основое
2017-10-05 22:23 makisokk: Что ты должен знать
2017-10-05 22:23 My Angel DanyL: все эти критерии слишком расплывчаты
2017-10-05 22:23 makisokk: Ну такое
2017-10-05 22:23 makisokk: По моему все четко и понятно
2017-10-05 22:23 My Angel DanyL: Я не думаю что узнаю что-то новое
2017-10-05 22:24 makisokk: Я все равно советую тебе прочитать
2017-10-05 22:24 makisokk: В самом первом что тебе скинул
2017-10-05 22:24 makisokk: Там вообще картинки одни
2017-10-05 22:24 makisokk: Читать ничего не нужно
2017-10-05 22:24 My Angel DanyL: Хорошо
2017-10-05 22:24 My Angel DanyL: Зачекаю
2017-10-05 22:24 My Angel DanyL: Спасибо Ё
2017-10-05 22:24 My Angel DanyL: ~
2017-10-05 22:26 makisokk: https://images6.alphacoders.com/751/751215.png
2017-10-05 22:26 makisokk: Вот тебе бг в фул хаде
2017-10-05 22:27 My Angel DanyL: И что мне с ним сделать?
2017-10-05 22:27 makisokk: Заменить
2017-10-05 22:27 My Angel DanyL: Понял
2017-10-05 22:27 My Angel DanyL: Спасибо
2017-10-05 22:31 makisokk: drum-hitfinish по моему ты его ни разу не использовал
2017-10-05 22:31 makisokk: Ну ясейчас всю карту чекнул
2017-10-05 22:31 makisokk: не нашел его
2017-10-05 22:31 makisokk: Так что его можно удалить
2017-10-05 22:31 makisokk: Наверное
2017-10-05 22:31 makisokk:
2017-10-05 22:31 My Angel DanyL: хм
2017-10-05 22:31 My Angel DanyL: ок

Peter

786 posts

Joined June 2016

Peter 2017-10-06T14:53:22+00:00

Hi from my queue

Easy

This is literally mapped like Normal Diff so why is it Easy then? Rename it because it isn't easy at all ever ar is too high
00:56:438 (3) - this slider is placed weirdly would recommend to do something with 00:56:438 (3,4) maybe like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253149
also make 00:58:461 (2) to look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253157
01:06:551 (2,3,4) - looks messy this would be better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253164 and place 01:08:573 (2) under 01:07:562 (4)
01:08:573 (2,3,4) - hmm there is a problem with shape of slider with reverse arrow make it look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253176
01:12:618 (1) - end of this slider should be under end of previous one like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253192 also place 01:13:967 (1) at under start of this slider
01:12:618 (1)
01:18:686 (4) - broken blanket with previous.. rotate it better

Normal

00:25:185 (3) - looks weird make it to look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253222
00:27:627 (2) - normal whistle hitsound sound awful you should change samples to soft also place it somewhere there http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253236
00:29:022 (3,4,1) - have you ever thought about making them like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253246
00:31:813 (2,3) - placement of this 2 seems so random and weird do something like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253253
00:33:557 (2) - ahh no pls make 00:33:557 (2,3,1,2) to look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253259 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253262
00:37:743 (7) - looks weird stack with 00:37:569 (6) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253265
00:41:581 (2) - should be similar to previous slider not straight
00:46:813 (2,3) - place them like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253282
00:49:953 (1) - oh this looks so bad and NC is unnecessary http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253291
00:54:416 (4,5) - change to slider 1/2 with reverse arrow
00:57:113 (4,5) - - should be one 1/1 slider
01:07:225 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253306
01:44:641 (3) - no pls delete this and map to the rhytm

Hard

00:25:708 (5) - you can place this on end of the 00:24:836 (3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253338 because vocal is getting strong here
00:26:581 (1) - NC (fix that after my other part of mods)
00:37:569 (7) - ^
00:38:441 (10) - fix blanket
00:51:435 (1) - remove
00:52:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - awful jumps i got some better for you tho these 00:52:394 (1,2) -like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253380 and 00:53:068 (3,4,5,6,7)
like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253388
00:54:079 (1,2,3,4) - ahh same would make jumps like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253396 2 circles are under previous ones
Rest of the map has serious PROBLEM with Overlapping in jumps that i showed you overlapping is fixed or circles are under previous objects

Insane

00:34:081 (3,4) - thats weird placement consider to change that
the rest of the map is pretty cool i like that

Well your diff is way above 4 so can't really say whats wrong

RealSekai

10 posts

Joined June 2016

RealSekai 2017-10-06T15:39:30+00:00

PeterEU wrote:
Hi from my queue

Hard
00:25:708 (5) - you can place this on end of the 00:24:836 (3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253338 because vocal is getting strong here no thanks
00:26:581 (1) - NC (fix that after my other part of mods) no
00:37:569 (7) - ^ no
00:38:441 (10) - fix blanket fixed
00:51:435 (1) - remove yea I was thinking about it for a long time
00:52:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - awful jumps i got some better for you tho these 00:52:394 (1,2) -like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253380 and 00:53:068 (3,4,5,6,7)
like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253388 no. unresonably high jump after 4 notes. don't forget that I have to keep diff hard.
00:54:079 (1,2,3,4) - ahh same would make jumps like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253396 2 circles are under previous ones
Rest of the map has serious PROBLEM with Overlapping in jumps that i showed you overlapping is fixed or circles are under previous objects no. didn't you think that overlaping is kinda gimick here. don't fire pls

we just see the song in different ways

thank you for the mod

-Mikan

807 posts

Joined September 2016

-Mikan 2017-10-06T16:15:09+00:00

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
Hello!
From my modding queue.
Mikan's Easy
Setting AR = 5 is extremely fast to new players to follow the objects in a 172~178 bpm map.
I suggest you decrease it to about 3.
00:24:488 - Volume setting of uninherited timing point (the red line) and inherited timing point (the green line) conflict.
Ranking Critiria wrote:
No two uninherited or two inherited timing points can be placed at the same point. Having two uninherited or two inherited timing points on top of each other will cause unintended behavior for slider velocity and volume settings.
So, to avoid such a question, you can choose to:
(1) Delete the uninherited timing point so that the slider velocity and volume setting depends of only the inherited timing point, or
(2) Set the volume of uninherited timing point to 40% so that there are no more inconsistency between the uninherited timing point and the inherited timing point.
00:24:488 - 00:52:394 - this section use 1.5x as general distance setting, while 00:52:394 - 02:05:034 - use 1.0x as general distance setting.
Ranking Criteria osu! wrote:
(In an Easy difficulty) Time-distance equality should be used. Variations are acceptable if they are clearly different from spacing used for different rhythms. When hit objects are more than 2 beats apart and have relatively high spacing on the playfield, time-distance equality does not need to be as precise.
Time-distance equality in lower difficulties can ensure that players can easily follow and click those objects. So it's better to making sure that you use the same distance setting in your map: either 1.0x everywhere, or 1.5x everywhere.
However, if you have chosen the 1.5x distance for global distance setting, here are still some inconsistency in your map. Let me take some examples and show you how to solve them properly:
~
00:32:860 (2,3,1) - distance between those three objects are not consistent.
So making sure that distance enter 00:32:860 (2) - and 00:34:255 (3) - is equal to whose enter 00:34:255 (3) - and 00:35:650 (1) - .
Here is one of my solution (not changing the position of 00:32:860 (2) - ):

- [00:24:863 (2,1) - : ^. Here, as 00:43:325 (1,2,3) - is an ensemble and the position of 00:45:418 (3) - will strongly influence the time-distance equality, I suggest you to:
(1) First, change 00:42:627 (3) - and 00:45:418 (3) - into sliders which will not only make us become easier to realize the time-distance equality, but also can represent the sound at 00:42:976 - / 00:45:418 (3) - as well,
(2) and second, adjust the position of the ensemble 00:43:325 (1,2,3) - to approach the time-distance equality.
Here is one of my solution, with the aesthetic of your map also kept:
]
(!) If you accepted those two issues, here is one more thing: the note 00:48:208 (3) - , as my previous logic, should be changed to 1/1 slider too so that sound at 00:48:557 - can be represented (keep the "consistency"). However, here we have not distance inconsistency (between 00:48:208 (3,1) - ). At that time, I prefer to keep the "consistency" as it will make your map become more logical. Besides, here is another distance inconsistent pair: 00:49:953 (2,3) - .
So here is my solution with both those 2 problems solved (I have chosen 00:48:208 (3) - in the picture as it's quite hard to show all of those 4 objects: 00:48:208 (3,1,2,3) - synchronously:
]
After you fix that, you may discover that the distance between 00:50:999 (3,1) - is less than 1.50x. However, according to Ranking Criteria osu! above, it said that "When hit objects are more than 2 beats apart and have relatively high spacing on the playfield, time-distance equality does not need to be as precise." So this time, that is no longer a problem for us.
So above is my way to fix distance problems. Also at the 178bpm part, there are also distance inconsistency like at 01:23:405 (1,2) - . Try to find them out and use your proper way to fix them!
~
00:55:764 (2,3) - Flow here isn't quite good. The current direction of those sliders will let player "draw an acute angle", which is a little bit hard for new players:

