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01:28:895 - to 01:33:895 - This part is too weak.
I recommend you to add some notes more. I can actually feel the climax of the song but the note density is reversed.
It was not impressed me at all how it goes feel climax // i made more anchor without adding more density instead, can add some more density but i want to make some identity about simpler map, with lesser note density, at least for mediocre player like me haha
01:57:645 (117645|6,117801|6,117957|6,118113|6,118270|6,118426|6,118582|6,118738|6) - was annoying.
01:58:426 (118426|6) - move to 5 and 01:58:504 (118504|4) - move to 6. It would be better. (Column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7)
02:07:645 - Same thing with above. // there's a tick sound i try to mimick with that anchored stair, i think its a common pattern that rarely used so i go with that pattern, moved some notes in 01:58:582 - instead to reduce the anchor
02:21:395 - It is intended for the next kick structure but kinda so weird by sudden empty rhythm.
so I think you can improve this anyway.
// yeah, it was intended. i want to 'emphasize' the kick that stands out more, because after 02:18:895 - i can hear that the other instrument slowly fading out into percussion, arranged some notes anyway
02:47:020 (167020|6,167020|0,167098|1,167098|5,167176|4,167176|2,167254|1,167254|5,167332|6,167332|0,167410|1,167410|5,167488|2,167488|4,167566|1,167566|5,167645|0) -
I really don't get it of this meaning. I mean it is not suitable for me as an expression for this place.
I actually became a double stream but It does not have that weight and I don't know how the trill stairs feel as a player. // should i raise the pattern difficulty / spikiness in here?
03:01:395 - to 03:07:645 - To be honest, I don't get it why this part should be harder density.
this part is kinda calm from last climax 02:57:645 -
The LNs and note density with patterns you used in this part are too heavy than the part's mood.
03:11:395 - to 03:12:645 - obviously not good. The pattern did not exactly mean that a kind of expression.
04:18:895 - Same thing with 01:28:895 - too weak.
Last burst LNs are depend on each skills. so I'm fine but some are annoying.
04:59:363 (299363|3,299520|2,299676|1,299754|3,299832|0,299910|3,299988|0) -
05:02:801 (302801|6,302879|5,302957|4,302957|6) -
// fixed, least anchor-y & bracket-y on both part!
I considered the rhythm that how feel as a player and the relationship of climax density with surrounding structure.