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sakuzyo - ChaiN De/structioN

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Shiirn
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, May 29, 2012 at 4:49:31 PM

Artist: sakuzyo feat. Hatsune Miku
Title: ChaiN De/structioN
Tags: vocaloid siilento KanaRin climbb65588
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5393kb
Play Time: 03:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Climbb & Kana's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1172 notes)
  2. Loneliness (5 stars, 779 notes)
Download: sakuzyo feat. Hatsune Miku - ChaiN De/structioN
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Echoing words
a message garbled
none more true
or more clear.
Agnes
moar sakuzyo, big big yeah
Mercurial
asdasdasdasdasdas.

Yup.
galvenize
I used to have this bg as my wallpaper.
Cilvery
Shiirn :)

MOD
[AhSaSaSiGaLa]

00:21:367 (1) - add finish

00:32:033 (1) - ^

00:42:700 (1) - ^

00:48:033 (5) - ^

01:19:533 (5) - add clap

02:10:700 (8) - add whistle

02:22:367 (6) - ^

02:29:367 (6) - stack "02:29:033 (5) - "

02:54:700 (1) - add finish

02:59:533 (9) - add clap

02:59:700 (1) - ^

03:00:033 (2) - add finish

03:10:200 (9) - add clap

03:10:700 (2) - add finish
Saten
General:
Original title: ChaiN De/structioN (siilento's solid remix) not sure if it's necessary to change it though (can add siilento to the tags otherwise)
Tags: BMS siilento


[AhSaSaSiGaLa]
00:21:200 (1) - NC on purpose?
00:58:700 (3) - Finish
01:04:033 (1) - ^ start
01:25:033 (1,1) - make a custom stack so the second (1) is visible from above instead? the normal stacking makes it kinda hard to see
01:25:367 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:49:367 (1) - ^
02:00:033 (1) - Finish
02:10:700 (8) - soft finish?
02:12:033 (3) - finish at the beginning
02:54:700 (1) - ^
03:16:033 - louder finish?


(」・ω・)」うー!(/・ω・)/にゃー! ☆
Makar

[AhSaSaSiGaLa]

  1. 00:21:200 (1) - this NC really doesn't fit imo
  2. 00:53:033 (1) - I think should should change this to a circle, with a 1/2 slider afterwards (or find some otherway so that there is a note here 00:53:200)
  3. 01:08:700 (6,7) - Stuff like this plays really bad imo ;_; Maybe copy paste (6) and CTRL+H and J
  4. 01:21:033 (5,6,1) - (nazi) decrease spacing between these a little?
  5. 01:25:367 (1) - (nazi) Wow Shiirn please make this at least close to symmetrical, its really noticable x.x
  6. 01:32:700 (5,6) - CTRL+R this? to follow what you were doing before (and the copy paste afterwards). If you do this then maybe flip 01:31:200 (2,4) - so that (2) opens downward and (4) opens upward.
  7. 02:38:367 (7) - Same as mentioned at 01:08:700
  8. 02:50:367 (5,6,1) - Same as mentioned at 01:21:033
  9. 03:15:867 - Seems better if you would move this kiai burst to start on the white tick
DaxMasterix
Okay!

General:

  1. Erase .osb
  2. Really.. Consider change the title name.. And im not talking about miku. The real artist name are
    '' sakuzyo - ChaiN De/structioN (siilento's solid remix) '' Look this:
    a) http://soundcloud.com/sakuzyo/chain-de-struction-siilentos
    b) http://pl.ayli.st/sakuzyo
    c) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=38ODNRpZGl8
    ---
  3. Gire the BG Horizontaly ... Looks Better.
  4. Consider found a Taiko Mapper.
AhSaSaSiGaLa
  1. DAT NAME. ASDASDSADDSA no rly.. is funny but chage it.
  2. 00:11:033 (3) - Move this note to x:240|y:40 [Grid lvl: 3]
  3. 00:14:367 (5) - Move this note to x:104|y:320 [Grid lvl: 3]
  4. 00:16:367 (2) - Move this note to x:432|y:56 [Grid lvl: 3]
  5. 00:19:700 (4,5,6) - Move this notes to x:208|y:112 [Grid lvl: 3]
  6. 00:24:867 (4) - Move this note to x:160|y:192 [Grid lvl: 3]
  7. 00:26:033 (4,5,6) - Move this notes 2 Grids Down.. [Grid lvl: 3]
  8. 00:31:367 (5,6,7) - Rotate This notes by 50º Clockwise and move the notes to x:415|y:320 [Grid lvl: 3]
  9. 00:32:367 (2) - Move this note 1 Grid to the Left [Grid lvl: 3]
  10. 00:33:200 (6) - Move this note 1 Grid to the Right [Grid lvl:3]
  11. 00:35:200 (2,3,4) - Move this notes to x:288|y:352 [Grid lvl: 3]
  12. 00:35:700 (5,2) - Touching are B.A.D
  13. 00:40:533 (2) - Snap this note in the Graphic. Obviously in the same place of 00:39:200 (4)
  14. 00:45:033 (1) - Nope. This Slider look very ugly.. Try make This
    1stSP = x:336|y:216 / 2ndSP (Type Red) = x:320|y:240 / 3rdSP = x:256|y:272 / 4thSP (Type Red) = x:192|y:240 / 5thSP = x:176|y:216 (All in Grid lvl: 3)
  15. 00:53:033 (1) - Nope!.. Is like a Excuse.. And nobody like the excuses.. Try remake this and move to another Place.
  16. 01:03:700 (6,7,8) - Move this notes to x:384|y:64 [Grid lvl: 3]
  17. 01:05:033 (5,1) - Snap this notes in the Graphic in the Left [Grid lvl: 3]
  18. 01:05:700 (2) - Snap this slider in the Graphic in the northwest [Grid lvl: 3] (btw.. x:240|y:312)
  19. 01:06:700 (1) - Move the 2nd SP one Grid to the Left [Grid lvl: 3]
  20. 01:09:367 (1,2,3) - u know
  21. 01:12:033 (1) - Move the 2nd SP to x:112|y:200
  22. 01:12:533 (2) - If you make the last Suggestion.. Try make This
    1stSP = x:192|y:8 / 2ndSP = x:272|y:80 / 3rdSP = x:224|y:184 (All in Grid lvl: 3)
  23. 01:14:367 (7) - Move the 2nd SP one Grid up [Grid lvl: 3]
  24. 01:17:367 (1) - Move the 2nd SP to x:8|y:104 [Grid lvl: 3]
  25. 01:25:367 (1) - Move the Last SP to x:472|y:320[Grid lvl: 3]
  26. 01:54:200 (5) - Move the 2nd SP to x:72|y:0 [Grid lvl: 3]
  27. 01:54:533 (6) - Move this note to x:200|y:80 [Grid lvl: 3]
  28. 01:57:867 (5) - Move the 2nd SP to x:264|y:144 & the 3rd SP to x:224|y:40 [All in Grid lvl: 3]
  29. 02:01:200 (1) - Snap the 2nd SP in the Graphic to the Left [Grid lvl: 3]
  30. 02:02:367 (6) - Move this note to x:64|y:172 [Grid lvl: 4]
  31. 02:02:533 (1) - Move this Slider to x:120|y:232 [Grid lvl: 4] And move the 2nd SP to x:224|y:216 & the 3rd SP to x:272|y:128 [Grid lvl: 3]
  32. 02:03:867 (1) - Move the 2nd SP to x:296|y:208 [Grid lvl: 3]
  33. 02:04:867 (4) - Move the 2nd SP one Grid up [Grid lvl: 3]
  34. 02:10:200 (4) - Move this note to x:152|y:92 [Grid lvl: 4]
  35. 02:10:367 (5) - Move this note to x:184|y:172 [Grid lvl: 4]
  36. 02:20:033 (1) - Snap the 2nd SP in the Graphic to Down [Grid lvl: 3]
  37. 02:21:617 (3) - I know maybe this is Following exactly the voice of Miku. But remember. Sometimes this notes make the players Sad.. Your dessicion.
  38. 02:25:367 (1) - Move the 2nd SP to x:320|y:48 [Grid lvl: 3]
  39. 02:29:033 (5) - Rotate this object by 210º Clockwise and put a Ctrl+R .. After of this stack the note with the note 02:29:367 (6) in the place x:52|y:200 [Grid lvl: 4]
  40. 02:32:033 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Remake this. Stop the looseness.
  41. 02:34:034 (4) - Move the 2nd SP one Grid to the Left [Grid lvl: 3]
  42. 02:34:534 (6) - Snap the 2nd SP To the right [Grid lvl: 3]
  43. 02:36:034 (1) - Move the 2nd SP one Grid to the Right [Grid lvl: 3]
  44. 02:38:701 (1,2,3) - u know retry
  45. 02:41:367 (1,2) - Well.. You know you're using Copy-Paste. So using copy-paste with the last Suggestion in the first Pattern.. if you change it.
  46. All the next - Copy-pasta~
  47. 02:57:200 (7) - Move this note to x:16|y:304 [Grid lvl: 3]
  48. 03:00:033 (2) - Move the 2nd SP two Grids up [Grid lvl: 3]
  49. 03:01:200 (5) - Move the 2nd SP two Grids right [Grid lvl: 3]
  50. 03:07:033 (3) - Move the 2nd SP to x:332|y:192 [Grid lvl: 3]
  51. 03:07:700 (5) - Move the 2nd SP one Grid up [Grid lvl: 3]