Generally, we will put objects, in lower difficulties, more "natural": that means we will put an object, after a slider, at "the invisible trajectory of which the previous slider has given a moving 'trend'".
To explain it more directly, here is my solution: (also re-arranged 00:57:113 (4,1) - a bit, you can see my remarks below)
00:59:809 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved, current one is obviously out.
- [01:15:652 (3,1) - : ^. There are sometimes that we "intensely" don't want to make a blanket, but here as it seems you want to make a blanket, then better make it perfectly.]
01:31:495 (3,1) - try to avoid this kind of "tiny overlap", it will influence the aesthetic of your map. rotate 01:32:843 (1) - anti-clockwise (using ctrl+shift+R) a little bit (keep the blanket!) can easily solve this problem.
01:42:618 (1,2) - those two new combo setting should be swapped, as you setting new combo on every two long white timing points.
01:48:011 (4,2) - try not completely overlapping them together, as it may cause reading problems to new players.
Ranking Criteria osu! wrote:
(In an Easy difficulty) Avoid overlapping circles, slider heads, and slider tails. These can be confusing for new players. 1/1 overlaps due to distance snapping should be avoided with higher spacing or slider velocity.
So it would be better to separate them. Here is one of my proposals:
Need to focus more on mapping foundation.
Fixed all

PeterEU wrote:
Hi from my queue

Easy
This is literally mapped like Normal Diff so why is it Easy then? Rename it because it isn't easy at all ever ar is too high
00:56:438 (3) - this slider is placed weirdly would recommend to do something with 00:56:438 (3,4) maybe like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253149
also make 00:58:461 (2) to look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253157
01:06:551 (2,3,4) - looks messy this would be better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253164 and place 01:08:573 (2) under 01:07:562 (4)
01:08:573 (2,3,4) - hmm there is a problem with shape of slider with reverse arrow make it look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253176
01:12:618 (1) - end of this slider should be under end of previous one like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253192 also place 01:13:967 (1) at under start of this slider
01:12:618 (1)
01:18:686 (4) - broken blanket with previous.. rotate it better
Almost all was Fixed already

Thanks for mods

~

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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Title:Yume Tourou
TitleUnicode:夢灯籠
Artist:RADWIMPS
ArtistUnicode:RADWIMPS
Creator:My Angel DanyL
Version:Mikan's Easy
Source:君の名は。
Tags:ki mi no na wa your name yojiro noda makoto shinkai opening op realsekai shavix YshadowXOP_ victorfernando
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victorfernando

292 posts

Joined October 2016

victorfernando 2017-10-06T18:41:01+00:00

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
Shavix's Insane
NC issue is the same with what I have mentioned in Hard difficulty.
00:24:488 - Volume setting issue is the same with which in Easy difficulty.
00:33:557 (1,2,3) - If you want to follow the vocal, then rhythm here is kinda out. In fact, vocal here is 1/3 so the correct rhythm should be:
Correct Rhythm
00:41:232 (1,2) - blanket here is a little bit out. (And don't forget to re-stack 00:42:453 (4) - if you change the position of 2)
- [00:46:639 (5,1) - : ^.]
01:30:483 (7,1,2,3) - flow here feels unnatural. 01:30:820 (1) - doesn't follow the trend of 01:30:483 (7) - proprely, and the strong vocal at 01:31:495 - is not well emphasized. Here is my solution: (This way is fine to me)
Solution
01:59:472 (3,4,5) - here should be the same rhythm with 00:57:450 (4) - (1/6).
02:01:832 (1,2,3,4,5) - As there is (relatively) no strong sound on blue timing point, I suggest to just put 2 note + 1 slider here. (Overmap feels not represent the song really well)
Solid work.
No reply fixed

victorfernando

292 posts

Joined October 2016

victorfernando 2017-10-06T18:44:42+00:00

Nostalgic wrote:
Hello m4m!

ShaVix
disable widescreen support (OK)
01:40:090 (3,1,2) - too obtuse (TRIED SOMETHING DIFFERENT)
01:50:708 (4) - shouldn't it be placed somewhere like 281,337? (OK)
pretty solid map, nothing more to add <3

GL

victorfernando

292 posts

Joined October 2016

victorfernando 2017-10-06T18:48:53+00:00

Terton wrote:
o/

[ShaVix's Insane]
Disable "Widescreen Support".
00:33:557 (1,2) - Overmap on end of the slider and note.
00:43:325 (3) - On slider's end ^
01:47:337 (2) - ^
00:53:320 (5) - There's no sound.
01:40:511 (3) - ^
02:01:916 (2,4) - ^
01:01:832 (1) - Delete NC there and make it on 01:02:506 (3)
01:30:146 (6) - Kiai needs to start from NC.
OK <3

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-10-07T05:47:18+00:00

Hi! From my queue

Xetopia's Rain

00:44:720 (3) - curve this a little? forced to dash in opposite position
00:53:742 (8) - nc pls
01:02:506 (1) - nc pls
01:29:809 (8,9) - reduce the spacing while remaining hdash since it's too far
01:33:517 (3) - ctrl+G, ctrl+H then x:352
01:37:225 (2) - this note is very overdose-like so I suggest changing this to easier pattern or reduce the distance
01:37:899 (6) - ^^
01:38:236 (1) - same case as 00:44:720 (3)
01:55:764 (6) - nc pls
01:56:438 (8) - I suggest reducing the spacing to normal dash since it's too hard
01:59:472 (6,7,8,9) - this stream is too hard for rain I suggest this
02:00:146 (2) - move this following ^^ and make the end of the slider normal dash
02:01:158 (5) - same case as 01:37:225 (2)

Nice map btw, Had fun modding this

Nelly's Overdose

Check AiMod pls
00:50:999 (1) - a normal 1/2 slider would be better? since it was a sudden Hdash and a sudden change of direction
00:54:585 (5,6) - I suggest replacing (5) with a note and (6) with a slider >> like this to emphasize the clap sound
00:59:978 (4,5) - ^^
01:00:483 (1) - more circular shape?
01:34:697 (2) - flatten the slider out would flow better (here)
01:45:652 (4,5,6,7) - ctrl+shift+R then rotate clockwise -28 then move to x:76
01:46:326 (1) - you can move this closer while remaining Hdash following above change
01:56:607 (5,6) - same case as 00:54:585 (5,6)
02:02:000 (4,5) - same case as 00:59:978 (4,5)
02:04:191 (5) - too much dash until the next note maybe? I need to hold dash in order to catch them all I suggest split it like this
02:04:528 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest making the streams "\ /" or "/ \" (or else if you intended to make antiflow streams then don't change)

This map flows really well even without a mod! I had fun playing and modding this!

Hope this helps!

Kimitakari

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Kimitakari 2017-10-07T07:30:40+00:00

-Luminate wrote:
Hi! From my queue
Nelly's Overdose
Check AiMod pls
00:50:999 (1) - a normal 1/2 slider would be better? since it was a sudden Hdash and a sudden change of direction Denied because of the sudden sound in 00:51:348 (2)
00:54:585 (5,6) - I suggest replacing (5) with a note and (6) with a slider >> like this to emphasize the clap sound
00:59:978 (4,5) - ^^
01:00:483 (1) - more circular shape?
01:34:697 (2) - flatten the slider out would flow better (here)
01:45:652 (4,5,6,7) - ctrl+shift+R then rotate clockwise -28 then move to x:76 Didn't touched the calculation but I did a thing as you said
01:46:326 (1) - you can move this closer while remaining Hdash following above change
01:56:607 (5,6) - same case as 00:54:585 (5,6) Straight slider changed to the moving slider
02:02:000 (4,5) - same case as 00:59:978 (4,5) Same as the above
02:04:191 (5) - too much dash until the next note maybe? I need to hold dash in order to catch them all I suggest split it like this Nah
02:04:528 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest making the streams "\ /" or "/ \" (or else if you intended to make antiflow streams then don't change) Well yeah I originally wanted to make these kind of streams but I decited to make this pattern a bit harder and it worked so I'm keeping it
This map flows really well even without a mod! I had fun playing and modding this! I tried
Hope this helps!

No replies means accepted. Thanks for mod! https://puu.sh/xS35S/545e322b81.osu

Xetopia

240 posts

Joined June 2015

Xetopia 2017-10-07T10:13:58+00:00

[quote="-Luminate"]Hi! From my queue

Xetopia's Rain

00:44:720 (3) - curve this a little? forced to dash in opposite position - ok
00:53:742 (8) - nc pls - ok
01:02:506 (1) - nc pls - ok
01:29:809 (8,9) - reduce the spacing while remaining hdash since it's too far - ok
01:33:517 (3) - ctrl+G, ctrl+H then x:352 - no) the rhythm will not change so it does not make sense
01:37:225 (2) - this note is very overdose-like so I suggest changing this to easier pattern or reduce the distance - hmm, no? i think
01:37:899 (6) - ^^ - I agree, fixed
01:38:236 (1) - same case as 00:44:720 (3) - ok
01:55:764 (6) - nc pls - ok
01:56:438 (8) - I suggest reducing the spacing to normal dash since it's too hard - uaaa, but it better reflects music i thinkl
01:59:472 (6,7,8,9) - this stream is too hard for rain I suggest this -ok
02:00:146 (2) - move this following ^^ and make the end of the slider normal dash - ok
02:01:158 (5) - same case as 01:37:225 (2) - also no)

