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[Expert]
00:17:205 (4) - hmm I know that the pattern on right decrease on the spacing, but the gap between 00:16:930 (2,4) - is quite big why not move (4) up a bit
00:58:903 (1) - some more spacing emphasis? you can move it to partially overlap with 00:58:352 (1) -
01:03:305 (1) - I think it's better to cut this slider a bit shorter and make the white tick clickable.
01:03:717 - also has quite an audible sound, why not put a note here
01:20:094 (1,2,3) - The sound is definitely faster than just 1/2 notes. maybe try using kick sliders or map them with 1/4 rhythms. Like these at 01:13:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
[Insane]
00:28:627 (6) - why is this different from 00:30:279 (7) - ? Sounds very similar to me and you mapped it the same on Extra
00:58:903 (5) - you NC on Extra, so why not here?
01:05:782 (1,2) - this one is a weirdo in the bunch here, stacking this breaks the constant movement from the other patterns before and make it much harder to play and read in my opinion.
01:20:230 (3) - the partial overlap here is so close to complete stack, why not just stack it?
[Avena's Light Insane]
00:06:884 (1,2) - I think having the final sound end on a sliderend is anti climatic. You can try 1/2 slider + arrow plus a circle or just map the (2) slider as 2 circles
01:05:782 (1,2,3) - you're undermapping the 01:06:058 (2) - slider compared to the other 2 of the same combo, the (2) slider has 2 audible sounds on both white and red tick and I believe mapping it as 2 circles would be cooler
01:21:470 (7) - sliderending on a 1/1 gap is quite hard for the player to acc (at least from my experience) Why not change this to a 1/2 slider and a circle? So that the 1/1 gap is easier to hit (cuz the start of the gap is clickable) Not to mention the sliderend ends on quite a strong sound
[Hard]
00:43:215 (5,6) - I think here making a slider would be better, the vocal is dragging her voice. Either 1/2 slider or just 1/1 slider ( removing the 6 circle) would do
00:58:903 (5) - NC? you did on Extra
01:09:497 (3) - The slider extends past a quite audible white tick. Why not just 1/2 slider with a reverse?
[Normal]
00:11:013 (3) - I think removing the reverse and add a circle here would be better. The sliderend is stronger than its head
01:16:516 (2) - I think a 1/1 slider would fit better here
01:30:552 (2) - why is this slider shape different from 01:29:451 (1) - every patterns in this section use the same shape in the same combo
[Easy]
01:18:993 (3,4) - this can be combined into one long slider because the vocal is holding her voice here, just a suggestion though!
Good luck with your mapset!
[Expert]
00:17:205 (4) - hmm I know that the pattern on right decrease on the spacing, but the gap between 00:16:930 (2,4) - is quite big why not move (4) up a bit
00:58:903 (1) - some more spacing emphasis? you can move it to partially overlap with 00:58:352 (1) -
01:03:305 (1) - I think it's better to cut this slider a bit shorter and make the white tick clickable.
01:03:717 - also has quite an audible sound, why not put a note here
01:20:094 (1,2,3) - The sound is definitely faster than just 1/2 notes. maybe try using kick sliders or map them with 1/4 rhythms. Like these at 01:13:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
[Insane]
00:28:627 (6) - why is this different from 00:30:279 (7) - ? Sounds very similar to me and you mapped it the same on Extra
00:58:903 (5) - you NC on Extra, so why not here?
01:05:782 (1,2) - this one is a weirdo in the bunch here, stacking this breaks the constant movement from the other patterns before and make it much harder to play and read in my opinion.
01:20:230 (3) - the partial overlap here is so close to complete stack, why not just stack it?
[Avena's Light Insane]
00:06:884 (1,2) - I think having the final sound end on a sliderend is anti climatic. You can try 1/2 slider + arrow plus a circle or just map the (2) slider as 2 circles
01:05:782 (1,2,3) - you're undermapping the 01:06:058 (2) - slider compared to the other 2 of the same combo, the (2) slider has 2 audible sounds on both white and red tick and I believe mapping it as 2 circles would be cooler
01:21:470 (7) - sliderending on a 1/1 gap is quite hard for the player to acc (at least from my experience) Why not change this to a 1/2 slider and a circle? So that the 1/1 gap is easier to hit (cuz the start of the gap is clickable) Not to mention the sliderend ends on quite a strong sound
[Hard]
00:43:215 (5,6) - I think here making a slider would be better, the vocal is dragging her voice. Either 1/2 slider or just 1/1 slider ( removing the 6 circle) would do
00:58:903 (5) - NC? you did on Extra
01:09:497 (3) - The slider extends past a quite audible white tick. Why not just 1/2 slider with a reverse?
[Normal]
00:11:013 (3) - I think removing the reverse and add a circle here would be better. The sliderend is stronger than its head
01:16:516 (2) - I think a 1/1 slider would fit better here
01:30:552 (2) - why is this slider shape different from 01:29:451 (1) - every patterns in this section use the same shape in the same combo
[Easy]
01:18:993 (3,4) - this can be combined into one long slider because the vocal is holding her voice here, just a suggestion though!
Good luck with your mapset!