DEX? WHYSASDSADS wrote:

Awesome Map retry DearShiirn :3 ... I only look some Problem with The positions.. =w= Starbecauseuknow
aston_old
00:47:367 (3) - Perhaps tilt in a different way? It's really close to the hp bar
01:06:700 (1,3) - these two touch the HP bar as well
01:09:700 (2) - (Suggestion) Move to x:256,y:96. The pause looks awesome, but is hard to spot first time around and this is one of the few I missed consistently. I think it looks nicer moved up there.
01:36:033 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Can you move this combo further right/up? I like it and you should keep it, but it kinda clumps up with the previous notes a bit and would be easier played if moved. The combo at 01:46:700 is fine though.
01:41:034 (2) - close to HP bar as well x:
01:50:867 (6,7,1) - these ran into my scores/accuracy
02:38:367 (7) - ran into my hp bar
02:40:201 (2) - ^
02:54:367 (1) - kinda hit my scores/accuracy. it's debatable here but i'll just leave it in this post.

Everything else seemed fine/ I felt like it's playable since there was some reflections.

Edit : STAR cause I loved playing this map.
bossandy
  • Hi hi~ request from via In-Game request ~
     
  1. Red : I think you must to fix.
  2. Blue : Need to discuss.
  3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
     
    [ General ]
     
  4. Isn's this map finish? move to Pending map?
     
    [ AhSaSaSiGaLa ]
     
  5. 00:52:867 (7,1) - Overlap~ looks too ugly for me xD
  6. 01:09:367 (1,2) - Very big suggetion. Remove NC 1 and add NC 2 , the spacing will confusion for some player >_<
     
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I am crazy with this map ,so amazing for me xDD ( Sorry for my very bad mod , I am not good at modding App maps )
I hope this map got ranked soon ~
Good Luck :3
Sure
Hey, I'm here >w<


[ AhSaSaSiGaLa ]
00:10:700 (2) - NC?
01:01:033 (1) - Remove NC
01:02:033 (7) - NC
01:09:700 (2) - Baka, posit under previous note. how is this different with second part?{02:39:034 (2)} you had copypasta'd
01:25:033 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/303156
01:32:700 (5) - NC
01:43:367 (5) - ^
02:29:033 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/s0Or
02:44:034 (1) - Remove whistle from head
02:59:033 (5,6,7,8,9) - Soft whistles? except 9's tail
03:00:033 (2) - Add whistle to head
03:00:533 (3) - ^
03:01:033 (4) - Add whistle
03:01:200 (5) - Add whistle to head
03:01:700 (1,2,3) - Add whistle to 1's tail and add whistle to both of circles
03:02:367 (5) - Add whistle to head
03:02:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think you could understand my suggestion through adding whistles above
03:09:700 (5,6,7,8,9) - Same suggestion with 02:59:033 (5,6,7,8,9)
03:10:700 (2) - again >.<
inaba-tan
may i make taiko diff ?