Nice map btw, Had fun modding this -///-

Thanks for mod <3 <3 <3

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224,256,73629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,208,73798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,256,83995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,84585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,80,84753,6,0,P|464:160|368:208,1,190
480,256,85259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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352,192,85764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,176,87113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,87281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,208,87450,6,0,L|448:304,1,95
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80,240,88124,2,0,L|192:240,1,95
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416,224,89304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,96,91158,2,0,L|32:112,1,95
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144,80,92169,2,0,L|32:80,1,95
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64,288,93349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,191,93517,2,0,P|285:156|286:66,1,190
416,80,94023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,94191,2,0,L|96:272,1,95
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352,48,95371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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32,64,96888,6,0,L|48:160,1,95
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288,288,97899,2,0,L|416:288,1,95
128,48,98236,6,0,P|96:128|192:160,1,190
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224,208,99922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,288,100090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,80,100596,2,0,L|96:208,1,95
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432,224,102281,6,0,L|304:224,1,95
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336,48,102955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,103124,2,0,L|80:80,1,95
400,176,103461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,192,104135,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,104304,2,0,L|464:160,2,95
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320,336,105652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,288,106073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,288,106158,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,96,106326,6,0,L|352:96,1,95
240,176,106663,2,0,L|368:176,1,95
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80,256,108180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,108349,2,0,L|128:240,1,95
384,160,108686,2,0,L|400:64,1,95
32,112,109023,6,0,P|112:144|222:77,2,190
320,192,110034,2,0,L|224:192,1,95
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320,320,110624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,110708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,110877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,111045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,80,111382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,111551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,111719,6,0,L|208:64,1,95
320,64,112056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,112225,2,0,L|288:160,1,95
128,256,112562,2,0,L|224:256,1,95
336,256,112899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,112,113068,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,113236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,208,113573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,114416,6,0,L|320:208,1,95
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240,128,115343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,115427,2,0,L|64:80,1,95
400,144,115764,6,0,L|432:256,1,95
176,272,116101,2,0,L|288:256,1,95
32,192,116438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,116607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
81,82,116776,2,0,L|192:96,1,95
448,128,117113,6,0,L|336:144,1,95
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128,192,117955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,118040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,118124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,118292,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,118461,5,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,118545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,118629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,256,118798,2,0,L|208:240,1,95
432,128,119135,2,0,L|336:160,1,95
96,80,119472,2,0,L|80:144,1,47.5
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208,256,120146,2,0,L|112:272,1,95
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64,64,120820,2,0,L|80:160,1,95
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416,288,121579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,121663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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352,192,122000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,112,122169,6,0,L|192:112,1,95
416,96,122506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,122674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,122759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,240,122843,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,288,123011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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kanor

924 posts

Joined August 2013

kanor 2017-10-07T13:19:59+00:00

M4M from my Q
[Genal]
[*]Plz make the tags and Preview times same, they are unrankable
[*]Unused hitsounds:
soft-hitclap2.wav
[*]SVs spread in diffs are quite wired, Easy is 1.2, Normal is 1.0, Hard is 1.8(almost use it at Extra and above), tough to explain why svs in Easy is quicker than Normals.
so deeply advice to change into 1.0 , 1.2 , 1.4 spread, whcih would be better than those now.
[Easy]
00:24:488 (unconsistent volume level)
HP2 CS3 AR3 OD2 would be better imo
try to avoid uncessary overlap like 00:30:767 (2,3) -(you ctrl+G 3)and 00:32:162 (1,2) - (you can move it away)
like I said at Genal, sv are too high for a easy diff, so deeply recommend to nerf it
[Normal]
00:42:104 - cuz you follow most of the vocals so it maybe confused the players if you miss here
00:54:416 (4,5) - most of patterns like this in this diff can change into a repeat slider like 01:02:506 (5) - to make it looks more clean
01:28:629 (3,1,2) - how about this, orignal version's overlap looks not as pretty as it would be

[Hard]
00:24:488 (unconsistent volume level)
amazing beginning
00:52:731 (2,3,6,7,1,3,4) - over lap here looks a little mess, and its the most question in this diff
[Insane]
00:24:488 (unconsistent hitsound set)
00:52:394 - (unconsistent hitsound set)
GL!

Peter

786 posts

Joined June 2016

Peter 2017-10-07T13:46:38+00:00

Nvm then

Last edited by Peter 2017-10-07T17:20:03+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Dizick

221 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Dizick 2017-10-07T14:12:07+00:00

PeterEU wrote:

Btw i'm wondering if you are still accepting GD's because i've made pretty decent one you should try if you are not accepting gd's thats ok

GD

osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:RADWIMPS
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Version:PeterEU's Advanced
Source:君の名は。
Tags:ki mi no na wa your name yojiro noda makoto shinkai opening op reaksekai shavix YshadowXOP_ victorfernando
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Sorry, GD already closed

Lami

1,756 posts

Joined June 2011

Lami 2017-10-07T17:24:52+00:00

uhh,

[Extra]

hp 6, 5.5 feels so low about overall diffculty
btw, insane have hp 7 D:

00:42:627 (1,2,3) - make same DS with 00:44:370 (1,2,3,4) -
00:45:418 (1,4) - same ^ should be make same DS with 00:45:941 (3,4) - (visuality)
00:51:697 - too empty rhythm, imo.
01:03:180 - eh, i think this section need some nerfed DS.
this section is so relax. but diffculty looks like kinda kiai time.
compare with 01:30:146 - this section, they have so similar diffculty imo.
but they are not same mood :thinking:

Dizick

221 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Dizick 2017-10-07T19:01:39+00:00

Lami wrote:
uhh,

[Extra]

hp 6, 5.5 feels so low about overall diffculty
btw, insane have hp 7 D:

00:42:627 (1,2,3) - make same DS with 00:44:370 (1,2,3,4) - fix
00:45:418 (1,4) - same ^ should be make same DS with 00:45:941 (3,4) - (visuality) ---
00:51:697 - too empty rhythm, imo. ---
01:03:180 - eh, i think this section need some nerfed DS.
this section is so relax. but diffculty looks like kinda kiai time.
compare with 01:30:146 - this section, they have so similar diffculty imo.
but they are not same mood :thinking: ---

thanks!!!

Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2017-10-08T03:37:31+00:00

Hi. Here from my queue. Hope this helps!

[General]

Hitsounds are funky but there's too much I disagree with to spend my time on.

[What is your name?]

00:28:674 (1,2) – smaller angle off the x-axis generally looks better to me: http://puu.sh/xSECf/440545c93b.jpg

00:34:604 (3,4) – These sliders aren't aesthetically pleasing. Here are some reasons I feel this way:

(3) is purely horizontal. You don't really use purely horizontal or vertical sliders throughout this opening section. (3) sticks out as a result which is odd because it's not an incorporated component of the map.
(3) and (4) are both straight sliders, but their angles off the x-axis are completely unrelated. They don't feel connected with each other.
The visual spacing between 00:34:429 (2,3,4) – isn't all the same
Consider an aesthetic like http://puu.sh/xSFim/3bc559b0b1.jpg . I'm not saying you should use this design/flow if you don't want, but look at the different connections between them. (3) blankets (2), (4) blankets (3), and (2,3,4) are equal spacing (forming a triangle): http://puu.sh/xSFnV/1b5c828d3e.jpg. There's a lot of ways the the pattern fits together with itself, and one thing I think you can do a better job of is trying to fit the patterns together more like this. (It's not like you're not doing this, I see a lot of good design techniques. But I think you can do more of them in the map)

Go to the expert of this map and copy 00:10:353 (1) - . Then paste it near 02:00:795 (3) – and flip it 90 degrees by doing ctrl + > and/or flip the slider (whatever you need to do to make it match). See how it's still the same direction. Their just copy and flipped/scaled versions of the same thing. And you can do that for any straight slider you see throughout that map. I know you do this locally in your map, but you can also do it globablly. That concept (the angle off the x-axis) is an incorporated component of the map which better connects all the patterns to one another. Copy pasting your straight sliders like this goes a long way to improve the aesthetics of the map.

00:44:720 (3,4) – blanket these. It will connect the sliders visually.

01:03:011 (1,2) – Consider deleting (2) and making (1) a ¼ slider to go more with the guitar

01:24:753 (1) – This section felt stronger than your kiai which I think is not good pacing

Wanted to do more on this, but have to prioritize other diffs.

[Milar's Normal]

On a Normal, it's easier and more preferable to keep the same DS throughout the song.

Work on your aesthetics. I'd rather make rhythm suggestions.

If you don't understand why I'm making a suggestion, find me in game and feel free to ask.

00:27:278 (1,2,1,2) – Consider this rhythm http://puu.sh/xSFEE/ce31ce8fc0.jpg

00:29:371 (4,1) – Spacing and flow is really awkward. People who play Normal's don't have a lot of mapping experience, so you don't need to do too much fancy stuff. A basic flow/design will be great here.

00:30:069 (1,2) – felt inconsistent with the rhythm at 00:24:488 (1,2,3) - . There is an “i” sound at 00:30:592 – in the vocals that can use a circle.

00:31:464 – would prefer this to be clickable

00:44:546 – and 00:47:336 – and 00:50:127 – there are some faint drum sounds on these notes. In general, this section felt a little bland by being all sliders with no ½ notes which is a big departure from what 00:35:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) – was doing. Try acknowledging some these drum sounds to offer a bit of variety in the map. Or hey, do some ½ notes on the vocals when appropriate.

00:50:650 (1) – Normal players suck at sliders. A lot. The combination of this being a very short slider and not much recovery time into the next note at 00:52:394 (1) – makes this problematic. Try not doing a spinner and just using some other objects for the rhythm here.

01:14:978 (3,4,5) – This is a lot of ½ rhythm, but the song isn't that energetic here, so it felt too intense in the map. Try deleting (4) and making (3) into a ½ slider.

