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Shikata Akiko - Katayoku no Tori

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Topic Starter
Rakuen
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 9 January, 2018 at 1:36:20 AM

Artist: Shikata Akiko
Title: Katayoku no Tori
Source: うみねこのなく頃に
Tags: Umineko no Naku Koro ni walaowey [_-Scarlet-_] opening op tv size
BPM: 220
Filesize: 8846kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. [ -Scarlet- ]'s Phantasy (5.45 stars, 353 notes)
  2. Easy (1.04 stars, 54 notes)
  3. Hard (3.24 stars, 259 notes)
  4. Insane (4.6 stars, 323 notes)
  5. Normal (1.98 stars, 121 notes)
  6. Walao's Insane (3.74 stars, 294 notes)
Download: Shikata Akiko - Katayoku no Tori
Download: Shikata Akiko - Katayoku no Tori (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Umineko no Naku Koro ni(うみねこのなく頃に) OP
Shikata Akiko - Katayoku no Tori
志方あきこ - 片翼の鳥

- Rakuen
- Rakuen
- Rakuen
- walaowey
- Rakuen
- [ -Scarlet- ]

F D Flourite
Kibbleru
Kurai (Metadata: source fix)
Kurai

Check out full version of the song made by IceKalt: Shikata Akiko - Katayoku no Tori

Metadata Source: http://umineko.tv/web/main/collection/themesong.html (Thanks to kunka)
Rhythm (metronome) credit to Narcissu
Thanks to the modders!
Hailie
kunka
Narcissu
-Tochi
Gibcio
Milar001
Underforest
F D Flourite
Kibbleru
MrDorian
Lama Poluna
Kurai
Cheri
Idk if I be much help for this map at all but I'll sure try...

Phantasy

00:26:679 (4,1) - tbh I find this part much easier if it was move maybe something like x: 325 y: 48 but that is just me

01:10:724 (6,7,1) - right here seems 01:10:861 (7) - have a bigger jump than 01:10:997 (1) - when it should be the other way around

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Sorry for not finding much still a newbie to modding...
kunka
Hi~
General

  1. Recommended of switch of source "Umineko no Naku Koro ni" and tag "うみねこのなく頃に". Anime title which suits the source is "うみねこのなく頃に". It's good for a tag because "Umineko no Naku Koro ni" is a romaji notation of the anime title.
  2. Add "opening" and "tv size" to tag. Official site / image
Phantasy

  1. 01:24:361 (3,4) - I think symmetry like a 01:24:906 (5,6) - is good.
  2. 00:54:088 (2,3,4,1,2) - Flow felt a little cramped. Moving 00:54:906 (2,3,4) - to the bottom right will make the flow more relaxed and easier to play. For instance https://puu.sh/xjUhv.jpg
Walao's Insane

  1. 00:35:543 (3) - Curve feels cramped. Using a loose slider like a 00:33:361 (1,2,3) - looks good.
Hard

  1. 00:06:088 (3) - I think 1/4 slider is suitable. Important that you have to click a 00:06:088 - . like this 01:18:361 (4,5,6,1,2,3) -
  2. 00:12:634 (3) - ^
  3. 00:13:724 (1,2) - I recommend ctrl+G. 00:13:997 - has a sound but slider-end is enough. Rather, 00:14:269 - is better because there is a vocal.
  4. 00:19:861 (4) - In this triplet, 00:19:997 - makes a strong sound. Would you change to 1/4 slider? https://puu.sh/xk2pH.jpg
  5. 00:21:770 (5) - fmm,,I guess I don't need in hard diff.
  6. 00:24:361 (3,4,5) - I felt sense of incongruity a little. try this https://puu.sh/xk2Ds.jpg
  7. 00:39:770 (5) - I don't think this is necessary ,too.
Normal

  1. 00:01:452 (2) - I think that the pattern of this rhythm has a good reverse like a 00:11:270 (2) -
  2. 00:54:634 (3) - The sound has the same pattern as 00:52:997 (1) - or 00:53:815 (2) - . It'd be nice to change the same and add a circle at the end. https://puu.sh/xk3aH.jpg
Easy

  • fine

Overall good map.
Also, soft4 is only used in a small part of easy diff. I felt your seriousness there. GL ;)
Topic Starter
Rakuen

DJ Lucky wrote:

Idk if I be much help for this map at all but I'll sure try...

