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Osatia

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Osatia 2017-08-28T15:15:31+00:00

Kurai wrote:
Just one more thing before I proceed with a bubble:

[Born]
01:38:199 (3) - Why isn't the spacing higher here as you always have a higher spacing on similar strong beats (e.g. 01:34:232 (4) - ). oops ctrl-ged them
01:42:166 (5) - ^
01:54:066 (3) - ^
01:08:447 (3) - ^
01:16:381 (3) - ^ (the jump should be before this slider and not after it if I follow the logic of your map ) fixed

thanks

Shiirn

2,896 posts

Joined August 2010

Shiirn 2017-08-29T15:18:50+00:00

hi small shit

[born]

Your new combos are consistently 1/2 early, but it's really awkward and off. It fits with your pattern choice, yes, but structurally it's smarter to just be accurate musically with new combos to properly section off patterns and portions of the song: Starting new combos beneath an old one is not some faux pas you need to worry about.
00:59:768 (1,2) - Move new combo to 2 to have it start with the vocals
01:01:257 (1,2) - Move new combo to 2 to have it start on the bass (Since you're not sticking to the vocal line with your object choice)
01:03:239 (1,2) - "" "" start on the bass
01:05:223 (1,2) - "" "" start on the bass
01:09:190 (1,2) - "" "" start on the bass
01:11:174 (1,2) - "" "" start on the bass this is really getting extensive. Basically, you've got new combos a beat early and most of the time they make zero sense.
01:13:157 (1,2) - you get the point

In the normal, the twisted break at 00:57:538 - seems silly. Just let the break end normally. The pause before the break starts, sure, but after? Why?

nothing much else, great map for your experience level, have some stars

Osatia

272 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Osatia 2017-08-29T15:34:40+00:00

Shiirn wrote:
hi small shit

[born]
Your new combos are consistently 1/2 early, but it's really awkward and off. It fits with your pattern choice, yes, but structurally it's smarter to just be accurate musically with new combos to properly section off patterns and portions of the song: Starting new combos beneath an old one is not some faux pas you need to worry about.
00:59:768 (1,2) - Move new combo to 2 to have it start with the vocals
01:01:257 (1,2) - Move new combo to 2 to have it start on the bass (Since you're not sticking to the vocal line with your object choice)
01:03:239 (1,2) - "" "" start on the bass
01:05:223 (1,2) - "" "" start on the bass
01:09:190 (1,2) - "" "" start on the bass
01:11:174 (1,2) - "" "" start on the bass this is really getting extensive. Basically, you've got new combos a beat early and most of the time they make zero sense. oh my sorry for that fixed all
01:13:157 (1,2) - you get the point
In the normal, the twisted break at 00:57:538 - seems silly. Just let the break end normally. The pause before the break starts, sure, but after? Why? ahh my mistake fixed

nothing much else, great map for your experience level, have some stars

thanks for mod

Kurai

osu! Alumni

7,734 posts

Joined March 2009

Kurai 2017-08-29T16:12:56+00:00

Fix this one too please:
00:46:875 (1) - NC should be on 00:47:619 (3) - (piano)

Osatia

272 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Osatia 2017-08-29T16:23:07+00:00

fixed

Kurai

osu! Alumni

7,734 posts

Joined March 2009

Kurai 2017-08-29T16:45:41+00:00

Should be ok now! Good luck!

Osatia

272 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Osatia 2017-08-29T16:48:56+00:00

Thanks :3

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2017-09-01T09:11:05+00:00

hey

normal

00:56:050 - is finish here intentional? top diff doesnt use a finish here so i guess itd be nice to make it consistent watever u decide to do
01:09:934 (2) - seems that whenever you have offbeat kicks 01:10:182 - you'd use patterns like 01:05:471 (1,2,3) - that allowed it to be clickable, so should probably do the same thing with 01:09:934 (2) - by breaking it into 2 circles
01:26:050 - 01:30:017 - worth having beats here too for the drums. in exchange 01:24:066 (2) - 01:28:033 (2) - can be removed as they dont really have anything supporting them
02:02:000 (1) - new combo here seems unnecessary

