Hello easier pp version of Not Ready to Die :^)General:
Metadata looks good.
BG size is only 1024x768, can you find a version with higher resolution? It's a provisory BG, I'll change if someone can send me a better BG with a good resolition
Hitsounds until the second timing signature are way too loud, I recommend reducing it to 40% Oke
[Avenged Oni]
01:32:188 (137) - kat finish? the crash is rather light and the guitar pitch is quite high compared to the upcoming notes, also it'd give the don finishers more impact as these are strong and lower-pitched crashes The pitch looks good, changed
01:39:279 (152,153) - ctrl+g? provides a smooth transition into the finishers and follows the guitar nicely Of course, changed
01:59:188 (238) - with your rather high usage of dkd patterns throughout the map, I believe this could be a dkd too, since it goes along quite well. this also applies to 02:10:824 (306) - 03:09:006 (652) - 03:20:642 (722) - I changed this to kkd because I think it follow better with the vocal
02:10:824 (306) -
02:19:006 (354) - to create a bit more variation with the ddkkd / ddkdd usage, consider changing this note to don Changed
02:37:764 (473,474) - the placement of these notes is honestly really darn awkward to read but that's fault of the band eh Yeah, f*ck the timing. idk what i will do
03:01:097 - comparing this part to 01:51:279 -, something about the structure caught my eye:
in both parts, you use two different patterns for their respective measures. looking at the first one (01:52:188 - onwards is A, 01:55:097 - is B) and how you combined these, the result is A B B A. in the second part, (03:02:006 - is A, 03:04:915 - is B), you combined them in a way that results in A B C C (C is a mix of both A and B). I found this to be rather odd structure and consistency-wise, so I'd suggest to change either of these parts to match with the other. which one you choose is up to you. I changed with the same structure as 01:52:188 - but adding more notes
04:13:823 (42) - finish to keep consistency in your emphasis of strong vocals / downbeats? also applies to 04:26:914 (104) - Applied
04:17:460 (60,61) - ctrl+g? follows the drums nicely and gives 04:17:823 (62,63) - more impact in terms of guitar emphasis Fixed
04:40:005 - the SV transition into this part doesn't feel as smooth as it could be and therefore I'd recommend adding a few green lines on the last notes of the previous stream I added the svs into the stream
04:53:156 (113) - I think don works well to give 04:53:459 (117,118,119,120) - more impact as this one is of higher pitch Changed
04:57:732 - maybe add a note to match the drums? I feel that if I added it is a bit hard after the stream, the same case for 04:54:823 -
05:03:277 - what I've mentioned about the SV before also goes for this spot Added the svs
05:26:550 - a few green lines to make the SV smoother here wouldn't hurt either oke
06:11:610 (89,91) - both of these notes should be 1/12 before the white lines, not after I replace those with simple notes
06:54:015 (1) - add a few green lines with decreasing volume, as the guitar is fading too Added svs
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