01:19:697 (2) – This being a ½ slider didn't feel great. Tails of sliders aren't clickable, so it's hard to tell that you're expressing the singer there. Consider making this a circle instead.

01:25:933 (4) – Try making this a 1/1 slider.

01:27:113 (7) – There's no drum note here, and you're mostly going with the drum, so I'd rather you delete this.

01:27:450 (1,3,1) – This overlap looks bad. Just avoid it. 01:28:629 (3,1,2) – These overlaps are fine.

01:30:483 (2,3) – At some time, you were emphasizing vocals, so it feels weird this rhythm is not intense when the vocals support some half rhythms like http://puu.sh/xSGfG/752a14ba21.jpg

01:38:236 (1,2,3) – Are you mapping the vocals or the drums? Pick one. The people who like the long (1) slider want to do more long sliders. The people who don't are unhappy with the long slider and would have preferred a normal 1/1 slider. By trying to satisfy two different audiences, you don't satisfy anyone.

01:40:933 (1,2,3,1,2) – Same kind of issue. The first combo ignores vocals and does drum, the second combo ignores drums and does vocals.

01:44:641 (3) – Please don't use sliders with more than one white node in the middle. It creates funky looking sliders when other slider shapes are better.

01:44:641 (3) – As for the rhythm, I generally avoid long sliders like this because they don't have a lot of clicks in them, so there isn't much game to play without clicking. You can still have long restful sliders without missing out on other rhythms. Find a place to transition to the drums.

01:47:674 (1) – Ending this at 01:48:180 – would fit nicely with the vocals.

[RealSekai's Hard]

I don't like a lot of the aesthetics in the map, particularly a lot of the overlaps. Basically, wherever you see two objects overlapping, you should change it to either stack completely on other circles/sliderends/sliderheads or just not overlap what so ever. I'm also lazy and don't want to mod this for the above reason. So if you want, you can ask me specific questions about specific patterns in game, especially if they relate to aesthetics.

[Shavix's Insane]

00:39:836 (1,3,4) – Make all these the same angle off the horizontal/vertical axis.

00:33:906 (2,3,4) – why are these spaced differently?

00:57:450 (4,1,2) – I know you want to keep the right distances/flows between your patterns. Try moving (1) and (4) down so that you can do more of an overlap like this since currently you know your overlap is risky http://puu.sh/xSH5l/5fb82e67ef.jpg.

01:12:281 (1) – Why the ¾ slider? Feels really out of place since you don't use this mechanic elsewhere in the map.

01:13:967 (1,1) – There are enough places like this in the map that I kind of want to copy paste what I said in the Extra:

Go to the expert of this map and copy 00:10:353 (1) - . Then paste it near 02:00:795 (3) – and flip it 90 degrees by doing ctrl + > and/or flip the slider (whatever you need to do to make it match). See how it's still the same direction. Their just copy and flipped/scaled versions of the same thing. And you can do that for any straight slider you see throughout that map. I know you do this locally in your map, but you can also do it globablly. That concept (the angle off the x-axis) is an incorporated component of the map which better connects all the patterns to one another. Copy pasting your straight sliders like this goes a long way to improve the aesthetics of the map.

01:19:360 – Having this not be clickable was weird. The singer/music isn't doing what it did at 01:16:663 (2) - , and so this white tick feels like it needs more expression. Same could be said for 01:18:349 - .

01:24:416 (4) - “interesting” 01:26:776 (4) - “oh, that's the slider shape for this drum section. Cool.” 01:28:124 (4) – “wait, why isn't this the same shape as the others?”

01:30:483 (7,1) – Flow felt a bit odd

01:31:495 (3,4) – Make these the same angle (I.e copy paste one on the other)

01:33:517 (1,2,3) – Try making the Ds's between these to form a triangle? http://puu.sh/xSHvS/870bf08c63.jpg

01:39:585 (2,3,4,5) – This is a messy structure. Compare to something like this trapezoid structure: http://puu.sh/xSHGi/ae0f67fa14.jpg

01:45:315 (1) – Drums are cool here. I would encourage you to shorten this slider so you can let the player experience them.

01:49:023 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3) – Since there is a faint drum kick at 01:49:613 - , I really expected this to be a triple. Overall, whatever you want to do, I'm on your side. You want to be chill and not do ¼, that's fine, I'm happy to play that. You want to do triples, I'm cool with that too. But by stacking 01:49:528 (1,2) – when there is a ¼ note in between them, you really send the signal that this is going to be triple. Don't send signals you don't intend. If you don't want to change the rhythm, do a jump instead of stacking. If you want to keep the stack, make this a ¼ note.

01:50:540 (4,5) – This one I'm not on your side. You should do a ¼ note at 01:50:624 – since the drums are sweet here and also do it at 01:50:708 (5,1,2) - .

01:53:068 (4,5,6,7) – These could be linear, but (7) isn't on the line. These could be curved, but (4,5,6) aren't curved. I like curving: http://puu.sh/xSI0e/510e5296da.jpg

01:53:152 (5) – But actually, delete this since there isn't a note in the music here.

01:54:416 – Please please please please make this clickable. This is way too strong a note to map passively with a slider end. Making 01:54:079 (2) – into a circle accomplishes so much of the same thing to cover the vocals and it allows you to put a clickable object on the strong downbeat.

There were some spacing and flow things I disagreed with like 01:42:955 (3,4,1) – which happens in every map, but overall this is a nice map.

[]

Good luck!

Dizick

221 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Dizick 2017-10-08T07:11:04+00:00

pinataman wrote:
Hi. Here from my queue. Hope this helps!

[General]

Hitsounds are funky but there's too much I disagree with to spend my time on.

[What is your name?]

00:28:674 (1,2) – smaller angle off the x-axis generally looks better to me: http://puu.sh/xSECf/440545c93b.jpg Fix

00:34:604 (3,4) – These sliders aren't aesthetically pleasing. Here are some reasons I feel this way: Fix
(3) is purely horizontal. You don't really use purely horizontal or vertical sliders throughout this opening section. (3) sticks out as a result which is odd because it's not an incorporated component of the map.
(3) and (4) are both straight sliders, but their angles off the x-axis are completely unrelated. They don't feel connected with each other.
The visual spacing between 00:34:429 (2,3,4) – isn't all the same
Consider an aesthetic like http://puu.sh/xSFim/3bc559b0b1.jpg . I'm not saying you should use this design/flow if you don't want, but look at the different connections between them. (3) blankets (2), (4) blankets (3), and (2,3,4) are equal spacing (forming a triangle): http://puu.sh/xSFnV/1b5c828d3e.jpg. There's a lot of ways the the pattern fits together with itself, and one thing I think you can do a better job of is trying to fit the patterns together more like this. (It's not like you're not doing this, I see a lot of good design techniques. But I think you can do more of them in the map)
Go to the expert of this map and copy 00:10:353 (1) - . Then paste it near 02:00:795 (3) – and flip it 90 degrees by doing ctrl + > and/or flip the slider (whatever you need to do to make it match). See how it's still the same direction. Their just copy and flipped/scaled versions of the same thing. And you can do that for any straight slider you see throughout that map. I know you do this locally in your map, but you can also do it globablly. That concept (the angle off the x-axis) is an incorporated component of the map which better connects all the patterns to one another. Copy pasting your straight sliders like this goes a long way to improve the aesthetics of the map. Ok

00:44:720 (3,4) – blanket these. It will connect the sliders visually. no

01:03:011 (1,2) – Consider deleting (2) and making (1) a ¼ slider to go more with the guitar no

01:24:753 (1) – This section felt stronger than your kiai which I think is not good pacing Ok

Wanted to do more on this, but have to prioritize other diffs.

Good luck!

Thanks very much for mod!

-Mikan

807 posts

Joined September 2016

-Mikan 2017-10-08T17:00:08+00:00

Done

~

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ShinodaYuu

631 posts

Joined May 2016

ShinodaYuu 2017-10-08T20:31:39+00:00

PeterEU wrote:
Hi from my queue

Normal
00:25:185 (3) - looks weird make it to look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253222 Fixed
00:27:627 (2) - normal whistle hitsound sound awful you should change samples to soft also place it somewhere there http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253236 ^
00:29:022 (3,4,1) - have you ever thought about making them like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253246 ^
00:31:813 (2,3) - placement of this 2 seems so random and weird do something like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253253 ^
00:33:557 (2) - ahh no pls make 00:33:557 (2,3,1,2) to look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253259 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253262 I don't see why it's bad
00:37:743 (7) - looks weird stack with 00:37:569 (6) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253265 It follows the same rule as all pattern, if the previos circles were stcked I would stack these as well
00:41:581 (2) - should be similar to previous slider not straight That's also some kind of rule in this part, but if more people will complane I'll change it
00:46:813 (2,3) - place them like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253282 Fixed
00:49:953 (1) - oh this looks so bad and NC is unnecessary http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253291 ^
00:54:416 (4,5) - change to slider 1/2 with reverse arrow ^
00:57:113 (4,5) - - should be one 1/1 slider I don't thionk so
01:07:225 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253306 Fixed
01:44:641 (3) - no pls delete this and map to the rhytm ^

Thanks

kanor wrote:
M4M from my Q

[Normal]
00:42:104 - cuz you follow most of the vocals so it maybe confused the players if you miss here I mapped only a few part like this just to don't make it 1/1 spam, this part follows the music
00:54:416 (4,5) - most of patterns like this in this diff can change into a repeat slider like 01:02:506 (5) - to make it looks more clean Fixed
01:28:629 (3,1,2) - how about this, orignal version's overlap looks not as pretty as it would be Should be better now

GL!
Thx

pinataman wrote:
Hi. Here from my queue. Hope this helps!

