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Otosaka-Yu
maybe delete the insane?
Shiratori
mediadata根本找不到………
改天有时间摸一下
Shiratori
为什么要挖坟 2kd位没了

mediadata根本找不到………

改天有时间摸一下
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

ZhongRen wrote:

为什么要挖坟 2kd位没了

mediadata根本找不到………

改天有时间摸一下
?我原来忘了有2kd这个存在,233
metadata的话,黑猴子美丽,硬凑回来的
Shiratori
大概是一些建议
Hard
00:50:720 (1,2,3,4) - 这里可以加跳
01:28:970 - 在这条绿线之后可以适当增加间距因为滑条速变慢了 现在这样有些挤【
00:49:032 - 这里我还是想加一个circle的


insane
01:10:970 (1,2) - 这里还是改成滑条和前面一致
01:28:970 - 减速 和hard一致
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

ZhongRen wrote:

大概是一些建议
Hard
00:50:720 (1,2,3,4) - 这里可以加跳 间距增大了
01:28:970 - 在这条绿线之后可以适当增加间距因为滑条速变慢了 现在这样有些挤【 这里是在上一个摸改过的【所以还好
00:49:032 - 这里我还是想加一个circle的 保持这样吧


insane
01:10:970 (1,2) - 这里还是改成滑条和前面一致 fixed
01:28:970 - 减速 和hard一致 不了
谢谢0.0
-Eriri-
来摸佛摸啦 邓女士~



哇这是什么BL游戏

[Insane]

00:00:845 - 开头这个转盘我会在中间插几个绿线调音效,一直都是5%的话转完感觉会没什么实感,而且接下来的note音效vol.是75%..感觉需要过渡一下,不会太唐突~

(其实第一根绿线完全可以用前面的红线代替...没问题的

00:07:220 (3,1) - 这儿有点强迫症QAQ 好像没包好?


00:23:626 - 00:24:376 - 这儿有人声挺明显的空出来是故意的吧..我觉得这儿是可以跟的..
00:35:626 - ^

00:36:845 (3,4) - 4滑条后半段没和3平行,这儿你应该是想把他们弄平行的吧?

就这样吧,我摸图水的不行


Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

-Eriri- wrote:

来摸佛摸啦 邓女士~


哇这是什么BL游戏

[Insane]

00:00:845 - 开头这个转盘我会在中间插几个绿线调音效,一直都是5%的话转完感觉会没什么实感,而且接下来的note音效vol.是75%..感觉需要过渡一下,不会太唐突~ 也还好,没什么特别突出的音,保留了

(其实第一根绿线完全可以用前面的红线代替...没问题的 逼死你们这帮强迫症

00:07:220 (3,1) - 这儿有点强迫症QAQ 好像没包好? 你这个太nazi了,没啥问题的,看不出来QAQ


00:23:626 - 00:24:376 - 这儿有人声挺明显的空出来是故意的吧..我觉得这儿是可以跟的.. 这些地方打图的时候不会特别在意,而且这里的梗算是在这个图里比较突出的一个增大的三角形梗,1/4就不必了
00:35:626 - ^ ^

00:36:845 (3,4) - 4滑条后半段没和3平行,这儿你应该是想把他们弄平行的吧? fixed

就这样吧,我摸图水的不行


你煞笔,还真龙
Shiratori
recheck 应该没有kd
首先视频格式问题
你现在用的是wmv然后屙屎官网都没有without video这个选项
正确格式我觉得应该用flv 你可以问问虾抖大佬
6376
6470
这两根绿线重复了
00:22:970 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 你前面这俩用的这种梗后面突然00:24:470 (1,2,3) - 有点不舒服
00:50:720 (3,4,5,6) - 实话说 四方跳有点丑 可以试一试棱形跳【改不改都无所谓了】
00:51:845 (1,2,3) - 后面都是折返这种梗 我觉得蛮不好的
就这些 【很短小是不是是不是】
然后 我其实不太喜欢这flow的
怎么才3.76星
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

