hey m4m from your queue, kind of a niche map but i did my best and hoLY SO MANY GREEN TICKS HOW LONG DID THIS TAKE
[Forbidden Fruit]
00:07:994 (4,5) - fix overlap
00:51:808 (6) - NC
00:58:518 (5) - stack sliderend with 00:57:926 (3) -
01:07:597 (4) - NC
01:08:584 (9,10,11) - woah talk about a spacing increase, im not sure this is justified at this point in the song, the sounds here arent too much louder.. of course, its playable and does work, though.
01:18:649 (1) - ctrl g
01:29:702 (1) - perhaps stack with 01:29:307 (6)
01:36:412 (3,4) - im pretty sure they're overlapping, i'd fix the blanket here
01:44:504 (3,4) - consider ctrl + h and resnapping
01:46:675 (4,1) - I think this should be more distanced, and not overlapping
01:48:648 (5,6) - theres kind of an inconsistency in the map with these patterns, sometimes your blankets are overlaps, sometimes they're very close like right here, and sometimes they're a little bit far, i think you should go through and make more blanket consistency. for example, this blanket is a little farther 01:44:701 (5,1) and these 01:45:885 (2,3) - are much much farther but are the same shape pretty much.
02:05:227 (7,8,1) - kind of unclean, i'd stack everything under the sliderend of 7
02:18:647 (1,3) - blanket these
02:22:989 (5,6,7) - NC to indicate complicated rhythm change
02:40:752 (1) - ctrl g
03:39:566 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - more ncs for rhythm
04:14:696 (5,1) - visually unappealing slider, i'd just change it a lil
in general, I think the last kiai section doesnt need to be so spaced, i dunno if its necessarily too intense compared to some other parts of the song, but cool map! wish ya the best of luck. sorry its small i couldnt really find too much
[Forbidden Fruit]
00:07:994 (4,5) - fix overlap
00:51:808 (6) - NC
00:58:518 (5) - stack sliderend with 00:57:926 (3) -
01:07:597 (4) - NC
01:08:584 (9,10,11) - woah talk about a spacing increase, im not sure this is justified at this point in the song, the sounds here arent too much louder.. of course, its playable and does work, though.
01:18:649 (1) - ctrl g
01:29:702 (1) - perhaps stack with 01:29:307 (6)
01:36:412 (3,4) - im pretty sure they're overlapping, i'd fix the blanket here
01:44:504 (3,4) - consider ctrl + h and resnapping
01:46:675 (4,1) - I think this should be more distanced, and not overlapping
01:48:648 (5,6) - theres kind of an inconsistency in the map with these patterns, sometimes your blankets are overlaps, sometimes they're very close like right here, and sometimes they're a little bit far, i think you should go through and make more blanket consistency. for example, this blanket is a little farther 01:44:701 (5,1) and these 01:45:885 (2,3) - are much much farther but are the same shape pretty much.
02:05:227 (7,8,1) - kind of unclean, i'd stack everything under the sliderend of 7
02:18:647 (1,3) - blanket these
02:22:989 (5,6,7) - NC to indicate complicated rhythm change
02:40:752 (1) - ctrl g
03:39:566 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - more ncs for rhythm
04:14:696 (5,1) - visually unappealing slider, i'd just change it a lil
in general, I think the last kiai section doesnt need to be so spaced, i dunno if its necessarily too intense compared to some other parts of the song, but cool map! wish ya the best of luck. sorry its small i couldnt really find too much