[Milar's Normal]

On a Normal, it's easier and more preferable to keep the same DS throughout the song. Fixed

Work on your aesthetics. I'd rather make rhythm suggestions.

If you don't understand why I'm making a suggestion, find me in game and feel free to ask.

00:27:278 (1,2,1,2) – Consider this rhythm http://puu.sh/xSFEE/ce31ce8fc0.jpg It simply follows the guitar

00:29:371 (4,1) – Spacing and flow is really awkward. People who play Normal's don't have a lot of mapping experience, so you don't need to do too much fancy stuff. A basic flow/design will be great here. Should be better

00:30:069 (1,2) – felt inconsistent with the rhythm at 00:24:488 (1,2,3) - . There is an “i” sound at 00:30:592 – in the vocals that can use a circle. Oh, that's something I missed

00:31:464 – would prefer this to be clickable

00:44:546 – and 00:47:336 – and 00:50:127 – there are some faint drum sounds on these notes. In general, this section felt a little bland by being all sliders with no ½ notes which is a big departure from what 00:35:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) – was doing. Try acknowledging some these drum sounds to offer a bit of variety in the map. Or hey, do some ½ notes on the vocals when appropriate. OK, I know what are you talking about, but look these parts are different. In first one, vocals were something really separated from music rhythm, but in the second, vocals start to be very close to music, so I did what vocals did, prioritised music. However I place some 1/2 notes

00:50:650 (1) – Normal players suck at sliders. A lot. The combination of this being a very short slider and not much recovery time into the next note at 00:52:394 (1) – makes this problematic. Try not doing a spinner and just using some other objects for the rhythm here. Changed

01:14:978 (3,4,5) – This is a lot of ½ rhythm, but the song isn't that energetic here, so it felt too intense in the map. Try deleting (4) and making (3) into a ½ slider. In this part new instuments appear plus everything is louder. I think that one pattern like this in this part (Imo it's energetic) is not much, but will change if more people'll complain

01:19:697 (2) – This being a ½ slider didn't feel great. Tails of sliders aren't clickable, so it's hard to tell that you're expressing the singer there. Consider making this a circle instead.Changed

01:25:933 (4) – Try making this a 1/1 slider. It's same as 01:28:124 (2) - I think it follows song well

01:27:113 (7) – There's no drum note here, and you're mostly going with the drum, so I'd rather you delete this. Same as 01:26:438 (5) - , your verion is also good but I like mine better

01:27:450 (1,3,1) – This overlap looks bad. Just avoid it. 01:28:629 (3,1,2) – These overlaps are fine.AFixed

01:30:483 (2,3) – At some time, you were emphasizing vocals, so it feels weird this rhythm is not intense when the vocals support some half rhythms like http://puu.sh/xSGfG/752a14ba21.jpg Every object here is a syllable, and there's none of them on halbbeats there

01:38:236 (1,2,3) – Are you mapping the vocals or the drums? Pick one. The people who like the long (1) slider want to do more long sliders. The people who don't are unhappy with the long slider and would have preferred a normal 1/1 slider. By trying to satisfy two different audiences, you don't satisfy anyone.Fixed

01:40:933 (1,2,3,1,2) – Same kind of issue. The first combo ignores vocals and does drum, the second combo ignores drums and does vocals. Fixed

01:44:641 (3) – Please don't use sliders with more than one white node in the middle. It creates funky looking sliders when other slider shapes are better. ^

01:44:641 (3) – As for the rhythm, I generally avoid long sliders like this because they don't have a lot of clicks in them, so there isn't much game to play without clicking. You can still have long restful sliders without missing out on other rhythms. Find a place to transition to the drums. ^

01:47:674 (1) – Ending this at 01:48:180 – would fit nicely with the vocals.Changed but in other way

Good luck!
Thanks

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Bokkie

276 posts

Joined June 2014

Bokkie 2017-10-09T14:15:54+00:00

Hi from my queue c:

[What is your name?]

00:29:371 (3) - stack it with 00:30:767 (3) -
00:30:069 (1) - rotate it by 25°. ctrl+G and stack it with 00:30:767 (3) -
00:56:438 (1) - and 00:56:776 (2) - ctrl+G them (separately!) for better flow
01:02:169 (2,3) - this breaks the flow; consider rotating it by 180° (stack 01:02:843 (7) - on top of 01:02:169 (2) - sliderend) or change this part
01:03:854 (6) - rotate it by -90° and put it back where it was
02:02:000 (4,5) - you should add an emphasis here; rn it's not any different from other jumps in this section
02:05:034 - I'd make this note clickable

[Afterword]
Map looks decent. There are only few flow issues but they can be solved easily.
Good luck!

Dizick

221 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Dizick 2017-10-09T15:33:20+00:00

Catshy wrote:
Hi from my queue c:

[What is your name?]
00:29:371 (3) - stack it with 00:30:767 (3) - fix
00:30:069 (1) - rotate it by 25°. ctrl+G and stack it with 00:30:767 (3) - No, because I stack this sliiders differently
00:56:438 (1) - and 00:56:776 (2) - ctrl+G them (separately!) for better flow fix
01:02:169 (2,3) - this breaks the flow; consider rotating it by 180° (stack 01:02:843 (7) - on top of 01:02:169 (2) - sliderend) or change this part fix
01:03:854 (6) - rotate it by -90° and put it back where it was No, because it will break blanket with 01:05:034 (3) -
02:02:000 (4,5) - you should add an emphasis here; rn it's not any different from other jumps in this section This part have more spacing than other
02:05:034 - I'd make this note clickable
fix

[Afterword]
Map looks decent. There are only few flow issues but they can be solved easily.
Good luck!

Thanks!

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2017-10-11T06:47:16+00:00

Hello from my modding queue!

General

Please check Aimod of Milar's Normal. The tags and audio preview is different with another.

Nelly's Overdose

00:27:627 (2,3,4) - It look far a bit from (2)>(3) and (3)>(4). I suggest move 00:27:801 (3) - x:64.
00:56:606 (3,4,5) - On (3) is so close the edge and I think (4,5) is far a bit. I suggest move 00:56:606 (3) - to x:480 and 00:56:690 (4) - to x:432.
01:51:214 (6,7,8) - I think on 01:51:214 (6,7) - is far a bit and look hard to catch 01:51:551 (8) -. I suggest move 01:51:382 (7) - to x:216.
01:51:888 (2) - How about change this move to left? look better.

Perfect look very nice and very fun <3 I didn't want to change this to much.

:3

Xetopia's Rain

00:48:208 (1,2) - I think the dash is look far a bit. I suggest move 00:48:732 (2) - to x:272 and Delete 00:48:819 (3) - I think it unnecessary because on it not have a melody.
00:52:307 (7) - I think you should delete because it can Hdash on the end slider of 00:52:046 (6) -.
00:53:320 (5) - Delete i not hear a melody on this but you can change 00:53:742 (1) - to 1/4.
00:58:545 (6) - Delete i not hear a melody on this.
01:03:180 to 01:05:708 - a combo notes is have 17 objects. On Ranking Criteria tell Combos should not exceed 16 objects. so I suggest add NC on 01:04:528 (5) -
01:08:573 to 01:11:101 - Same as above ^. I suggest add NC on 01:09:922 (6) -
01:09:079 (3) - move to x:144. I think would better.
01:13:967 to 01:16:495 - Same as line 5. I suggest add NC on 01:15:315 (5) -
01:18:011 (5) - Add NC.
01:25:933 (1) - Add NC.
01:31:495 (5) - Add NC.
01:34:191 (1) - Add NC.
01:39:585 (5) - Add NC.
01:53:068 (1) - Move to x:96. Look too far from 01:52:899 (5,1,2) -.
01:56:101 (2,3,4,5) - Look very hard in Rain. Please change.
02:01:663 (8,9,10,1) - Same as above ^
02:03:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think it look very hard. 02:03:854 (1,2) - Delete Hdash between this and 02:04:865 (9,10) - Change to 1/2.

This is all from me. Hope it can help you. Good luck for rank <3

Xetopia

240 posts

Joined June 2015

Xetopia 2017-10-11T11:16:26+00:00

rew0825 wrote:
Hello from my modding queue!