Phantasy

00:26:679 (4,1) - tbh I find this part much easier if it was move maybe something like x: 325 y: 48 but that is just me It's a stack and has changes in rhythm so no

01:10:724 (6,7,1) - right here seems 01:10:861 (7) - have a bigger jump than 01:10:997 (1) - when it should be the other way around Its a smaller one now

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Sorry for not finding much still a newbie to modding...
Thanks for the mods!

kunka wrote:

Hi~
General

  1. Recommended of switch of source "Umineko no Naku Koro ni" and tag "うみねこのなく頃に". Anime title which suits the source is "うみねこのなく頃に". It's good for a tag because "Umineko no Naku Koro ni" is a romaji notation of the anime title.
  2. Add "opening" and "tv size" to tag. Official site / image Fixed meta, thanks!
Phantasy

  1. 01:24:361 (3,4) - I think symmetry like a 01:24:906 (5,6) - is good. Fixed
  2. 00:54:088 (2,3,4,1,2) - Flow felt a little cramped. Moving 00:54:906 (2,3,4) - to the bottom right will make the flow more relaxed and easier to play. For instance https://puu.sh/xjUhv.jpg Fixed
Hard

  1. 00:06:088 (3) - I think 1/4 slider is suitable. Important that you have to click a 00:06:088 - . like this 01:18:361 (4,5,6,1,2,3) -
  2. 00:12:634 (3) - ^ Keeping these 2 because I want to emphasize the music after them, but I might change soon
  3. 00:13:724 (1,2) - I recommend ctrl+G. 00:13:997 - has a sound but slider-end is enough. Rather, 00:14:269 - is better because there is a vocal.
  4. 00:19:861 (4) - In this triplet, 00:19:997 - makes a strong sound. Would you change to 1/4 slider? https://puu.sh/xk2pH.jpg Fixed
  5. 00:21:770 (5) - fmm,,I guess I don't need in hard diff. Fixed
  6. 00:24:361 (3,4,5) - I felt sense of incongruity a little. try this https://puu.sh/xk2Ds.jpg Fixed
  7. 00:39:770 (5) - I don't think this is necessary ,too. Reduced triplet, made changes in rhythm
Normal

  1. 00:01:452 (2) - I think that the pattern of this rhythm has a good reverse like a 00:11:270 (2) - The reverse is only used to connect between long rhythms
  2. 00:54:634 (3) - The sound has the same pattern as 00:52:997 (1) - or 00:53:815 (2) - . It'd be nice to change the same and add a circle at the end. Emphasize on the finish, but I don't wanna 'overmap' in Normalhttps://puu.sh/xk3aH.jpg
Easy

  • fine

Overall good map.
Also, soft4 is only used in a small part of easy diff. I felt your seriousness there. GL ;)
Thanks for the mods!
Narcissu
這歌的拍號是6/8 110BPM,因為3/4 和6/8 是兩回事而6/8 跟6/4沒有區別所以我建議用6/4 220BPM …… 可以參考其他圖感受一下兩者的不同

6/8 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/115080 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/620982 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/438512 (這裡的BPM都是兩倍)

3/4 https://osu.ppy.sh/b/734910 https://osu.ppy.sh/b/419860
Topic Starter
Rakuen

Narcissu wrote:

這歌的拍號是6/8 110BPM,因為3/4 和6/8 是兩回事而6/8 跟6/4沒有區別所以我建議用6/4 220BPM …… 可以參考其他圖感受一下兩者的不同

6/8 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/115080 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/620982 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/438512 (這裡的BPM都是兩倍)

3/4 https://osu.ppy.sh/b/734910 https://osu.ppy.sh/b/419860
了解!