Amamiya Kanade wrote:

recheck 应该没有kd
首先视频格式问题
你现在用的是wmv然后屙屎官网都没有without video这个选项
正确格式我觉得应该用flv 你可以问问虾抖大佬 k
6376
6470
这两根绿线重复了 k
00:22:970 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 你前面这俩用的这种梗后面突然00:24:470 (1,2,3) - 有点不舒服 在逆flow转换为顺flow令整张图添加了可玩性
00:50:720 (3,4,5,6) - 实话说 四方跳有点丑 可以试一试棱形跳【改不改都无所谓了】 改了一点
00:51:845 (1,2,3) - 后面都是折返这种梗 我觉得蛮不好的
就这些 【很短小是不是是不是】
然后 我其实不太喜欢这flow的 flow没问题
怎么才3.76星 你看我多善良啦这歌做不上四星
谢谢recheck~顺便kds我给了
EncoreW
都26sp了还要摸干什么直接找bn把
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

Speechless wrote:

都26sp了还要摸干什么直接找bn把
Insane re了呀;w;
Lobelia

Suzuki_1112 wrote:

Speechless wrote:

都26sp了还要摸干什么直接找bn把
Insane re了呀;w;
不说就没有人知道你RE了
Shima Rin
1112最牛逼\o/我的偶像神麻婆
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

Tofu1222 wrote:

1112最牛逼\o/我的偶像神麻婆
打包豆腐;w;
Monstrata
Insane

00:29:532 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - I really love this flow. I just with 00:30:470 (1,2,3) - were a bit more similar in spacing. I think the structure could have been better, but the idea is great.
00:39:845 (3,4) - Maybe a jump here? Could emphasize that white tick imo

Not much to say, clean diff!

Hard

00:24:845 (3) - The slier shape can be improved. Also flip it the other way like this? Makes the flow better imo. Think of drawing a thunderbolt when doing these sliders!
01:12:095 (4,1) - Blanket can be better.
01:13:595 (3,1) - ^
01:20:720 (3,4,1) - Spacing looks inconsistent here xP
01:24:095 (4,5) - Blanket? or nah

This is the only diff where you have a different ending (spinner at the end). Was that intentional? It felt a bit inconsistent to the other diffs xP.

Normal

00:06:470 - 00:18:470 - This section is completely 1/1 rhythm. It's a bit too simple for a Normal. The rest of your map is fine, but please add a few more 1/2 rhythms here to make the map more even.

Easy

Looks fine!

[]

Clean set. Please give me a link to metadata if you have one! Call me back when you're ready for bubble~
Shiratori
围观飞图
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

Monstrata wrote:

Insane

00:29:532 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - I really love this flow. I just with 00:30:470 (1,2,3) - were a bit more similar in spacing. I think the structure could have been better, but the idea is great. here i think it is the best idea in this map haha
00:39:845 (3,4) - Maybe a jump here? Could emphasize that white tick imo ok, i have increased the spacing

Not much to say, clean diff!

Hard

00:24:845 (3) - The slier shape can be improved. Also flip it the other way like this? Makes the flow better imo. Think of drawing a thunderbolt when doing these sliders! ok~
01:12:095 (4,1) - Blanket can be better. fixed
01:13:595 (3,1) - ^ ^
01:20:720 (3,4,1) - Spacing looks inconsistent here xP ok
01:24:095 (4,5) - Blanket? or nah fixed

This is the only diff where you have a different ending (spinner at the end). Was that intentional? It felt a bit inconsistent to the other diffs xP. this is my negligence ;w; i do not realize these problems, i have adjusted it.

Normal

00:06:470 - 00:18:470 - This section is completely 1/1 rhythm. It's a bit too simple for a Normal. The rest of your map is fine, but please add a few more 1/2 rhythms here to make the map more even. ok

Easy

Looks fine!