Xetopia's Rain
00:48:208 (1,2) - I think the dash is look far a bit. I suggest move 00:48:732 (2) - to x:272 and Delete 00:48:819 (3) - I think it unnecessary because on it not have a melody. - ok, fixed
00:52:307 (7) - I think you should delete because it can Hdash on the end slider of 00:52:046 (6) -. - ok
00:53:320 (5) - Delete i not hear a melody on this but you can change 00:53:742 (1) - to 1/4. - changed 00:53:742 (1) - to 1/4. But no change 00:53:320 (5)
00:58:545 (6) - Delete i not hear a melody on this. - ok
01:03:180 to 01:05:708 - a combo notes is have 17 objects. On Ranking Criteria tell Combos should not exceed 16 objects. so I suggest add NC on 01:04:528 (5) - - ok, fixed
01:08:573 to 01:11:101 - Same as above ^. I suggest add NC on 01:09:922 (6) - - fixed
01:09:079 (3) - move to x:144. I think would better. - ok
01:13:967 to 01:16:495 - Same as line 5. I suggest add NC on 01:15:315 (5) - - ok, fixed
01:18:011 (5) - Add NC. - ok
01:25:933 (1) - Add NC. - ^
01:31:495 (5) - Add NC. - ^
01:34:191 (1) - Add NC. - ^
01:39:585 (5) - Add NC. - ^
01:53:068 (1) - Move to x:96. Look too far from 01:52:899 (5,1,2) -. - ok
01:56:101 (2,3,4,5) - Look very hard in Rain. Please change. - ohhh D: okay Changed
02:01:663 (8,9,10,1) - Same as above ^ - ok(
02:03:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think it look very hard. 02:03:854 (1,2) - Delete Hdash between this and 02:04:865 (9,10) - Change to 1/2. -changed everything except for the last one

This is all from me. Hope it can help you. Good luck for rank <3

Thanks for mod <3 <3 <3

da da yaAA

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Kimitakari

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Kimitakari 2017-10-11T13:37:04+00:00

rew0825 wrote:
Nelly's Overdose
00:27:627 (2,3,4) - It look far a bit from (2)>(3) and (3)>(4). I suggest move 00:27:801 (3) - x:64. 00:56:438 (1,2,3,4) - I used Ctrl+G
00:56:606 (3,4,5) - On (3) is so close the edge and I think (4,5) is far a bit. I suggest move 00:56:606 (3) - to x:480 and 00:56:690 (4) - to x:432.
01:51:214 (6,7,8) - I think on 01:51:214 (6,7) - is far a bit and look hard to catch 01:51:551 (8) -. I suggest move 01:51:382 (7) - to x:216.
01:51:888 (2) - How about change this move to left? look better.

Perfect look very nice and very fun <3 I didn't want to change this to much. I wasn't even trying but thank!

:3

No replies means accepted. Thanks for modding! https://puu.sh/xVu9W/c4e95c14f1.osu nice fc btw

Yauxo

1,622 posts

Joined June 2011

Yauxo 2017-10-11T19:12:33+00:00

[My Name is Yauxo]
■ 00:41:232 (1) - Would be cool if you could move this a bit further away from the previous Slider. Distance is basically halved on this. Looks odd :v
■ 00:52:046 (1) - I feel like this would have a better effect if it was stacked under 00:51:348 (2) - . Music "stops" (it doesnt full stop but eh, you know what I mean), movement stops.
■ 01:13:629 (6) - Might want to move this one closer to the previous one. Right now, this one looks like it could be a normal 1/2 gap with the spacing it has. Youve introduced a lower spacing on these combos on 01:11:944 (7,8) - , so keeping it clean would be the best option.
■ 01:26:607 (4) - Not sure if this is supposed to stack with 01:25:596 (5) - as the others stack too, but Ill mention it anyway.

Guess it's pretty clean, the only thing that bugged me personally is that some Sliders in the beginning ignored spacing just to fit under some other object to stack. Mainly things like 00:26:929 (4,1) - (4 could be spaced more as it almost touches both, 3 and 1), 00:56:270 (6,1) - (has lower spacing just to have the stack in there). Its nothing major, probably nothing minor, but it's something I wouldnt recommend either. Besides that there's random-ish increased spacing between some objects which technically wouldnt need to be (like 01:03:854 (6,7,1) - ) but that doesnt do any harm to the average player as well.

[ShaVix]
■ 00:29:197 (2,3,4) - is the DS increase from x1.3 to x1.4 intended? Id assume it is because of 00:40:360 (2,3,4) - ? If not, adjust both combos.
■ 01:18:854 (4,1) - Same as above, I guess? I dont reaaaally like it, but happens way too often to not be intended, so I'll not mention any else. It's fine though.
■ 01:24:416 (4) - Could place a Circle on the Endpoint instead of having a reversed strength Slider. Like you did with 01:12:281 (1,2) - .
■ 01:35:202 (7) - Instead of what it is right now, 2-repeat into a double like this could be nice as well.
■ 01:54:079 (2) - Same as 1:24?
■ 02:00:483 (4) - Space further away, I mean, I see that it's because of the overlap, but having such small spacing doesnt add up, I feel like :v

Im confused about the NCing after 01:08:405 (1) - . Sometimes it's NC'd when theres a new combo off somewhere further away from the previous object, which makes sense, but more than not it's on a seemingly random position, a few ticks before or after the big white tick - stuff like 01:16:326 (1,2) - or 01:22:056 (4,1) - for example. You might want to recheck a bit since a lot of NCs are really odd.

[RealSekai]
■ 00:27:278 (10) - 00:38:441 (10) - NC this to be in-line with the other combo's combolength. Personally I'd also add some on 00:25:883 (6) - 00:31:464 (5) - 00:37:046 (6) - 00:41:232 (5) - , but that's not as necessary. Though, it's worth a thought since you also have alot of short combos in the slow part just before the music really starts.
■ 00:35:650 (2) - Probably want to place the NC here (big white, downbeat)
■ 00:45:069 (4) - Move this one down a bit to avoid it almost touching the next Slider

■ To be honest, I dont even want to mod the part after the intro towards the kiai. It's just way too messy and there are way too many overlaps, almost to the point that I'd say that this is borderline readable for this maps' target audience. People at this level still tend to have hitanimations on, which will result in a mess of sprites and colours. I can see that you went for alot of round movement, but try to do less of this, and more of this.

[Milar]
■ 00:25:185 (3,1,2) - Fix the spacing between these objects. Set for one, as they all have the same time inbetween, but different spacing.
■ 00:34:778 (2) - It's probably for the best if you get the Sliderhead around 50% - 60% out of the previous Slider's body
■ 00:53:742 (3) - Maybe place this somewhere around 408/128. While the spacing is correct here, a player wont completely follow a Slider the way it's drawn onto the screen. They'll most likely abuse Slider Leniency, if possible, which makes this one seem spaced less than it actually is. Adjust angle if needed.
■ 01:25:427 (2,3,6,7,2) - Try to avoid changing the objects or playstyle for similar/same-sounding sounds too fast. That might get confusing for newer players, as they are, so far (maybe), only used to same sound = same objects. Varying with combos is key in Insanes, but not in Normals :> No need to actually change this, but I wanted to point it out.

Generally, try to not have Sliderends sit on stronger beats than the same Slider's Head. Stuff like 01:10:933 (1) - can be, and should be avoided. Sliderends are supposed to be on a weak or equal strenght sound to make sense. Doesnt happen often, but it does.

[Mikan]
■ 00:32:860 (2) - move NC to this one.
■ 00:50:127 (2) - You could replace the rhythm with this here. Having to click on a red tick like this isnt optimal in Easies, what I suggested would fix this. Cursor is where (2) starts right now.
■ 01:53:068 (3) - Maybe rotate this one a bit so that its Head is further away from 01:51:719 (1) -

Dizick

221 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Dizick 2017-10-12T05:24:59+00:00

[quote="Yauxo"]

[My Name is Yauxo]
■ 00:41:232 (1) - Would be cool if you could move this a bit further away from the previous Slider. Distance is basically halved on this. Looks odd :v
■ 00:52:046 (1) - I feel like this would have a better effect if it was stacked under 00:51:348 (2) - . Music "stops" (it doesnt full stop but eh, you know what I mean), movement stops.
■ 01:13:629 (6) - Might want to move this one closer to the previous one. Right now, this one looks like it could be a normal 1/2 gap with the spacing it has. Youve introduced a lower spacing on these combos on 01:11:944 (7,8) - , so keeping it clean would be the best option.
■ 01:26:607 (4) - Not sure if this is supposed to stack with 01:25:596 (5) - as the others stack too, but Ill mention it anyway.

Guess it's pretty clean, the only thing that bugged me personally is that some Sliders in the beginning ignored spacing just to fit under some other object to stack. Mainly things like 00:26:929 (4,1) - (4 could be spaced more as it almost touches both, 3 and 1), 00:56:270 (6,1) - (has lower spacing just to have the stack in there). Its nothing major, probably nothing minor, but it's something I wouldnt recommend either. Besides that there's random-ish increased spacing between some objects which technically wouldnt need to be (like 01:03:854 (6,7,1) - ) but that doesnt do any harm to the average player as well.

fix all thanks ~

RealSekai

10 posts

Joined June 2016

RealSekai 2017-10-12T10:17:03+00:00

Yauxo wrote:
[RealSekai]
■ 00:27:278 (10) - 00:38:441 (10) - NC this to be in-line with the other combo's combolength. Personally I'd also add some on 00:25:883 (6) - 00:31:464 (5) - 00:37:046 (6) - 00:41:232 (5) - , but that's not as necessary. Though, it's worth a thought since you also have alot of short combos in the slow part just before the music really starts. added some of nc's of those but not all of them
■ 00:35:650 (2) - Probably want to place the NC here (big white, downbeat) I want to "notice" vocals with nc
■ 00:45:069 (4) - Move this one down a bit to avoid it almost touching the next Slider fixed

■ To be honest, I dont even want to mod the part after the intro towards the kiai. It's just way too messy and there are way too many overlaps, almost to the point that I'd say that this is borderline readable for this maps' target audience. People at this level still tend to have hitanimations on, which will result in a mess of sprites and colours. I can see that you went for alot of round movement, but try to do less of this, and more of this. After I lovered SV it looks less messy I hope. And thank you for an advice

Thank you for the mod

ShinodaYuu

631 posts

Joined May 2016

ShinodaYuu 2017-10-13T18:26:27+00:00

Yauxo wrote:
[Milar]
■ 00:25:185 (3,1,2) - Fix the spacing between these objects. Set for one, as they all have the same time inbetween, but different spacing.
■ 00:34:778 (2) - It's probably for the best if you get the Sliderhead around 50% - 60% out of the previous Slider's body
■ 00:53:742 (3) - Maybe place this somewhere around 408/128. While the spacing is correct here, a player wont completely follow a Slider the way it's drawn onto the screen. They'll most likely abuse Slider Leniency, if possible, which makes this one seem spaced less than it actually is. Adjust angle if needed.
■ 01:25:427 (2,3,6,7,2) - Try to avoid changing the objects or playstyle for similar/same-sounding sounds too fast. That might get confusing for newer players, as they are, so far (maybe), only used to same sound = same objects. Varying with combos is key in Insanes, but not in Normals :> No need to actually change this, but I wanted to point it out.

