shit lost half my mod
whatever
[parachute]
00:04:572 (3) - these overmapped circles really detract from your rhythm. having constant clicking doesn't fit the song at all imo. better to remove them all.
00:08:550 (1,4) - circles on these two would be cool to follow the guitar more closely
00:35:127 (2) - u can use SL 0 and perfect stack these, would look cooler imo
00:47:710 (6,7) - should definitely be a slider. i know it fucks your pattern up but the offbeat vocal is way too strong to ignore
00:50:817 (6) - ew no, delete plz...
00:56:988 (5) - same, offbeat vocal would be better
01:16:742 (6) - slider + circle works better here imo
[insane]
00:08:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - doing this is ok but it could be more interesting to use sliders and only put circles on the drum doubles or something. dunno, up to you.
00:22:662 (1,2) - omg parallel plz
00:26:069 (5,6) - eeeeee
00:33:359 (1) - circle+slider rhythm is a lot nicer here cuz the offbeat vocal gets highlighted
00:34:105 (3,4) - 1/1 slider or delete circle here works better too. the filler rhythm kinda screws up the held vocal
00:42:054 (2,3) - this is actually really painful to play, ctrl g on 3 would be a bit more comfortable cuz atm it is pretty overspaced imo
00:45:014 (4) - same thing with the filler rhythm here, since your rhythm is so focused on vocals having a random click on nonvocal is weird ;;
01:04:107 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this pattern doesn't make much sense to me. cuz it implies that something is being repeated in the song, but i don't hear anything. also there isn't really a constant 1/4 going on, something likg http://puu.sh/xyNDT/e3398e8216.jpg fits better imo
[hard]
00:03:526 (5,6,1) - imo space these less. it is pretty misleading cuz the spacing is so similar to 00:02:331 (3,4) -
generally fine. good job.
[normal]
00:08:258 (1) - meh i get why you put a spinner here but it doesnt really work out cuz it has to end too early. i think just mapping normally and adding some circles in would be better.
00:33:809 (4,5) - uhh this isnt that good, i think circle + 1/2 slider works better here for the rhythm. easier for noobs too.
00:47:262 (2) - this is pretty confusing, 1/2 works better for simplification
yea biggest issue is that pattern on insane. i dont think it really fits anywhere o.o
let me know when you respond!
whatever
[parachute]
00:04:572 (3) - these overmapped circles really detract from your rhythm. having constant clicking doesn't fit the song at all imo. better to remove them all.
00:08:550 (1,4) - circles on these two would be cool to follow the guitar more closely
00:35:127 (2) - u can use SL 0 and perfect stack these, would look cooler imo
00:47:710 (6,7) - should definitely be a slider. i know it fucks your pattern up but the offbeat vocal is way too strong to ignore
00:50:817 (6) - ew no, delete plz...
00:56:988 (5) - same, offbeat vocal would be better
01:16:742 (6) - slider + circle works better here imo
[insane]
00:08:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - doing this is ok but it could be more interesting to use sliders and only put circles on the drum doubles or something. dunno, up to you.
00:22:662 (1,2) - omg parallel plz
00:26:069 (5,6) - eeeeee
00:33:359 (1) - circle+slider rhythm is a lot nicer here cuz the offbeat vocal gets highlighted
00:34:105 (3,4) - 1/1 slider or delete circle here works better too. the filler rhythm kinda screws up the held vocal
00:42:054 (2,3) - this is actually really painful to play, ctrl g on 3 would be a bit more comfortable cuz atm it is pretty overspaced imo
00:45:014 (4) - same thing with the filler rhythm here, since your rhythm is so focused on vocals having a random click on nonvocal is weird ;;
01:04:107 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this pattern doesn't make much sense to me. cuz it implies that something is being repeated in the song, but i don't hear anything. also there isn't really a constant 1/4 going on, something likg http://puu.sh/xyNDT/e3398e8216.jpg fits better imo
[hard]
00:03:526 (5,6,1) - imo space these less. it is pretty misleading cuz the spacing is so similar to 00:02:331 (3,4) -
generally fine. good job.
[normal]
00:08:258 (1) - meh i get why you put a spinner here but it doesnt really work out cuz it has to end too early. i think just mapping normally and adding some circles in would be better.
00:33:809 (4,5) - uhh this isnt that good, i think circle + 1/2 slider works better here for the rhythm. easier for noobs too.
00:47:262 (2) - this is pretty confusing, 1/2 works better for simplification
yea biggest issue is that pattern on insane. i dont think it really fits anywhere o.o
let me know when you respond!