[]

Clean set. Please give me a link to metadata if you have one! Call me back when you're ready for bubble~
Thank you mons~
Thanks Kwan help me check metadata:
Unicode Title: Strike
Unicode Artist: Kenji-B
Source: Bacchikoi! (用英文啦,凈係得個logo係日文) (Source English, only logo is Japanese)

References:
+ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HIjYIsv3Bjk
+ https://web.archive.org/web/20141223052%20...%20bacchikoi/
+ http://kwan.s-ul.eu/e5jGqOEE.PNG
_MiaoFUuU_
都29个小星星了,赶紧飞了吧!
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

都29个小星星了,赶紧飞了吧!
没有30个我强迫症啊
Monstrata
Sorry for the delay, Nominated!
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

Monstrata wrote:

Sorry for the delay, Nominated!
thank u very much mons~
Mafumafu
no kudosu
[Hard]
01:16:220 (2) - 考虑到这里出于两段Kiai的中间部分应该把这个拆成更密集的节奏去跟鼓。
01:24:470 (5) - NC
01:27:470 (1,2) - 视觉间距太小了,不好
call me back tomorrow.
Shiratori
sp30 我射的 满足你的强迫症
飞图快乐飞图快乐
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

Regraz wrote:

no kudosu
[Hard]
01:16:220 (2) - 考虑到这里出于两段Kiai的中间部分应该把这个拆成更密集的节奏去跟鼓。
01:24:470 (5) - NC
01:27:470 (1,2) - 视觉间距太小了,不好
call me back tomorrow.
all fixed~ thank u~

Amamiya Kanade wrote:

sp30 我射的 满足你的强迫症
飞图快乐飞图快乐
谢啦
Mafumafu
Next time please use a more yaoi BG!
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

Regraz wrote:

Next time please use a more yaoi BG!
thank you very very very very very very much regraz xdddddd
Lobelia
喜大普奔
Graz~~
Shima Rin
太厉害了!祝贺飞图! ;)
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

[ Abhor ] wrote:

喜大普奔
Graz~~

Tofu1222 wrote:

太厉害了!祝贺飞图! ;)
谢谢支持;w;
Monstrata
The second I checked what Bacchikoi was, I knew Regraz was going to qualify.
kanor
congraze
gary00737
恭喜 ~!! 太神喇
Ryuusei Aika
恭喜恭喜
_Zenith
坑鸡-B 死踹可

恭喜1112大师飞图
congratz here
_Yiiiii
congratulations to you!

[]

The words below is not about this map's quality, don't take this seriously.
从回摸和remap可以看出来你对做图的态度有改善呢,不过好像对我的态度也变了呢。从你用我基本看不懂的英语搞我的gd和你userpage上的第二个box可以看出你很想怼我。如果你是因为我之前对你态度的否定而这么对我的话,我只能说对不起,我想帮你的方式不适合你,我也不求着你原谅我,否则好像就会让你变成你最讨厌的那种人。希望你能想一想你这一路走过来自己有了什么改变,让改变继续下去,毕竟rank图了就能说明发展方向的正确性了。
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

Monstrata wrote:

The second I checked what Bacchikoi was, I knew Regraz was going to qualify.
Because the Bacchikoi's company that produces Blackmonkey no longer exists, so i have found the metadata from older maps and video. of course, kwan helped me

kanor wrote:

congraze
Thank you~

gary00737 wrote:

恭喜 ~!! 太神喇
唔敢唔敢

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

恭喜恭喜
谢谢啦

-[Apple]- wrote:

坑鸡-B 死踹可

恭喜1112大师飞图
congratz here
cmn爱跑选手又毒奶了
shot shot you

_Yiiiii wrote:

congratulations to you!