Generally, try to not have Sliderends sit on stronger beats than the same Slider's Head. Stuff like 01:10:933 (1) - can be, and should be avoided. Sliderends are supposed to be on a weak or equal strenght sound to make sense. Doesnt happen often, but it does.

Literally everything fixed, many thanks

Diff

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O D P A D

17 posts

Joined August 2015

O D P A D 2017-10-13T18:49:48+00:00

Milar's Normal

00:24:488 (1) - this slider can be a little curve
00:25:708 (4) - set a circle
00:31:290 (4,1) - more space
00:37:569 (6,7) - here slow slider
00:57:113 (4,5) - repeat slider
01:59:135 (4,5,6) - more space

That's all

Other Diffs are ok.

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-10-15T13:36:56+00:00

NM from Q

Mikan's Easy

open aimod check DS
00:31:464 (3,2) - overlap like this doesn't look good on easy diff imo
00:32:162 (1,3) - ^
01:04:528 (1) - remove nc for consistency
01:34:191 (1,2) - blanket is bad
01:37:899 (4) - for a better flow i suggest to move this note to x:473 y:232
01:44:978 (3,1) - there are to close, fix it with DS
01:48:011 (4,2) - doesn't look attractive idk why you do that's tbh.. maybe try something like this https://puu.sh/xYG3i/9eb62e4fb2.jpg should work better
01:49:023 (2,1) - you can make a better blanket i think
01:53:068 (3,1) - there are to close fix this with DS

Milar's Normal

00:27:278 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - at this moment there are sound who need to be more emphasize i think like 00:27:801 - 00:29:197 - 00:29:546 - so i suggest to try something like this https://puu.sh/xYGrW/9f5ce882bf.png
00:30:592 (2) - this note isn't necessary, you can just extend previous slider to red tick
00:31:464 (1,2,3) - red tick really need to be mapped so try something like this https://puu.sh/xYGMr/ffe75f3929.png
00:38:964 (3,4,1,2) - like i said before https://puu.sh/xYGrW/9f5ce882bf.png
00:46:115 (1,2) - bad blanket
00:48:906 (1,2) - why you stopped to map vocal? this vocal need to be mapped 00:49:429 - sooo something like this sound good https://puu.sh/xYH3p/2e3aba5a87.png
01:17:337 (2,1) - stack them
02:01:832 (4,5) - should be a slider renverse like the beggining
02:02:506 (1,3) - stack them

umm this diff needs more work with rhythm structure and polishment :v

just wanted to mod 2 diffs xd

gl!~

-Mikan

807 posts

Joined September 2016

-Mikan 2017-10-15T14:55:24+00:00

~

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Daycore

918 posts

Joined January 2015

Daycore 2017-10-16T16:12:07+00:00

From #modreqs

Приветствую.

General

1. Для начала, почему два нормала от Милара? Пофикси.
2. Оффсеты: 172bpm - 24.472; 178bpm - 52.384

Mikan's Easy

00:27:278 (1,2) - Выглядит немного странновато, рекомендую сделать вот так.
01:32:843 (1,2,3) - Такое будет неприятно играть, так что, сделай что-то типа так. (CTRL+C; CTRL+V; CTRL+H (подравняешь сам))

Sekai's Hard

00:24:836 (3) - Этот слайдер смотрится довольно странно. Думаю, стоит увеличить скорость и добавить один слайдер-поинт, чтобы сделать что-то похожее на это
00:29:371 (3,4) - Здесь тоже самое. Такие слайдеры здесь будут смотреться красиво.
00:38:267 (9,1) - - Может, засунешь эти ноты под 00:36:871 (5,6)?
00:53:068 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Весь этот момент довольно трудно будет прочитать, так что, рекомендую либо поднять AR, либо переделывать весь этот момент.
В этой диффе очень много похожих моментов и советую вообще перемаппать её с самого начала, чтобы выглядела она хотя бы более менее.

Если нужна гд, буду рад помочь. Могу в харды, изи и экстры.
Удачи!

ShinodaYuu

631 posts

Joined May 2016

ShinodaYuu 2017-10-16T18:06:30+00:00

Gibcio wrote:
Milar's Normal
00:24:488 (1) - this slider can be a little curve I think it's ok
00:25:708 (4) - set a circle This sound lasts for whole beat
00:31:290 (4,1) - more space It's 1/2 beat and normal diff so it's ok imo
00:37:569 (6,7) - here slow slider Slider velocity changes are unrankable on normals
00:57:113 (4,5) - repeat slider By this I wanted to show difference between this sound and 00:54:416 (4) -
01:59:135 (4,5,6) - more space It's one of the most intensive patterns of this diff, it would be difficult for players to tap three times plus remember that third is long holding and also aim

That's all Thanks for looking at my diff
Other Diffs are ok.

ShogunMoon wrote:
NM from Q

Milar's Normal
00:27:278 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - at this moment there are sound who need to be more emphasize i think like 00:27:801 - 00:29:197 - 00:29:546 - so i suggest to try something like this https://puu.sh/xYGrW/9f5ce882bf.png First one changed
00:30:592 (2) - this note isn't necessary, you can just extend previous slider to red tick Changed
00:31:464 (1,2,3) - red tick really need to be mapped so try something like this https://puu.sh/xYGMr/ffe75f3929.png Changed
00:38:964 (3,4,1,2) - like i said before https://puu.sh/xYGrW/9f5ce882bf.png I like it as it is
00:46:115 (1,2) - bad blanket
00:48:906 (1,2) - why you stopped to map vocal? this vocal need to be mapped 00:49:429 - sooo something like this sound good https://puu.sh/xYH3p/2e3aba5a87.png I was never mapping vocals here. At the beginning it was all 1/1, but one modder suggersted to place some 1/2 to make section less dull
01:17:337 (2,1) - stack them Changed
02:01:832 (4,5) - should be a slider renverse like the beggining Fixed
02:02:506 (1,3) - stack them Done
Thanks

Diff

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 90146
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 122169
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Yume Tourou
TitleUnicode:夢灯籠
Artist:RADWIMPS
ArtistUnicode:RADWIMPS
Creator:My Angel DanyL
Version:Milar's Normal
Source:君の名は。
Tags:ki mi no na wa your name yojiro noda makoto shinkai opening op reaksekai shavix YshadowXOP_ victorfernando
BeatmapID:1395155
BeatmapSetID:650619

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Dizick

221 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Dizick 2017-10-17T04:24:34+00:00

[quote="Rus_Brony_osu"]From #modreqs

Приветствую.

General

1. Для начала, почему два нормала от Милара? Пофикси. пофиксил
2. Оффсеты: 172bpm - 24.472; 178bpm - 52.384 Оффсет корреткен.

Jemzuu

Beatmap Nominator

598 posts

Joined February 2016

Jemzuu 2017-10-19T08:26:44+00:00

hi from my Q

optional to change | unrankable | suggested to change

General

make sure all the GDers are in the tags, i dont see Nelly and Xetopia in it. Also, fix the tag and preview time conflicts with Milar's diff

Nelly's Overdose

00:53:236 (5,6,7) - the movement between these notes is quite uncomfy imo, why not try spacing them out more like move (5) to x212 (6) to x128 and (7) to x232
00:57:450 - 2 1/1 sliders would fit here better instead like this perhaps? to atleast have consitency with 00:56:438 (1,2,3,4) -
01:01:326 (4,5,6) - same as above, move (4) to x280, (5) to x186 and (6) to x304
01:32:169 (3) - the spacing here is close to (2), try to move it to x360
01:41:438 (3) - could get more spacing imo, distance is quite ambigous move it to x440 and 01:41:270 (2) - to x252
01:44:135 (3) - add a normal dash here move it to x160 and stack (4) with it's sliderhead after or just make it a repeat up to u
01:45:820 (5,6,7) - not enough movement here imo, move (5) to x124 (6) to x192 (7) to x96
01:49:023 (1) - why not make this slider look like 01:47:674 (1) - to have more movement perhaps dont forget to make it a hyper after u adjust
01:52:562 (5) - spacing here is quite ambigous imo move it to x92 to have atleast a normal dash
01:57:786 (3) - ^ x352
02:03:349 (4,5,6) - same as before
great map as usual, nice aesthetics :^)

Xetopia's Rain

i think you should change the CS atleast to have a difference with the overdose tho, i'd change to like cs3.7 or smth up to u tho
00:25:708 (4) - why not make the spacing similar to 00:24:488 (1,2) - try x432
00:28:674 (6,7) - atleast have a dash between these two it's just too close imo
00:33:383 - not sure about the 2 circles here maybe make it a slider instead?
00:40:534 (6,7,8,9) - it's better to have an equal spacing here move 6 to x176 7 to x80 8 to x144 and 9 to x240
00:41:755 (2,3,4,5,6) - do the same spacing here and the next one too
01:30:820 (3,4) - have more spacing a bit between these two
01:49:023 (1) - this repeat slider feels undermapped and doesnt fit at all imo. i'd shorten the repeat and add slider and two circles
01:55:343 (4) - not sure about this i'd delete it and (5) as well. make (3) a repeat instead and add circle on red tick
02:05:034 (12) - nc

Milar's Normal

00:26:406 - i dont get why didnt add a note here while on 00:25:011 - u did
00:27:801 (2,4) - remove the whistles pls
00:27:801 (2,3,4) - balance the spacing make perfect triangle
00:29:371 (5,1) - uhh fix blanket
00:33:383 (6) - there's no sound here, delet this note
00:36:174 (2,4) - ur quite overmapping with these notes when the sound isnt that prominent anyway delet these
00:39:836 (1) - remove this nc
00:50:999 (5,1) - avoid this overlap it would be easier to read 00:49:953 (3,5) - stack these two instead
00:56:438 (3) - too low move it higher the spacing is quite big lower the distance
01:21:382 (6) - avoid this stack
01:28:629 (4) - would be better if you'd blanket this with 01:27:450 (1) - insted
01:39:247 (4,5,6) - the spacing is very close adujst 5 too then 01:40:259 (6,1) - blanket these two

i dont feel like this map is ready for ranking, tho i hope i helped something!
GL

LiousPL

231 posts

Joined February 2015

LiousPL 2017-10-20T12:38:04+00:00

Mod from my queue~!