谢啦~
-Tochi
m4m from my queue o/
Hmm this singer reminds me of ELISA or Ceui :o


  • [Phantasy]
  1. 00:03:906 (1,4) - Why not stack these two slider's head? I don't see stacking with sliderhead's being rare 00:42:906 (5,2) -
  2. 00:40:724 (3) - NC here because of an unexpected unusual rhythm?
  3. 00:43:997 (3) - Same for this.
  4. 01:08:270 (3) - Perhaps ctrl+g for a better flow?
  5. 01:24:906 (5,6) - Swapping places for this will give the movement a better flow imo: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9213556

  • [Walao's Insane]
  1. 00:01:724 (4) - Doing ctrl+g here will give a better flow imo.
  2. 01:05:815 (6) - Move this closer to 01:04:997 (3) - so it has the same distance as 01:04:997 (3,5) -

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:59:543 (1) - You could improve the blanket here more like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9213604
  2. 01:00:088 (3) - Same for this one too.
Good map! Good luck with it ^^
[ -Scarlet- ]
dah siap :D

code
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:片翼の鳥
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388,92,77134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,276,77952,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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64,88,78906,2,0,B|94:93|118:125|118:125|75:123,1,90.0000034332277,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,153,79179,6,0,B|292:153|280:137|280:137|252:129|232:145,1,90.0000034332277,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,330,79452,2,0,B|70:302|89:299|89:299|110:279|106:254,1,90.0000034332277,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,8,79724,2,0,B|49:35|41:54|41:54|48:82|72:91,1,90.0000034332277,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,340,79997,6,0,B|228:280|268:224|268:224|248:252|200:256,1,180.000006866455,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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372,115,80815,6,0,L|176:175,1,180.000006866455,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,248,81224,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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488,228,83270,6,0,L|272:244,1,180.000006866455,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,372,83679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,178,83815,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,344,83952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,232,84088,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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264,48,85179,5,2,0:0:0:0:
112,248,85315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,24,85452,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,220,85588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,144,88997,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Rakuen

-Tochi wrote:

m4m from my queue o/
Hmm this singer reminds me of ELISA or Ceui :o ^_^


  • [Phantasy]
  1. 00:03:906 (1,4) - Why not stack these two slider's head? I don't see stacking with sliderhead's being rare 00:42:906 (5,2) - Fixed
  2. 00:40:724 (3) - NC here because of an unexpected unusual rhythm? I'll keep this, there's difference in spacing
  3. 00:43:997 (3) - Same for this. ^
  4. 01:08:270 (3) - Perhaps ctrl+g for a better flow? Too bad theres no flow in this diff uwu
  5. 01:24:906 (5,6) - Swapping places for this will give the movement a better flow imo: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9213556 Yea, but they are meant for jumps

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:59:543 (1) - You could improve the blanket here more like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9213604 Fixed
  2. 01:00:088 (3) - Same for this one too. Fixed
Good map! Good luck with it ^^
Thanks for the mods!

Updated metronome > 220pm 6/4 (halved SV)
Added [ -Scarlet- ]'s Phantasy
O D P A D
Hard:
00:34:724 (4) - this circle can be upper
Walao's Insane:
00:56:815 (1,2,3,4) - Between this circles can be more space
Insane:
00:52:724 (5,6,1) - repeat slider
00:54:361 (3,4,1) - repeat slider
Scarlet's Phantasy:
00:47:270 (3,4,5,1,2) - more space
00:56:815 (1,2,3,4) - more space
[ -Scarlet- ]
No changes, both small spacing is to emphasize on the soft vocal
ShinodaYuu
Hi, from my queue

[Insane]
01:00:088 (3) - This shape doesn't fit here, as music and vocals are rather straight. Such a sharp angle makes me think there's some big change in music here
01:06:906 (4,5) adn 01:10:179 (4,5) - - Every slider before was set in different direction than others, these is only exeptiond and there's no reason for it imo. Also it make flow weird here
01:10:997 (1) - As before
01:24:361 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe less symetrical?

Hope will be helpful :)
Underforest
place for m4m return. gonna mod tomorrow

edit 11/05: for real tomorrow, totally forgot it lol
Underforest
the m4m is here, sorry for the wait

[general]
idk but this song is 73.33 bpm 1/4 instead of an intense 220bpm

[normal]
00:17:815 (2) - ctrl+h to fix flow
01:05:270 (2) - stack tail with 01:07:179 (5) - tail

[insane]
01:00:088 (3) - consider reducing the jump here a bit, so you can introduce the kiai safely

sorry for the really short mod but this map is ok and knowing that i checked like 3 times, kudosu is up to you
i also like the song~
gl
[ -Scarlet- ]
oi rakuen dun grave plz asdkjsa tang ina
walaowey
wtf Rakuen dun grave plz, i come raid your house dy, scarlet want sponsor me xd
Topic Starter
Rakuen
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any bn pls QwQ

Gibcio wrote:

Hard:
00:34:724 (4) - this circle can be upper Up to DS
Insane:
00:52:724 (5,6,1) - repeat slider It's only like 100bpm tap, shouldn't be much of a problem
00:54:361 (3,4,1) - repeat slider
Thanks for the mods!