[]

The words below is not about this map's quality, don't take this seriously.
从回摸和remap可以看出来你对做图的态度有改善呢,不过好像对我的态度也变了呢。从你用我基本看不懂的英语搞我的gd和你userpage上的第二个box可以看出你很想怼我。如果你是因为我之前对你态度的否定而这么对我的话,我只能说对不起,我想帮你的方式不适合你,我也不求着你原谅我,否则好像就会让你变成你最讨厌的那种人。希望你能想一想你这一路走过来自己有了什么改变,让改变继续下去,毕竟rank图了就能说明发展方向的正确性了。
首先先感谢你的congratulations

[]

  1. 然后,我想问你的是你知道为什么我对你的态度会变吗?可能你已经忘了,或者你根本只是开玩笑,没有放在心上。你说过:“醒醒,你的图没人玩”,你说过“我都没有图要rank怎么pop”(当然我知道你是对着我说的)等等。你知不知道这些话对于我来说是多大的伤害,一次一次的被打击已经是不好受了。然而我现在已经做到了,我想你也无话可说了吧
  2. “从你用我基本看不懂的英语搞我的gd”,先说好了,我来摸图只是把我的M4M list清掉,用英语摸我只是怕用中文摸像是来搞事一样把话说得过火,因为我说话也有点不太经脑子。再次,你的insane的确有大问题,你不可以否认他。我能看见在别人摸你的图的时候你把大多数reject的,我把超链点开来看发现他们说的也并不是不无道理,可是你却说打不了只是玩家菜,这是一部分,每个玩家的实力并不同,在我看来你并没有完全顾虑到大家的感受,也许你会想“玩不动就玩不动我的图就做出来了你玩不动关我毛事”,可是你想把这张图拿去rank的时候你真的会这样想吗?虽然我也是打着刚刚那句话的口号去把图上传上去的,可是真正等你要rank图的时候不一定会这么想吧。这只是我的个人想法,你的想法我不知道,只有你自己知道。关于userpage我要说的全在上面了。
  3. “如果你是因为我之前对你态度的否定而这么对我的话,我只能说对不起,我想帮你的方式不适合你,我也不求着你原谅我,否则好像就会让你变成你最讨厌的那种人。”再次,我不觉得你在帮我,而是在泼冷水。从你对我说的“醒醒,你的图没人玩”到“我的图不能pop”开始我已对你有很大的改观了,我从来没有试过在网络上这么讨厌一个人,实话说你是第一位。为什么?再看回第一条我说的话。
  4. “希望你能想一想你这一路走过来自己有了什么改变,让改变继续下去,毕竟rank图了就能说明发展方向的正确性了。”我很清楚自己的发展方向,谢谢你。
总之我的答案全部都在上面了,说实话我已经不想跟你有任何的来往,所以也就这样吧,如果你没有什么问题的话那就在这里停下吧

谢谢大家~
Regou
congrulations 恭喜恭喜~
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

Regou wrote:

congrulations 恭喜恭喜~
多謝xd
Chaoslitz
畢竟1112

gratz
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

Chaoslitz wrote:

畢竟1112

gratz
畢竟神超市

thx~
-Eriri-
飞图了!飞图了!
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

-Eriri- wrote:

飞图了!飞图了!
是啊!是啊!
a32
恭喜! :)
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

a32 wrote:

恭喜! :)
哇a32爷爷
蟹蟹~~
Kyouren
Yaoiiiii <3

Congratulations for your first ranked map! <3
osu! needs more yaoi! <3
DustMoon
后排恭喜 :)
Topic Starter
Otosaka-Yu

KittyAdventure wrote:

Yaoiiiii <3

Congratulations for your first ranked map! <3
osu! needs more yaoi! <3
thank you~
you're right, osu! needs more yaoi

DustMoon wrote:

后排恭喜 :)
蟹蟹大萌萌~
rs_fadeaway
NBA 末排贺电
Konei
YES.

Gratz~
Sieg
oh wow, bacchikoi rly?
gz
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