Hey I'm pushin a saradisk set as well (not a plug or anything haha)
- SK's Inner Oni -
- Oni -
That's all I'm gonna do for this song, good luck ^^
- SK's Inner Oni -
Just change kiai to match every other diff by starting at 00:41:598 -
00:43:527 - This is the only time where you use kdk instead of kkd or a different rhythmic pattern like kd_dk, either change the rest of them to alternate using kdk/kkd or just change this to kkd
00:43:527 - This is the only time where you use kdk instead of kkd or a different rhythmic pattern like kd_dk, either change the rest of them to alternate using kdk/kkd or just change this to kkd
- Oni -
00:28:313 (94) - This is a higher pitch and the same drums as the k before, so why is it d? Apply this to the rest of them, I understand flow between k's and d's but I think there's another way to stick to mapping these pitches while not just mapping k d k d k d k d k
00:30:884 (105) - moving this to 00:30:991 - here sounds better with the song
00:31:206 - heck maybe even put a d here, feels good
With the whole section leading up to the kiai there isn't a real repeated pattern or recurring rhythm mapped, but the song stays the same almost the entire time. I would map this in the form of "A B A C A B A D" for both the section leading to the kiai and the kiai itself. Section A repeating, interluded by the consecutive sections B/C/D, so that there's a familiar pattern with an unfamiliar twist after every repetition. Right now it's more like "A B C D E F G H" cause nothing is repeated. I mean repeated not just rhythmically but even the same notes, since the song repeats the exact same phrase over and over.
These svs are pretty bad. I recommend doing what SK did in his Inner Oni and having a smooth transition into 00:27:884 - with 4 points at 1/4 spacing with 0.2 intervals going to 1.1x at the time I highlighted. The you can make the direct cut to 1.2x at the kiai.
00:41:384 (153) - Remove this note if you're going to keep in that direct cut to the 1.2/1.25 sv since it just clutters that area. It would also give better emphasis to the first note of the kiai.
00:30:884 (105) - moving this to 00:30:991 - here sounds better with the song
00:31:206 - heck maybe even put a d here, feels good
With the whole section leading up to the kiai there isn't a real repeated pattern or recurring rhythm mapped, but the song stays the same almost the entire time. I would map this in the form of "A B A C A B A D" for both the section leading to the kiai and the kiai itself. Section A repeating, interluded by the consecutive sections B/C/D, so that there's a familiar pattern with an unfamiliar twist after every repetition. Right now it's more like "A B C D E F G H" cause nothing is repeated. I mean repeated not just rhythmically but even the same notes, since the song repeats the exact same phrase over and over.
These svs are pretty bad. I recommend doing what SK did in his Inner Oni and having a smooth transition into 00:27:884 - with 4 points at 1/4 spacing with 0.2 intervals going to 1.1x at the time I highlighted. The you can make the direct cut to 1.2x at the kiai.
00:41:384 (153) - Remove this note if you're going to keep in that direct cut to the 1.2/1.25 sv since it just clutters that area. It would also give better emphasis to the first note of the kiai.
That's all I'm gonna do for this song, good luck ^^