Milar001 wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[Insane]
01:00:088 (3) - This shape doesn't fit here, as music and vocals are rather straight. Such a sharp angle makes me think there's some big change in music here Eh...I thought it's just a shape, but noted
01:06:906 (4,5) adn 01:10:179 (4,5) - - Every slider before was set in different direction than others, these is only exeptiond and there's no reason for it imo. Also it make flow weird here It's slowed down, there is barely any jump distance...some exceptional are okayish and there's no flow in this map I guess
01:10:997 (1) - As before There is a really big change, entering the 2nd part of KIAI, by this time so it doesn't make much sense to me
01:24:361 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe less symetrical? Why?... uwu"

Hope will be helpful :)
Thanks for the mods!

Underforest wrote:

the m4m is here, sorry for the wait

[general]
idk but this song is 73.33 bpm 1/4 instead of an intense 220bpm It was but after a few tests and looked into some ranked beatmap, it should be how it is now. Mainly it is to make all the DOWNBEATS on white ticks, which is (WHITE > white > white > white >WHITE) instead of (WHITE > red > white > red > WHITE)

[normal]
00:17:815 (2) - ctrl+h to fix flow Was meant to fit with the flow of prev slider, from my view
01:05:270 (2) - stack tail with 01:07:179 (5) - tail Not necessary after testing out since lighting doesnt show up there but I'll do it

[insane]
01:00:088 (3) - consider reducing the jump here a bit, so you can introduce the kiai safely Good point, I'll balance the part before KIAI and KIAI itself out

sorry for the really short mod but this map is ok and knowing that i checked like 3 times, kudosu is up to you
i also like the song~
gl
Thanks for the mods!
Net0
Amazing song and map, best of luck ^^
Nyukai
Well just noticed you didn't need my diff anymore, good luck.
Topic Starter
Rakuen
I thought you forgot about it XD it's been a long time
Nyukai
It's okay, I kept the diff even when I made it one year ago, but I didn't hear anything about you and I was worried :P But don't worry, your diff is better anyway, I don't mind x)
Topic Starter
Rakuen
Mmm...if your diff is not deleted feel free to upload it here, I'll slot it in, it's no problem!

Sorry i should've followed up QwQ my bad
F D Flourite
M4M
you can mod my set now as it is finished

[General]
  1. A sad image resolution of 1227x768. Pls fix it to 1366x768
[Easy]
  1. 00:25:997 (5) - would like to make slidertail clickable? as it is emphasized in music now
[Normal]
  1. 01:23:270 (4,5) - make 4 reverse and 5 a circle
[Hard]
  1. similar slidertail things: 00:03:906 (1) - (easy to tap on slidertail 'cause it's strong and symbol of beginning of fast taps like 00:03:088 (3) - ); 00:06:088 (3) - another case but same recommendation; 00:10:452 (1) - same as the first one; 00:12:634 (3) - as second one
  2. 01:04:861 (2) - could be removed. In this way are vocals followed better
[Walao's Insane]
  1. try to set break on 00:50:406 - and 00:51:224 - for this calm part
  2. 00:06:361 (4,5) - 00:12:906 (4,5) - distance like these are so easy to be misregarded as 1/2 streams. You need either huge enough distance or just stack them (prefer significant distance)
  3. 00:57:906 (1,2) - as the beginning jump of kiai part, it needs to be shorter to give players enough hint
  4. 01:14:815 (3,4) - rhythm should be ctrl+g here, as the consistency of 1/1 sliders on long vocals.
[Insane]
  1. 00:58:315 (2,3) - this jump is unreasonably huge compared to most jumps on heavier sounds. ctrl+G
  2. 01:28:043 (4,5) - distance is scary compared to the music
[Scarlet's Phantasy]
  1. 00:10:452 (1,2) - not sure if you want one with bigger distance?
  2. 00:04:315 (1) - remove nc?
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