~General

Color in both of CtB diffs are little blinded up with background, that's unrankable already.
Milar's Normal have set preview point otherwise than other diffs, i think the good idea is change it.
In both of CtB diffs option Widescreen Support is selected, but other diffs don't have this, for better look change it.

~Xetopia's Rain
00:29:197 (7,8,9,10,11) - That's too sharply contorted, change it for more clear pattern. (example reduce a ds here)
01:32:843 (1,2) - That's brake a flow, there's no brake in vocal or beat already, so change it a little bit.

~Nelly's Overdose
01:01:663 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Hard to catch stream after 6, can u change a pattern a little bit?
01:43:629 (1) - This is so sharply slider, change a curve here.

That's my short mod, GL.
(CtB diffs are made well so im don't wanna broke them with my mod, that's reason why this is so short mod)

Xetopia

240 posts

Joined June 2015

Xetopia 2017-10-21T10:06:13+00:00

AJamez wrote:
hi from my Q

Xetopia's Rain
i think you should change the CS atleast to have a difference with the overdose tho, i'd change to like cs3.7 or smth up to u tho - I need to think about it
00:25:708 (4) - why not make the spacing similar to 00:24:488 (1,2) - try x432 - I wanted to emphasize vocals
00:28:674 (6,7) - atleast have a dash between these two it's just too close imo - fixed
00:33:383 - not sure about the 2 circles here maybe make it a slider instead? - fixed
00:40:534 (6,7,8,9) - it's better to have an equal spacing here move 6 to x176 7 to x80 8 to x144 and 9 to x240 - ok
00:41:755 (2,3,4,5,6) - do the same spacing here and the next one too - ok
01:30:820 (3,4) - have more spacing a bit between these two - fixed
01:49:023 (1) - this repeat slider feels undermapped and doesnt fit at all imo. i'd shorten the repeat and add slider and two circles - I don't want anything to change
01:55:343 (4) - not sure about this i'd delete it and (5) as well. make (3) a repeat instead and add circle on red tick - I don't want to change this pattern, too
02:05:034 (12) - nc - why?

thanks for mod <3 <3 <3

LiousPL wrote:
Mod from my queue~!

~Xetopia's Rain

[*] 00:29:197 (7,8,9,10,11) - That's too sharply contorted, change it for more clear pattern. (example reduce a ds here) - ugmmm no? I don't want it
[*] 01:32:843 (1,2) - That's brake a flow, there's no brake in vocal or beat already, so change it a little bit. - fixed

thanks for mod <3 <3 <3

update desu

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Kimitakari

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Kimitakari 2017-10-21T10:45:35+00:00

AJamez wrote:
Nelly's Overdose
00:53:236 (5,6,7) - the movement between these notes is quite uncomfy imo, why not try spacing them out more like move (5) to x212 (6) to x128 and (7) to x232
00:57:450 - 2 1/1 sliders would fit here better instead like this perhaps? to atleast have consitency with 00:56:438 (1,2,3,4) - Denied because 1/3 part can be heard
01:01:326 (4,5,6) - same as above, move (4) to x280, (5) to x186 and (6) to x304
01:32:169 (3) - the spacing here is close to (2), try to move it to x360
01:41:438 (3) - could get more spacing imo, distance is quite ambigous move it to x440 and 01:41:270 (2) - to x252
01:44:135 (3) - add a normal dash here move it to x160 and stack (4) with it's sliderhead after or just make it a repeat up to u
01:45:820 (5,6,7) - not enough movement here imo, move (5) to x124 (6) to x192 (7) to x96
01:49:023 (1) - why not make this slider look like 01:47:674 (1) - to have more movement perhaps dont forget to make it a hyper after u adjust
01:52:562 (5) - spacing here is quite ambigous imo move it to x92 to have atleast a normal dash
01:57:786 (3) - ^ x352
02:03:349 (4,5,6) - same as before
great map as usual, nice aesthetics :^)

LiousPL wrote:
~Nelly's Overdose

[*] 01:01:663 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Hard to catch stream after 6, can u change a pattern a little bit?
[*] 01:43:629 (1) - This is so sharply slider, change a curve here.[/list][/notice]

That's my short mod, GL.
(CtB diffs are made well so im don't wanna broke them with my mod, that's reason why this is so short mod)

No replies means acepted. Thanks for mod guys! https://puu.sh/y3rSk/e9fca047dc.osu

Sakary

867 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2017-10-25T07:13:38+00:00

NM
from my queue
I hope my mod is helpful.

Overdose
Oh hello, Nelly!

00:35:650 (1,2) - These sliders feel pretty blank. I think it's better if you follow some patterns on the previous parts, like this one 00:30:069 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - .
00:45:592 (1,2,3,4) - A sudden anti-flow on the middle of up-to-intense part. I think it's better for you to redesign it. I don't know.
00:53:068 (4,5,6,7) - I suggest back-and-forth pattern here, instead of this one. What do you think? Same with these, 01:01:158 (3,4,5,6) - , 01:34:865 (3,4,5,6) - , and 02:03:180 (3,4,5,6,7) - ???
01:48:180 (2,3) - Distance too short. Move 3 to x:152.
02:03:348 (4,5) - What's this note? Hahaha

Sorry for the few mods. The diff seems fine now!

Rain

00:30:767 (3) - Slider too long, it makes the sound incomplete. Move the tail onto the white tick and add note on the red. It sounds better.
00:40:534 (6) - Move this a bit distant from 5 to emphasize the new beat.
01:02:506 (1,2,3,4) - Make it like this, instead. The 1/4 stream jump sounds better for 3 and 4.
01:20:034 (4,5,6,7) - Fix this. Make it smoother.
01:33:517 (3,4) - I don't recommend this pattern.

Nice diff also!

Good luck!

Last edited by Sakary 2017-10-25T11:11:34+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

newton- 2017-10-25T08:23:13+00:00

from q

[shavix's insane]

nitpicky aesthetics mod
00:40:534 (3,4) - could make this parallel or antiparallel or otherwise
00:54:753 (5) - ctrlg so 1 gets spacing emphasis
01:19:023 (1) - dont really like the way this slider ends on the downbeat, should make this 1/2 and make downbeat clickable
01:24:416 (4) - this too except more severe
01:24:922 (1,4) - these should probably stack for consistency with all the stacks in the last section
01:30:820 (1,2,3) - make a triangle with 1's end, 2 and 3's head?
01:31:495 (3,4) - parallel
01:35:202 (7,1) - could be ctrlg'ed to make it more apparent that this is 3/4 beats long, since normally the ends of sliders like these are the ones closer to the next objects.
01:35:877 (2,3,4,5) - diamond here would work
01:59:472 (1,1,1,1) - this is way too variable to be readable as a 1/3 jump especially in insane hoyl pls nerf

[what is your name?]

a few objects look visually too close for comfort (eg 00:42:976 (2,4) - etc) - maybe space them out a bit to keep things not cramped
you break implied slider flow a lot in the first few seconds, but abandon this concept starting on 00:35:650 - , consider changing the part to follow implied slider flow to keep concepts consistent
00:32:860 (1,2) - spacing looks like 1/2 - consider adding filler rhythm on 00:33:383 - to make this more easily readable
00:51:697 - this vocal thing should be mapped i feel - there's an awkward gap around this part
00:54:753 (6,7) - this is much weaker than 00:54:585 (5,6) - so they shouldnt have almost the same spacing
01:08:236 (5) - 2 circles would be better here instead, to differentiate this from sliders without redtick vocals such as 01:07:899 (4) -
01:24:753 (1,2) - players wouldn't expect 2 to be directly behind 1 but ratherto the side or in front of it, consider repositioning for easier readability
01:32:337 (5) - ends on powerful vocal/snare, consider making this 2 circles or moving 1/2 beat forward to better fit the rhythm
01:33:349 (2,3,1) - these would look better if they were equally spaced imo. (3,1) looks too close for comfort
01:36:046 (5,6,7) - there wasnt any triple on 01:30:652 (5,6) - :c. remove here or add one there for consistency
01:54:753 (2,5) - these touch slightly and it looks bad

good luck!

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