born

00:47:619 (1,2,3) - 00:53:323 (6,7,8) - minor thing, but stacking makes distances look inconsistent here https://puu.sh/xoMGc/fb00175dc7.png can easily be fixed by spacing them a bit further manually https://puu.sh/xoMGG/8d98b1e936.png
00:51:090 (4) - dont see the need for the circle here, piano is dominant on 00:49:603 (1,2,3) - so 00:50:594 (3,4) - can be a 1/1 slider
00:59:520 (4,1) - should swap combos here for the start of the chorus

poke me when youve replied

Strategas

1,378 posts

Joined July 2013

Strategas 2017-09-01T09:15:32+00:00

m4m

easy
00:59:521 - should increase volume in the whole section here, having it the same as in intro is weird, considering it's much louder 15% seems too low
01:06:959 - 01:22:827 - 01:46:628 - whistle instead of finish would fit better, just like you do it at 01:14:893 -
from 01:32:248 - all of the snare drums are missing claps 01:32:248 - 01:34:232 - 01:36:215 - 01:38:199 - and so on...

normal
01:53:819 (3) - spacing
02:06:959 - too much hitsound feedback for an empty place so lower the volume

hard
same sv as in normal?
00:47:619 (1,2) - 00:53:323 (6,7) - turn autostacking on and fix spacing
00:59:768 (5) - weird how you jump to this note when 00:59:520 (4) - is the stronger one, and you seem to know that considering you follow it properly after
02:06:959 - same as normal

lol got sniped just because my internet was gone for half an hour gg

Osatia

272 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Osatia 2017-09-01T11:34:06+00:00

oh

Last edited by Osatia 2017-09-02T02:33:39+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Osatia

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Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Osatia 2017-09-01T15:39:20+00:00

Pentori wrote:
hey

normal
00:56:050 - is finish here intentional? top diff doesnt use a finish here so i guess itd be nice to make it consistent watever u decide to do yeah removed
01:09:934 (2) - seems that whenever you have offbeat kicks 01:10:182 - you'd use patterns like 01:05:471 (1,2,3) - that allowed it to be clickable, so should probably do the same thing with 01:09:934 (2) - by breaking it into 2 circles ok added
01:26:050 - 01:30:017 - worth having beats here too for the drums. in exchange 01:24:066 (2) - 01:28:033 (2) - can be removed as they dont really have anything supporting them oh idk why I did that fixed
02:02:000 (1) - new combo here seems unnecessary removed then
born
00:47:619 (1,2,3) - 00:53:323 (6,7,8) - minor thing, but stacking makes distances look inconsistent here https://puu.sh/xoMGc/fb00175dc7.png can easily be fixed by spacing them a bit further manually https://puu.sh/xoMGG/8d98b1e936.png yeah done
00:51:090 (4) - dont see the need for the circle here, piano is dominant on 00:49:603 (1,2,3) - so 00:50:594 (3,4) - can be a 1/1 slider actually I would rather keep it this way, since the piano slowly goes weaker each note I don't see a reason to change the last two
00:59:520 (4,1) - should swap combos here for the start of the chorus alright
poke me when youve replied

thanks for modd

Strategas wrote:
m4m yup

normal
01:53:819 (3) - spacing fixed
02:06:959 - too much hitsound feedback for an empty place so lower the volume will do for all diffs

hard
same sv as in normal?
00:47:619 (1,2) - 00:53:323 (6,7) - turn autostacking on and fix spacing fixed in pentori mod
00:59:768 (5) - weird how you jump to this note when 00:59:520 (4) - is the stronger one, and you seem to know that considering you follow it properly after oh true fixed
02:06:959 - same as normal

lol got sniped just because my internet was gone for half an hour gg

xd thanks for mod

ReFaller

1,233 posts

Joined August 2014

ReFaller 2017-09-01T22:06:07+00:00

Strategas wrote:
m4m

easy
00:59:521 - should increase volume in the whole section here, having it the same as in intro is weird, considering it's much louder 15% seems too low yes, increased volume from this section to end by some random numbers
01:06:959 - 01:22:827 - 01:46:628 - whistle instead of finish would fit better, just like you do it at 01:14:893 - okay, but 01:14:893 (7) - changed whistle on finish because i agree with this hitsound put on my difficulty in another set
from 01:32:248 - all of the snare drums are missing claps 01:32:248 - 01:34:232 - 01:36:215 - 01:38:199 - and so on... of course i don't want to add them, somehow it doesn't really suit with my ears

tanks
I don't know what Waku thinks about that, but i put 5% volume for spinner just for silence it as much as possible. and is still too loud lmao

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