edit
i see~
Topic Starter
Shiirn
already taken, sorry
KanaRin
aabc271
As requested by KanaRin, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go ~

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

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[Climbb & Kana's Taiko Oni]

2 stacked notes & 1 unsnapped note ( See here ). Please fix them ~ BakaRin www

01:23:700 ( 470 ~ 484 ) - Maybe it's me, but I think linking the 2 parts together and use shorter streams will fit better ( The lyrics are like that ) ~

02:21:200 ( 33 ~ 35 ) - Just saying this is a bit hard to understand the beat at my 1st play. Not a big issue though ~

Can't think of any suggested patterns as they are all in kkkkd style .___.

The map is nice overall ~

Rating : 8/10 ( +0.5 : patterns, hitsounds -0.5 : Unsnapped & stacked notes )

Star and good luck ~ ;)
KanaRin
KanaRin
@Shiirn
Please fix the tags climbb to climbb65588
I'm sorry about that I didnt remind you for this.

And also, please kudosu to aabc271~ He modded my map :) (in page1)
Agnes
Given kudosu to aabc271 for Shiirn.

Will check after I waltz through the other requests.
Low
General

- Tags inconsistency. Fix the tags, please.

Climbb & Kana's Taiko Oni

- Disable letterboxing. There aren't any breaks.
01:14:700 (409) - You really shouldn't have short kiai fountain bursts like this in Taiko difficulties as stated in the Taiko guidelines thread.
02:10:700 (1) - ^
02:44:033 (95) - ^
03:15:867 (338) - ^

Loneliness

00:21:200 (1) - This one note combo is silly.
00:53:033 (1) - Ctrl + R this. It flows a lot better and is more enjoyable to play like this.
01:25:367 (1) - Tick rate 2 would make this slow down easier to read.
01:34:867 (7) - Make this slider like the one at 01:34:367 (5). It looks odd being the only wiggly slider in that part of the song.
01:45:534 (7) - ^
01:54:033 (4,5) - Odd overlap.
02:03:867 (1) - Move this slider just a bit farther away from the previous object so that they don't overlap.
Topic Starter
Shiirn
tick rate 2 wouldn't make it easier to read, it'd make it a mass of sliderticks. It's already very very easy to tell it's a slowdown.
rest done other than taiko
Kurokotei
climbb65588
Agnes
Hi. This is a very short mod.

[Loneliness]

01:01:033 (4,5,6) - Have this facing in the opposite direction of 01:00:367 (1,2,3) - ? (Or other way around; have the pattern of 01:00:367 (1,2,3) face toward 01:01:033 (4,5,6) )
01:57:201 (3) - wat
02:05:867 (4) - Adjust middle anchor to be symmetrical?
02:07:200 (4) - ^
02:25:367 (1) - ^

das 'bout it from me
Kurai
Bubble #1 ~ !
LeMS_old
良い仕事 Shiirn, I just love sakuzyo
Sync
Bubble #2
Agnes
Grats. Have this flame.
Mercurial
I'll be there, as that first star.

Congratz Shiirn, I'd like to talk with you sometime.
KanaRin
>~<bbbb
Musty
have...err.. have babies? >///////////<
Jordan
Truly awesome :)
Frizz
I guess this is the first time I enjoy Shiirn's streams :V
Kawayi Rika
Congratz Shiirn :3
Natteke
Why didn't you make more diffs and have a hybrid rank?
miss_master_old
Congratz~
DaxMasterix
why so awesome dad
Hernan
Shiirn you're the best I love you
bossandy
Moe Shiirn xDD
Kunino Sagiri
I wondered why the map was so good, then I noticed...

FlyingKiwi
Nice song and beatmap but why didn't you make the easy difficulty!
kanomodesu
Epic nice song, epic beatmapper, epic beatmap, just awesome!
Arcane
Favorite song for months now XD never had a favorite so long and WELL MADE !!~~
SHADOWCRI
finalmente fattaaaaaaaa dopo un anno che ci provo la provo fin da quando ero livello 2
Hebi
Hello from 2017 this song and map are incredible. My new favorite
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